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Title: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (Complete)
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on November 2, 2005, 12:18 PM
DARK ILLUSIONS

A Clone Wars story





As the Republic is ravaged by the Clone Wars, the Jedi and Grand Clone Army of the Republic continue their search for Count Dooku and General Grievous.

The Jedi act as Generals on the field of battle, instructing the Clones and advanced engineered Commanders. However, as like the atmosphere in the Republic Senate, fear & distrust race across the galaxy.

As the Clone Wars continue to drag on, a victory followed by a defeat every week, the Republic continues to strive for peace while maintaing hope for a return to the peaceful times that lasted for over a 1,000 years.








And it begins...

Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (test)
Post by: CHEWIE on November 2, 2005, 12:31 PM
Always impressed with the clarity of your pics and how you are able to come up with very believable environments using items most of us wouldn't think of.

 :P
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (test)
Post by: Quazar on November 3, 2005, 04:03 PM
Welcome, Longhorn!

I look forward to seeing more of your great stories!  Welcome to the JD forums!!

Now get back to work!
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (test)
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on November 4, 2005, 09:51 AM
DARK ILLUSIONS

Chapter 1


On the distant planet of Raxus Prime…


Alpha:   This is the last one, sir. 
Cmdr. Bacara:   Any sign of activity here?
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-1.jpg)


Alpha:   Just one security droid, sir.  One more than the last barracks yesterday.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-8.jpg)


Cmdr. Bacara:   This one is not worth our time.  Call in the Kimcharise to bomb the facility.
Alpha:   Yes, sir.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-2.jpg)


Ki-Adi Mundi:   Not so fast, Commander.  Cancel the order for the gunship.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-3.jpg)



Ki-Adi:   I want to verify that Grievous is not on this planet.  This is the last of the strongholds.  If we destroy the General, I want physical proof he is dead.  Have your Marines secure the barracks.
Cmdr. Bacara:   As you wish…
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-4.jpg)


Cmdr. Bacara:   I want one squad to circle around the barracks!  The other with me!  Leave nothing standing!  Move out!!
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-5.jpg)


Ki-Adi:   Be cautious, Commander.  I have a bad feeling about this.  May the Force be with you.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-6.jpg)


Cmdr. Bacara:   If Grievous is inside, then this war will end here and now.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-7.jpg)


Alpha:   The security droid has dropped to the ground, sir.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-9.jpg)


Cmdr. Bacara:   Take him down quickly, trooper.
Alpha:   Yes, sir.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-10.jpg)


BLAST!   
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-11.jpg)


Cmdr. Bacara:   Now, circle right and activate your electronic visor.  Beta Team:  Report!
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-12.jpg)


Beta:   We have reached the back of the barracks.  No sign of ………wait…….I hear……
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-13.jpg)


Beta:   Destroyer droids!!!  Cover! Cover!
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-14.jpg)


BLAST! BALST! BLAST! BLAST! BLAST!   
Beta:   Too late!!!   Aaarrggghhhh…..
 (http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-15.jpg)


Cmdr. Bacara:   Beta Team is down. 
Alpha:   Sir, the barracks are opening…..
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-16.jpg)


Alpha:   Droids!!!
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-17.jpg)


Cmdr. Bacara:   You know what to do, troopers!
 (http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-18.jpg)


BLAST! BLAST! BLAST!   
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-19.jpg)


Cmdr. Bacara:   FIRE!!!
 (http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-20.jpg)


Thud! Thud!   
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-21.jpg)


Alpha:   The destroyer droids!
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-22.jpg)


Cmdr. Bacara:   General Mundi will dispose of them.....not soon enough...
 (http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-23.jpg)


 (http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-24.jpg)


(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-25.jpg)


(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-26.jpg)


 (http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-27.jpg)


(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-28.jpg)


Ki-Adi:   Sweep the barracks, Commander.  Grievous must be inside.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-29.jpg)



Alpha:   Another droid coming…
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-30.jpg)


Cmdr. Bacara:   This one’s mine!
 (http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-31.jpg)


Cmdr. Bacara:   Check the rest of the barracks. 
 (http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-32.jpg)



Alpha:   Nothing, sir.  Only a few droid parts.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-33.jpg)



Gamma:   The same on this side, sir.  Nothing but screws and bolts.
 (http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-34.jpg)


Alpha:   I’ll check the roof.
 (http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-35.jpg)


Alpha:   Commander!  I found…..something….
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-36.jpg)



Cmdr. Bacara:   Report!  What do you see?!
 (http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-37.jpg)


Alpha:   I see…..Grievous’….
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-38.jpg)


Clunk!   
 (http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-39.jpg)



Cmdr. Bacara:   Magna Guards!!!  Spread out!!!
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-40.jpg)



Continued below...
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on November 4, 2005, 10:00 AM
Cmdr. Bacara:   Stay away from the staffs!
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-41.jpg)


Gamma:   Aaaaahhh!!!
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-42.jpg)




Cmdr. Bacara (thinking):   Rifle is worthless in close combat…
 (http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-43.jpg)


Cmdr. Bacara:   Last chance…..
 (http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-44.jpg)



Cmdr. Bacara (thinking):   Just a little closer….
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-45.jpg)



Cmdr. Bacara:   Now!! AAAHHH!!!
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-46.jpg)



Ki-Adi:   Grievous must be close!
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-47.jpg)



Ki-Adi:   But, first to dispose of his “companions.”
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-48.jpg)



(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-49.jpg)



(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-50.jpg)



(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-51.jpg)



(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-52.jpg)




Ki-Adi:   I’ll take that!
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-53.jpg)




Ki-Adi:   You have failed your General!
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-54.jpg)



Ki-Adi:   Commander!!   CATCH!!!
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-55.jpg)




Cmdr. Bacara:   Got it!
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-56.jpg)



Cmdr. Bacara:   Now, this makes things even…
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-57.jpg)



(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-58.jpg)



(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-59.jpg)



(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-60.jpg)



 (http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-61.jpg)



Cmdr. Bacara:   Where is General Grievous?!  TELL ME!!!
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-62.jpg)



Cmdr. Bacara:   I will give you one more opportunity to answer my question:  WHERE IS GENERAL GRIEVOUS?!
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-63.jpg)




Cmdr. Bacara:  Stop wasting my time!
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-64.jpg)




Cmdr. Bacara:  Mission accomplished…
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-65.jpg)




Ki-Adi:   Good work, Commander.  Your training has served you well.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-66.jpg)




Delta:   Reinforcements have arrived, Commander.
Cmdr. Bacara:   Reinforcements?  I did not call for…..
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-67.jpg)




Ki-Adi:   I called for reinforcements, Commander.  Wasn’t sure if your Marines were going to be enough to take down Grievous. 
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-68.jpg)




Cmdr. Bacara:   My men can handle anything thrown at them.
Ki-Adi:   I can see that now.  Nevertheless, this adventure proved worthless.  Grievous is not here.  He only left these droids as a distraction.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-69.jpg)




Ki-Adi:   Pick up the wounded, and bury the dead, Commander.  I will report our result to the Council.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-70.jpg)




Cmdr. Bacara:   Do as the General says, trooper.
Delta:   Yes, sir!
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-71.jpg)




Cmdr. Bacara:   And trooper…….call for the Kimcharise to destroy this place.  I want nothing left standing.
Delta:   Yes, sir.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-72.jpg)




Cmdr. Bacara:   Should have done that from the beginning…
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/1-73.jpg)





Continued below...
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on November 4, 2005, 10:07 AM
Chapter 2


Back on Coruscant, the Jedi Council have just viewed Ki-Adi Mundi’s report on Raxus Prime.


Shaak Ti:   That is the end of Master Mundi’s transmission.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/2-1.jpg)



Mace Windu:   Ki-Adi’s frustration was obvious.  Again Grievous proves to be one step ahead of us.  He was reported on Raxus Prime only three days ago.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/2-2.jpg)



Yoda:   Knew of our attack, Grievous did.  Strange this is…
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/2-3.jpg)



Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Palpatine will not be pleased, since he was against sending what few Clones we had to hunt down Grievous.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/2-4.jpg)



Mace Windu:   Palpatine’s attention is spread over too many objectives.  He wants to end the war, but also secure the Inner Core.
Saesee Tiin:   His current legislation to allow Clones to become Coruscant’s Galactic Security is only adding to his distractions.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/2-5.jpg)



Kit Fisto:   We must not allow him to lose focus on capturing Count Dooku or Grievous.  The war will end if they are destroyed.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/2-6.jpg)



Mace Windu:   Here he comes now, late as usual…
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/2-7.jpg)





Chancellor Palpatine:   Please excuse my tardiness.  As you know, several Senators are opposed to my plan for the Galactic Security of Coruscant.  Their inquiries only delay the inevitable.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/2-8.jpg)




Mace Windu:   Think nothing of it, Chancellor.  We were just discussing the latest report from Master Mundi.  His latest assignment proved unsuccessful in locating Grievous.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/2-9.jpg)




Chancellor Palpatine:   Another disappointment.  Was your intelligence not correct, then?
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/2-10.jpg)




Yoda:   Knew of our plans to attack, the General did.  Now, the search continues…
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/2-11.jpg)




Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Our intelligence was correct about Grievous’ location, since he left several Magna Guards behind.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/2-12.jpg)




Shaak Ti:   We have several more Jedi looking for him and Count Dooku.  It will only be a matter of time before we find both of them.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/2-13.jpg)




Chancellor Palpatine:   And if you don’t?  I am sorry to sound so negative, but in our continued hunts for the Count and his General, we have found nothing but dust. 
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/2-14.jpg)




Chancellor Palpatine:   Could they not just be leading us on a wild Bantha chase?  Meanwhile, with our Clones being re-positioned, the Seperatists come closer to taking back several planets in the Inner Core. 
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/2-15.jpg)





Chancellor Palpatine:   With this ongoing conflict, the people of these planets may begin to believe the rhetoric from the Seperatists, that we cannot protect them.  This may lead to these crucial planets leaving the Republic, and joining the Seperatists. 
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/2-16.jpg)




Chancellor Palpatine:   Peace is our objective, not just the death of two evil beings.  I understand how important Dooku & Grievous are to ending the War.  However, the Senate is not pleased when we lose troops on missions that prove worthless.  I will shoulder the blame for this myself, but the Jedi no longer enjoy their high stature with the Senate or the Republic. There are trying times, for certain.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/2-17.jpg)




Chancellor Palpatine:   Now, unfortunately, I am needed in an emergency session of the Senate.  Several Senators have called for a vote on the Galactic Security measure.  I am confident we have the votes to win, though.  I bid you a good day, Jedi.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/2-18.jpg)




Mace Windu:   His time spent with us becomes less and less each time.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/2-19.jpg)




Saesee Tiin:   He is correct about our failed missions.  Each one brings less hope to the War ending soon.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/2-20.jpg)




Obi-Wan Kenobi:   There are so few Jedi left that I fear we may not have enough to find either Dooku or Grievous.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/2-21.jpg)



Yoda:   No matter, the pursuit of Grievous and Dooku will continue.  Growing the dark side is, difficult to see the future is.  May the Force be with us.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/2-22.jpg)



Mace Windu:   Obi-Wan, may we speak to you.
Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Of course, Master.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/2-23.jpg)




Mace Windu:   Where is Anakin?
Obi-Wan Kenobi:   He is in the meditation room in the Temple.  He has been very uneasy about something as of late.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/2-24.jpg)




Mace Windu:   You must keep him focused, Obi-Wan.  He is quickly frustrated with this War.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/2-25.jpg)




Obi-Wan Kenobi:   I will, Master.  I am concerned he has been on Coruscant for too long.  He becomes restless with the War going on.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/2-26.jpg)




Kit Fisto:   His conversations with the Chancellor may also add to that anxiety. 
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/2-29.jpg)




Mace Windu:   It is Palpatine I worry about.  His recent actions are questionable.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/2-28.jpg)




Mace Windu:   Just watch him carefully, Obi-Wan.  His skills will be needed when we find Dooku or Grievous.
Obi-Wan Kenobi:   I will, Master.  And thank you for your concern.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/2-30.jpg)




Obi-Wan Kenobi:   …..
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/2-31.jpg)




Continued below...
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on November 4, 2005, 10:11 AM
Chapter 3


In the Meditation Room at the Jedi Temple, a calm Anakin allows himself to listen to the Force…


(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/3-1.jpg)




Anakin Skywalker:   There is something not right…
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/3-2.jpg)




Qui-Gon Jinn:   Anakin Skywalker, meet Master Adi Gallia.  She is a dear friend of mine, and the person I confide in regarding the Jedi Council.
Adi Gallia:   It is a pleasure to meet you, Anakin Skywalker. 
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/3-3.jpg)





Anakin Skywalker:   ……
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/3-4.jpg)





Anakin Skywalker:   But how am I supposed to know the difference between the Living Force and the visions?
Adi Gallia:   The Living Force will only be here and now.  The visions you have are not from the Living Force, Anakin.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/3-5.jpg)





Adi Gallia:   Qui-Gon explained this to me so many times.  Only recently, have I understood what he was talking about.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/3-6.jpg)





Adi Gallia:   Because Qui-Gon only made decisions based on the present situation, the Council did not believe he thought about the consequences of his actions.  This was their main riff with Qui-Gon.
Anakin Skywalker:   I understand, Master.  But how did you become so close to him?
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/3-7.jpg)





Adi Gallia:   Mainly because he was right about a lot of things.  He knew of the Dark Side growing before his attacker appeared on Tatooine.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/3-8.jpg)





Adi Gallia:   He knew the Republic was being corrupted.  This war would not have surprised him, nor the allegation by Dooku that the Senate is controlled by a Sith Lord.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/3-9.jpg)





Adi Gallia:   It was here in the Meditation Room where I first began to understand the Living Force.  I come here to meditate on these matters.  In time, you will come here to quiet your mind.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/3-10.jpg)





Adi Gallia:   Based on your accomplishments, Qui-Gon would have been very proud of you.  You have made the entire Jedi Order proud.
Anakin Skywalker:   Thank you, Master.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/3-11.jpg)





Anakin Skywalker:   …..
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/3-12.jpg)




(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/3-13.jpg)




Anakin Skywalker:   Master Gallia!!!
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/3-14.jpg)





Anakin Skywalker:   Grievous….
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%201-3/3-15.jpg)




To be continued...
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: Diddly on November 6, 2005, 07:08 PM
Oh man, this is great! I like your backgrounds, photos and accessories. Neat! The story is good as well.

I am curious about the relationship between Anakin and Adi though. Was this present in some EU story I missed? Or is it made up? Still curious to see how Anakin will retaliate against Grievous' attack...
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: Quazar on November 6, 2005, 07:20 PM
Sorry I haven't commented sooner, I really like the new material!

I also like the adi gallia relationship.  The chapter ends on a GREAT cliffhanger.

I will really try to comment more....busy now.  But it's a great new story.
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on November 23, 2005, 10:14 AM
Oh man, this is great! I like your backgrounds, photos and accessories. Neat! The story is good as well.

I am curious about the relationship between Anakin and Adi though. Was this present in some EU story I missed? Or is it made up? Still curious to see how Anakin will retaliate against Grievous' attack...

Thanx!  The story is my own creation.  Basically, just an idea from my head.  :P

I have not updated the last chapters, so here are the last six chapters.  Enjoy!

Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on November 23, 2005, 10:25 AM
DARK ILLUSIONS

Chapter 4



In the Jedi Temple, Anakin Skywalker waits for Jedi Master Obi-Wan Kenobi.



Anakin Skywalker:   …..
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%204-6/4-1.jpg)





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Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Anakin, I came as soon as I got your message.  What’s wrong?
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%204-6/4-3.jpg)






Anakin Skywalker:   Master Gallia is in trouble.
Obi-Wan Kenobi:   How do you know?
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%204-6/4-4.jpg)






Anakin Skywalker:   I saw Grievous during my meditation.  He is stalking her.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%204-6/4-5.jpg)






Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Master Gallia is on a Peace Recovery mission on Adaven.  As for Grievous, his location is still unknown. 
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%204-6/4-6.jpg)






Anakin Skywalker:   Grievous knows where she is…..
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%204-6/4-5a.jpg)






Anakin Skywalker:   He knows she is vulnerable.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%204-6/4-7.jpg)






Anakin Skywalker:   The Council must send a squad to rescue her.  I will go alone if I have to…
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%204-6/4-8.jpg)






Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Calm down, Anakin.  We don’t have any evidence that Master Gallia is in trouble or even if Grievous is anywhere near Adaven.
Anakin Skywalker:   I don’t need “evidence.”  I KNOW she is in trouble!
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%204-6/4-9.jpg)






Obi-Wan Kenobi:   There’s no reasoning with you.  We will speak to Master Windu regarding this.  Now, relax.
Anakin Skywalker:   Forgive me, Master. I just have a bad feeling about this whole thing.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%204-6/4-10.jpg)






Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Well, I am glad you told me about this first.  I’m surprised you didn’t go to Adaven by yourself.
Anakin Skywalker:   I wouldn’t go without you, Master.  Who would save you while I was gone?
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%204-6/4-11.jpg)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: CHEWIE on November 23, 2005, 10:31 AM
Again you show how great your photography and storytelling abilities are.  Also your use of everyday items really fits in well with the Star Wars look, especially the spice rack things you used in Palpatine's office.  They work perfectly.

One suggestion, and it's minor - would there be any way to show a few establishing shot?  Maybe from a distance?   I think, at least in my opinion, it would be good for variety's sake.

 :P
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on November 23, 2005, 10:33 AM
DARK ILLUSIONS

Chapter 5




Later, Count Dooku arrives for a private meeting at The Works, the abandoned manufacturing district on Coruscant.



(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%204-6/5-1.jpg)






Darth Sidious:   Welcome, Lord Tyrannus.
Darth Tyrannus:   Lord Sidious, the War goes well.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%204-6/5-2.jpg)






Darth Tyrannus:   The Grand Army of the Republic is spread across the galaxy.  Their supply lines are stretched beyond the breaking point.  The Jedi ranks are thinned out, and more systems are rallying to join the Separatist movement.
Darth Sidious:   You’ve done well, Tyrannus.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%204-6/5-3.jpg)






Darth Sidious:   The Jedi are obsessed in their search for Grievous and you.  Their pathetic dedication will play into our hands.
Darth Tyrannus:   Shall we begin the final assault, Master?
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%204-6/5-4.jpg)






Darth Sidious:   The final stages of the War have already begun.  The Republic is  helpless to stop it.
Darth Tyrannus:   What plans do you have for Master Kenobi & Skywalker?
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%204-6/5-5.jpg)






Darth Sidious:   They’re of no concern.  Their destiny lye with me.
Darth Tyrannus:   General Grievous was anxious to begin his next attack.  He is in position now.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%204-6/5-6.jpg)






Darth Sidious:   Good.  Then, the time has come for your own attack to begin, Lord Tyrannus.  
Darth Tyrannus:   Your wish is my command, Master.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%204-6/5-7.jpg)








Meanwhile, back at the Jedi Temple, the Jedi discuss the latest developments in the Clone War.



Aayla Secura:   …the report is from Clone Intelligence.  It's the best lead we've had.  That system is supposed to be void of any Separatists.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%204-6/4-12.jpg)






Kit Fisto:   We must act quickly.  If we delay a response, Grievous could escape again.  The Council must decide which squad will go.  
Aayla Secura:   What about Palpatine?
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%204-6/4-13.jpg)






Mace Windu:   Let’s be cautious.  If we have another failed mission, even Palpatine will not be able to take full responsibility.  We need proof, not leads.  We’ll speak about this at a later time.  
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%204-6/4-14.jpg)






Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Master Windu, may we speak to you for a moment?
Mace Windu:   Of course.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%204-6/4-15.jpg)






Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Anakin has had some…..visions…..regarding General Grievous.  
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%204-6/4-16.jpg)






Anakin Skywalker:   Actually, of Master Gallia.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%204-6/4-17.jpg)






Mace Windu:   Master Gallia is surveying Adaven.  The war is over there, and her squad is to assist in the rebuilding.  Reports have General Grievous on the other side of the galaxy.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%204-6/4-18.jpg)






Anakin Skywalker:   Allow me to go to Adaven to verify she is safe.
Mace Windu:   Your place is here, Skywalker.  I sense much confusion in you.  We have more leads than we can possibly follow-up.  We can’t afford to send additional forces to a planet with no effect on the War, based solely on your “visions.”
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%204-6/4-19.jpg)






Obi-Wan Kenobi:   But Master, with Grievous’ location still in question, should we not at least verify Master Gallia is safe on Adaven?
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%204-6/4-20.jpg)






Mace Windu:   While I don’t think this warrants any more of our time…..I will send a transmission to Adi.  At least we will receive her estimate regarding how long the rebuilding effort will take.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%204-6/4-21.jpg)






Anakin Skywalker:   Thank you, Master.  I look forward to her response.  
Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Thank you, Master Windu.
Mace Windu:   May the Force be with you both.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%204-6/4-22.jpg)






Anakin Skywalker:   He doesn’t believe me, Obi-Wan.  I am not confused!  Perhaps if the visions were his own, he would take this more seriously…..
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%204-6/4-23.jpg)





 
Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Calm yourself, Anakin.  We are all on the same side here.  He did say he would contact Master Gallia.  I'm sure everything will be alright.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%204-6/4-24.jpg)






Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Now, come on, let’s go to the briefing.  I am interested to know how the War is going.
Anakin Skywalker:   Yes, Master.  I hope you're right.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%204-6/4-25.jpg)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on November 23, 2005, 10:38 AM
DARK ILLUSIONS

Chapter 6




Originally a Separatist stronghold, Jedi Council member Adi Gallia & Commander Deviss arrive on Adaven to begin the rebuilding effort.



Adi Gallia:   This should be close enough, Commander.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%204-6/6-1.jpg)




Commander Deviss:   Yes, General.  The base is just over the hill, north of here.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%204-6/6-2.jpg)




Adi Gallia:   Prepare your men, Commander.  We will see some disturbing things that could rattle the rookies.
Commander Deviss:   Yes, General.  Will we encounter any resistance?
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%204-6/6-3.jpg)




Adi Gallia:   No.  The last reports of the War indicated the Republic succeeded in driving the Droid Armies out of the Adaven system, but only after the “MAYDAY” call from the original battlion.
Commander Deviss:   Is this what you meant by “disturbing?”
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%204-6/6-4.jpg)




Adi Gallia:   Yes, Commander………this is what I meant…………..
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%204-6/6-5.jpg)




Adi Gallia:   Every life is precious to the freedom of the Republic.
Commander Deviss:   We will fight for as long as necessary, General.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%204-6/6-6.jpg)




Commander Deviss:   This must be the remains of the droids that killed the two troopers.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%204-6/6-7.jpg)




Commander Deviss:   Four droids versus two Clone troopers.  Our brothers-in-arms did us proud!
Adi Gallia:   …..
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%204-6/6-8.jpg)




Adi Gallia:   Keep moving.  We need to reach the base and see if anyone survived this carnage. (http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%204-6/6-10.jpg)




Commander Deviss:   More droids, General.  The Seppes knew this was the base of the Adaven system.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%204-6/6-9.jpg)




Adi Gallia:   Unfortunately, we did not have enough troops for the initial attack. (http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%204-6/6-11.jpg)




Commander Deviss:   Be proud, General.  This solider destroyed four more droids.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%204-6/6-12.jpg)




Commander Deviss:   According to the map, the base is hidden behind the brush.  Remove those leaves, troopers!
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%204-6/6-13.jpg)




Adi Gallia:   We’re too late….. (http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%204-6/6-14.jpg)




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(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%204-6/6-16.jpg)




Commander Deviss:   Even more droids, General. 
Adi Gallia:   They were trapped… (http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%204-6/6-17.jpg)




(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%204-6/6-18.jpg)




Commander Deviss:   They did their job, General. 
Adi Gallia:   Nevertheless, this is proof of Grievous’ brutality.  We have to end this War soon.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%204-6/6-19.jpg)




Commander Deviss:   Pilot, you were to remain with the ship.
Omega:   Sorry, sir!  We’ve received a transmission from Coruscant. (http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%204-6/6-20.jpg)




Omega:   The transmission is for you, General Gallia.  From Master Windu.
Adi Gallia:   Master Windu? 
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%204-6/6-21.jpg)




Adi Gallia:   Let’s go, trooper.  Commander Deviss, begin the cleanup process.
Commander Deviss:   Yes, General. (http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%204-6/6-22.jpg)




Commander Deviss:   Troopers!  Begin collecting the bodies for burial. (http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%204-6/6-23.jpg)




Commander Deviss:   We will give all of our fallen brothers the proper burial, with full honors.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%204-6/6-24.jpg)




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Adi Gallia:   I wonder why Master Windu would contact me here.
Omega:   I don’t know, General, but the message was marked “URGENT.”
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%204-6/6-26.jpg)




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Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on November 23, 2005, 10:44 AM
DARK ILLUSIONS

Chapter 7


Senators Bail Organa of Alderaan and Padme Amidala of Naboo await Supreme Chancellor’s arrival for a private meeting.



