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Collecting => Customs => Photonovels and Movies => Topic started by: Jediknight760071 on April 16, 2005, 05:51 PM
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(http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y66/Ezatam/Title.jpg)
(http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y66/Ezatam/1Title_3.jpg)
(http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y66/Ezatam/Part1_1.jpg)
(http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y66/Ezatam/Part1_2.jpg)
(http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y66/Ezatam/Part1_3.jpg)
(http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y66/Ezatam/Part1_4.jpg)
(http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y66/Ezatam/Part1_5.jpg)
(http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y66/Ezatam/Part1_6.jpg)
(http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y66/Ezatam/part1_7.jpg)
(http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y66/Ezatam/Part1_8.jpg)
(http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y66/Ezatam/Part1_9.jpg)
(http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y66/Ezatam/Part1_10.jpg)
(http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y66/Ezatam/part2_1.jpg)
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(http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y66/Ezatam/part2_4.jpg)
(http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y66/Ezatam/Part3_1.jpg)
(http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y66/Ezatam/Part3_2.jpg)
(http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y66/Ezatam/Part3_3.jpg)
(http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y66/Ezatam/Part3_4.jpg)
(http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y66/Ezatam/Part3_5.jpg)
(http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y66/Ezatam/Part3_6.jpg)
(http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y66/Ezatam/Part3_7.jpg)
(http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y66/Ezatam/Part3_8.jpg)
(http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y66/Ezatam/part3_9.jpg)
(http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y66/Ezatam/Part3_10.jpg)
(http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y66/Ezatam/Part3_11.jpg)
(http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y66/Ezatam/Part3_12.jpg)
(http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y66/Ezatam/part4_1.jpg)
(http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y66/Ezatam/part4_2.jpg)
(http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y66/Ezatam/part4_3.jpg)
(http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y66/Ezatam/Part4_4.jpg)
(http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y66/Ezatam/part4_5.jpg)
(http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y66/Ezatam/Part5_1.jpg)
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(http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y66/Ezatam/Part5_3.jpg)
Hope you enjoyed it! Please post any and all reviews, critiques, comments, etc. I can handle the criticism and without it, I'll never get better at this, so please...be liberal with your words. Hold nothing back. :)
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Jediknight760071 - I am so glad that you finally updated this here. I really like the start to this series, it has a lot of potential.
I realize your sets are a bit confined (mine are too) - and considering that - these are a true work of art. Totally amazing. I love how you are using the carton boxes for buildings/terrain. It works perfectly and is very believable as a Star Wars set.
Also, this story is looking very ambitious - very, very much so! I love the different subplots - you definitely are good at coming up with a creative story.
I like seeing some customs in here too - very nice and I especially like the Zutton guy. As for the Mandalorian, I would like to know more about who he his, how Aayla knows about him, and why she is tracking him.
The holo Yoda looks good too - who needs the TRU exclusive when you show how well the Cinema Scene spirit version looks? ;)
I see you also updated two more stories - I'll read and reply as soon as I have a chance.
:P
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I second that! :) Good to see the story continue here! I'll get to the others and read/reply there as soon as I can.
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and I especially like the Zutton guy.
I'm glad you mentioned that....
The Zutton custom is actually not mine..it is the work of Hansloroll. This summer, we arranged a fairly large trade and included was that surprise...a custom figure. It's very very nice....He painted it wonderfully.
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I like the story so far, interesting set-up.
One question. Why not have the wookies enter the shuttle via the ramp...are they too big?
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Interesting