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Title: Duel of the Sith - The Betrayal (Comic)
Post by: BrentS on October 11, 2006, 10:50 PM

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Title: Re: Duel of the Sith - The Betrayal (Comic)
Post by: BrentS on October 11, 2006, 10:56 PM

Here is the simulataneous release of both formats.  I think I prefer the Comic Book Style the I've put together but I can still see the virtues of the "traditional style too".    Special thanks to Mike, Justin, and Lance for their help in proof-reading and the awesome graphics.

You may notice that there are two "Chapter 3"s.  I'm going back to fix the chapter numbering as Chapter 1 is really a prologue anyway.  Sorry for the confustion :)

I hope you enjoy!

Title: Re: Duel of the Sith - The Betrayal (Comic)
Post by: PenDragon on October 12, 2006, 11:08 AM

I dig it! And I think I like the comic style better - gives me a chance to take in the images & story at the same time. Leaves me feeling less disjointed than the widescreen format....

And I like the story so far (as my avatar here attests to). But I'm fairly certain that no one that I know "masks in the glow of his recent victory" ("basks" might work better here)  ;)  :D

Other than that one thing, he story is quite nicely intriguing, and I love the sets, customs & images! Keep up the awesome work Brent! 8)

Title: Re: Duel of the Sith - The Betrayal (Comic)
Post by: Artoo on October 12, 2006, 09:20 PM

Nice update!

Title: Re: Duel of the Sith - The Betrayal (Comic)
Post by: CloneCommander1 on October 15, 2006, 01:08 AM

Great update Brent!  I must say, I definatley prefer the comic book style over the traditional style, great work with that!  Very nice work with the photos too, the lighting is really cool, and really shows off your fantastic dio.   Looking forward to the next update! 

Title: Re: Duel of the Sith - The Betrayal (Comic)
Post by: Swede on October 18, 2006, 08:39 AM

I love it!

Brent, your level of detail is just incredible.  You just keep developing your characters, and the transitions from scene to scene is very smooth.
I also really dig the custom ship ...VERY COOL!!!  What parts did you use?
This is hands down one of the best photonovels out there, keep it up Brent ... lookin' forward to more!


-Swede

Title: Re: Duel of the Sith - The Betrayal (Comic)
Post by: Brisk Arper on November 4, 2006, 12:03 PM

wow....definaitly worth the wait...i especially like the fact that jangos being imprisoned....that was cool

Title: Re: Duel of the Sith - The Betrayal (Comic)
Post by: BrentS on November 5, 2006, 12:15 AM

Thanks for all the feedback guys.  I know there has been a lot of debate about these PNs.  The feedback really is important to all the authors!!

For the most part people really like the Comic Book format (its my favorite too).  However, I'll probably continue to do both for the duration of this Photonovel series (a few more chapters).

Swede - the ship was based off a cheapy "Corps" jet plane.  I added some sheet styrene and a droid.  Not much else was done to it. 

Title: Re: Duel of the Sith - The Betrayal (Comic)
Post by: Deanna Rash on December 1, 2006, 11:27 PM

Great chapter!Its really coming togerther.

Title: Re: Duel of the Sith - The Betrayal (Comic)
Post by: Darth Depressis on December 7, 2006, 12:59 PM

i like how it adds to the storyline of Bounty Hunter(ps2) and fits within the timeline. anyways i love the comic book format, and would like to know what program you are useing to do this. thank you. keep it goin.

Title: Re: Duel of the Sith - The Betrayal (Comic)
Post by: BrentS on December 13, 2006, 07:33 PM

Thanks DD.  The Comic Program is called - Comic Book Creator.  Its the best "fun" $20 I've spent!

I haven't forgotten the story, just in a little SW rut right now.  I'm sure I'll bounce out quite soon.