Bail Organa:   Why would he call this private meeting? 
Padme Amidala:   These days, we can never be sure.  With each passing day, he seems more overwhelmed with the War.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/DARK%20ILLUSIONS%20-%20Chap%207-9/7-1.jpg)




Padme Amidala:   Nevertheless, we need to be careful.  No matter what he says, we must closely evaluate any new proposals.
Bail Organa:   I wonder who else he invited? 
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/DARK%20ILLUSIONS%20-%20Chap%207-9/7-2.jpg)




Bail Organa:  Governor Wilhuff Tarkin?    Last I heard, he was still battling the Separatists out on the Seswana sector. 
Padme Amidala:   Since the beginning of the War, he has lobbied for stronger weapons and the development of a  battle station.  I don't understand why he would be here, since he is the Governor of Eriadu.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/DARK%20ILLUSIONS%20-%20Chap%207-9/7-3.jpg)



Bail Organa:  We’ll soon have our answers.  Here comes the Chancellor.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/DARK%20ILLUSIONS%20-%20Chap%207-9/7-4.jpg)


Bail Organa:   Well, they seem friendly. 
Padme Amidala:    Yes…......very friendly...…….
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/DARK%20ILLUSIONS%20-%20Chap%207-9/7-5.jpg)



Chancellor Palpatine:   Senator Organa, I'm glad you could come.   It is a privilege to see you again, M’Lady. 
Padme Amidala:   Thank you, Chancellor.
Bail Organa:   It is honor to be here. 
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/DARK%20ILLUSIONS%20-%20Chap%207-9/7-6.jpg)



Chancellor Palpatine:   Thank you all for coming.  I brought you here today to discuss the upcoming vote on the Galactic Security proposal.  You are my closest allies and friends, and it is of the utmost importance that we remain united while this measure is being debated.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/DARK%20ILLUSIONS%20-%20Chap%207-9/7-7.jpg)



Chancellor Palpatine:   Peace is our objective here, peace throughout the Republic.  However, we must also provide security for the citizens of Coruscant, especially the representatives in the Senate.  If the Separatists were to attack Coruscant, as outrageous as that sounds, the Senate must be safe and continue to function.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/DARK%20ILLUSIONS%20-%20Chap%207-9/7-8.jpg)



Governor Tarkin:   That is why I have always insisted on taking the fight to the enemy’s home planets, to prevent any attack against the Inner Core, especially Coruscant.  With additional fire power, the War could end with one swift stroke.   You have my support for any upgrades to the Grand Army, Chancellor.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/DARK%20ILLUSIONS%20-%20Chap%207-9/7-9.jpg)


Bail Organa:   The Jedi provide security for Coruscant.  We do not need the Grand Army patrolling Coruscant. The War is all too real for the people of Coruscant, simply by viewing the HoloNet.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/DARK%20ILLUSIONS%20-%20Chap%207-9/7-11.jpg)

Chancellor Palpatine:   I understand your sentiment, Senator, and I wish we could depend on the Jedi in this matter.  However, we would be foolish to leave the security of the Republic in the hands of a few Jedi.  The Jedi Order has been crippled by this War.  There are simply not enough Jedi to protect Coruscant.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/DARK%20ILLUSIONS%20-%20Chap%207-9/7-10.jpg)


Padme Amidala:   But what exactly are you proposing, Chancellor?  We can’t spare a Clone Army from the frontlines.  Where would we find the troops to create a Galactic Security?  I would only support a new Security measure if it comes with a guarantee to conduct a Peace Summit.  We could then guarantee the safety of the Separatists leaders in order to negotiate a peace agreement.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/DARK%20ILLUSIONS%20-%20Chap%207-9/7-12.jpg)



Chancellor Palpatine:  Right you are, M’Lady.   The Galactic Security would be a brand new army of Clones, specifically trained to defeat any threat against Coruscant.  If this measure passes, we could hold your Peace Summit.  A diplomatic solution to this War still remains my first priority.
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Chancellor Palpatine:   I need your support.  You are the two most respected Senators in all of the Republic.  Your support could rally the Senate to pass this proposal as soon as possible.
Bail Organa:   Thank you, sir.  We will get the word out.
Padme Amidala:   If it will lead to a peaceful end to the War, you’ll have my support, Chancellor.
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Bail Organa:   For once, we get some good news.  This may actually lead to the end of the War, which would result in Palpatine stepping down. 
Padme Amidala:   We can only hope, Bail.
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Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on November 23, 2005, 10:46 AM
DARK ILLUSIONS

Chapter 8


With no reply from Jedi Master Adi Gallia in several days, Mace Windu calls for an emergency session with the members of the Jedi Council remaining on Coruscant.



Mace Windu:   Based on the conversation with Obi-Wan and Skywalker, I sent a transmission to Adi requesting her to report on her progress.  It has been five days now, and I have yet to receive any reply.
Ki-Adi Mundi:   Is it possible the message did not reach her on Adaven?
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Mace Windu:   According to the transmitter, the message was accepted by her Gunship.  It is unlike her to go this long without any communications.
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Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Could she be in danger, Master?
Mace Windu:   It’s possible, however unlikely.  I reviewed the scouting reports with Adi before she left.  The last Clone intelligence stated the Droid Armies were driven out of that system completely.  Nearly all inhabitants of Adaven were able to flee to surrounding systems. 
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Shaak Ti:   With a full crew, any problem with the communication equipment would have been fixed.  My feelings tell me there is something seriously wrong.
Yoda:   Very mysterious, this is…..
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Mace Windu:   There’s more.  We’ve lost the signal from the homing beacon aboard her Gunship.  Even if there was a communication problem, we should still be able to locate her by use of the homing beacon.   
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Shaak Ti:   We should send another squad to verify what has happened.  The longer we delay, the bigger this problem may become.
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Ki-Adi Mundi:   I concur with Shaak Ti.  If the Chancellor or Senate discovers we have lost communication with Adi and Commander Deviss,  they will assume the Separatists have taken back the Adaven system.  The Clones will then be ordered back to the system.
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Yoda:   Need that, we do not.  Only more problems, this will become for the Jedi and the Chancellor.
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Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Anakin and I are ready to go.  He has been very uneasy about this whole situation.   
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Yoda:   Only increase, would Skywalker’s frustration.  A calmer, more experienced Jedi should go.
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Mace Windu:   I agree with Yoda.  We can send Aayla Secura.  She can leave immediately with Commander Bly and a small squad from the Star Corps. (http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/DARK%20ILLUSIONS%20-%20Chap%207-9/8-11.jpg)



Obi-Wan Kenobi:   I understand, Master.  Anakin won’t take to this kindly, I’m afraid.
Mace Windu:   He will respect the decision of the Council.
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Yoda:   Quiet we must keep, until we have confirmation from Aayla. 
Mace Windu:   Agreed.  Patience is our ally in this situation.
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Mace Windu:   May the Force be with Aayla…..and Adi.
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Anakin Skywalker:   Another Council meeting?  Glad I missed it.
Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Who are you kidding?  You were probably outside the door, just hoping to overhear something.
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Anakin Skywalker:   Only to be sure you get us the best assignment, Master.  I would hate to get stuck with a boring assignment, like negotiating a peace agreement between Jawas and droids. 
Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Actually, that does sound interesting.  Nevertheless..........the meeting was in regards to Master Gallia.
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Anakin Skywalker:   When do we leave? (http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/DARK%20ILLUSIONS%20-%20Chap%207-9/8-20.jpg)



Obi-Wan Kenobi:   We don’t, Anakin.  The Council is concerned that she has not responded to Master Windu’s transmission. 
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Obi-Wan Kenobi:   She may be in danger.  The Council selected Aayla Secura to investigate the situation.
Anakin Skywalker:   What?!
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Anakin Skywalker:   How could they NOT have chosen us???  We are the best suited for this mission or any other mission!!  It was my vision, Obi-Wan,  that prompted Mace to contact Master Gallia in the first place!!
Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Calm down, Anakin.  THIS is the reason why we weren’t selected.  You have become too emotional.
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Obi-Wan Kenobi:   I want to go just as much as you do.  We don’t know what has happened to Master Gallia, nor if Grievous was involved.   We must remain patient.  Aayla Secura will depart for Adaven as soon as possible.
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Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Meanwhile, you must calm yourself.  You must stay focused on…...
Anakin Skywalker:   Save it, Obi-Wan.  I don’t have time for another lecture.
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Obi-Wan Kenobi:   (sigh)
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Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on November 23, 2005, 10:51 AM
DARK ILLUSIONS

Chapter 9


At the Senate building, Governor Tarkin & Papatine continue discussing the ongoing War.



Governor Tarkin:   …….construction is slow but we are making progress.  This project will take many years to complete.  For the time being, it must remain confidential.
Chancellor Palpatine:   Agreed.  The political atmosphere is not right for an announcement of this magnitude.
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Chancellor Palpatine:   We will discuss this further at our next meeting.  If you’ll excuse me, I have a guest waiting.
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Governor Tarkin:   Thank you for your time, Chancellor.
Chancellor Palpatine:   Until next time, Governor.
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Chancellor Palpatine:   Welcome, Anakin.  I’m pleased you were able to meet me on such short notice.
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Chancellor Palpatine:    Leave us.
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Anakin Skywalker:   I always have time for the Supreme Chancellor of the Republic. 
Chancellor Palpatine:    I was afraid the Council would have sent you on a mission by now.
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Anakin Skywalker:   I should be on my way to Adaven right now……….if not for the Council……
Chancellor Palpatine:    They’ve done something to upset you again.  Are you alluding to the situation concerning Master Adi Gallia?
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Anakin Skywalker:   How do you………that is not public knowledge…..
Chancellor Palpatine:    My own…..sources…..informed me of the missing Clone battalion, led by Commander Deviss.  Just because the Jedi try to hide this information, does not mean I am blind to what goes on in my Republic. 
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Anakin Skywalker:   We don’t know if Master Gallia is any danger…..but…..
Chancellor Palpatine:    We both know her fine character, Anakin.  She is not one to forget her responsibilities.  If she has not contacted anyone by now, then something must have happened to her.  It disappoints me that the Council did not select you for this important assignment.
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Anakin Skywalker:   The Council doesn’t believe I can control my “emotions.”    They are sending Aayla Secura, instead.
Chancellor Palpatine:    I’m sure they are looking out for your best interests, Anakin.  However, the Council is not without flaws themselves.
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Chancellor Palpatine:    Unfortunately, the Jedi Council has become very arrogant.  It’s understandable, considering all the power they have acquired during this War.  But even the younglings display their arrogance, thinking of themselves as Jedi Knights.  It makes my job very difficult.
Anakin Skywalker:    They do their best, Chancellor.  They try to be optimistic, including Obi-Wan.  But I will admit, it is not the Jedi Way to keep a secret from the Senate.   
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Chancellor Palpatine:    Nor is it right to withhold this information from me.  You must trust your feelings, Anakin.  You should have been selected to go to Adaven.  You should be on the frontlines right now winning the War.  And more importantly, you should be on the Council by now.
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Anakin Skywalker:    I know it is only a matter of time before that happens.  Even Obi-Wan tells me to be patient.  My only concern right now is Master Gallia.
Chancellor Palpatine:    Oh, I agree.  She must be found.  But you are a wise and powerful Jedi, Anakin.  You have more than proven yourself.  The Republic will forever be in debited to you.  It only makes sense that the Jedi Council should show you the same respect.
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Anakin Skywalker:    Thank you, Chancellor.  I appreciate your kind words.
Chancellor Palpatine:   Very soon the Council will realize how powerful you have become.   Until then, we shall respect their decision and hope it is for the best.
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Meanwhile, back at the Jedi Temple…



Aayla Secura:   I will get to the bottom of this plot quickly, Master. I’ll be back here in no time. 
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Yoda:   Cautious, you must be, Aayla.  More going on at Adaven than we know. (http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/DARK%20ILLUSIONS%20-%20Chap%207-9/9-16.jpg)




Aayla Secura:   Yes, Master Yoda.  I will make contact as soon as I find something.
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Yoda:   May the Force be with you.
Aayla Secura:   And also with you. 
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Commander Bly:   General Secura, the Kimcharise is ready to depart.
Aayla Secura:   Very good, Commander.  Does Oddball have the coordinates? 
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Commander Bly:   Yes, General.  All of the equipment has been loaded as well.  I would still recommend we take more men.
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Aayla Secura:   Thank you for your concern, Commander.  But we are only on a reconnaissance mission.  If we need more troops, we will call for them as needed. 
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Commander Bly:   I have selected two of my best men, Tau and Rho, just as you requested.  They have never let me down.
Aayla Secura:   We shall be in good company then.
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Commander Oddball:   General Secura, it is an honor to have you aboard the Kimcharise.
Aayla Secura:   Good to see you again, Oddball.  Ready for another adventure? 
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Commander Oddball:   Always!    If your ready, General, we’ll leave immediately.
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Aayla Secura:   You can relax, Commander Bly.  We still have to rendezvous with a Republic starship.
Commander Bly:   Yes, General.  I am just anxious to begin our new assignment.  Hopefully, we will be allowed to complete this one. 
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Aayla Secura:   I’m sure we will.  Hopefully, with a happy ending..... 
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Yoda:   Leave, another Jedi does...........return, she must.....
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Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on November 23, 2005, 11:02 AM
Again you show how great your photography and storytelling abilities are.  Also your use of everyday items really fits in well with the Star Wars look, especially the spice rack things you used in Palpatine's office.  They work perfectly.

One suggestion, and it's minor - would there be any way to show a few establishing shot?  Maybe from a distance?   I think, at least in my opinion, it would be good for variety's sake.

 :P

Thanx for your feedback, CHEWIE.  Always appreciated.

I thought you had seen the last chapters by now.  I don't use "establishing" shots for two reasons:  1) Any pic of Coruscant of any other planet would not be my own original picture.  Basically, the picture belongs to someone else.  And in the world of SW, everything is copyrighted!  2)  While planet shots are cool, I don't think they are important to the story.  It is just one extra picture to change the location of the story, but I do that with a simple italics narration.  Good enough for me.

Thanx for the commentary tho!   :)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on December 6, 2005, 04:18 PM
DARK ILLUSIONS

Chapter 10


Jedi Knight Aayla Secura & Commander Bly arrive on Adaven, with the hope of finding Jedi Master Adi Gallia & Commander Deviss.



Commander Bly:   Oddball, this is a good spot.  Set her down here.
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Commander Bly:   With nightfall approaching, we should be able to move quickly.
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Commander Bly:   No sign of anyone or anything.
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Commander Bly:   The last known coordinates for General Gallia’s gunship were due south of here. 
Aayla Secura:   Very good, Commander.  We shall walk the rest of the way. 
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Commander Bly:   I still say we should have brought more men. 
Aayla Secura:   Not until it is absolutely necessary.  May I remind you, Commander, we are on a peaceful mission.
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Aayla Secura:   Oddball, remain here with the ship.  Continue scanning the area, and alert us of any movement.  And be prepared for an immediate takeoff, just in case.
Commander Oddball:   Yes, General.  Good luck.
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Aayla Secura:   In my experience, there is no such thing as luck. 
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Commander Bly:   There is something ahead.  Not big enough for an enemy, but it does look familiar…..Rho, Tau, check it out!
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Rho:   I can’t see anything out here! 
Tau:   Neither can I.  Wait…..I do see…..
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Commander Bly:   Who are they, Tau?
Tau:   Based on the battalion logos, these troopers are part of the original battlion of Adaven.  These are burial markers. 
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Commander Bly:   Commander Deviss and his men must have begun the burial process.  Who else would have buried these troopers?
Aayla Secura:   Their objective was to restore the original command post.  We must be close. 
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Commander Bly:   Let’s keep moving then.   
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Commander Bly:   General, do you mind if I ask, what you think happened to General Gallia and her men? 
Aayla Secura:   I have hope we will find them safe.  However, I do have a bad feeling about all this.  There is something very cold about this place.  The dark side is strong here.
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Tau:   Commander, I have a visual on the command post. 
Rho:   I have a visual on something else…
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Rho:   Why were these troopers not buried? 
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Aayla Secura:   Because..…they were burying the dead.    These troopers must be from Deviss’ squad.
Commander Bly:   Something went terribly wrong.
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Tau:   He has been blasted several times.  And his serial number confirms he was part of Commander Deviss’ team. 
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Rho:   Commander, their weapons are over here.  Why would they leave them behind?
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Aayla Secura:   Probably because they didn’t think they would need them. 
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Commander Bly:   Then who killed them?  The planet was void of any life forms or Seperatists. 
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Aayla Secura:   Obviously not.  The Force will be our guide…..
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Aayla Secura:   Destroyer droids…..he fell…..trying to get back to his rifle…..
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/10-23.jpg)




 
Aayla Secura:   They were ambushed. 
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/10-24.jpg)





Aayla Secura:   They were trying to get back to their weapons when the droids appeared.  This trooper was shot in the back.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/10-25.jpg)




Rho:   Droids are not known for their stealth.  Their mechanical parts can easily be heard.   
Tau:   …..unless something else drew their attention. 
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/10-26.jpg)





Commander Bly:   Doesn’t make sense, General.  How could these troopers be so easily killed by droids? 
Aayla Secura:   The droids knew they were here.  This attack was too precise…..as if the droids knew their exact location.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/10-27.jpg)



Commander Bly:   A spy, perhaps?   
Aayla Secura:   Perhaps.  Nevertheless, this was a trap.  But where are Master Gallia and Deviss?
Rho:   We found one more.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/10-28.jpg)




Tau:   His neck was slashed.  There are some restraints on the ground, near his feet. 
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/10-29.jpg)




Commander Bly:   He must have been captured.   
Rho:   ….then killed.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/10-30.jpg)


Continued below.....
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on December 6, 2005, 04:19 PM
Aayla Secura:   One way to find out…..
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/10-31.jpg)




 
Aayla Secura:   He was restrained……until the very last second……when he was killed…….with a lightsaber……
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/10-32.jpg)




Rho:   A lightsaber?
Tau:   Jedi use lightsabers…. 
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/10-33.jpg)



Aayla Secura:   As do Sith Lords, Tau.  This trooper was interrogated before his throat was slashed. 
Commander Bly:   Only the higher levels of the Republic War Committee knew of this assignment.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/10-34.jpg)




Aayla Secura:   Yes, and even less knew of the precise location.  Someone has betrayed the Republic….let’s keep searching for Gallia and Deviss.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/10-35.jpg)




Commander Bly:   A battle droid.    This is the first one we have come across.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/10-36.jpg)





Aayla Secura:   …..and there is Commander Deviss.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/10-37.jpg)




Aayla Secura:   It appears he at least put up a fight….
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/10-38.jpg)




Aayla Secura:   But he was out numbered…..
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Aayla Secura:   Deviss’ death still does not provide any answers.  We need to find their gunship.   
Commander Bly:   The coordinates of the gunship were on the other side of this hill.  Let’s go.
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Commander Bly:   I think we just found their gunship…..or what’s left of it.  Tau, can you confirm?
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Tau:   Affirmative, Commander.  The serial markings are a match to the gunship assigned to Commander Deviss.  And these burn marks could only be made by an explosion.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/10-42.jpg)



Rho:   Watch your step.  Looks like…….someone’s hands……
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/10-43.jpg)



Aayla Secura:   We are close…….I can feel her prescence……..but something is different……
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/10-44.jpg)



Commander Bly:   General, wait!  Please allow us to scout ahead…..
Aayla Secura:   …..as if she is here but gone……..……….oh no……
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/10-45.jpg)




(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/10-46.jpg)



Aayla Secura:   Master Gallia???
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Aayla Secura:   …..I…..I….have to know…….what happened…..
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Aayla Secura:   She survived the explosion…..
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/10-49.jpg)




Aayla Secura:   ….but someone was waiting for her…..
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/10-50.jpg)



Aayla Secura:   ….General Grievous…..
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/10-51.jpg)



Aayla Secura:   …..he attacked her…..
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/10-52.jpg)



Aayla Secura:   …..and killed her…..
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/10-53.jpg)




Aayla Secura:   …..with her own lightsaber…..
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/10-54.jpg)




Aayla Secura:   It was a trap.  The whole mission was a trap.
Commander Bly:   General……..is there anything………….I am sorry.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/10-55.jpg)




Commander Bly:   General Secura has found Adi Gallia.  Begin collecting Commander Deviss and his men.  I will return to the Kimcharise and report our findings.
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Commander Bly:   Give General Secura all the time she needs…..
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/10-57.jpg)



Aayla Secura:   Noooooo…
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/10-58.jpg)



Aayla Secura:    (sobbing)
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/10-59.jpg)


Rho:   I thought it was forbidden for a Jedi to cry?
Tau:   Apparently not.  Let’s get to work.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/10-60.jpg)

Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on December 6, 2005, 04:19 PM
DARK ILLUSIONS

Chapter 11


Leaving the Adaven system, General Grievous arrives at the Invisible Hand.




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Battle Droid:   Sir, Viceroy Gunray demands an update on the War.
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General Grievous:   Gunray demands nothing!  I do not take orders from a worthless Nemodian!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/11-3.jpg)



General Greivous:   There are more important things I must attend to…
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Super Battle Droid:   Sir, the transmitter is now working properly.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/11-5.jpg)



General Greivous:   It better be….
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/11-6.jpg)



General Greivous:   Time to report our victory.
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General Greivous:   Yes, Lord Sidious.
Darth Sidious:   General Grievous, what news do you bring from the Adaven system?
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General Greivous:   The mission was a success, just as you predicted.  The Clone battalion was exactly where you said it would be.  We destroyed their gunship, and I personally handled the Jedi scum.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/11-8.jpg)




Darth Sidious:   You have done well, General Grievous. 
General Greivous:   But why don’t we crush the Jedi as they arrive on Adaven, my Lord?
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/11-10.jpg)



Darth Sidious:   Patience, General.  The Jedi are a dying breed.  You have dealt them a crippling blow.  The Jedi Council has lost a prominent member, and will soon lose another.  You must now shift your focus to Jedi Master Mace Windu.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/11-11.jpg)



General Greivous:   Mace Windu?  He rarely leaves Coruscant. 
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Darth Sidious:   Leave that to me.  But when he does, you must be ready.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/11-13.jpg)



Darth Sidious:   I will let you know when the time is right. 
General Greivous:   Yes, my Lord.  What about Viceroy Gunray and the other Seperatist leaders?
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/11-14.jpg)



Darth Sidious:   Keep them safe, General.  We will need them to win this War.  As we speak, Count Dooku has begun the final phase of our plan.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/11-14b.jpg)




Darth Sidious:   These are the final days of the Republic.  And we will have our revenge on the pathetic Jedi!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/11-14c.jpg)





General Greivous:   Very good, Lord Sidious.  I will await your orders.  Greivous out.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/11-15.jpg)



General Greivous:   Very soon I will have the lightsaber of the famous Mace Windu………very soon…….
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/11-16.jpg)



General Greivous:   But first, to deal with that retched Nemodian…..
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/11-17.jpg)

Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on December 6, 2005, 04:20 PM
DARK ILLUSIONS

Chapter 12


After leaving the Jedi Temple, Anakin returns to the only other place he calls home.




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Padme Amidala:   Anakin!
Anakin Skywalker:   I’ve missed you, Padme.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/12-2.jpg)




Padme Amidala:   I was afraid I wasn’t going to see you before you left again.  How long are going to remain on Coruscant?
Anakin Skywalker:   The Council can reassign me at anytime.  But, they are too concerned about their own right now.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/12-3.jpg)



Anakin Skywalker:   And by the time they make a decision about anything important, the War may be over. 
Padme Amidala:   What do you mean by that?
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/12-4.jpg)



Anakin Skywalker:   Nothing.  Forget it, just Jedi business
Padme Amidala:   Well, in that case……...I’m so happy you’re here!  The constant worrying about someone……
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/12-6.jpg)




Anakin Skywalker:   I told you to stop worring about that.  No one is going to find out.  We will always be together.  Nothing will prevent that, not even the Jedi Order. 
Padme Amidala:   What’s wrong?  Something happened at the Temple, didn’t it? (http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/12-5.jpg)



Anakin Skywalker:   I don’t want to talk about it.  Tell me, what peace agreement did you charm someone into signing today?
Padme Amidala:   Very funny, Annie.  I prefer a diplomatic solution instead of aggressive negotiations, remember?  But I did have an interesting meeting with the Chancellor recently.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/12-7.jpg)



Padme Amidala:   Senator Organa and I met with Palpatine to discuss the upcoming vote on the Galactic Security.  The Chancellor invited his close friends, including Wilhuff Tarkin.  Senator Organa was puzzled by his attendance.
Anakin Skywalker:   What doesn’t puzzle Senator Organa?
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/12-8.jpg)


Padme Amidala:   Nevertheless, the Chancellor wanted to know if he had our support for the Security measure.  He claims it will provide more security for the citizens of Coruscant, especially the Senate.
Anakin Skywalker:   The Chancellor is just trying to keep the Senate in session, so we can end the War sooner.  It will take even longer to decide things if the Senate is in hiding.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/12-9.jpg)



Padme Amidala:   Perhaps, but is it really necessary to have more troops?  The Jedi keep the peace here on Coruscant.  If the new Security can provide the safety necessary to hold a peace summit, then I would be in favor of it.  And since when do you care about politics? 
Anakin Skywalker:   Oh believe me, I don’t care for it.  But I agree with the Chancellor, we need more Security.  The Jedi can’t do everything.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/12-10.jpg)



Anakin Skywalker:   The Council can’t even select the best Jedi for a rescue mission.  Why would you believe they could protect an entire planet?
Padme Amidala:   I know you’re upset about something that the Council did or didn’t do.  What happened, Annie?
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/12-11.jpg)




Anakin Skywalker:   Master Gallia is in danger.  I saw her during my meditation.  She has not responsed to recent transmissions.  But the Council chose Aayla Secura to investigate.  She is a very good Jedi……but…...
Padme Amidala:   ……you wanted to go.  I know how much Master Gallia means to you.  It is understandable why you are upset.  But Aayla is more than capable of finding Master Gallia.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/12-12.jpg)




Padme Amidala:   Besides, look at the bright side.  While she is gone, you’re here…….with me. 
Anakin Skywalker:   You’re right.  I don’t know what I was thinking.  Our time together is so limited.  I won’t spend another minute thinking about it.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/12-13.jpg)




Anakin Skywalker:   Something is not right here…….I feel…..cold…….
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/12-14.jpg)




Anakin Skywalker:   Dooku!!!
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Count Dooku:   I may have left the Jedi Order a long time ago, but I don’t remember the Order approving of this type of relationship.  What would Master Yoda say?
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/12-16.jpg)




Count Dooku:   A Senator and a Jedi?  Imagine the rumors that would sweep over the Republic! 
Anakin Skywalker:   They will never know because you won’t live long enough to tell anyone, Dooku!!!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/12-17.jpg)



Count Dooku:   Such anger in a Jedi.  I LIKE IT!!! 
Anakin Skywalker:   I’ll show you anger!!!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/12-18.jpg)




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Count Dooku:   Young fool.  Do you really think you can defeat me? 
Anakin Skywalker:   Guess we’ll find out!!!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/12-20.jpg)




Count Dooku:   Perhaps you are not as powerful as everyone thinks….. 
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/12-21.jpg)



Count Dooku:   My Master will be so disappointed. 
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/12-22.jpg)


END OF ACT I   

To be continued…   
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: In Rem on December 6, 2005, 04:50 PM
S_A_Longhorn -

I've already said so elsewhere, but your PN is excellent. Here are my previous comments, repeated here for the sake of discussion:

"BRAVO, S_A_Longhorn!

I really like the pacing... discovering bodies as Secura's squad moves through the zone was a nice way to move the story along, and having the fate and present condition of the bodies go from bad to worse set the stage for discovering that the worst was true. Using Secura as a channel to see into the past was another brilliant touch. It incorporated a ton of action into that chapter without making the whole chapter about action sequences.

I like how you have your squad working together and complimenting one another. I like how Bly handled Secura's breakdown by shoring up his troops and handing out orders.

I've really enjoyed your work in the past, but Chapter 10 takes the cake IMO.

Chapter 11 is also solid, but for other reasons. You've done a good job of working in Grievous in a believable way. His temper with his droid crew and his distaste for Neimoidians works well. There was one typo - "buy" instead of "but" - but otherwise the scripting is very solid.

Congrats on a very fine update. Can't wait to see more.

(As for) Ch. 12, I think you should have written the dialogue for Episode 2 and 3... your is better than what we got. I'm not real sure about Dooku and two battle droids waltzing into a Senator's apartment on Coruscant, but I'm willing to go with the flow.

You have some very nice shots of the beginning of a fight... I'll be interested to see how it ends.

Another strong chapter."
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: Clone Commander on December 10, 2005, 01:50 PM
I cant wait until the next chapter.
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on December 12, 2005, 09:44 AM
Thanx for the comments, guys.  I am still working on ACT II and the chapters within it.  The holiday season is nice distraction, but I should have the next three chapters by next Friday (Dec. 23, 2005).  Consider it a Christmas miraclel!!   ;D
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: jedistyle on December 12, 2005, 08:58 PM
i have really enjoyed you story so far S_A_Longhorn. the story telling is very good. the complications arising between the jedi council, palpatine and the other senators is very well illustrated. i really dug the visions and flachbacks, done in black and white, very cool. i'm sure that i remember someone asking you before, but what did you use for the bench seating in the meeting room, it looks really good?

great job, i can't wait to see more, keep up the great work.
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on December 13, 2005, 09:57 AM
Thanx for the feedback, Jedistyle.   :)

Glad to read the scenes with Palpatine and the Jedi Council have worked so far.  Those are fun but the dialogue can be difficult.  The flashbacks scenes are also my favorite.

The bench seating in the Palpatine scenes are actually kitchen cabinet stairstep shelf organizers.  They can work as bench seating in Palpatine's office.

I will begin working on the next few chapters this week.  ;D
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: Quazar on December 13, 2005, 03:35 PM
I commented in more detail at RS, but let me just reiterate that I love this series and I'm delighted that you've brought it over to JD.

Keep up the terrific work!

I am enjoying this more than "Vader's Quest" and please don't take that as a back-handed compliment.  That was another fine, fine story, but your skills continue to improve!
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: CHEWIE on December 13, 2005, 05:52 PM
SA, as you know I really am a fan of your series.  I've been commenting more at RS as that's where you started this series, but I'll comment more here from now on.

Any chance you might create a new character or two and have a series following their adventures?  I'd love to see what you might come up with. 

 :P
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on December 14, 2005, 10:03 AM
Hey, LANCE, no offense taken regarding VADER'S QUEST vs DARK ILLUSIONS.  This latest story is a lot more organized and I know I have improved in my story-telling, picture taking, and setting up my basic dioramas..  Thanx for the feedback.  I should start shooting the new chapters today.

CHEWIE:  Thanx for the feedback.  I wouldn't even know how to begin to make a custom fig that would compare to your creations.  But, if you want to send me some...... ;)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: CHEWIE on December 14, 2005, 11:12 AM
SA, I think you'd be a great customizer if you got into it.  You're obviously very talented and have a vivid imagination.  It just takes practice and practice.

If you do want to though, we could discuss me making a custom or two for you.  All you need to do is give me the word and we could discuss via PM.  If it was something you'd have show up in your photonovels, I would be happy to try and create a character or two for you for free (just would need the parts from you).

Maybe you could come up with a fan fic Jedi or something that survives Order 66.

 :P
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on December 15, 2005, 01:05 PM
If you do want to though, we could discuss me making a custom or two for you.   If it was something you'd have show up in your photonovels, I would be happy to try and create a character or two for you for free (just would need the parts from you).

Trying to seduce me to join the Dark Side?  ;D

I have thought about customizing only for purposes of the photonovels.  But I need to get an understaing of what parts are interchangeable.  And when you say "boil & pop", do you actually mean placing a figure in boiling water???

I thought about a fan fic Jedi from the speices of Orn Free Taa.  It would still be a fat Jedi!  :D
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: CHEWIE on December 15, 2005, 01:10 PM
Yep - the boil-n-pop is just putting a figure in hot boiling water for a few minutes, and then removing it with a pair of tongs (or anything else that will keep you from getting scalded) and then wrapping it in a towel to dry off, and then quickly tugging at the head, legs, etc. to remove them.  When the plastic is heated up from the boiling water, it's a lot more flexible for about 30 seconds and you can do that.  If you do try it, I would say experiment on some "junk" figures first as once in a while it doesn't work just as planned.  Takes a lot of practice.

An Orn Free Ta type Jedi could be cool.  You just don't ever seem to see fat Jedi, but it's very possible I would think.  I don't know what body would work though, maybe a Pote Snikin body?

 :P
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: In Rem on December 15, 2005, 02:33 PM
Orn is a fatty Twi'lek (just as Boss Nass was a fatty Gungan) :)

http://www.starwars.com/databank/character/ornfreetaa/index.html
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: Clone Commander on December 15, 2005, 05:44 PM
In Rots when Anakin is talking to obi-wan he is going on about how he is on the council and not a master, look at the top of the stairs.
There is a fat man walking around up there!
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on December 21, 2005, 10:06 AM
DARK ILLUSIONS

ACT II

Chapter 13



Anakin Skywalker:   You…..underestimate……my power!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/13-1.jpg)




Count Dooku:   No…….impossible!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/13-2.jpg)



Count Dooku:   Argh!   Impressive……….but foolish.
Anakin Skywalker:   I’ve waited a long time for this, Dooku. (http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/13-3.jpg)



Count Dooku:   Then, you will continue to wait, for this is my day.  Master Kenobi  was always a novice with a light saber.  I shouldn’t expect any different from you.  Your technique lacks elegance and grace.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/13-4.jpg)



Count Dooku:   And you lack the focus required to challenge me.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/13-5.jpg)




Anakin Skywalker:   Nice try, but you missed.
Count Dooku:   You still have much to learn, Skywalker.  Things are not always as they seem.  For all of your heroics, you lack an understanding of this.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/13-6.jpg)





Count Dooku:   Don’t be a pawn for the Jedi Order.  Do you really believe the Order is the path to the greatness that you so desperately seek?  Your destiny lies on a different path.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/13-7.jpg)




Anakin Skywalker:   What do you know of destiny, Dooku?  You turned your back on the Order.  You gave up everything.  And for what?  To be the leader of a bunch of mindless minions?
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/13-8.jpg)





Count Dooku:   Qui-Gon would have been so disappointed.  My departure led Qui-Gon down a different path.  Why do you think he was so quick to rescue you off that hideous desert planet?  He was determined to prove the Prophecy of the Chosen One.  If only to destroy the Jedi Order!
Anakin Skywalker:   NO!!  That’s not true!!  I’m tired of listening to your lies!!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/13-9.jpg)





THUD!!!
Count Dooku:   Perhaps you should…..you might actually learn something.
Anakin Skywalker:   Uhhhhhh….
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/13-10.jpg)



Count Dooku:   And as for you, my dear………time for you to stop meddling in our plans.  Your influence on the young Skywalker is only delaying the inevitable.
Padme Amidala:   No!!  Leave me alone!!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/13-11.jpg)




Anakin Skywalker:   Don’t you touch her!!!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/13-12.jpg)




Anakin Skywalker:   Release her!!!  NOW!!!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/13-13.jpg)




Count Dooku:   Or what?  You’ll kill me?  That is not the Jedi way.  At least not the way Master Kenobi has taught you.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/13-14.jpg)





Count Dooku:   It is time to see through the lies of the Jedi, boy!  For too long they have ruled over the Republic, allowing her to die from corruption and greed.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/13-15.jpg)




THUD!!!  THUD!!!
Count Dooku:   The Jedi are close-minded.  If you are to restore balance, shouldn’t you have unlimited power?
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/13-16.jpg)




Count Dooku:   Something he may never achieve if you, my dear, continue with this feeble relationship.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/13-17.jpg)



Count Dooku:   It would be in your best interest to step aside while you still can.
Anakin Skywalker:   DOOKU!!!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/13-18.jpg)



THUD!
Count Dooku:   What??? 
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/13-19.jpg)




Count Dooku:   Argh!!! 
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/13-20.jpg)




Anakin Skywalker:   Your time is at an end, My Lord!!!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/13-21.jpg)



Count Dooku:   Not by you, Jedi! 
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/13-22.jpg)



Count Dooku:   My powers are far superior to yours.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/13-22a.jpg)



Anakin Skywalker:   Droids can’t save you, Dooku!!!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/13-23.jpg)




Count Dooku:   No………but my knowledge of the Force can.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/13-24a.jpg)




Count Dooku:   Don’t ever turn your back to me, boy.  Not only is it rude, but disrespectful.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/13-25.jpg)




Count Dooku:   You always were a slow learner. 
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/13-26.jpg)




Count Dooku:   Now do you realize you are no challenge for me?
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/13-27.jpg)




Count Dooku:   The “Chosen One” could not be defeated so easily by an old man.  Perhaps if you had a stronger teacher……
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/13-28.jpg)




Count Dooku:   Give my regards to Master Yoda.  He will be very interested in  our little meeting.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/13-29.jpg)




Count Dooku:   Don’t worry, my dear.  He’ll be alright.  It is your future you should be concerned about.
Padme Amidala:   Get your hands off of me!  You will never win this War, Dooku.  No matter what you do, the Republic will always stand!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/13-30.jpg)




Count Dooku:   Don’t be too proud of this Republic, Senator.  It grows weaker by the day.  I bid you both a Good Night.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/13-31.jpg)




Count Dooku:   And you can keep my…..gifts…..as tokens of my appreciation for this evening.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/13-32.jpg)





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Count Dooku:   I have concluded my business here.  Let’s go.
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Count Dooku:   My Master will be pleased with tonight’s events.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/13-35.jpg)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on December 21, 2005, 10:08 AM
DARK ILLUSIONS

Chapter 14



After a long journey, the gunship “Kimcharise” arrives on Coruscant, returning from Adaven.


Tau:   The Jedi Temple landing pad is just ahead, General.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/14-1.jpg)



Aayla Secura:   Good.  We are finally home.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/14-2.jpg)




Commander Bly:   I requested additional troops to assist with the unloading.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/14-3.jpg)



Commander Bly:   Here comes your Jedi friends, General.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/14-4.jpg)



Ki-Adi Mundi:   Welcome home, Aayla.
Yoda:   Pleased by your safe return, we are.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/14-5.jpg)



Aayla Secura:   Thank you, Master Jedi.  We could not get back soon enough.
Mace Windu:   All the preparations have been made.  Everyone has assembled in the meditation room. (http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/14-6.jpg)




Aayla Secura:   Master Gallia is aboard.  I rode with her…personally.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/14-7.jpg)



Mace Windu:   Commander Bly, please direct the procession.  Follow us to the meditation room.
Commander Bly:   Yes, Sir.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/14-8.jpg)



Commander Bly:   Alright men!  Everyone lift and walk together.  On my mark……ready……march!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/14-9.jpg)



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In the sacred Meditation Room, a traditional ceremony is held for the fallen Master Jedi Adi Gallia, a member of the Jedi Council.



(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/14-13.jpg)




All available Jedi are called back to Coruscant for the sacred ceremony, to be broadcasted on the Holonet.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/14-12.jpg)



 


Agen Kolar:   Here comes Chancellor Palpatine, ready to deliver another impassionate speech.  How is he allowed to speak at this memorial, when the Code forbids any non-Jedi speakers?
Mace Windu:   Since Adi was a part of the Council and a friend of the Chancellor, he made it an Executive Order.  He also invited some of his fellow politicians.  The Senate requested his presence.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/14-14.jpg)




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Chancellor Palpatine:   Thank you for joining me for this very special ceremony.  It is under the saddest of circumstances we come together to remember a fallen hero.  A hero which was a member of the Jedi Council, but also a friend to the political society of Coruscant.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/14-16.jpg)




Chancellor Palpatine:   Jedi Master Adi Gallia was born & raised on Coruscant.  Being the daughter of high-ranking Corellian diplomats, she understood the importance of the Republic & it’s democracy.  Her close friendship to Chancellor Valorum led to the successful liberation of my home planet of Naboo over ten years ago.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/14-17.jpg)



Chancellor Palpatine:   It was shortly after the blockade that I first met Maser Gallia.  She quickly earned my respect as a very instinctive & intelligent Jedi.  She was not one to be fooled easily.  Master Adi Gallia’s long contribution to the Jedi Council has saved the Republic from many dangers over the years.  Her loss is especially difficult  during these troubled times.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/14-18.jpg)




Chancellor Palpatine:   Quite frequently, I would consult with her regarding the security of the Senate and Coruscant.  In fact, we had an appointment to meet today regarding the Galactic Security.  It is my strong belief that Master Gallia would have supported the upcoming measure, as a way to preserve the working democracy of the Republic.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/14-19.jpg)



Agen Kolar:   Leave it to the Chancellor to turn this into a platform for his Security measure.
Mace Windu:   He is a politician.  He’d never miss opportunity to promote his agenda, even at the expense of a fallen Jedi.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/14-20.jpg)




Chancellor Palpatine:   Please join me in a Moment of Reflection, to honor the work and life of the great Jedi Master, Adi Gallia.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/14-21.jpg)




Chancellor Palpatine:   Thank you.  It is now my privilege to introduce a dear friend of Master Gallia, Senator Bail Organa of Alderaan.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/14-22.jpg)



Bail Organa:   Thank you, Chancellor.  Fellow Senators, Jedi, ladies and gentlemen…………….
Obi-Wan Kenobi:   You’re late, Anakin. 
Anakin Skywalker:   Sorry, Master.  I had……an unexpected visitor.  It won’t happen again.  Has the Chancellor spoken?
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/14-23.jpg)



Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Yes, he just finished.  Senator Organa is now speaking.
Bail Organa:   …………………we must remember her for all of the sacrifices she made throughout her lifetime…………
Anakin Skywalker:   I’m sorry I missed the Chancellor’s speech.  I’m sure his words offered some comfort.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/14-24.jpg)



Captain Antilles:   Welcome, M’Lady.
Padme Amidala:   Thank you, Captain. 
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/14-25.jpg)



Obi-Wan Kenobi:   You’re delay didn’t have anything to do with Senator Amidala, would it?
Anakin Skywalker:   Of coarse not.  Why would you ask that?  We would have arrived together then.  Which we did not……as you can see.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/14-26.jpg)



Obi-Wan Kenobi:   I suppose you’re right.  Strange, though, since she is usually very punctual.
Anakin Skywalker:   Perhaps I will ask her…….the next time I see her…..whenever that might be.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/14-27.jpg)





Obi-Wan Kenobi:   No, don’t bother.  I know your distaste for politicians.
Anakin Skywalker:   Well……Padme…….Senator Amidala is not just a politician, Master.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/14-28.jpg)




Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Well, that may be true but…….wait……where’s Master Windu going?
Anakin Skywalker:   Shhhhhh……I can’t here Senator Organa.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/14-29.jpg)



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Mace Windu:   Are your here?
Shade:   I am.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/14-33.jpg)



Mace Windu:   Let me start by saying whatever we speak of today shall remain confidential.  Few know of this meeting, and even less know the purpose of it.
Shade:  Understood.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/14-34.jpg)



Mace Windu:   Begin the hunt for Darth Sidious.  Find proof of his existence, and the possible location of Count Dooku & General Grievous.  All of this is critical to ending the War. 
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/14-35.jpg)



Mace Windu:   The Dark Lord has some connection to the Chancellor’s office.  Begin there.
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Mace Windu:   When you find something, report directly to me. 
Shade:  As you wish.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/14-37.jpg)


Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on December 21, 2005, 10:09 AM
DARK ILLUSIONS

Chapter 15



While the Jedi ceremony concludes, the remaining Clone Commanders are assembled in one of the outpost hangars on Coruscant, awaiting their next orders.


Commander Gree:   Have you got your orders yet?
Commander Bacara:   Not yet.  Rumor is Rhen Var or Mygeeto.  General Mundi doesn’t tell me anything until we ship out.  What about you?
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/15-1.jpg)



Commander Gree:   My latest orders have me researching the origins of Grievous.  The Jedi believe a better understanding of his background will give us an advantage whenever we find him.
Commander Bacara:   If they gave me a week, I could hunt down & destroy Grievous.  (http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/15-2.jpg)




Commander Bacara:   All I need are my Marines and no meddling Jedi.   
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/15-3.jpg)




Commander Gree:   Hey, no arguments here!
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Commander Gree:   But my research has been very interesting.  The Kaleesh species have always been at war.  Grievous has known nothing else his entire life.  It would explain his expertise during battle.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/15-5.jpg)





Commander Bacara:   Is that why the Jedi are afraid of him?  We could have destroyed him on Raxus Prime, but Mundi wanted to sweep through the barracks on foot.  We lost a lot of men that day……unnecessarily. 
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/15-6.jpg)




Commander Gree:   The Jedi are one “species” I prefer not to understand.  Why are we wasting our time here on Coruscant, anyway?
Commander Bacara:   Some Jedi ceremony.  What is Commander EZ doing now?
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/15-7.jpg)




Commander EZ:   And I want that speeder bike secured to the ship!  When you get done with that, inspect the exterior cannons!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/15-8.jpg)





Commander Bacara:   Why don’t you do some of the work yourself, EZ, instead of barking out orders?  You can always catch up on your rest when you get to the battle, anyway.
Commander EZ:   Wha???   Oh……Bacara……I should have guessed.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/15-9.jpg)




Commander EZ:   Well, I am a commander.  I give orders, and my men take orders.  You would be wise to teach that to your men.  Or what’s left of them…
Commander Bacara:   What did you say?
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/15-10.jpg)




Commander Bacara:   Why don’t I do your men a favor and dump you off at the nearest Separatists base?
Commander EZ:   Heeeyy!!!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/15-11.jpg)




Commander Gree:   Calm down, Bacara.  We don’t need him filing another complaint.
Commander EZ:   That’s right.  Wouldn’t want your squadron to be without their beloved barbarian commander!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/15-12.jpg)




Commander Gree:   Enough, EZ.  Get back to your work, and we’ll get out of your way.
Commander EZ:   Good thing you were here, Gree.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/15-13.jpg)




Commander EZ:   What are you guys staring at!!!  Get back to work!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/15-14.jpg)




Commander Bacara:   One day he’ll get his…...
Commander Gree:   Forget him, Bacara.  Here comes Bly & Oddball.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/15-15.jpg)




Commander Bly:   Too bad our brethren don’t get that type of ceremony.
Commander Oddball:   No problem, because the Republic knows who really is responsible for winning the War.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/15-16.jpg)



Commander Gree:   Commander Bly & Oddball!  So good to see you guys again.  Heard you got in.  Where’ve you been?
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/15-17.jpg)




Commander Bly:   Just left the memorial for General Gallia. 
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/15-18.jpg)





Commander Bacara:   Why waste your time remembering a Jedi?  They could care less about us.  Their only concern is whether or not you can follow their commands.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/15-19.jpg)




Commander Bly:   General Gallia was a great warrior.  And General Secura has saved my men plenty of times.
Commander Bacara:   Only because you didn’t do it yourself…
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/15-20.jpg)




Commander Bly:   You want a fight, you got it!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/15-21.jpg)





Commander Bacara:   Just as long as your bleeding heart can take it, banana boy!
Gree & Oddball:   Break it up guys!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/15-22.jpg)



Commander Bly:   It’s not my fault you lost some men at Raxus Prime, Bacara!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/15-23.jpg)





Commander Bacara:   Only because of your precious Jedi!  My men gave their lives for nothing!!!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/15-24.jpg)





Commander EZ:   Which one of you is responsible for denting my Gunship?
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Commander Bacara:   I’ve had enough of you bleeding hearts.  I’m outta here! 
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Commander Bly:   Gree, you know him best.  What is his problem??
Commander Gree:   He just needs to be back on the battlefield.  All this time waiting is just making him more and more irate about what happened at Raxus Prime.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/15-27.jpg)





Commander Bly:   Trust me when I say that Commander Deviss and his men were given a proper burial at Adaven. 
Commander Oddball:   And the next offensive should be happening very soon.  Since all of the Generals and Commanders have been recalled to Coruscant, a new attack plan will be created to win the War.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/15-28.jpg)




Commander Gree:   Nevertheless, Deviss did not get his name all over the Holonet like the Jedi.  Just remember that.  What ended up happening to General Gallia & Deviss anyway?
Commander Bly:   According to General Secura, the Seppes ambushed Gallia, Deviss, and his men.  The attack was led by General Grievous.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/15-29.jpg)




Commander Gree:   I have been studying Grievous and the Kaleesh species.  Based on my research, Grievous has known nothing else but war his entire life.  Deviss’ squad had no chance of survival as soon as they arrived on Adaven.
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Commander Bly:   That could be very true, but someone still had to alert Grievous to their exact location.  That is more troubling than the attack itself.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/15-32.jpg)





Commander EZ:   I would not be taken out so easily.  Now, if you’ll excuse me, I have a ship to inspect.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2013-15/15-33.jpg)




Commander Oddball:   If only EZ was as good in battle as he is in keeping his armor clean.
Commander Bly:   What else have you learned about Grievous?
Commander Gree:   Well, let me tell you his history in the War with the Huks………
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To be continued…


Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: CHEWIE on December 21, 2005, 11:25 AM
Good Lord, three chapters all of a sudden!  I can't keep up with that many at once, so I read the first two chapters and will pick up on the third.

Dooku vs. Anakin - This was a very good, personal chapter.  I love the clear pics and backgrounds you make as always, but it was the dialogue and poses of the characters that really made this to me, your best chapter yet.  Everything made perfect sense and was very believable of Dooku, and I see you mixed the ROTS Dooku with the Evolutions Dooku - any reason in particular?  The only reason I really noticed was because of the different capes.  Also, I'm not too sure the Red Guards know about Dooku being on Palpatine's side?  Maybe they do, but I thought different - that only Dooku and Palpatine knew their true identity.  Regardless, this was brilliant.  Great way to twist Anakin even further.

Funeral - A good chapter - to be honest, it dragged for me just a bit - but every chapter can't be just fighting.  So that's good and it was realistic.  Palpatine's dialogue and agenda was spot on.  Great work.  I was a bit confused at first as to who Windu was talking to - I literally thought that "Shade" might be the window shades.  Maybe a bit of description rather than just dialogue would be helpful in a few areas.  That's not a knock on your work at all, just an idea - like where there are pics of Mace walking towards the mediation room, there's no words of description at all - I think that would be a good addition.

Looking forward to reading the next chapter.

 :P


Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on December 22, 2005, 09:52 AM
Thanx again for the critique, CHEWIE!

Chap 13 (Anakin/Dooku) - Glad you liked the poses of the figs.  Dooku is much easier to work with than Anakin (swivel elbows! argh!).  The dialogue for Dooku is a lot of fun to create since he has such a personality tht looks down upon everything.  I inter-changed the ROTS and Evolution Dooku mainly for the facial expression.  The Evolutions Dooku has a more angry and determined face than the ROTS version.  I like both tho.  :)  As for the Red Guards, they are basically as faceless as a wall.  Since they flank Palpatine/Sidious all the time, I decided to use them to explain how Dooku could simply walk into a Senator's home.

Chap 14 (Funeral) - Fun but challenging chapter to tell.  The best dialogue to write is definetly Palpatine's.  He has such a way of speaking that it is a lot of fun to get all the points across.  The Mace Windu scenes didn't work as well as I would have hoped.  It was mostly a lighting challenge.  I wanted to hide Shade in the dark while keeping Mace in the light.  In the end, I couldn't get the lighting just right, so I just kept Shade out of the pic until the end. :-\

Thanx again for the feedback.  Always look forward to your info.   8)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: Nirvana on December 22, 2005, 10:39 AM
Well, I 'm home sick today so I took the time to read these. Let me say, these are amazing. The fact that you did it all with straight Hasbro production figs makes it better too. I realy like the storyline and my favorite part was Chapter 15 with the Commander's fighting with each other. You really captured their personalities, IMO. Awesome job, I can't wait for the next chapter.
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: Quazar on December 22, 2005, 01:48 PM
Because this is such a HUGE update, I have only read part of it.  I will comment more in detail when I have finished.

This, as always, is AWESOME.  I LOVED the duel with Anakin and Dooku.  VERY exciting and some great dialogue. LOVE the shot of Anakin "jumping" in mid-air!  WELL DONE!  An excellent, tense and thrilling sequence all around!

The Jedi funeral is also fantastic!  Your use of props and locations is always imaginative.  These scenes, if nothing else, have a wonderful look to them.

But obviously there's much more than that.  This is another superbly written scene with great dialogue.  LOVE how Palpatine segues from a moving memorial into a political speech...and how that chafes the Jedi! 

This is exemplary work and I look forward to reading the rest!

Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: Clone Commander on December 23, 2005, 09:39 PM
I love the new updates Longhorn!
I just didnt really think that clone troopers would ever fight eachother, but yet again it was pretty neat.
I like how they had the funeral and Shadow was really cool!
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on December 27, 2005, 06:05 PM
Thanx for the feedback guys.  It was fun to get back to creating these stories after a short layoff after Act I.

The holidays are "distracting" me so the next three chapters will be delayed.   ;)

The Dooku/Anakin scenes were fun to create, since the figs are easily posed.  I was hesitant to do the funeral scene b/c of the complexity but I was pleased with the look of them.  And the Clone Commanders was an opportunity to showcase their  personalities.

The dialogue has become the hardest part.  I re-write it many times over to get the right flow.  Glad it is appreciated!  :D

Hopefully I can have the next few chapters up within a week or two.

Thanx again for the feedback guys.  All is appreciated!

Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: jedistyle on December 27, 2005, 06:58 PM
that was a great update!

- it actually made me angry when palpatine had the nerve to speak at a jedi memorial services! bastard.

- the conflict between the clone commanders was really cool too. i like that you showed that not all the clones are equal or exactly alike, that EZ seems like a chump and bacarra is quite a hot head. it seems wierd to hear the clones have such a distaste for the jedi and bad mouth them, but i can see them actually feeling that way.

again great update, the dialog is very good, you have some good action scene's and the complexity of the plot of your story is awsome, so many entity's ploting and schemeing aginst eachother, good stuff. can't wait for the next chapter!
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: Dhivael on December 28, 2005, 06:47 PM
Great updates :)
Dispite what others have said i think the Funeral scene is definatly one of my favorites. I loved both the setting and the dialouge.

Ill be waiting for the future installments :)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: bikerscout1 on December 29, 2005, 07:36 AM
     Wow. I never knew Bacara was such a hothead.  These photonovels are great - put those figures to work!!  It makes me want to open more of my ROTS.  Good research on everybody and I love any shots with the gunships.   I can't wait till you work in some shocks. I like them more than 501sts.   I don't know how to apply but you should  be working for the new LFL offices in San Fran.  I think they'd like your work.  Keep it up.

Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on December 29, 2005, 09:30 AM
Thanx guys for leaving some feedback.

Glad to read some of the positive responses regarding the Funeral and Clone Commander scenes.  It definitely inspires me to create more!

Palpatine is a lot of fun to work with.  He is the ultimate politician.  Bacara has come off like a hot-head, but he should be perceived as more aggressive and a fighter.  And the Shocktroopers are coming.....

And if the LFL offices are hiring, SIGN ME UP!  ;D

Many thanx to JediDefender.com for posting the story on the homepage!  :o
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on January 13, 2006, 01:03 PM
Well, after much delay, I have finally completed the next three chapters of my story.  Now that football season is over, I can update my story on a consistent basis.

Enjoy chapters 16, 17, & 18!  :)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on January 13, 2006, 01:05 PM
DARK ILLUSIONS

Chapter 16



In the abandoned, manufacturing section of Coruscant known as The Works, Count Dooku arrives for a special meeting.



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Count Dooku:   Remain here.
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Count Dooku:   Everything went as planned, My Lord.
Darth Sidious:   Very good, Lord Tyranus.
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Darth Sidious:   I trust your mission was a success.
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Count Dooku:   Indeed.  The young Skywalker was overwhelmed with anger.  His fear of being discovered with the young Senator from Naboo fueled his attack.  He is as powerful as you have foreseen. 
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Darth Sidious:   You have done well, my apprentice.  Skywalker could become a powerful ally.  But we must be patient.  His time will come.
Count Dooku:   As you wish.
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Darth Sidious:   For now, we have more urgent matters to attend to.  You must travel to the Oner system. 
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Darth Sidious:   There, you will meet a warrior of great interest to us.  His skills as a fighter could become a tremendous asset.  But his story is just as important.
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Darth Sidious:   His name is Sagev.  A cunning warrior, he has been exiled from his home planet.  Revenge is his only purpose now……which should make him the perfect ally.
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Darth Sidious:   But be mindful, Lord Tyranus.  He is not to be trusted.  What he says may be of more value to us than what he does.
Count Dooku:   I understand, My Master.
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Darth Sidious:   Move quickly.  The Jedi have begun their search for you and General Grievous.  They are relentless.
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Count Dooku:   I shall rendezvous with the General immediately.  We will make contact with this warrior, My Lord.
Darth Sidious:   Your ship awaits, Lord Tyranus.
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Darth Sidious:   Remain here until Lord Tyranus has departed. 
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Darth Sidious:   Destroy any evidence of this encounter.
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Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on January 13, 2006, 01:06 PM
DARK ILLUSIONS

Chapter 17



As Shade searches for evidence of a Dark Lord, he begins at the place suggested by Mace Windu.



Shade:   (thinking)   ……no one here……based on the photos……the holo-computer should be directly below…...
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Shade:   (thinking)   ……begin security jam……grappling hook secure……
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Shade:   (thinking)   ……for the Republic!……
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Shade:   (thinking)   ……work quickly……security jam temporary……
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Shade:   (thinking)   ……tap into holo-computer……record transmission locations……
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Shade:   (thinking)   ……no unknown locations……only recent transmissions found……
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Shade:   (thinking)   ……strange……check the historical records……
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Mas Amedda:   ….unfortunately, the Chancellor is running behind schedule… [/i]
Shade:   (thinking)   ……voices……coming this way……abort! abort!……
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Mas Amedda:   Please allow me to apologize for……Guards, please turn on the lights!
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Mas Amedda:   That’s better.  As I was saying, Governor Tarkin, please accept my apologies for the Chancellor’s delay.  He is a very busy man during these times, you understand.
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Tarkin:   Think nothing of it.  We did not have a meeting scheduled.  I simply wanted to give him an update on our latest…project.
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Mas Amedda:   Yes, of course.  I’m sure the Chancellor will be most eager to hear about your progress.
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Mas Amedda:   Guards!   Contact the Chancellor’s personal security.  Notify them the Chancellor has an important visitor waiting.
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Mas Amedda:   The Supreme Chancellor is always accompanied by his Royal Guards, as decreed by the Senate.  He hopes with the passing of the Galactic Security measure, he will no longer need the entourage.
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Senate Guard:   Sir, the Chancellor is already en route.  He will be here shortly.
Mas Amedda:   Good.  His prior meeting must have gone well.
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Mas Amedda:   Be sure to mention that Governor Tarkin is waiting.
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Mas Amedda:   And don’t forget to erase the communications log.
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Mas Amedda:   Just a security precaution, you understand.  Never can be too sure who else is listening.  While we wait, would you care to join me for a refreshment? 
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Tarkin:   Thank you, Senator. 
Mas Amedda:   Did the Chancellor ever tell you the story behind that iron sculpture?   What a fiasco that was!
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20%20Chap%2016-18/17-19.jpg)



Shade:   (thinking)   ……deleted the message……but not the historical records……
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Shade:   (thinking)   ……searching……searching……found it……need the recipient’s……location……
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Shade:   (thinking)   ……last transmission sent from……an unpopulated section on Coruscant……
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Shade:   (thinking)   ……coordinates off the map……not part of the working Capital……known as………The Works???
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Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on January 13, 2006, 01:08 PM
DARK ILLUSIONS

Chapter 18



Following the memorial of Jedi Master Adi Gallia, the Temple is once again full of Jedi preparing to rejoin the War.




Anakin Skywalker:   Why has everyone received new orders but us?
Obi-Wan Kenobi:    Master Windu is expecting some new intelligence.  He specifically wants us to act on that information.  But until then, we wait.
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Anakin Skywalker:   What kind of intelligence? 
Obi-Wan Kenobi:    Oh, he’s not saying.  But based on his tone, it must have something to do with General Grievous.  He is determined to find him ever since the attack on Master Gallia.
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Anakin Skywalker:   What about Dooku?  He’s the person I want to hunt down.
Obi-Wan Kenobi:    Count Dooku has been very elusive.  If we discover Grievous, perhaps that will lead us to the location of Dooku and his mysterious Sith Lord.
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Anakin Skywalker:   And when we defeat them, you’ll have to get used to all the fame that comes with being a hero!  You know that means you’ll have to smile, Master!
Obi-Wan Kenobi:    If it means the end of the War, then I am willing to just that!
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Shaak Ti:   Remember, Padawan, a Jedi can feel the Force flowing through them. 
Zett Jukassa:    Yes, Master.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20%20Chap%2016-18/18-5.jpg)



Zett Jukassa:   But why do I have to practice with one just one Sphere?  I can destroy ten-times as many.   I can pretend I’m on the frontlines of the Clone Wars!
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20%20Chap%2016-18/18-6.jpg)






Shaak Ti:    Don’t concern yourself with the War, Padawan.  Your concentration should be here and now.  You must first learn to focus your mind, before you can focus on the things around you.  Now, are you ready?
Zett Jukassa:   Yes, Master. [/i]
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20%20Chap%2016-18/18-7.jpg)





Shaak Ti:    Then close your eyes……….and begin!
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20%20Chap%2016-18/18-8.jpg)





Zett Jukassa:    Yah!
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20%20Chap%2016-18/18-9.jpg)





Zett Jukassa:    I did it!  Too easy, Master!
Shaak Ti:   Very good, Padawan.  However, a moving target is not so easily defeated.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20%20Chap%2016-18/18-10.jpg)



Shaak Ti:   It does not matter who is the strongest, Zett.  A Jedi must learn to feel the Force.  To listen to the will of the Force.  Only then will you be one with the Force. 
Zett Jukassa:    Yes, Master.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20%20Chap%2016-18/18-11.jpg)





Zett Jukassa:   When can I spar versus a real opponent?  I know how to defend myself.  And all of the other Padawans in my class have already passed their lightsaber skills test.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20%20Chap%2016-18/18-12.jpg)





Shaak Ti:   Do not compare yourself to you peers.  Every Jedi travels down a different path.  However, a friendly sparring match would be beneficial for your saber training.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20%20Chap%2016-18/18-13.jpg)





Shaak Ti:   You’re too familiar with my style……but how about……Master Kenobi?
Zett Jukassa:    Really?!  Master Kenobi?!
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20%20Chap%2016-18/18-14.jpg)





Shaak Ti:   Excuse me, Master Kenobi?
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20%20Chap%2016-18/18-15.jpg)




Obi-Wan Kenobi:    Hello, Master Ti and Zett.
Shaak Ti:   Would you care to have a friendly sparring lesson with Zett?  Since he is too familiar with my style, I think he would benefit from working with another Master.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20%20Chap%2016-18/18-16.jpg)






Obi-Wan Kenobi:    Well, I would certainly like to, but my saber technique has been called……well, simple.  I doubt I could teach you anything to be proud of.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20%20Chap%2016-18/18-17.jpg)





Obi-Wan Kenobi:    However………my companion, Anakin, would be perfect!  I’m sure you have heard about him……from his “fame.” 
Anakin Skywalker:   Wha?!  Who, me?
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20%20Chap%2016-18/18-18.jpg)





Zett Jukassa:   Really!?  No kidding?!  Will you show me some of your techniques, Master Skywalker?!
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20%20Chap%2016-18/18-19.jpg)





Anakin Skywalker:   Well………I don’t know……I have to……sure, I suppose I could show you a thing or two……
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20%20Chap%2016-18/18-20.jpg)



Shaak Ti:   Now, remember Zett, protect yourself at all times.  Trust your instincts.
Zett Jukassa:    I will.  I know what to do!
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20%20Chap%2016-18/18-21.jpg)





Anakin Skywalker:   Thanks again, old friend.  I owe you one after this.
Obi-Wan Kenobi:    This will be good for you, Anakin.  You need to stay sharp until our next assignment.  Besides, how can you be a Master if you don’t pass down what you have learned?  Do try to have fun!
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20%20Chap%2016-18/18-22.jpg)




Shaak Ti:   Ready?  Begin!
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20%20Chap%2016-18/18-23.jpg)





Zett Jukassa:    Yah!
Anakin Skywalker:   Hey!  Wait a minute…
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20%20Chap%2016-18/18-24.jpg)




Zett Jukassa:    Hi-yah!
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20%20Chap%2016-18/18-25.jpg)




Zett Jukassa:   Take……that!!!
Anakin Skywalker:    Calm down, little one……
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20%20Chap%2016-18/18-26.jpg)



Zett Jukassa:   Yah!
Anakin Skywalker:    Hey……be careful……
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20%20Chap%2016-18/18-27.jpg)





Zett Jukassa:   Take……that!
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20%20Chap%2016-18/18-28.jpg)




Anakin Skywalker:   Hey……
Zett Jukassa:    Yah!
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20%20Chap%2016-18/18-29.jpg)




Anakin Skywalker:   Take it easy……
Zett Jukassa:    And that!
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20%20Chap%2016-18/18-30.jpg)





Zett Jukassa:   I did it!  I defeated Anakin Skywalker!!  Wait ‘till everyone hears about this!!!
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20%20Chap%2016-18/18-31.jpg)





Zett Jukassa:    I should be a Master!  I should be on the Jedi Council! 
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20%20Chap%2016-18/18-32.jpg)




Anakin Skywalker:   What??
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20%20Chap%2016-18/18-33.jpg)




Shaak Ti:   That’s enough, Padawan.  A Jedi is never arrogant nor disrespectful.
Zett Jukassa:    But……I’m sorry, Master.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20%20Chap%2016-18/18-34.jpg)




Zett Jukassa:    But didn’t you see how I took him down……and……
Anakin Skywalker:   We’re not done yet, Padawan!
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20%20Chap%2016-18/18-35.jpg)




Anakin Skywalker:   I’ll show you how to handle a lightsaber!
Zett Jukassa:    ………
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20%20Chap%2016-18/18-36.jpg)




Anakin Skywalker:   You could never defeat me!
Zett Jukassa:    ……wait……stop……
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20%20Chap%2016-18/18-37.jpg)





Anakin Skywalker:   If you want to play for real, then let’s play for real!
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20%20Chap%2016-18/18-38.jpg)





Zett Jukassa:    Nooo……stop……I didn’t mean to……
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20%20Chap%2016-18/18-39.jpg)





Anakin Skywalker:   Defend yourself, “Jedi Master!”
Zett Jukassa:    Noooooo……please……
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20%20Chap%2016-18/18-40.jpg)




Anakin Skywalker:   But you said you defeated me?!
Zett Jukassa:    ……my lightsaber……that’s not fair……
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20%20Chap%2016-18/18-41.jpg)




Anakin Skywalker:   How dare you mock me!!!  You are no Master!  Why should YOU be on the Council??
Zett Jukassa:    ……nooooo……(sobbing)……
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20%20Chap%2016-18/18-42.jpg)




Obi-Wan Kenobi:   ANAKIN!  STOP!
Shaak Ti:    NOOO!!!
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20%20Chap%2016-18/18-43.jpg)



Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Let him go, Anakin!
Shaak Ti:    This has gone on far enough!!!
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20%20Chap%2016-18/18-44.jpg)





Obi-Wan Kenobi:    What’s wrong with you?!  Have you lost you mind?!
Anakin Skywalker:   He deserved it……
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20%20Chap%2016-18/18-45.jpg)




Shaak Ti:   It’s OK, Zett.  It’s all over now.  Try to relax.
Zett Jukassa:    ……(sobbing)……I’m sorry……
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20%20Chap%2016-18/18-46.jpg)




Obi-Wan Kenobi:    He is only a Youngling, Anakin!  They will say things that cannot be taken seriously.  You were no different at that age.
Anakin Skywalker:   He wanted a lesson……so I gave him one…...he was mocking me……so I……I......should check on him…...
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20%20Chap%2016-18/18-47.jpg)




Anakin Skywalker:   Are you alright, Zett?  Please excuse my behavior.  I was wrong to attack you like that.
Zett Jukassa:    ……(sobbing)……I’m sorry……I didn’t mean to……
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20%20Chap%2016-18/18-48.jpg)




Mace Windu:   Impressive, beating a Youngling.  Why don’t you try that against  me now?
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20%20Chap%2016-18/18-49.jpg)



TO BE CONTINUED……
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: Quazar on January 13, 2006, 04:27 PM
WOW!  AWESOME!  LOVED IT!

More later, must run!
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: Smartypants1635 on January 13, 2006, 07:32 PM
Windu VS  SKYWALKER MAN i cant wait til your next chapter no rush but man this is getting good and even without special effects to :o
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: CHEWIE on January 13, 2006, 07:57 PM
Great work SA.  I only can digest one chapter at a time, so I just read the Dooku chapter.  Very good dialogue and pics.  I wish you could do a few "estabishing shots" but even without them you do a great job.

 :P
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: Clone Commander on January 14, 2006, 11:43 AM
Holy crap!
Awesome, I wonder who will win...?
 :)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on January 16, 2006, 11:16 AM
Thanx for the feedback guys.  Slow update, but necessary to continue to story and setup future chapters.

Dooku & Sidious are always fun.  But careful not to reveal to much.  I have been wanting to do the Shadow Trooper and Zett scenes for a long time.  But after re-writing the outline of the story, I had to push these chapters back to make them fit within the story.  Glad to finally create them, and look forward to finishing both scenes. 

Hopefully another update by next week!  :D
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: Quazar on January 16, 2006, 06:32 PM
This series is really terrific!  I love the dialogue and characterizations!!

You can hear the actors saying these lines!  "Anakin, have you lost your mind?!"

"Impressive, beating a youngling."  :)  Terrific stuff.

I especially love Shaak Ti.  Excellent characterizations!  She's supportive, yet firm, wise and patient.  A perfect Jedi master!  Well done!
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: blaster_e11 on January 20, 2006, 05:41 AM
I had to push these chapters back to make them fit within the story.  Glad to finally create them, and look forward to finishing both scenes. 


nice choice, they do fit good in the story

i'm looking for the windu part
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: Reid on January 22, 2006, 08:21 PM
Great update! I cracked up at Zett's battle crys.  ;D
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: Smartypants1635 on January 22, 2006, 08:29 PM
1 thing, are there any other Windus you have. the Episode 1 windu just dosn't seem very great, he's not articulated at all compared to Anakin :-\ just wondering if you had something else to use in his place.
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on January 23, 2006, 01:58 AM
Hey, thanx guys for responding and feedback, Quazar, Blaster, Hunter, and Smarty.

Thanx for the compliments on the dialogue.  That is always a challenge.  If you knew how many times i re-write those lines just to get it right....

The Windu/Anakin match will be within the next update.  In regards to the Mace Windu fig......have they made a good one yet???

At least one with good articulation?  I have a Mace Windu fig from Episode I, II, or III.  I will interchange them as necessary.

Zett was fun to work with.  He always gets beat up in my stories.  ;D

I will have an update this week.  Stay tuned!
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on January 23, 2006, 09:19 AM
double-post...sorry
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: CHEWIE on January 23, 2006, 02:30 PM
I know you don't customize, but just as a thought the Agen Kolar body works pretty good if you want to put a Mace head on it.  Not perfect, but I like it better than any of the current Hasbro offerings.

(http://www.thecustomalliance.com/cook/NEWJEDI.jpg)
 
You can probably pull something off with one of the current Windu figures though, as you do a great job with what Hasbro puts out.

 :P
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on January 26, 2006, 10:27 AM
Thanx for the idea CHEWIE.  I may have to try that with my Mace/Kolar fig.  But if I break them, your responsible!  ;)

Well, I have completed the next three chapters of DARK ILLUSIONS.  Since all three chapters are action-packed, it did not require much dialogue.  I did use some basic sound descriptions to make it easier to read/understand.  Including a different way to describe the action.

Enjoy chapters 19, 20, and 21!  8)
Title: DARK ILLUSIONS - Chapters 19, 20, & 21
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on January 26, 2006, 10:30 AM
DARK ILLUSIONS

Chapter 19





Anakin Skywalker:   Master Windu……nice of you to join us.  But like Master Ti said, no need to continue this any further.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/19-1.jpg)




Mace Windu:   Oh, I understand.  You have no problem sparring a boy.  But against an opponent of greater skill, you quickly back down.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/19-2.jpg)




Mace Windu:   Why not show young Zett the difference between a Jedi Knight……and a Jedi Master?
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/19-3.jpg)





Anakin Skywalker:   Very well……I have time for one more lesson today……
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/19-4.jpg)




(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/19-5.jpg)




Obi-Wan Kenobi:   I’ve got a bad feeling about this…
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/19-6.jpg)





(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/19-7.jpg)





(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/19-8.jpg)




Shaak Ti:   Master Yoda will not be pleased.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/19-9.jpg)



Mace Windu:   Not bad.  Obi-Wan as taught you well.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/19-10.jpg)




Anakin Skywalker:   He has taught me enough……
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/19-11.jpg)




Mace Windu:   But you still have much to learn……like to expect the unexpected.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/19-12.jpg)



PUNCH!
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/19-13.jpg)





Anakin Skywalker:   Nice shot.  That was…..unexpected.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/19-14.jpg)




Mace Windu:   Stop wasting my time, Skywalker!  A Jedi would not be defeated so easily……don’t hold back……show me those “Hero” moves!!!
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/19-15.jpg)





Anakin Skywalker:   As you wish……
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/19-16.jpg)




(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/19-17.jpg)




Mace Windu:   Am I supposed to be impressed?
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/19-18.jpg)




Anakin Skywalker:   You’ll soon find out……
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/19-19.jpg)




(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/19-20.jpg)




 (http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/19-21.jpg)




Anakin Skywalker:   I grow tired of this…
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/19-22.jpg)





(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/19-23.jpg)




Obi-Wan Kenobi:   The match ends here, Anakin.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/19-24.jpg)




Anakin Skywalker:   Don’t worry, Master.  We are just having fun.  If I really wanted to hurt him, I would have…
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/19-25.jpg)



Mace Windu:   In that case, we’re even.  Ready for another round?
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/19-26.jpg)





Obi-Wan Kenobi:   But Master Windu……
Anakin Skywalker:   Stay out of this, Obi-Wan……whenever you’re ready, Master Windu.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/19-27.jpg)





(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/19-28.jpg)





(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/19-29.jpg)




Mace Windu:   ………
Anakin Skywalker:   ………
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/19-30.jpg)




Yoda:   ENOUGH!
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/19-31.jpg)




Yoda:   Useless, this lesson is.  Proving only that Jedi can be foolish.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/19-32.jpg)




Yoda:   What message do we send to the Padawan?  To use the Force only to be strong with a lightsaber?
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/19-33.jpg)




Yoda:   Not the way to the Jedi Council, this is, Skywalker.  Only cause further doubt among the elder members.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/19-34.jpg)




Yoda:   But how wise are the elder members, mmmmm, Master Windu?
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/19-35.jpg)




Yoda:   Lose focus, we cannot.  Crave power, we cannot.  Conspire against others, we cannot.  Belong to the Dark Side, these things do.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/19-36.jpg)





Zett Jukassa:   You were right, Master Ti.  Yoda was not pleased.
Shaak Ti:   Yes……but I doubt that this will be end of it, Padawan.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/19-37.jpg)

Title: DARK ILLUSIONS - Chapter 20
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on January 26, 2006, 10:33 AM
DARK ILLUSIONS

Chapter 20



Based on the last transmission received on Palpatine’s holo-computer, Shade traces the coordinates to an abandoned warehouse, far removed from the busy lifestyles of Coruscant.



Shade:(thinking)   ……this is the exact place……no one here……
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/21-1.jpg)




Shade:(thinking)   ……footsteps?……coming closer……
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/21-2.jpg)




Shade:(thinking)   ……muffled voices……answers to my questions……
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/21-3.jpg)




Crimson:   We’ve checked everywhere.  Let’s get out of here.
Maroon:   Not yet.  One more time. 
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/21-4.jpg)




Maroon:   We have to be sure the place is secure.  Follow me.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/21-5.jpg)



Crimson:   We’ve swept the entire place four times already.
Maroon:   Maybe you’re right……wait……I see something…
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/21-6.jpg)




Maroon:   A BARC bike!
Crimson:   That wasn’t here last time.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/21-7.jpg)




Maroon:   Someone is here.  Spread out!  Shoot first, ask questions later.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/21-8.jpg)




Crimson:   I’ll check the main platform.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/21-9.jpg)





Maroon:   And I’ll check the tunnels.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/21-10.jpg)




Crimson:   Nothing here.
Shade:   ……drop your weapon……hands up……turn around……
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/21-11.jpg)




Shade:   ……Royal Security for the Supreme Chancellor……what are you doing way out here……alone?
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/21-12.jpg)




Crimson:   I don’t have to answer any of your questions!!!
PUNCH!
Shade:   ……arghhhhh……
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/21-13.jpg)



Crimson:   I’ve found him!!  He’s over here!!
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/21-14.jpg)




Shade:   ……haven’t answered my questions yet……
Crimson:   Hey!
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/21-15.jpg)




Crimson:   Get off of me!!
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/21-16.jpg)




Crimson:   Shoot first, ask questions later.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/21-17.jpg)





Shade:   ……my thoughts exactly……
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/21-18.jpg)




BLAST! BLAST!
Crimson:   …………………………
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/21-19.jpg)




Shade:(thinking)   ……no comlink on this guard……must be the other guard……
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/21-20.jpg)





Maroon:   Where are you? 
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/21-21.jpg)





Maroon:   This is not good.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/21-22.jpg)





Maroon:   The speeder bike!  Can’t allow him to escape.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/21-23.jpg)




Maroon:   Still here…so HE is still here.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/21-24.jpg)





Maroon:   Here we go again…
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/21-25.jpg)




Maroon:   W-W-What was that noise?
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/21-26.jpg)





Maroon:   AH-HA!!!
BLAST! BLAST! BLAST!
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/21-27.jpg)





Maroon:   Must be my imagination…got to keep moving…
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/21-28.jpg)





Maroon:   Show yourself!!!  Come out and fight!!!
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/21-29.jpg)



Maroon:   Hey……where is your rifle……it was here before…
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/21-30.jpg)





Maroon:   HE must have taken it.  I am close…
WHACK!
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/21-31.jpg)





Shade:(thinking)   ……talks too much……
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/21-32.jpg)




Shade:   ……who were you protecting?……tell me now……
Maroon:   (gag)  I’d rather die than…(gag)…tell you anything!
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/21-33.jpg)




Shade:   ……that can be arranged……
Maroon:   (gag)   You fool!  You can’t kill me!  I serve the Republic!
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/21-34.jpg)





Maroon:   If you kill a Royal Guard, you will never leave Coruscant alive!   You will become the most wanted man in the galaxy!  We are ready to die for the ones we serve!!!
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/21-35.jpg)



Shade:   ……so be it……Royal Guard……
BLAST! BLAST!
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/21-36.jpg)




Shade:(thinking)   ……talks too much……
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/21-37.jpg)




Shade:(thinking)   ……find the comlink……
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/21-38.jpg)




Shade:(thinking)   ……bingo……
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/21-39.jpg)




Shade:(thinking)   ……what secrets do you hold……
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/21-40.jpg)



Title: DARK ILLUSIONS - Chapter 21
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on January 26, 2006, 10:35 AM
DARK ILLUSIONS

Chapter 21



Meanwhile, in the Oner system, Separatist forces continue to invade new systems while preparing for their next attack.



General Grievous:   Attack!  Finish him! 
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/20-1.jpg)




A single warrior must fight off the droid armies of the CIS…
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/20-2.jpg)



…Magna Guards approach the warrior…
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/20-3.jpg)





…and begin their attack…
CLANG!
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/20-4.jpg)





CLANG!
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/20-5.jpg)





…one Magna Guard is struck down…
THUD!
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/20-6.jpg)





…while the other Guard attacks from behind…
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/20-7.jpg)





…but the warrior is ready, taking the electro staff……the Guard is now defenseless…
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/20-8.jpg)





THUD! CRASH!
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/20-9.jpg)






…for a brief moment…………silence…
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/20-10.jpg)




…but only for a moment…
BANG!
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/20-11.jpg)





…another Magna Guard continues the attack…
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/20-12.jpg)





CLANG!
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/20-13.jpg)





…the warrior quickly disarms the droid…
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/20-14.jpg)





…then begins his own attack…
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/20-15.jpg)






…by slamming the droid against the wall……decapitating the Magna Guard…
CLANG! THUD!
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/20-16.jpg)




…the droid attempts a final attack…
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/20-17.jpg)



…but the warrior terminates the droid, without hesitation…
CLANG!
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/20-18.jpg)






General Grievous:   Droidekas!
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/20-19.jpg)





…droidekas roll and disengage their blasters…
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/20-20.jpg)





…the warrior, still holding an electro staff,…
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/20-21.jpg)





…spears one droid…
BUZZZZTTT!
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/20-22.jpg)



…then, using the armor of one of the Magna Guards to absorb the laser blasts,…
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/20-23.jpg)





…approaches the other droid…
CRASH!
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/20-24.jpg)





…and easily defeats it…
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/20-25.jpg)





…but the battle is not over…
Battle Droid:   Don’t move!
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/20-26.jpg)






Battle Droid:   Hands up---bbbzzzzzzzzzzzzz
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/20-27.jpg)






Super Battle Droid:   Terminate target!
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/20-28.jpg)





(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/20-29.jpg)





…the warrior is victorious…
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/20-30.jpg)





…not everyone is pleased…
BUZZZZZZZ
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/20-31.jpg)





General Grievous:   I’ll finish you myself!
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/20-32.jpg)




Count Dooku:   Stop!
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/20-33.jpg)



Count Dooku:   Lower your weapon.  He has nothing more to prove, General.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/20-34.jpg)




Count Dooku:   Let me be the first to congratulate you, young warrior.  Your reputation does not do you justice.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/20-35a.jpg)


Count Dooku:   It is my privilege to meet the great Sagev.  Allow me to introduce myself; my name is Count Dooku. 
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/20-36.jpg)



Sagev:   I know who you are, Count.  You are known to the Outer Rim as the Hero that will defeat the Republic.  And your praise is not necessary.  My skills have become a necessary evil during this War.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/20-37.jpg)




Count Dooku:   Indeed……the War against the Jedi has destroyed countless lives.  I am but a simple man, trying to bring peace to the galaxy.  What are your views on this ongoing struggle versus the Republic?
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/20-38.jpg)




Sagev:   My home planet of Utapau resides in the Outer Rim.  My people are proud and strong.  Yet, the current administrators have allowed Utapau to become weak, concerning themselves with only with their wealth. 
Count Dooku:   Very interesting. 
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/20-39.jpg)




Sagev:   Tion Medon does not agree with my views to maintain an army of Utapaun warriors.  We MUST defend our home from anyone who attempts to invade!  Due to my beliefs, I was labeled a terrorist and considered a threat to his power.  Therefore, I was exiled from Utapau, never to return.  The War will engulf Utapau, it is inevitable.  And my people will die and suffer because of Medon’s ignorance!!!
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/20-40.jpg)




Count Dooku:   Your story is similar to that of other Outer Rim worlds.  The Jedi do not concern themselves with the safety of systems outside the Republic.  Their Armies will invade any planet they feel is necessary to win this War.  They cannot be trusted.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/20-41.jpg)



Count Dooku:   Every system that has joined the Confederacy now has the necessary means to defend themselves against the Republic.  Perhaps we can offer that protection to Utapau……in exchange for your services.  We could also……perhaps……encourage a new government……one……with a strong leader……
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/20-43.jpg)





Sagev:   If it will save my people and end the reign of Tion Medon, I pledge myself to you and Separatist movement.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/20-42.jpg)




Count Dooku:   Excellent.  With your assistance, Utapau can be spared the destruction of this War.  But for now………please tell me more about your home planet, Utapau.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/20-44.jpg)



…the warrior will serve us well, My Master…
General Grievous:   ……Utapau……
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2019-21/20-45.jpg)


TO BE CONTINUED……
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: CHEWIE on January 26, 2006, 12:40 PM
Ok, how in the world do you have time to update these so frequently?   ;)

Going back just a step, I am probably in the minority here, but for some reason I just don't like the whole "Shade" sequences.  Great photography, and the dialogue is good.  Something just doesn't sit well with me here.  Maybe it's because I don't think that the Royal Guards would really know Palpatine's agenda, they just follow his orders. I don't think they know what's coming, and from the story I get the feeling that they do know, and that they know about Order 66 too.  And I think they don't know that Dooku is really "on their side" - I just for some reason have trouble believing that part.  Plus, I absolutely dislike the whole Shadow Trooper idea that Hasbro came up with.  I guess that puts me in a biased negative towards anything with Shadow Troopers.

I know that sounded really negative, but it wasn't meant to be.  I think you have a great story going on here, and I think it's awesome how you changed the format a bit, showing some description of what was happening.  That really helped me a lot and made perfect sense for me.

I really liked the whole Jedi lightsaber duels, especially the Windu fights.  Great work there and it shows the inner tension growing within the Jedi Order and Yoda's reaction and dialogue was spot on.  The Utapua guard scene was well done; I was surprised to see one guard be able to fight that well.  Looks like he could take out a few Jedi if we wanted to, but I was surprised to see his life on the line and then so suddenly taking to the enemy side however.  It will be interesting to see what happens with him.

Great work SA!

 :P
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on January 26, 2006, 05:38 PM
Thanx for the quick response, CHEWIE. :)

I may have to take more time for the next couple of chapters, but my updates are fairly quick only b/c I don't have any additional work with the actual photos.  I spend most of my time writing the script and dialogue versus taking pictures.

I spend a lot of time thinking how I wanted to showcase the Red Guards in this chapter.  I wouldn't say they know "everything", b/c they still only follow orders.  Sidious told them to remain behind after he left in chapter 16, and verify no evidence remained of his meeting with Dooku.  They are not really allowed to "think" about who is doing what, only follow Palpatine/Sidious' orders.  The Shadow Trooper is a cool character, but I agree with you about why Hasbro made such a figure.  Nevertheless, his story is part of the whole story (but I don't want to give away too much right now).

I've wanted to do a Mace battle for a long time.  And he will have more scenes in the future.  Still, the lack of a true SA Mace limits my options.  Yoda was an easy, fun part to write/shoot.

The narration with Sagev (Utapau Warrior) was necessary b/c I did not want to write "Ugh" and "Ahh!" and other fighting grunts.  So, I wrote th narration in the voice of Dooku reporting to Sidious, thus the final line of "…the warrior will serve us well, My Master…".  Compared to the Shade chapter, any dialogue between Sagev and the Droids would be corny.  And his life wasn't necessary "on the line" b/c Dooku was testing how good of a figher Sagev was.  If he could not defeat some droids, what good is he?  That is why Dooku stopped the "challenge" when Grievous wanted to fight him. 

Hopefully my comments above doesn't ruin any future chapters...;)

Always look forward to yours and Quazar's feedback!  Glad you enjoyed it!



Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: CHEWIE on January 26, 2006, 06:15 PM
SA, that makes total sense that Dooku was testing him then; so he is using this guy as a foot in the door towards setting a secret base on Utapua, because it looks like Tion Medon (as we know) does not like the Seps.  That makes perfect sense then.

For the Shadow trooper, thanks for not taking that the wrong way.  I dislike the figure, but love what you are doing with it. Might even make me regret passing that figure up.   ;)

I know what you mean about the limitations with the Windu.  That's one of the reasons I try to make so many customs for the Rykrof series, but even then it's hard for me to take action pics the way I want to.  I haven't been able to capture the "life" that you get in your pics.  You have a knack for it (especially with how you pose your Dooku figure).  And as always your dialogue is great, and I'm digging the descriptions too.

 :P
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: Smartypants1635 on January 26, 2006, 08:18 PM
great update SA i really don't have time to comment. I will later though. ;)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: Clone Commander on February 16, 2006, 05:23 PM
Wow, lost on the page.

-Bump-
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on February 16, 2006, 05:58 PM
Thanx for the bump, COMMANDER.

I have been unable to update the story due to a busy schedule right now, but I am near completion with the 24th chapter (22 and 23 are complete & waiting).  I should have an update by Monday.

Much appreciated!  ;D
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: Clone Commander on February 17, 2006, 09:22 AM
Welcome!  :)

I cant wait to see your updates.
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: CHEWIE on February 17, 2006, 11:27 AM
I am looking forward to another update too.  But take your time SA, these take forever to make.

Would you consider showing one chapter at a time?

 :P
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on February 17, 2006, 11:51 AM
I would consider only updating one chapter at a time, except some chapters are slower than others. 

Your RYKROF updates emcompass a lot of different stories in each chapter.  I tend to dedicate each chapter to a specific storyline.  Which is why I usually update 3 chapters at a time to move the story along.

Should have the next update complete by today, hopefully.  ;)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: Clone Commander on February 17, 2006, 12:28 PM
Woohooo!!!
Nice work on your photonovels.
I wonder what the update will be like.
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on February 20, 2006, 12:33 PM
OK, after much delay, here are the next three chapters (22, 23, and 24) of DARK ILLUSIONS.

Enjoy!  8)

Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on February 20, 2006, 12:35 PM
DARK ILLUSIONS

Chapter 22




Following an emergency session of the Galactic Senate, Senator Bail Organa waits for Padme Amidala outside the Chancellor’s office.



Captain Antilles:   Is it true the Security measured passed, your Majesty?
Bail Organa:   Yes, that’s true, and without much resistance.  The Chancellor was very successful in gathering support for the measure. 
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2022-24/22-1.jpg)




Bail Organa:   Once the news spread about two Royal Guards being murdered and dumped at an abandoned warehouse,  Senators quickly changed their minds about the need for a Clone Security force.  He certainly didn’t need our support, so I’m confused why he wants to meet with Senator Amidala and me so quickly.
Captain Antilles:   Perhaps he just wants to thank you for your support. (http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2022-24/22-2.jpg)





Bail Organa:   Let’s hope so.  I am in no mood to discuss another amendment, which will only result in the Chancellor gaining more power.  Prepare the Tantive IV for our trip home.  We’ll leave as soon as this meeting concludes.
Captain Antilles:   Yes, your Highness.
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Bail Organa:   Pleasure to see you again, Senator Amidala.
Padme Amidala:   And you as well, Bail.  I bumped into Senator Tills on my way here.  When I mentioned that we were meeting with the Chancellor, he insisted on joining us.
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Padme Amidala:   He is convinced we will try to persuade the Chancellor to rescind the Security measure, aren’t you, Meena?   
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Meena Tills:   Please don’t misunderstand me.  I am just as concerned as you are about the power the Chancellor is gathering.  However, this new Security Act will ensure the safety of Coruscant and the Senate.
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Meena Tills:   I personally have witnessed the consequences of this war.  Mon Calamari is still in ruin following the attack by the Separatists.  We must protect the Capital at all costs.
Bail Organa:   I agree, Senator, but Palpatine has been given the final word on how this new Clone division is used.  In short, he controls the only garrison on Coruscant.  We must be certain that he does not abuse that power. 
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Bail Organa:   Hopefully, he will give us some insight to his plans during this meeting.  My only hope is that he involves the Jedi in some way with this new Clone army.
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Meena Tills:   That’s a good idea.  Perhaps he will.  However, this Security Force should only be seen as a positive thing for the Republic.
Bail Organa:   Possibly, but what Jedi would sacrifice fighting in the War to remain here on Coruscant fulltime?
Padme Amidala:   (whispering)   I know of one………
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Scarlet:   Halt!  Show your identification.
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Bail Organa:   Is that really necessary?    We’ve never been asked to show identification before. I am Senator Bail Organa of Alderaan, and this is Senators Amidala and Tills.
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Scarlet:   Your names appear on the list of guests.  You may proceed.
Bail Organa:   Thank you.  I can understand your concern.
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Mas Amedda:   Welcome Senators.  We’ve been expecting you.
Bail Organa:   Senators Amidala and Tills have accompanied me today, Mas.
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Mas Amedda:   Yes, of course.  The Chancellor welcomes any opportunity to speak with a Senator on a one-to-one basis.
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Padme Amidala:   Where is the Chancellor now?
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Mas Amedda:   He is speaking to Governor Tarkin.
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Mas Amedda:   But he wanted to begin the meeting as soon as you arrived, Senators.  Here he comes now.
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Chancellor Palpatine:   Please excuse my rudeness for not greeting you myself.  It seems everyone is excited about the new Galactic Security.  Welcome, Senators Organa and Amidala.
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Bail Organa:   Please allow me introduce Senator Meena Tills of Mon Calamari.   
Chancellor Palpatine:   Yes, of course.  I was saddened to hear about the devastation on to your home world, Senator.
Meena Tills:   Thank you, Chancellor.  We are on our way to a full recovery, thanks to the Republic and Jedi Master Fisto.
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Chancellor Palpatine:   Well then, let us begin.  Thank you for joining me today, to celebrate the passing of the Galactic Security measure.  Coruscant will be forever thankful for our work today, Senators.
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Chancellor Palpatine:   Due to our hard work and dedication, Coruscant will soon be protected by specially trained Clones.  These two new divisions will be the best troops we’ve ever had.
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Chancellor Palpatine:   However, we must not forget the terrible murders of the  two Royal Guards.  Let us now look upon their tragic loss as the beginning of a more safe and secure Republic.
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Padme Amidala:   Does that include a Peace Summit with the leaders of the Confederacy, Chancellor?   
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Chancellor Palpatine:   I hope so, Senator.  You must know that I personally want nothing more than a peaceful end to this War.   
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Chancellor Palpatine:   But it may prove difficult to convince the Separatist leaders to come to Coruscant……Security Force or not.
Governor Tarkin:   I volunteer my home world of Eriadu to hold the Peace Summit.  We have learned from our previous mistakes during the Valorum administration, I assure you.
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Meena Tills:   We must hold the Summit here on Coruscant, for that is the reason many Senators voted for the Security measure.  Eriadu is in the Outer Rim, Governor, and not a part of the Republic.
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Chancellor Palpatine:   Senator Tills is right.  The Summit, if one were to be held, must be on Coruscant.  That is one point that I will not concede.  But first, we must have the Security force in place before any Summit can be organized.
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Bail Organa:   How long will that take?  Clones require ten years to mature.
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Chancellor Palpatine:   I have good news, Senators!  I have just received confirmation from Kamino about a new batch of Clones that were trained for this exact purpose.  They were originally created to protect Kamino from any invasion.  However, they have agreed to donate these troops to the Republic.  They should arrive in a few days.
Bail Organa:   And what about the Jedi?  Will they be involved with this new Clone battalion?
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Chancellor Palpatine:   It did occur to me during the debates that one Jedi should work closely with the new troops.   Perhaps the Council can recommend someone.
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Chancellor Palpatine:   As soon as the troops arrive, I will speak with the Jedi Order regarding this matter.   Now, if you’ll excuse me, I must begin preparing for my  public announcement.
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Chancellor Palpatine:   I greatly appreciate your time and your support, Senators.  Only together can we restore peace to the Republic.
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Governor Tarkin:   I have urgent matters I must attend to on Eriadu.  If you’ll excuse me, gentlemen…M’Lady.
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Bail Organa:   Can you believe the coincidence that Kamino just happen to have these Clones so readily available?
Padme Amidala:   No.  Why would Kamino need their own security force if the Republic is already protecting Kamino?
Meena Tills:   I agree.  There is something not right about this.
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Meena Tills:   Nevertheless, we have Palpatine’s assurances that he will pursue a diplomatic solution.  And that he will consult with the Jedi Order.
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Bail Organa:   We have at least that much.  His motives seem well-intended, but everything is happening so quickly.  I look forward to his speech and the reaction from the Republic.
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Padme Amidala:   The reaction will be nothing but positive.  He is even more popular with the people than he is in the Senate.  But we should discuss these matters elsewhere.
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Padme Amidala:   We never know who could be listening……
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Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on February 20, 2006, 12:36 PM
DARK ILLUSIONS

Chapter 23




Jedi Master Mace Windu receives an urgent message for a confidential meeting on a rooftop in the nightclub section of Coruscant.



 
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Shade:   ……you’re late……
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Mace Windu:   How long have you been here?  This is a very public place.
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Shade:   ……no worry……no one looks up……down here…… (http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2022-24/23-4.jpg)





Mace Windu:   Very well.  Please tell me that your investigation didn’t have anything to do with the murders of the Royal Guards. 
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Shade:   They were traitors to the Republic!!!
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Shade:   They betrayed their oath……to protect the Republic……they deserved to be executed……
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Mace Windu:   No one deserves to die, including traitors.
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Shade:   ……really?……there are a lot of people……that would disagree with you, Jedi…… 
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Shade:   ……besides……the information I found……may prove to be more valuable……than their lives……
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Mace Windu:   What did you find?
Shade:   ……not what……but where…… 
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Shade:   ……a message sent to an unidentified warrior……to go to a planet in the Outer Rim…… and meet someone there……
Mace Windu:   Meet who?  It could be Sidious or even Count Dooku.
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Shade:   ……doesn’t say……but their data pad does have……the coordinates to the Outer Rim planet……
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Mace Windu:   Which planet in the Outer Rim?
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Shade:   ……too difficult to tell……the coordinates are well outside the Republic’s maps……
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Mace Windu:   Do you have any information on the warrior?  Another bounty hunter?
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Shade:   ……no information about the warrior either……
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Shade:   ……but I will travel to the Outer Rim……and find this “warrior”……
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Mace Windu:   Do not, I repeat, DO NOT engage the enemy.  Wait until we arrive.  Is that clear?
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Shade:   ……unless……it is absolutely necessary……you have my word, Jedi……keep the data pad……
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Mace Windu:   ………
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Mace Windu:   Gone……
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Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on February 20, 2006, 12:38 PM
DARK ILLUSIONS

Chapter 24




Following the memorial for Adi Gallia, Jedi Master Saesee Tiin and Commander EZ are ordered to begin searching for the Separatist Leaders in the Outer Rim.



Epsilon:   Did you hear the rumor?  Grievous is supposed to be hiding out here in the Outer Rim.  And we were the battalion chosen to find him!
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Zeta:   Really?  In that case, care to make a friendly wager?  First one to find Grievous, wins…and loser does the winner’s cleaning detail for a month.
Epsilon:   You’re on!
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Commander EZ:   Pipe down, troopers!  We’re about to land.  Gather your weapons.
Epsilon & Zeta:   Yes, sir.
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Commander EZ:   This is a reconnaissance mission, not a war party.  And any more mention of gambling will be reported directly to the Chancellor’s office, is that understood?
Epsilon & Zeta:   YES, SIR!!!
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Commander EZ:   Epsilon and Zeta have volunteered themselves to begin the search. I will remain on board and monitor their progress. 
Saesee Tiin:   No.
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Commander EZ:   But General, scouting is a job for troopers…not Commanders.  I suggest we remain with the Gunship in case---
Saesee Tiin:   No.
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Commander EZ:   But what if ---
Saesee Tiin:   No!  We will all participate in this mission, Commander.
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Eta:   General Tiin, we are approaching the landing zone.  Scanners have picked up a large life-form, moving East. 
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Saesee Tiin:   Pay no mind to it.  We are looking for small pathetic, life-forms, such as Nemodians.  Begin the landing process.
Eta:   Yes, General.
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Saesee Tiin:   Are your men ready, Commander? 
Commander EZ:   Yes, General.  We have a full squad of nine.
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Commander EZ:   Impossible Jedi. 
Theta:   Yes, sir.
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TTTTHHHHUUUUDDDD!
Theta:   Hey……
Commander EZ:   Watch it……you call that a landing??  Pilot, I shall report you to the---
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Iota:   That wasn’t us, sir.  We were already on the ground when that tremor occurred. 
Commander EZ:   Are we under attack?!
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Iota:   No, sir.  The vibration resonated from the ground.  Scanners indicate the shockwave came from the large life-form.
Commander EZ:   Then, this mission just got more complicated.  Keep an eye on the life-form, pilot.  Let’s go, trooper.
Theta:   Yes, sir.
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Kappa:   All clear, sir.  No sign of any droids.
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Theta:   What planet is this? 
Commander EZ:   Don’t worry about that, trooper.  The sun is beginning to rise.
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Saesee Tiin:   Then we should move quickly.
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TTTTTHHHHUUUUUUDDDDDD!!!
Commander EZ:   Another tremor……hold on……..
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Epsilon:   What is that thing?!
Commander EZ:   That shockwave was stronger than the previous one.
Saesee Tiin:   The creature is just testing us.  Ignore it, and it will ignore you.  Keep your focus on the task at hand.
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Commander EZ:   Pilots, remain with the Avenger.  We’ll be in contact.
Iota:   Yes, sir.
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Commander EZ:   You heard the General.  Let’s move out, troopers.
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Eta:   Sir, scanners have picked up something……this direction.
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Theta:   I have it on my scope……we have confirmation……a battle droid.
Commander EZ:   Good, our first catch of the day.
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Theta:   There’s only one.  No wonder the Avenger didn’t see him, sir.
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Commander EZ:   The Droid Army must have just arrived.  They’re setting up their radar. 
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Commander EZ:   Trooper, call for reinforcements.
Theta:   Yes, sir.
Saesee Tiin:   No.  Hold your position.
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Saesee Tiin:   Let’s follow him.
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Saesee Tiin:   A single battle droid couldn’t have wandered far from the other droids.
Commander EZ:   You’re right, General.  More droids straight ahead.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2022-24/24-30.jpg)





Commander EZ:   They’re setting up another radar station.  Only a few droids though.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2022-24/24-31.jpg)





Commander EZ:   Their base should be nearby---
(A tree branch snaps!)
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2022-24/24-32.jpg)





Battle Droid:   Intruders!  Open fire!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2022-24/24-33.jpg)




Commander EZ:   Troopers…Fire!!!  Fire!!!  Fire!!!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2022-24/24-34b.jpg)






Theta:   They’re down, sir!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2022-24/24-35.jpg)





Eta:   Not all of them……destroyer droid!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2022-24/24-36.jpg)





Commander EZ:   Let the Jedi handle that one.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2022-24/24-37.jpg)






CRASH!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2022-24/24-38.jpg)





Commander EZ:   General, there is no doubt that the Separatists are here.  We must call for reinforcements.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2022-24/24-39.jpg)







Saesee Tiin:   Not yet, Commander.  We still don’t know why they’re here, or how big their droid army is.  Perhaps this will give us a clue.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2022-24/24-40.jpg)






Saesee Tiin:   This is no radar station……it’s a turret.  Specifically, an anti-aircraft turret.  The Separatists are building a base.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2022-24/24-41.jpg)






Saesee Tiin:   Commander, have your men destroy these turrets.  We must find the base quickly.
Commander EZ:   Yes, General.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2022-24/24-42.jpg)





TTTTTHHHHHHUUUUUUUDDDDDD!!!!!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2022-24/24-44.jpg)




Theta:   What about that creature, sir?
Commander EZ:   We may have to do some exterminating.  But first, tell Central Command to have a battalion ready to deploy.  Have them monitor the system for arriving Trade Federation ships. 
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2022-24/24-45.jpg)



Commander EZ:   Tell them we found something……in the Oner System.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2022-24/24-43.jpg)



To be continued…



Special thanx to STRIKEG @ RS for the additional effects added to picture 24-34b, where the Clones fire back.  Great work, STRIKEG!  Check out his website,  FettsBest.com (http://fettsbest.com/) .
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: Smartypants1635 on February 20, 2006, 12:54 PM
Good job man thats awsome can't wait to see waht that creature is. ANd EZ is an idiot.
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: CHEWIE on February 20, 2006, 03:23 PM
Cool to see another update SA.  These were interesting for sure.  There were a couple questions I had and some things I really liked.

First off, one typo I think I noticed.  In one of the frames where Windu is speaking with Shade, the word "to" should read "too" where he says "to difficult to tell."  Also when they are talking about some creature that is making the ground shake they refer to it as "the" creature in the first frame where it is mentioned, like the whole crew already know what it is... maybe referring to it as "a" creature or lifeform here would be better, but maybe not.

Also, to me I am surprised to see Shade and another clone with Saesee arguing so much with the Jedi... just seems a little out of line.  Shade just seems kind of bossy to me.  I think they follow orders without question from the Jedi until Order 66.  But I guess there could be a few that think more independently than others.  I was also surprised to see Saesee calling the Nemoidians pathetic lifeforms, I thought he would have a bit more respect than that but perhaps not, it's a trying war.

But there were some things I really like about this too, especially the first chapter in Palpatine's office.  You do a great job on those sets, it really feels like you are watching a deleted scene or something from the Clone Wars here.  Great work on the set and the dialogue is great.  I like Bail's role here a lot and Padme in the robes to hide her belly are a good touch.

I also liked the setting where they land on the planet.  It kind of has a Felucia feel to it.  I really like how you use Battle Droids in these, do you have a few more for a shot of more than one at a time?  Just would be cool to see more than one of them at once as they are the grunts in the droid army.

Good job here, I'm looking forward to seeing how this one goes.  How many more chapters are going to be in it?

 :P
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on February 20, 2006, 04:28 PM
Thanx for the feedback, guys!  Always appreciated and insightful.

SMARTY - Glad you enjoyed the latest chapters.  Cmdr. EZ got some interesting comments after chapter 15, so I am glad his character is coming off as unlikable, that was the point.  He was a fun character to create.  I'll explain his name later.  The creature will be revealed, but not too soon.  ;)

CHEWIE - Always good to read your comments. 

I corrected the typo.   :-[  Grammer was never my strong point, which is why the dialogue always takes so long.  As for "the creature" or "life-form", I re-read the dialogue and left it as is.  Th Clones refer to it as a "life-form" until Saesee Tiin refers to it as "the creature".  From there, the Clones refer to it as "the creature" since the "wise" Jedi called it that. 

The Clones personality is something I am taking some freedoms with.  The basic grunt Clones follow orders without question.  But the Commanders all have their own personalities.  Cmdr EZ was in chapter 15, when he got into a "ruckus' with Bacara.  He is known as "anal", as FLACKS described him.  Saesee Tiin is a very different Jedi compared to Yoda, Mace, Obi-Wan, or Shaak Ti.  He is a quiet, no-nonsense type of guy, which easily conflicts with EZ's "commander" personality.  But EZ does follow Tiin's orders, but he does like to hear himself talk "commander".

As for Shade, he is a very different Clone.  I see him as more like Jango or Boba Fett, with a personality similar to a bounty hunter.  He is extremely loyal to the Rebublic, than to the Jedi.  He is working with Mace, but he knows the importance of his mission.  His story will get more exciting in the upcoming chapters.

Thanx for the feedback on the Palpatine chapter.  The political chapters are fun to write, but probably a little boring.

The Oner system took me the longest to create.  Without digital effects, I really have to use household stuff to create a new environment.  I only have one battle droid ( :-[), but if anybody wants to send me some more, by all means.... :)

And to answer your last question about how long is the rest of the story, I have 6 more chapters until the end of Act II.  There will be one more Act and perhaps an Epilogue.  Still got a while to go.  :P
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: Clone Commander on February 20, 2006, 05:29 PM
 ;D Awesome!
I love this story!
Ez seems pretty arrogant and foolish for a clone...
Nice to see master Tinn takin' out some droids.
Another perfect update.
Keep up the exellent work SA Longhorn!
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: Jedi_Assassin on February 20, 2006, 05:44 PM
THANK YOU! You are so cool. You want to know why, two reasons.
A) You are the first person here to use the Captain Antillies figure. I have always loved anything Alderaanian.
B) Your photonovels are the best. I love how your incorperate the political and physical parts of the Clone Wars. I don't remember who said it, but about Padme wearing the baggy robes to cover her "bump."
I can't wait for your next instalments, but don't rush. I may be new, but I know that when you spend time on your work, it pays off in the long run. I can't wait to see what happens with Master Tinn and EZ. (Take my advice, if someone imprtant dies in your next chapters, I hope it's EZ. He seems like the person everybody hated in school because he was a tattle tale. Stuff like that.)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: CHEWIE on February 20, 2006, 05:48 PM
Hey no biggie on a typo, I usually have several on each chapter that I need to fix.  That's what happens when you have Famine or Ryan proof your dialogue.   :D

Makes sense on the lifeform... I wonder what it the heck it is?  Got to be something huge I would think... like something that would make a rancor seem small by comparison.

I love the political scenes actually, they're not boring at all.  If anything I think those are your best chapters.

I'm in the boat of needing more Battle Droids too.  Funny how I can never seem to have enough of those guys.

Great update once again and thanks for continuing the series, seems like the desire to create these has died off by some people.  I think there should be a front page mention again maybe to remind people of the hard work going into these.

 :P
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on February 20, 2006, 06:05 PM
Clone Commander:  Glad you liked the update, and I was glad to finally post the update after your recent bump.  EZ is a good commander, just doesn't want to his armor dirty.  ;D

Imperial Guard:  Welcome to the boards.  If you like Cpt Antilles, check out my old photonovel, VADER'S QUEST, on the Rebelscum boards.  There is an entire chapter on Antilles and Alderaan.  The robes on Padme work for that reason (to hide the bump) but also b/c there are no Padme Senator figs (and I don't customize).  EZ will have a fun part in the next chapters.

CHEWIE:  I could have bought four battle droids yesterday at the flea market, but 3 of them would have been Episode I droids which do not look as good as ROTS droids.  And I agree with your comments about the interest in Photonovels.  It seems like they have fallen off.  Oh well, as long as everyone enjoys my little story, I will finish it!

Glad to see a reaction from everybody towards certain characters.  Also, as motiviation, it is always good to read what people think or want to happen next!  ;D
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: Jedi_Assassin on February 20, 2006, 06:09 PM
Thanks, I'll head over there and check it out. BTW, if you need customs, I could make 'em and mail 'em to you.
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: CHEWIE on February 20, 2006, 06:11 PM
Oh yeah SA, I agree the EPI Battle Droids don't mix well with the newer sculpt... they're just too bulky and stiff looking.  The ROTS one is much better.

I have a few of the tan SAGA version if you are interested, shoot me a PM.

 :P
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on February 21, 2006, 10:02 AM
IMPERIAL GAURD:  Thanx for the offer regarding the customs.  I may take you up on that offer.  I'll keep you in mind.  :)

CHEWIE:  One thing I forgot to address in my last message was in respose to Tiin's comments about the Neimodians. 

When reading about the character of Saesee Tiin and his personality, he is a different Jedi.  I see him as being "cut-from-the-same-cloth" as Qui-Gon - a Jedi that goes against the common thoughts of the Council.  While Qui-Gon would make a negative comment towards the Neimodians ("These Federation types are cowards"), Padawan Obi-Wan did say these types of things in Episode I (specifically, calling boy Anakin as "another pathetic life-form").  Since Qui-Gon and Tiin were considered independent thinkers, I will think these types of comments originated from Tiin.  Just a little interpretation on my part, but just enough to give some personality and life to a little-used Jedi.

Also, remember Yoda's famous line about Padwans & Jedi becoming too arrogant, "It's a flaw more and more common among Jedi. Too sure of themselves they are. Even the older, more experienced ones".  At this point in the Clone Wars, the basic principles of the Jedi and the Order has deteriorated.
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: In Rem on February 21, 2006, 12:00 PM
S_A_

Never did congratulate you on the 'Horns victory over USC. VY isone for the ages...

This update and your recent updates have been wonderful reads. You have a real knack in the Star Wars (and Seinfeld) tradition for telling multiple stories at one time that add up to one BIG story. It's a true talent, and you've got it and then some.

The political shuffle regarding the Coruscant security forces is interesting. I assume Palpy is just doing this to make sure he has Clones planet-side for Order 66, but I also sense there might be something more... Tarkin's suggestion of moving the summit off Coruscant was either a deliberate ruse to make the Chancellor look good by insisting the summit happen at the Capitol or something more... you have me guessing!

Shade is a lot of fun. I really do get the Boba Fett vibe from him (I also get a little bit of a Batman vibe with how he disappears :) ) I'm not sure Mace would stand for his demeanor, though. Shade must be a heck of a fine weapon for Mace to give him the kind of lattitude he does.

As for Commander EZ, I think he has just the right amount of arrogance to make him a foil for Master Tiin. If they all just went along and didn't question, we wouldn't see the more broodish side of Tiin. Nice work in putting those two together. Without EZ to bring out Tiin we wouldn't know more than we did from the entire prequel trilogy and the Clone Wars. :?

Really great work. Bravo.
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: Jedi_Assassin on February 21, 2006, 04:38 PM
I checked on that photonovel over at Rebelscum. Although you did kill my two favorite characters from the movies, I really liked how you wrote it. Did it take place like two years after RotS, or more towards ANH? If it's the last one, you didn't age the figures. But since you don't customize, that makes since. If it's the first one, Bail Organa dies when the Death Star destroys Alderaan. Jus wanted to let you know.
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: Clone Commander on February 21, 2006, 05:23 PM
I think he is basing it during the clone wars.
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on February 21, 2006, 05:54 PM
I checked on that photonovel over at Rebelscum. Although you did kill my two favorite characters from the movies, I really liked how you wrote it. Did it take place like two years after RotS, or more towards ANH? If it's the last one, you didn't age the figures. But since you don't customize, that makes since. If it's the first one, Bail Organa dies when the Death Star destroys Alderaan. Jus wanted to let you know.

No problem.  VADER'S QUEST was my own original story, but I tried to stay true to the movies.  Since Bail Organa never actually appeared in ANH and his death is presumed to have occured when Alderaan was destroyed, I killed him in my story.  Just to add more drama, but since we never actually see Bail die in the films, I took the freedom to kill him in my story.  ;)

VADER'S QUEST takes place soon after ROTS.  Similar to the novel DARK LORD.  This story, DARK ILLUSIONS, takes place during the Clone Wars and before ROTS.

For everyone who has read the latest update, re-read chapter 24 since I swapped one of the action pics for one with some special effects added.  Look for the pic where Cmdr. EZ orders his troops to fire back at the droids. 

Special thanx to STRIKEG @ RS for the additional effects added to picture.  Great work, STRIKEG!  Check out his website,  FettsBest.com (http://fettsbest.com/) .
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: In Rem on February 21, 2006, 11:09 PM
Nice work on the special effects, S_A
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on February 22, 2006, 10:49 AM
IN REM:  Forgot to respond to your comments yesterday.  :)

Thanx for the compliments on my storytelling.  I took some time to write down the outline for this story, which has helped greatly in illustrating the story.  I have also been reading various SW novels the last couple of months, which helps me organize my story better and provide me with more information about all these characters.

Glad people do enjoy the political scenes.  I always assumed they would be boring and less interesting to everyone.  Tarkin's comments are important to the ongoing story, but also a "nod" to the novel, CLOAK OF DECEPTION.  That novel takes place right before th events in Episode I.  Great SW political story, but I don't think many people have read it.  One of your comments was on the mark!  Perhaps my next photonovel will be just a political story.  ;)

Mace is working with Shade in secracy, another course of actions that indicate the deteriorating state of the Jedi Order during the Clone Wars.  Shade's altercations with the Royal Guards have only made him more determined to complete his mission, no matter the costs.  His story will get more interesting as DARK ILLUSIONS progresses.  Since he is a "Shadow" trooper, he does prefer in the shadows and darkness, like Batman!

Your comments regarding Commander EZ are dead-on.  He is arrogant, and proud to be a Commander.  His "proper etiquette" will definetly clash with the free-lance style of Saesee Tiin.  But they still can get the job done together.

Thanx for the feedback, much appreciated!   :D  The effects were done by a guy over on RS, called STRIKEG.  Hopefully I didn't boss him around too much.  ;)

Thanx for congrats on my Horns!  Wish I could take credit, but it was the Vince Young show!  Will never forget his performances.  Already ordered my replica Championship trophy from the Danbury Mint, and going to pick up the Longhorn Championship DVD today!  ;D ;D ;D
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: Clone Commander on February 23, 2006, 09:11 AM
 :o  Cool addition!
I like both the blast effects and the special effects.
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: Jedi_Assassin on February 23, 2006, 10:33 PM
i forgot what i was gonna write, oh well.
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on March 13, 2006, 01:22 PM
I finally completed the next three chapters! 

I decided to break chapters 25 & 27 into two seperate chapters.  Otherwise, it would have been too long.  Hopefully, the chapters are easier to read this way.

Enjoy!  8)

Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on March 13, 2006, 01:22 PM
DARK ILLUSIONS

Chapter 25



After a receiving a direct order, Separatist leaders Nute Gunray and Rune Haako from the Trade Federation arrive on Oner.



General Grievous:   Welcome to the Oner System, Viceroy.  I hope your trip wasn’t too rough for you.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/25-1.jpg)



Nute Gunray:   This is outrageous!  How dare you bring us here!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/25-2.jpg)



Nute Gunray:   The Republic’s Armies have made you a priority target!  If they capture you, they will also capture us!  And our capture will result in the end of this War……and the end of your expensive droid army!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/25-3.jpg)



General Grievous:   If it were up to me, Viceroy, you would already be dead.  May I remind YOU that your life is no more valuable to me than a Jedi’s.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/25-4.jpg)



Rune Haako:   Your arrogance will cost us all our lives, General. 
Nute Gunray:   Enough of this!  I demand an update on the War!  Why have you brought us here, so close to the War?
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/25-5.jpg)



General Grievous:   It was not my choice to bring you here, Viceroy. 
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/25-6.jpg)


Count Dooku:   The choice was Lord Sidious’.  We are in no danger, Viceroy, I can assure you.  We are fully aware of the Republic’s forces.  Their blind, relentless pursuit of the General’s army has strung them from one side of the galaxy to the other.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/25-7.jpg)



Nute Gunray:   Then we must attack them immediately!  This is our opportunity to finally win this War.
Count Dooku:  Really?  Then tell me, Viceroy……where should we attack?  What objective would we accomplish?
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/25-8.jpg)



Nute Gunray:   Well……I think……it’s possible that……I…don’t know…
Rune Haako:   We only question the progress of the War, Count……nothing more……
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/25-9.jpg)



Count Dooku:   Then, trust me when I say the War is progressing exactly as my Master predicted.  Very soon the Republic will crumble, and then the Trade Federation will become the strongest and richest federation in the galaxy.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/25-10.jpg)



Nute Gunray:   We trust you, Count……and Lord Sidious. 
Rune Haako:   But what about this mysterious warrior…Sagev?  Can we trust him?  What if he is a spy for the Jedi?
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/25-11.jpg)



Count Dooku:   He has no love for the Jedi, believe me.  Sagev has pledged himself to us.  In exchange, I have offered his home world of Utapau protection from the Armies of the Republic.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/25-12.jpg)



Rune Haako:  You assume too much, Dooku.
Nute Gunray:   Yes, and we have too much at stake to lose everything because of some freelance warrior.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/25-13.jpg)



Count Dooku:  I understand your concerns.  That is why I have brought you to the Oner System.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/25-14.jpg)



Count Dooku:  Allow me to give you a glimpse of my Master’s plan.  As we speak, a Clone division has landed on Oner, led by Jedi Master Saesee Tiin……and they are on their way here.
Nute Gunray:   What?! What did you say?!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/25-15.jpg)



Count Dooku:  You can relax, Viceroy.  As I said before, we are fully aware of the Republic’s armies.  They are no threat to us, as you will soon see.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/25-16.jpg)



Count Dooku:  You may begin when ready.
Battle Droid over comlink:  Roger roger!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/25-17.jpg)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on March 13, 2006, 01:23 PM
DARK ILLUSIONS

Chapter 26




Shmi Skywalker:   Don’t be afraid, Annie.  He just wants your help.  And if you can help him, you should.
Anakin Skywalker:   But mom……those Jawas are disgusting creatures!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/26-5a.jpg)



Anakin Skywalker:   Besides……he wouldn’t help us.
Shmi Skywalker:   Then set a good example.

Jawa:   EEE-CHEE!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/26-7a.jpg)




Shmi Skywalker:   Besides, I’ll be right here if you need me.  Now go…
Anakin Skywalker:   Awwwww…….
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/26-6a.jpg)




Jawa:   Eee-chee!!
Anakin Skywalker:   Hi there.  Gonk droid not working again, huh?  Let me take a look.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/26-2a.jpg)



Anakin Skywalker:   There you go……good as new!  His shifter was loose. 
Anakin Skywalker:   EEE-CHOO-TAA!!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/26-3a.jpg)




Anakin Skywalker:   You were right mom.  He just wanted his droid fixed.
Shmi Skywalker:   You see?  You had nothing to be afraid of.  I’m so proud of you, Annie.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/26-4a.jpg)



Shmi Skywalker:   The biggest problem in this universe is no one helps each other. 
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/26-8a.jpg)




Anakin Skywalker:   Mom……
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/26-9.jpg)




Anakin Skywalker:   …………
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/26-10.jpg)




While contemplating his most recent vision, Anakin returns to Padme’s apartment.



Anakin Skywalker:   ………
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/26-11.jpg)



Padme Amidala:   Anakin! 
Anakin Skywalker:   I’ve missed you, Padme
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/26-12.jpg)




Padme Amidala:   Are you alright?  You seemed…….troubled.
Anakin Skywalker:   I’m fine now.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/26-13.jpg)




Padme Amidala:   Good, because I wanted to talk to you about something-----
Anakin Skywalker:   Obi-Wan was here…
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/26-14.jpg)




Padme Amidala:   Yes, he came by earlier looking for you. (http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/26-15.jpg)





Padme Amidala:   Annie……Obi-Wan mentioned a fight between you and a Padawan?
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/26-17.jpg)




Anakin Skywalker:   Obi-Wan exaggerates.  It wasn’t a fight.  Zett got a little excited……and……I……knocked him down.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/26-18.jpg)



Padme Amidala:   Is he alright? 
Anakin Skywalker:   He’s fine.  Master Ti and Windu were there.  But enough about that……I heard the Senate finally passed the Galactic Security Act.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/26-19.jpg)




Padme Amidala:   Yes, we did.  It passed with a landslide vote.  The Chancellor was  pleased, to say the very least. 
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/26-20.jpg)




Anakin Skywalker:   That’s good news!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/26-21.jpg)




Anakin Skywalker:   I’ll feel better knowing that you’re safe when I leave.
Padme Amidala:   Oh?  You’re leaving again?  When?
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/26-22.jpg)







Anakin Skywalker:   Master Windu has plans for Obi-Wan and me.  I’m sure Obi-Wan knows by now, but he hasn’t told me.
Padme Amidala:   Perhaps it’s best for the details to remain confidential until everything has been confirmed.  Besides……the Council has a lot of things to worry about, including the new Security Force.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/26-23.jpg)




 
Padme Amidala:   Senator Organa proposed a Jedi be assigned to work closely with the new Clone Security, to be sure their authority is not abused.  The Chancellor is supposed to discuss it with the Council.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/26-28.jpg)




Anakin Skywalker:   Protection is a job for Clones, not Jedi!  Every Jedi is needed in the battlefield right now.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/26-27.jpg)




Padme Amidala:   I was hoping……you would volunteer. 
Anakin Skywalker:   What?  Why? 
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/26-29.jpg)




Anakin Skywalker:   Padme, you know the Republic needs me to win this War.  I have to be out there.  I should be out there right now!
Padme Amidala:   But what about Dooku?  If he can walk in here, what’s to stop him from attacking the entire Capital?  If you work with the Clone Security, it allows you to be here……on Coruscant……with me……
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/26-24.jpg)




Anakin Skywalker:   But that’s why I have leave, Padme.  So that I can take the fight to him!  You have to understand.  I’m doing this for us……for the Republic.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/26-26.jpg)




Padme Amidala:   I’m starting to think this War will never end.  It’s tearing apart the Republic.  Palpatine continues to amend the Constitution.  And now, we have a garrison on Coruscant.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/26-31.jpg)




Anakin Skywalker:   The Chancellor is trying to end this War, Padme.  And at the same time, he is trying to protect the Capital, that’s all 
Padme Amidala:   I know he’s your mentor, but even a good man can be wrong sometimes.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/26-30.jpg)




Padme Amidala:   But enough of this.  You have a lot on your mind as it is.  Just make me a promise…
Anakin Skywalker:   A promise?
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/26-25.jpg)




Padme Amidala:   Promise me you will at least think about working with the new Clone division?  You don’t have to decide right now……just promise me that you will think about it.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/26-32.jpg)



Anakin Skywalker:   I will……for you……I will……
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/26-33.jpg)






Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on March 13, 2006, 01:24 PM
DARK ILLUSIONS

Chapter 27



As Saesee Tiin and Commander EZ continue their search for the Separatist base on the planet of Oner, clone pilots Eta & Iota remain with the gunship, Avenger.



Eta:   What does their latest report say?
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/25-18.jpg)




Iota:   General Tiin and Commander EZ have discovered four more turrets.  No sight of the base yet.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/25-19.jpg)




Iota:   Our orders are to remain here.  And to be on the lookout. 
Eta:   Yes, sir.
THUD!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/25-20.jpg)



Eta:   The creature has moved away.  It appears to be following the squad.
Iota:   General Tiin was right.  But with darkness falling, the squad will have a hard time seeing it, much less any battle droids.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/25-21.jpg)



Eta:   Did you hear that?
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/25-22.jpg)



Iota:   What?  The creature?  Yea, I heard it.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/25-23.jpg)



Eta:   No, not that……something else……
Iota:   Like what?
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/25-24.jpg)




Eta:   It sounded like……
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/25-25.jpg)



Eta:   BATTLE DROIDS!!!  Ambush!!  Ambush!!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/25-26.jpg)



Iota:   Open fire!!!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/25-27.jpg)



Iota:   They’re flanking us!  Inside the ship! 
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/25-28.jpg)




Iota:   Come in…come in Commander EZ……we’re under attack!  Four battle droids identified!  Requesting backup!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/25-29.jpg)



Iota:   They’re jamming our signal!  We’re on our own!  Take out as many as you can!
Eta:   Yes, sir!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/25-30.jpg)




Eta:   More droids coming!  There’s too many of them!
Iota:   We’re not going to hold out here for long……we better move!!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/25-31.jpg)



Iota:   AAAHHH!!  I’m hit!!!  Go!  Get out of here!  We’re being over-run!!
Eta:   No……I can’t……not without you…
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/25-32.jpg)




Iota:   GET OUT OF HERE! NOW!
Eta:   Yes, sir……
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/25-33.jpg)





Eta:   More droids……
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/25-34.jpg)




Eta:   Got to clear a path…
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/25-35.jpg)



Eta:   Gotcha!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/25-36.jpg)




Eta:   Oh……not good……more droids……
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/25-37.jpg)




Eta:   …keep them at a distance……I might still get out of here.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/25-38.jpg)



Eta:   Halt!!!  Who are you?!?!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/25-39.jpg)




Eta:   Too fast……UGHHHH……
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/25-40.jpg)




Bang!
Eta:   uuuuggghhhh……
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/25-41.jpg)



Sagev:   Where is the Jedi?
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/25-42.jpg)



Eta:   ……don’t know……what you’re talking about……on a peace mission……
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/25-43.jpg)



Sagev:   Then you’ve failed!
CRACK!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/25-44.jpg)



Sagev:   He’s dead.  Where’s the other one?
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/25-45.jpg)



Iota:   ……ughh……losing blood……need a bacta tank……
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/25-46.jpg)




Sagev:   You’ll need much more than a bacta tank  IF you don’t tell me the location of  the Jedi!  Do not test my patience.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/25-47.jpg)



Iota:   ……massive blood loss……I need a bacta tank first……
Sagev:   How’s this?
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/25-48.jpg)


STAB!
Iota:   UUGGHHH!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/25-49.jpg)




Sagev:  One less clone for the Republic.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/25-50.jpg)



Sagev:   Droid, check their communications.  And notify Dooku we’ve secured their gunship.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/25-51.jpg)




Meanwhile, back at the base on Oner…

Sagev over comlink:   ……we’ll soon have the location of the Jedi.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/25-98.jpg)



Count Dooku:   You see, Viceroy.  Everything is under control.  You may begin landing your ships.
Nute Gunray:   Excellent, my Lord.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2025-27/25-99.jpg)



TO BE CONTINUED……
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: CHEWIE on March 13, 2006, 03:05 PM
Wow, I wasn't expecting another update so quickly!  I like the additional Battle Droids in this one.   ;)

The first chatper was great, that was a great environment you used, something totally new and fresh.  Well done on the dialogue here, Nute Gunray was perfect.  Tha't exactly how I think he would act in the given situation.

The second chapter was nice too, it's always hard to write those Anakin/Padme scenes but you did a good job.  Too bad there aren't more Padme figures to use for scenes like that but you did a great job with it.  The little elephants seemed a bit out of line with what you might see, but still a good set piece.

The final chapter was really good too, nice seeing clone pilots in the action some.  I am curious what the "creature" is though.  I wonder what it could be?

 :P
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: Clone Commander on March 13, 2006, 05:26 PM
Awesome update SA!  ;D
I like the 2nd one, kind of shows how anakin gets control over the 501st and I wonder what the monster could be.
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: Smartypants1635 on March 13, 2006, 07:25 PM
Good job SA.
Are you and chewie collaborating the chapter whit the creature, it might be a trench back :D

Anyway you did a good job on the script for Anakin and Padme, that must be really hard because you have to capture the way they act when they are together, which is totally differant then when they are sperated.
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on March 14, 2006, 12:02 PM
Thanx again guys for feedback.  It is taking longer each time to get these updates.  :P

CHEWIE  Thought you might like those battle droids, CHEWIE!  ;)

This update is almost a month after my last one, chapters 22-24.  I was beginning to worry that people had forgotten the story. I finally got a Nute/Rune!  Their personalities are easy to write but fun.  they should appear in the next couple of chapters.  The Anakin/Padme scenes are really hard to write b/c they are just "talking".  I tried to give this chapter a different element versus the last one (chapter 12).  Since the story has progressed, both Anakin and Padme have changed.  But this may be the last in-depth one I will do for the story, b/c it really slows the story.  The clone pilots were fun.  They don't have much articulation, but still have enough to get some decent poses.  The "creature" should appear in the next chapters, and I hope it won't disappoint.  A lot of people have commented about "what could it be?"  And I agree, Padme needs more figures!!!  The elephants appeared in more pics than I realized.  :-[

Clone Cmdr:  Glad someone liked the Anakin/Padme chapter.  Even I had my doubts about that one, but it was necessary as part of the whole story.  Stay tuned for the "creature".

Smartypants:  Don't understand your first comment about the "creature" and collaborating with CHEWIE.  I did get those SAGA battle droids from CHEWIE, but the "creature" is all my own.  Nothing too original tho.  Thanx for the comments on the dialogue between Anakin/Padme.  Their personalites are very different when they're apart, but they are changing based on the events that have occured, and will occur...

Thanx again for the comments!  Hopefully I can begin work on the next 3 chapters soon.  I've been dragging my feet... 8)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: BrentS on March 14, 2006, 12:24 PM
I just wanted to say that I've started reading your Photonovels and am VERY impressed with you story telling.  Your images are great and I think you do good job using "everyday" stuff in the backgrounds.

Anyway, I'm still a ways back in your story but I wanted to at least let you know that people ARE still reading it!
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: CHEWIE on March 14, 2006, 12:38 PM
I think that Smarty was referring to the Trenchback custom I made a while back - (http://www.thecustomalliance.com/cook/TrenchBack1.jpg)

 :P
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: Smartypants1635 on March 14, 2006, 06:17 PM
hmmm, just sounded like something you guys might do.
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: In Rem on March 14, 2006, 10:32 PM
S_A_

You have the Separatist leadership dynamic down PERFECTLY. I enjoyed every bit of this update, but your treatment of Dooku and Grievous is *awesome*.

I can hear them both like they were popping out of a film!

Nice progress with your story. I'm looking forward to seeing how things develop next time. :)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on March 15, 2006, 10:20 AM
Thanx for the feedback guys!

BRENTS:  Glad to hear from you.  Enjoy the previous chapters. Let me know when you catch up and how everything flowed.  Always looking for more stuff around the house to include in my stories.  Thanx for the compliments on my storytelling.  :)  This photonovel has been a lot of fun.

CHEWIE:  I remember that custom.  Very cool looking.  Ugly, but cool.  My "creature" will probably make an appearance within the next update, if I can photograph it correctly.   I don't recall seeing that custom in your Rykrof story yet, CHEWIE...

SMARTYPANTS:   I did have CHEWIE create a SA Commander Bacara for me.  He may show up later.  Perhaps CHEWIE and me will work on a photonovel together!  Imagine the possibilities!

IN REM:  Thanx for the compliments on the Separatist leaders.  Each of them have a distinct personality that they play off each other easily.  Glad I have Nute/Rune now to include in the convesations between Grievous and Dooku.  All the Seps will be involved heavily thru the rest of the story.

Beginning to work on the next 3 chapters.  There will be two more updates until the end of Act II.  8)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: CHEWIE on March 15, 2006, 10:39 AM
SA, that creature will show up eventually in my series, on a nasty planet.  I can't wait to do that.

That's an interesting idea, if you want I could maybe work on some effects shots for you sometime if you want.

 :P
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on March 15, 2006, 12:04 PM
SA, that creature will show up eventually in my series, on a nasty planet.  I can't wait to do that.

That's an interesting idea, if you want I could maybe work on some effects shots for you sometime if you want.

 :P

Yeah, perhaps a short story.  We both are more than busy with our regualr lives, not including our photonovel lives.  Let me think of some ideas..... :)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: jedipurge on March 17, 2006, 11:24 AM
SA another great story.  your posing of the figs even in the simplest position seems to gives some serious realism when connected to the dialogue.  and of course your use of "every day" background scenery is classic and blends in perfectly with your story.  and i'm pretty sure i have an idea of what the creature is, scroll down  ;)
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a polar bear  ;D
no no a wampa  :)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on March 18, 2006, 03:29 PM
JEDIPURGE  Thanx for the feedback.  And thanx for noticing the posing of the figs in every shot.  Since some of my chapters rely on heavy dialogue, I try to pose each fig differently in each shot, and try to get different angles.  Although I am running out of "everyday" background scenery!  Time to let my wife make a run to Garden Ridge or a antique shop.  ;)

The "creature" is coming soon......heopfully it won't disappoint with all this hype about it.  :-\
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: Reid on March 18, 2006, 03:52 PM
Excellent update Longhorn. I liked Anakin's flashback, and seeing Clone Pilots in combat.
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: CHEWIE on March 19, 2006, 11:28 AM
The creature... mind if I take a stab at what it could be?

 :P
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: Clone Commander on March 19, 2006, 11:41 AM
A giant Koala wearing dentures?  :P

 ??? I have no idea.
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: CHEWIE on March 19, 2006, 04:07 PM
I'm thinking it could be something I had almost used in a photonovel.

(http://actionfiguresbygofigure.com/media/cavetroll.jpg)

I've been thinking about it but feel I need to modify it a lot to not be so LOTR.

 :P
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: BrentS on March 19, 2006, 04:48 PM
I'm thinking it could be something I had almost used in a photonovel.

(http://actionfiguresbygofigure.com/media/cavetroll.jpg)

I've been thinking about it but feel I need to modify it a lot to not be so LOTR.

 :P

Not seeing any photo....
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: CHEWIE on March 19, 2006, 04:50 PM
It's showing for me Brent... if you aren't getting it, it's a Cave Troll from LOTR.

 :P
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: BrentS on March 19, 2006, 04:51 PM
It's showing for me Brent... if you aren't getting it, it's a Cave Troll from LOTR.

 :P


Hmmmm.  I get  a little black "X"
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: CHEWIE on March 19, 2006, 04:53 PM
Now it's doing that for me too.  What the heck is going on... ok, surely one of these images will work -

(http://www.collectoybles.com.au/catalog/images/lotrttcavetroll.jpg)

(http://www.maranwe.com/assets/images/db_images/db_Cave_Troll1.jpg)

 :P
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on March 20, 2006, 11:29 AM
Nope, nice guess CHEWIE!

I don't collect anything from LOTR, but I did enjoy the movies greatly.

The "creature" should be in the next update.  It is SW related, if that is a clue...

Just stay tuned guys!  ;D
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: Artoo on March 20, 2006, 12:09 PM
Is it the rhino thing from AOTC?Or the rancor?
Also,on RS you said your having problems finding TSC,so if I see an extra Cody I'll pick it up & put it on Ebay for you.I don't do trading so I'll make sure you win at the starting bid.
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on March 20, 2006, 12:17 PM
Cool!  Thanx ARTOO!

I've had a hard time finding anything at Target, which is the only place to find the GEO and CORUSCANT waves.  I still have hope tho! 

And you're close on the guesses.  But I will not reveal anything until I finish the next update!
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: Artoo on March 21, 2006, 09:54 PM
Your welcome,so when is the next chapters(s)?
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on March 22, 2006, 09:24 AM
Your welcome,so when is the next chapters(s)?

As soon as you find me a Commander Cody!  ;D

But seriously, the next update should be in a few weeks.  I can't give a definite date, but I just completed the shooting of chapter 28.  That chapter alone has over 70 pics, which has me thinking about breaking it into two chapters.

Hopefully I can shoot chapters 29 & 30 over the next week, which will put the update in two weeks...hopefully!

Stay tuned... 8)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: jedipurge on March 22, 2006, 02:04 PM
it's a tauntaun on crack  ??? no too obvious.  either way looking forward to 2 weeks.
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: Darth_Ennis on March 22, 2006, 03:16 PM
Man S.A.Longhorn, I'm so far behind on this one, its going to take me a little while to catch up. Ill comment more on this after Ive read the whole thing up til now. Great story so far, Im really enjoying it.
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on March 23, 2006, 02:29 PM
Thanx ENNIS.  I hope you do catch up since the story is moving a little faster now, especially with the next update.  I really like how the pics came out for the next chapters.

UPDATE - I finished shooting chapter 29 yesterday, so I just need one more.  I should finish that one by Monday, so I expect to post the next 3 chapters by the end of next week.  ;D

Stay tuned...
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: Darth_Ennis on March 23, 2006, 02:35 PM
Chapter 29. ??? Man Im behind. better get to readin.
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: Darth_Ennis on March 23, 2006, 04:36 PM
Finally Im up to date. Now on with the comments. So far this has been an exceptional PN sereis. I love the fact that you actually gave the commanders some character development. Their personalaties are very different and very distinct. Excellent job. I also love the concept of 'Shade",Id like to borrow that character if youll allow me. I'm slowly gathering ideas for my own PN and he will fit a niche nicely.I really like thre B/W effects for the flashbacks as well. Excellent job I look forward to more.
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on March 24, 2006, 12:42 PM
Glad you got caught up, ENNIS! 

The commanders have been a lot of fun.  I thought it would be interesting to fill in their personalities a bit more, showcasing each of their personalities and their relationship each had with their Jedi counterpart (Adi & Deviss, Aayla & Bly, Ki-Adi & Bacara, and Tiin & EZ).  They can't all be the same!  And there will be more Clones and Jedi in the rest of the story.

Feel free to use Shade.  I had to fill a void in my story as well, so I created the character of Shade to assist Mace in searching for Dooku, Grievous, and Sidious.  He has been a lot of fun to write about and will have an important role the rest of the way.

The B/W and Sepia photos were crucial to tell different parts of the story.  I am surprised they worked, and have become some of my favorite scenes.

And as of today, I have completed the next two chapters, including the dialogue.  Need to shoot the 3rd chapter this weekend.  The update is on schedule for next week. Stay tuned... 8)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: Clone Commander on March 24, 2006, 03:53 PM
Woohoo a future update!
This has become on of my favorite photo-novels, its fantastic!  ;D
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: Artoo on March 25, 2006, 08:05 PM
I'm hunting for you SA!The only luck I have had so far is Foul but I'll keep looking for us.Also do you care if it's the UGH Cody or regular?
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on March 25, 2006, 11:41 PM
ARTOO:  Nah, it doesn't matter what type.  I'm also on the hunt here too.   :)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on March 31, 2006, 01:03 PM
Well, good news!  I have finished chapters 28, 29, & 30.  They are posted below.

Feel free to give me some feedback regarding the action shots.  Those pics can be difficult to write dialogue since I don't have any special effects added in.  I'm open to suggestions there, but hopefully the action pics are still easy to understand.

And the long-awaited premiere of the "creature"!!!

Enjoy!  8)

EDIT -   I swapped out some of my simple pics for some awesome action pics that SHELLACHEAD at Rebelscum added some special effects to.  For some of the action sequences to really work, the laser blasts were desperately needed.  Thanx again, SHELLACHEAD!
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on March 31, 2006, 01:05 PM
DARK ILLUSIONS

Chapter 28



Jedi Master Saesee Tiin and Commander EZ continue their search for the Separatist base on Oner, while destroying more anti-aircraft turrets.



Commander EZ:   Another turret?  What is that?  Number 12?
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-1_fx.jpg)



Saesee Tiin:   15.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-2_fx.jpg)



THUD!
Commander EZ:   Theta, contact the Avenger.  Tell them do conduct another sweep of the area and determine how close that creature is.
Theta:   Yes, sir.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-3.jpg)



Theta:   Come in, Avenger, come in……
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-4.jpg)



Theta:   No response, sir.
Commander EZ:   We’re probably out of range.  I suggest we return to the ship, General.
Saesee Tiin:   ……hmmmm……
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-5.jpg)




Saesee Tiin:   ……there’s something is not right here…
Theta:   Sir, our signal is being jammed.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-6.jpg)





Commander EZ:   Impossible!  Who would be jamming us? (http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-7.jpg)


Saesee Tiin:   The gunship……is lost.  We better get moving.
Commander EZ:   What?!  How do you know that?
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-9.jpg)




Saesee Tiin:   We’re being hunted now.  And not just by that creature.  Let’s move.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-10.jpg)




Commander EZ:   And go where?  General, with all due respect, we don’t even know where we are.  I suggest we discuss this first before we---
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-11.jpg)




Saesee Tiin:   MOVE!  NOW!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-12.jpg)




Epsilon:   There is something moving out there……
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-13.jpg)




Commander EZ:   Troopers……form a circle around me and the General!  Immediately!
Clone Troopers:   YES, SIR!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-15.jpg)





Commander EZ:   Steady……wait for it…
Saesee Tiin:   This is not a good idea, Commander.  We should head for higher ground.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-16.jpg)


Upsilon:   Battle droids!!!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-14.jpg)




Commander EZ:   Open fire!!!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-17_fx.jpg)





LASER BLASTS!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-18_fx.jpg)




Upsilon   I’m hit!
Commander EZ:   Keep firing!  Keep firing!!!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-19_fx.jpg)




Epsilon:   More battle droids on this side!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-20.jpg)




Zeta:   Great…more target practice!
Epsilon:   Droideka!!!!  COVER!!!  COVER!!!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-21.jpg)




Zeta:   Too late!!!
Epsilon:   Arghhh!!!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-22_fx.jpg)




Lambda:   More droids……behind us!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-23_fx.jpg)




Commander EZ:   Fall back!!!  Fall back!!! 
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-24_fx.jpg)




Saesee Tiin:   Head for the woods!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-25_fx.jpg)




CLASH!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-26.jpg)




PFFFFZZZZZT!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-27.jpg)




Lambda:   They’re pursuing us!
Kappa:   Returning fire!!!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-28.jpg)




Lambda:   Look out!  Magna droid!!!  Uggghhh……..
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-29.jpg)




Kappa:   I’m hit……there’s too many of them…
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-30.jpg)




Commander EZ:   My rifle is jammed!  My rifle is jammed!  Cover me!!!
Omicron:   Y-Y-Yes, sir…
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-31.jpg)




Commander EZ:   Nevermind……make a run for it!!!
Theta:   Yes, sir!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-32.jpg)



Omicron:   What was that?  I didn’t copy??  S-S-Sir?
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-33.jpg)




Omicron:   Aaahhhh!!!!!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-34.jpg)




Battle Droid 252C:   The 2 remaining clones have moved into the woods.
Sagev:   Let them go.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-35.jpg)




Sagev:   It is the Jedi we want.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-36.jpg)




Saesee Tiin:   Just me?
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-37.jpg)




Sagev:   Your mission has failed.  Your men have deserted you.  Surrender now, Jedi!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-38.jpg)



Saesee Tiin:   Never.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-39.jpg)



(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-40.jpg)




(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-41.jpg)



Sagev:   The situation is hopeless.  I’ll give you one last chance to surrender, Jedi!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-43.jpg)



Saesee Tiin:   The Force is my ally.
FORCE PUSH
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-42.jpg)






Saesee Tiin:   Now tell me, young warrior.  You don’t seem to be part of the Separatists movement, so who do you fight for?
Sagev:   You fool!  I fight for my people!  The people that the Republic has forsaken!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-44.jpg)




Saesee Tiin:   What people?  Where do you come from?  And who recruited---
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-46.jpg)




 
Saesee Tiin:   Grievous!
General Grievous:   JEDI SCUM!!!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-48.jpg)




(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-49.jpg)




(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-50.jpg)



(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-52.jpg)




General Grievous:   What’s the matter, Jedi?  Tiring already? 
Saesee Tiin:   Your arrogance is your weakness, General.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-51.jpg)





General Grievous:   And your ignorance is yours!  Get him!!
Saesee Tiin:   Can’t you fight your own fights, General?
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-53.jpg)





Punch!
Saesee Tiin:   Ugghh…
General Grievous:   Of course I can…
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-54.jpg)




Punch!
General Grievous:   …if I wanted you dead! 
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-55.jpg)




General Grievous:   Actually, your death would be preferable to what awaits you, Jedi.
Saesee Tiin:   …ugh……
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-56.jpg)





General Grievous:   Bring him to the base.
Battle Droid 252C:   Yes, sir.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-57.jpg)




General Grievous:   Count Dooku will be most pleased.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-58.jpg)




Meanwhile, deep within the woods of Oner…




Commander EZ:   (panting) Are we……in the…clear….
Theta:   (panting) Yes, sir……the droids……have given up their……pursuit…
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-59.jpg)




Commander EZ:   (panting) How many men with us?
Theta:   (panting) It is just us, sir.  No one else made it out.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-60.jpg)


Commander EZ:   What?!  But how can……I gave everyone the order to retreat!
Theta:   Yes, sir. 
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-61.jpg)





Commander EZ:   This rock……just moved……
Theta:   Sir……
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-62.jpg)




Theta:   ……I don’t think that’s a rock.
Commander EZ:   Then what is it………… 
RRRRRRROOOOOOAAAAARRRRRRR!!!
 (http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-63.jpg)





Commander EZ:   It’s the creature!!!  Take him down!!!
Theta:   Yes, sir!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-64.jpg)





Theta:   Sir??  Where are you going?!?!
THUD!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-65.jpg)




TTTTTHHHHUUUUUUUDDDDDD!!!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-66.jpg)




THUD! THUD! THUD! THUD!
Commander EZ:   Have to……get back……to the ship……
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-67.jpg)



THUD! THUD! THUD! THUD!
Commander EZ:   AAAHHH!!!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-68.jpg)





RRRRROOOOOOAAAAARRRRRR!!!
Commander EZ:   You won’t take me without a fight!!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-69.jpg)





CRUNCH
Commander EZ:   AARGH….my ribs!!!!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-70.jpg)




Commander EZ:   NNNNOOOOOOO!!
CRUNCH! CRUNCH!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/28-71.jpg)





Special thanx to SHELLACHEAD at Rebelscum for adding the laser blasts, lightsabers, and other special effects in the above pics.  Awesome work, buddy!
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on March 31, 2006, 01:07 PM
DARK ILLUSIONS

Chapter 29



Following the battle, the Trade Federation completes the landing of their remaining core ships.



Viceroy Gunray:   All of our ships have landed, Count Dooku.  What about the Jedi?  Is he dead yet?
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/29-1.jpg)



Count Dooku:   You need not worry about Master Tiin.  We have him well under control.  General Grievous is interrogating him as we speak.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/29-2.jpg)


Rune Haako:   What?!  You didn’t kill him?!
Viceroy Gunray:   This is outrageous!  It is too dangerous to hold a Jedi captive!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/29-3.jpg)



Count Dooku:   Yes, Master Tiin is still alive.  He is much more valuable to us alive than dead, Viceroy. 
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/29-4.jpg)



Viceroy Gunray:   I do no agree with this, Count.  What would Lord Sidious say?
Count Dooku:   My Master has full knowledge of this plot.  But perhaps you would feel better if you saw the Jedi yourself.  Follow me…
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/29-5.jpg)




Count Dooku:   Trust me when I say everything is proceeding as planned.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/29-6.jpg)


General Grievous:   Pull!  I want to see him suffer!
Saesee Tiin:   …………
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/29-7.jpg)



General Grievous:   Pathetic Jedi…
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/29-8.jpg)



General Grievous:   As soon as Dooku is done with you……your life will belong to me, Jedi!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/29-9.jpg)



Count Dooku:  Patience, General.  His time will come. 
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/29-10.jpg)


Count Dooku:   How are we doing this morning, Master Tiin?  I apologize for your accommodations, but your visit was……unexpected.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/29-11.jpg)



Viceroy Gunray:   Now I understand!  We will demand the Republic surrender in exchange for the life of this Jedi!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/29-12.jpg)




Count Dooku:   The Supreme Chancellor would never surrender the War just because a Jedi was foolish enough to be captured.  Nevertheless, this will be an embarrassment for the Republic, I can assure you.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/29-14.jpg)



Count Dooku:   It is time to make an example of Master Tiin and the arrogance of the Jedi Council……something that should have been done a long time ago.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/29-15.jpg)




Saesee Tiin:   Your hate has blinded you, Dooku.  Only you would turn this War into personal vendetta against the Jedi Order.  How many more people will die for your cause?
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/29-16.jpg)




Count Dooku:   Oh, I’m afraid you’re mistaken, Master Tiin.  This is not MY personal vendetta. 
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/29-17.jpg)




Count Dooku:   Leave us.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/29-18.jpg)




Count Dooku:   It’s curious, don’t you think Master Tiin, that the Council has been unable to discover the identity of Darth Sidious.  When I told Master Kenobi about his controlling of the Senate, I would have wagered the Council would have destroyed the Sith Lord by now. 
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/29-19.jpg)



Count Dooku:   But the Council isn’t even sure if Darth Sidious exists.  For all you know, I could be Darth Sidious.  Or, could it be possible that the Council…is also under the control of Sidious? 
Saesee Tiin:   Never.  The Council would be aware of it.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/29-20.jpg)




Count Dooku:   Perhaps…but surely you can’t believe the Republic is worth saving with corruption running rampant?  I’m sorry, old friend, but the beloved Republic that you and Master Windu once served  is a shadow of itself.  It must be rebuilt…with one, strong leader.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/29-30.jpg)




Count Dooku:   But enough politics.  You and Master Windu are close friends, are you not?  Perhaps we should “reach” out to him……and enlighten him of your current situation.
Saesee Tiin:   What are you going to---aaaaaahhhhhhhhhh!!!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/29-21.jpg)


Meanwhile, light years away, at the Jedi Temple on Coruscant…


Mace Windu:   Saesee……in pain……so much pain……
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/29-22a.jpg)



Saesee Tiin:   aaaaahhhhhhhhh….
Count Dooku:   I’m sorry, old friend.  I wish there was another way...
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/29-23.jpg)




Saesee Tiin:   ………………………
Count Dooku:   That should be enough……for now.  Enter, General Grievous!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/29-24.jpg)




Count Dooku:   I have concluded my conversation with Master Tiin.
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Count Dooku:   You many continue with your……interrogation, General. 
General Grievous:   With pleasure…
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/29-26.jpg)



General Grievous:   Now…where were we?
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/29-27.jpg)



PUNCH!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/29-34.jpg)



PUNCH!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/29-29.jpg)



Mace Windu:   ……Saesee……
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/29-38a.jpg)



SLAM!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/29-28.jpg)



BANG!
Shade:(thinking)   ……that interrogation is not allowed under Republic law………
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PUNCH!
Shade:(thinking)   ……must rescue the Jedi……
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SLAM!
Shade:(thinking)   ……but Windu said not to engage the enemy……
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BANG!
Shade:(thinking)   ……I will follow orders……and report their location……need a coded signal……
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/29-36.jpg)


SLAM!
Shade:(thinking)   ……the gunship……
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Later, at the hangar holding the captured gunship, Avenger…




Battle Droid 647F:   Security check complete.  Re-commencing…
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Battle Droid 414A:   Roger roger!
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Battle Droid 647F:   Did you hear something?
Battle Droid 414A:   Negative.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/29-42.jpg)




Battle Droid 414A:   Continuing security check.
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Battle Droid 414A:   Error---!
PPPFFFZZZTTT!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/29-44.jpg)




Battle Droid 647F:   Repeat.  Could not confirm last communication.
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Battle Droid 647F:   Alert!  Alert!  Possible intruder!
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Battle Droid 647F:   Possible---
PPPFFFZZZTTT
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Shade:   ……now to send my report……
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Shade:   ……found General Grievous, Count Dooku, and Trade Federation leadership……sending coordiantes……Oner system……
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Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on March 31, 2006, 01:08 PM
DARK ILLUSIONS

Chapter 30



As the War rages across the Outer Rim, members of the Jedi Council discuss the ongoing events and the new Galactic Security.



Ki-Adi Mundi:   Despite the ongoing War, Palpatine is pushing for an answer regarding which Jedi will serve with the Galactic Security.  And if we don’t respond quickly, he will nominate someone during the next session with the Senate.
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Kit Fisto:   If the Chancellor nominates his own Jedi, it will appear that the Council is indecisive or unresponsive to the needs of the Chancellor.  We should choose someone before he is given that opportunity. 
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Yoda:   Elect a Jedi to direct the new Clones, we must.  But remain focused on the War, if we are to find Grievous and Dooku.   
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Ki-Adi Mundi:   I agree with Master Yoda.  We are receiving daily reports from the front lines, but the exact location of the General remains elusive.
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Obi-Wan Kenobi:   But Master Yoda, with so few Jedi to fight the War, how can we spare one to remain on Coruscant full-time?  Surely the Chancellor understands the situation we’re in.
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Yoda:   If criticize the Chancellor we begin, careful we must be.  Words of the dark side, they are.
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Kit Fisto:   We must continue to support the Chancellor, at least  until we find Grievous or Dooku.  Once they’ve been eliminated, the Separatist Leadership will dissolve and this War will end.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/30-7.jpg)





Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Perhaps we should promote a Jedi Knight to the level of Master.   Someone who has proven himself during this War.  Someone like……Anakin?
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Ki-Adi Mundi:   He is too young for such an assignment.  And based on your description, far to reckless.  Must I remind you of the incident in the training room with the Padawan?
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Kit Fisto:   Here comes Master Windu.  Perhaps he can offer some insight on these issues.
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Mace Windu:   I’ve just received confirmation from one of our secret operatives.  Count Dooku and General Grievous are in the Oner System.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/30-11.jpg)





Obi-Wan Kenobi:   The Oner System?  Isn’t Master Tiin there on a reconnaissance mission?
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/30-12.jpg)




Mace Windu:   Yes, in search of a rumored Separatist base.  But there’s more.  I saw Saesee……in a vision……being held captive.  Something must have happened to his squad because he is now in the custody of Count Dooku.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/30-13.jpg)




Ki-Adi Mundi:   But how could they have captured Saesee?  His mission was only to sweep each planet to confirm the rumors of a hidden base.  This would be the second time Grievous has ambushed a Jedi Council member.
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Mace Windu:   Dooku had knowledge of Saesee’s location, no doubt.  But unlike Master Gallia, Dooku has kept Saesee alive.  He wants us to try to rescue him.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/30-15.jpg)




Yoda:   Chosen the final battleground, Dooku has.  Organize a strike team, with multiple Jedi, if we are to defeat Dooku and his droid army.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/30-16.jpg)




Mace Windu:   I will lead the attack myself.  I have a contact on Oner that will give us their precise location. 
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/30-17.jpg)



Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Anakin and I are ready to leave immediately.
Kit Fisto:  Count me in.  And may I suggest we include Commander Gree.  His knowledge of the system will serve us well.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/30-19.jpg)





Mace Windu:   It will take some time to organize a Clone battalion, but we should have a small squad ready to depart immediately. 
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2028-30/30-20.jpg)




Yoda:   Meet with the Chancellor, I will.  Due to these latest events, allow us more time to nominate a Jedi, he must.
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Ki-Adi Mundi:   Agreed.  Our focus must be on rescuing Saesee.  The Chancellor will have to wait for our announcement until we return. 
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Ki-Adi Mundi:   I will contact Commander Bacara and join you as soon as I can.
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Mace Windu:   Then it’s settled.  May the Force be with us.
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To Be Continued……
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (UPDATE March 31, 2006)
Post by: Smartypants1635 on March 31, 2006, 02:55 PM
Sweeet EZ died hahah loser this battle is gonna be epic ;D
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (UPDATE March 31, 2006)
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on March 31, 2006, 04:40 PM
Glad you liked it, SMARTY.  Commander EZ had it coming.  ;)

Be sure to check out chapter 28 again, as I swapped out some pics that SHELLACHEAD did for me.  He creates some great special effects!
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (UPDATE March 31, 2006)
Post by: Clone Commander on March 31, 2006, 06:31 PM
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Commander EZ had it coming. 
 

Definitely!
Ez was a total dink, he abandoned his troops and his jedi.  ;D

I cant wait for the big epic battle, keep em' coming!  :)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (UPDATE March 31, 2006)
Post by: Jedi_Assassin on March 31, 2006, 06:49 PM
yeah. if he didn't i wouldve
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (UPDATE March 31, 2006)
Post by: Reid on March 31, 2006, 07:22 PM
Yes!

EZ died!

So satisfying to see that ****tard become lunch for a rancor.

Looking forward to your next chapter!
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (UPDATE March 31, 2006)
Post by: Clone Commander on March 31, 2006, 10:34 PM
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So satisfying to see that ****tard become lunch for a rancor.

Yes it was!

Well SA you've made me want to go out and get a shadow trooper  :) .
He looks so cool, I cant wait to see how this all develops.
Will you include the new utapau trooper ect. into the next chapters?  :)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (UPDATE March 31, 2006)
Post by: Clone Commander on March 31, 2006, 10:38 PM
Oh and how could I forget!

Very nice work on the laser blasts and sabers!  :)
Damn its getting better and better SA!  ;D
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (UPDATE March 31, 2006)
Post by: PenDragon on March 31, 2006, 10:47 PM
Very nice over all - Fantastic images from both you  & SHELLACHEAD - And I really dug  the work on Saesee's interrogation, even though he's on of my favorite jedi...
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (UPDATE March 31, 2006)
Post by: Artoo on April 1, 2006, 01:43 AM
WOO!I was right it was the rancor!I can't wait for the next chapter!
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (UPDATE March 31, 2006)
Post by: CHEWIE on April 1, 2006, 05:42 PM
More nice updates SA.  How many chapters is it now in the Dark Illusions storyline?  You've made so many and I'm amazed at how fast you can churn these out.  It seems to take me forever to make each story I do.  But most of my time in this hobby still goes towards customizing.  I wish I was as good as you are at finding backdrop areas around the house that fit in so well.  I usually end up spending too much time trying to construct sets.

When I first got a chance to look at these yesterday, it seemed as though some of the pics were different sizes.  Was that just my computer acting weird?  Also I like the digital effects that Shellachead did on them, it livens them up a lot.  I guess he did some pics but not all of them that way.  It would be awesome to see them all that way but your storyline has been very good without them.

I guess I was expecting something different than a rancor to be the monster.  It still worked well but as they are traditionally from Dathomir I wasn't expecting to see one on that planet.  Still great work with it and the sequence worked well with them.  The pics were a little dark overall but still looked nice.

My favorite was the pics of Saesee Tiin bound like that.  That was a genius way to do that.  And seeing more droids definitely makes the Separatists seem like more of a threat.  Great work on this and I look forward to your next update.

 :P





Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (UPDATE March 31, 2006)
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on April 3, 2006, 10:46 AM
Thanx for the feedback guys.  This was big update, but one that I really wanted to do for a while.  The special effects were necessary to bring out the action better.  Hopefully I'll swap out more pics in the days to come.

Clone Commander:  Are you the same Clone Cmdr as the one on the RS boards?  Just wondering...
Figured everybody was going to like EZ being killed.  I tried to make him as annoying as possible, and thought of a dozen different ways to kill him off.  I really liked the way the rancor pics came out so I kept that ending.

The Shadow Trooper is cool in his own way.  CHEWIE discussed this earlier, as to why Hasbro would make a black Clone trooper.  Mostly for money of course, but still a cool little fig. 

V:  Another happy customer!  ;D 

HunterofthePegs:  Another happy reader!  The next three chapters will conclude Act II, but ramps up to Act III.  Shouldn't take too long to create, but not until I kick this flu bug that I got.  :'(

PenDragon:  The effects added in were outstanding.  My fav shot was the clones being killed by the droideka.  Glad to read you like the interrogation scene.  Came up with the idea to tie-up Saesee last minute.  Originally thought to have him free, but thought the impact would look better if he was restrained. 

Artoo:  you nailed the creature, and so did CHEWIE a while back.  But I had to keep quiet until the pics were complete.  Hopefully I can have another update in a two or three weeks.  Stay tuned!

CHEWIE:  Well, I am up through chapter 30.  The entire story may have 45 chapters, but that changes as I make small changes in the story in each chapter, and move some around.

You are right about the size of some of the pics.  That usually depends on how big the pics is when I upload them to Photobucket.  I try to keep them the same size, but if they upload smaller than usual, I can't expand them.  only shrink them.

If I had access to a better program, I might add in more effects myself.  But those programs tend to be expensive, so it limits what I can do.  Very appreciative that SHELLACHEAD volunteered to add-in the effects.

The rancor will be explained in a future chapter.  And the lighting was not very good, which makes the pics hard to see on my monitor at work.  At home, they look fine.  Glad you liked the Saesee part.  And thanx for all your comments!


Fun trivia for everyone:  Most of the names of my "custom" characters are simple names spelled backwards.  However, the name "EZ" came to me a a while ago when the Green clone commander first appeared in stores.  I named him "EZ" because the only reason Hasbro made a Green Commander was b/c it was "EZ money".  We do love our Clones!

Thanx again for all the responses, guys! 
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (UPDATE March 31, 2006)
Post by: Clone Commander on April 9, 2006, 05:58 PM
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Are you the same Clone Cmdr as the one on the RS boards?  Just wondering...
                                                                                   nope  :)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (thru chapter 30)
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on May 12, 2006, 01:09 PM
Well, it has been a LONG time since I updated my story, but I am currently working on the next three chapters.  My mini-break has lasted longer than I originally planned.

Since it has been a while, here is a preview pic for everyone.  Enjoy!

 (http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2031-33/32-3.jpg)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (preview pic)
Post by: CHEWIE on May 12, 2006, 04:01 PM
Looks like an interesting preview, I guess Gree is giving a briefing on a mission, but I guess we'll have to see.  Would look kind of cool to see some of the clones without helmets on, got any AT-TE drivers?

 :)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (thru chapter 30)
Post by: Reid on May 12, 2006, 04:15 PM
Quote from: S_A_Longhorn link=topic=9897.msg225655#msg225655
 [img
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Professer Gree teaching students at the University Of Coruscant...
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (preview pic)
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on May 12, 2006, 04:42 PM
Looks like an interesting preview, I guess Gree is giving a briefing on a mission, but I guess we'll have to see.  Would look kind of cool to see some of the clones without helmets on, got any AT-TE drivers?

 :)

True, but I don't have nearly enough AT Drivers to swap out helmets!  You can't see it in the above pic, but Cody is on the other side of Gree, and he has his helmet off for what it's worth.  ;)

And everytime I look at that pic (and the others in the set), the Orange Clone in the 2nd row to the farthest right looks like he is dozing off.  Just wake him up when the battle begins.  ;D
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (preview pic)
Post by: Darth_Ennis on May 16, 2006, 04:58 PM
Well from what I understand Grees lectures are kinda long winded and drawn out. Its a wonder anyone is still awake. :P Excellent preview I'm looking forward to reading it again.
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (preview pic)
Post by: jedipurge on May 17, 2006, 12:00 PM
Hey SA are you sure he's dozing?  It kinda looks to me like he's trying to get at an itch in real bad spot. ;D
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (preview pic)
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on May 19, 2006, 03:48 PM
Here is the latest update to the DARK ILLUSIONS story, chapters 31, 32, & 33.  A lot of dialogue I had to work thru, but hopefully the end result is good.

Enjoy! 8)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (preview pic)
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on May 19, 2006, 03:51 PM
DARK ILLUSIONS

Chapter 31



At the request of the Supreme Chancellor, Jedi Knight Anakin Skywalker is summoned to Palpatine’s office for an unofficial meeting.



Mas Amedda:   Everything is on schedule.
Chancellor Palpatine:   Excellent.  We will discuss this matter at a late time.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2031-33/33-1.jpg)



Chancellor Palpatine:   Anakin, thank you for seeing me on such short notice.
Anakin Skywalker:   I always have time for the Supreme Chancellor.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2031-33/33-2.jpg)




Chancellor Palpatine:   Come……let us speak in private……guards, leave us!
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Chancellor Palpatine:   I wanted to extend my best wishes for your upcoming  mission to Oner.  The Jedi Council made a wise choice in selecting you for this assignment.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2031-33/33-4.jpg)



Anakin Skywalker:   Thank you, Chancellor.  But how did you know about the mission?
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2031-33/33-5.jpg)



Chancellor Palpatine:   When a large division of Clone troopers is re-assigned to a remote system like Oner, I take notice.  It is…my army after all.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2031-33/33-6.jpg)



Chancellor Palpatine:   However, I do question the real objective of the mission.  Do you think the Council is serious about defeating the Separatists? 
Anakin Skywalker:   What do you mean?  The Jedi are trying to end this War by finding General Grievous and Count Dooku.
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Chancellor Palpatine:   I hope so.  But why would the Council hide the real objective?  To rescue Master Saesee Tiin?
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Anakin Skywalker:   I…I…don’t know.  I’m sure they have their reasons, Chancellor.
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Chancellor Palpatine:   Perhaps……but to withhold this information from the Senate or from me is suspicious, don’t you think?
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Chancellor Palpatine:   It concerns me that the Council is quick to respond to their own needs…….yet is slow to respond to the needs of the Republic.
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Chancellor Palpatine:   Believe me, I understand the importance of the rescue mission.  Master Tiin is a valuable member of the Jedi Council. 
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Anakin Skywalker:   The Republic could not win this War without him.
Chancellor Palpatine:   Oh, I agree.  But what about you, Anakin?  You should be on the front lines right now, winning this War for the Republic……not waiting for the Council to give you an assignment while sparring with Padawans in the Temple.
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Anakin Skywalker:   You……heard…about that?
Chancellor Palpatine:   Yes, but don’t be embarrassed, Anakin.  You did what had to be done.  The growing arrogance of the Jedi has spread to their Younglings.
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Chancellor Palpatine:   It’s that type of arrogance and lack of cooperation that has the Senate worried.
Anakin Skywalker:   Worried?  About what?
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Chancellor Palpatine:   Well, for example, their delay in deciding which Jedi to appoint to the new 501st Clone Division.  This has been a  matter of extreme urgency, yet, they seem complacent to wait as long as possible.  The Senate is growing impatient.
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Anakin Skywalker:   I had no idea this was going on……
Chancellor Palpatine:   It doesn’t surprise me, since they don’t think it concerns you.
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Chancellor Palpatine:   The very security of this Republic depends on the 501st protecting Coruscant.  Just imagine if certain Senators were killed in an attack on the Senate Chamber?  Or if I was captured during a battle?
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Anakin Skywalker:   The Separatist wouldn’t dare attack Coruscant. 
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Chancellor Palpatine:   One can never be too sure, Anakin.  During these stressful times, all potential threats against the Republic must be watched carefully……even your allies can betray you……including the Jedi Council.
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Anakin Skywalker:   The Council?  The Jedi would never do anything to endanger the Republic.
Chancellor Palpatine:   But can you be sure of that, Anakin?
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Chancellor Palpatine:   What about Count Dooku?  Remember, that he was once a Jedi.  If someone as honored and respected as Dooku can leave the Order and wage a war against the Republic, then what is to prevent another Jedi from attacking the Republic……from within?
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Anakin Skywalker:   That……would never happen……
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Chancellor Palpatine:   Yes, you’re probably right.  But these are the things that I must consider as  the Supreme Chancellor of the Republic. 
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Chancellor Palpatine:   That’s why the 501st is so important.  It is Coruscant’s final line of defense versus all threats, internal and external.
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Chancellor Palpatine:   If the Council refuses to assign a Jedi to the 501st Division,  then I will unfortunately have to make that decision…for the sake of the Republic.  What about……you, Anakin?
Anakin Skywalker:   Me?  Command the 501st? 
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Chancellor Palpatine:   Oh, absolutley.  You are clearly the best person for the job.   Your mere presence will lift the spirits of the people of Coruscant.  Just because the Jedi are blind to your importance, don’t let that hold you back.  The Republic needs your help. 
Anakin Skywalker:   Thank you, Chancellor...but...I think we should wait for the Council’s decision. 
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Chancellor Palpatine:   Every day that passes, the Senate grows more and more restless.  But I will do what I can to maintain order.  We can only hope the Council will decide when you return from Oner.
Anakin Skywalker:   Oner?  I’m sorry, Chancellor, but I have to go.  I’m late for a mission briefing.
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Chancellor Palpatine:   I understand.  I also have matters to attend to. 
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Chancellor Palpatine:   And I think it would be best if we kept this conversation between us…for now.
Anakin Skywalker:   I agree.
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Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (preview pic)
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on May 19, 2006, 03:52 PM
DARK ILLUSIONS

Chapter 32



In the days since the Jedi Council decided to form a task force to rescue Saesee Tiin, Commander Gree was instructed to direct the Mission Briefing of the Oner System.



Commander Gree:   Thank you for coming to this important briefing.  We must be prepared for what awaits us in the Oner System.
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Commander Gree:   We have assembled a specialized Strike Team, that will no doubt be successful in rescuing General Tiin, and hopefully, ending this War. 
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Commander Gree:   With the cooperation of the Jedi, our Strike Team will be separated into teams, each with it’s own objective…
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Obi-Wan Kenobi:   (whispering)   You’re late.
Anakin Skywalker:   (whispering)   Something came up.  Won’t happen again.
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Anakin Skywalker:   (whispering)   Besides, what’s there to know, Master?  Just point me in the direction of Dooku, and I’ll handle the rest.
Obi-Wan Kenobi:   (whispering)   Very funny, Anakin……now pay attention!
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Commander Gree:   Each team will be led by a Clone Commander and several Jedi.  The timing of this mission is critical to the success of all objectives, including the rescue of  General Tiin.
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Commander Gree:   The ground assault will be conducted by the 212th Attack Battalion, led by Commander Cody.  They’ve just returned from a successful campaign.  Congratulations and welcome back.
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Commander Cody:   Thank you, Commander Gree.
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Commander Gree:   Since preliminary reports indicated that General Tiin is being held in the jungles of Oner, I will be directly involved in the rescue operation.  I will be accompanied by three members of the Elite Corps.
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Commander Gree:   Psi, Chi, and Phi are three of the best the Elite Corps has to offer. 
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Commander Gree:   The air campaign will be led by Commander Oddball. 
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Commander Gree:   Commander Oddball will provide cover fire and secondary troops as needed.
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Commander Gree:   The Oner System, for those who are not familiar with it, is made up of various terrains, including grassy plains, freezing mountains, and dense jungles.   A relatively unknown system in the Outer Rim.
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Commander Gree:   However, that quickly changed with the discovery of the Crystal Mines about five years ago.  The unlimited supply of crystal quickly gave way to non-stop excavations that destroyed much of the land on Oner.
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Commander Gree:   The solid crystals caverns became a valuable commodity to everyone in the Galaxy, including the Trade Federation.  Constant battle for control of the system, and specifically the Crystal Mines, has led to the extinction of the native Onerians.
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Commander Gree:   It is rumored that Count Dooku’s family on Serreno invested in the Crystal Mines.  This could explain the Count’s presence there now.
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Commander Gree:   Yes, Commander?
Commander Cody:   What of the reports about rancors living in the Oner System?
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Commander Gree:   Unfortunately, the reports are true.  As part of the ongoing battle for control of Oner, several rancors were transported to Oner to specifically kill the people of Oner.  With the natives wiped out, Oner would be ripe for the taking.
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Commander Gree:   It remains a mystery who coordinated the delivery of the rancors.  The little we know of what happened once the rancors were delivered is based on the news archives during that time.
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Commander Gree:   However, something went wrong during the delivery.  Several rancors escaped their cages prematurely, killing everyone, including the transporters.  Even more curious is the fact that no one claimed ownership of Oner after the incident.  The Crystal Mines have remained untouched for the past several years.
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Commander Gree:   Ever since that incident, the rancors have lived in isolation.  Having completely wiped out the population of Oner, we presume their numbers have decreased over time.  Unfortunately, we do not have a count on how many still exist today, so be cautious.
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Commander Gree:   Based on the last transmissions of the doomed Avenger, the Separatists’ base is deep within the jungles of Oner.  Too deep to attack by air and only accessible by foot.  Most likely  General Tiin is being held there, by Count Dooku or General Grievous.
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Commander Gree:   Generals Windu and Fisto will assist the Elite Corps in rescuing General Tiin.
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Commander Gree:   Meanwhile, the 212th Attack Battalion will attack the Separatists’ outside defenses.
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Commander Gree:   Generals Kenobi and Skywalker will be with them.  Anyone who surrenders or is taken prisoner will be detained and questioned.
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Anakin Skywalker:   (whispering)   Good, at least we get all the real action.
Obi-Wan Kenobi:   ……
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Commander Gree:   Finally as a bid of caution, this siege may last several days.  Please note the vegetation on Oner.  Most of the plants are poisonous and what little vegetation is edible has most likely been contaminated by the Separatist Army.  Be sure to carry enough rations.
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Commander Gree:   And with this, I bid everyone good luck.  The Republic is depending on us. Dismissed!
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Phi:   Double-check all scanning equipment before we leave.
Psi & Chi:   Yes, sir!
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Kit Fisto:   Good work, Commander.  This information will serve us well.
Commander Gree:   Thank you, General.  The men are prepared for the task at hand.
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Mace Windu:   Commander, I have information from a secret operative already on Oner.  His information may help us locate Saesee Tiin quickly.  Please follow me…
Commander Gree:   Of course……
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Commander Cody:   We depart in less than an hour.  Get as much rest as you can between here and Oner.  You may not get much once we arrive.  I’ll see you on board.
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Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Commander Cody?  Please allow me to formally introduce myself.  I am Obi-Wan Kenobi and this is……
Anakin Skywalker:  …his trusted bodyguard, Anakin Skywalker.
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Commander Cody:   Yes, of course, the famed Heroes of the Republic.  With you guys on board, we are assured of victory.  My men and I look forward to working with you.
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Anakin Skywalker:   The 212th Battalion also has made a name for itself during this War.  That’s good news, Master!  I won’t be the only one having to watch you! 
Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Watching me?  Now wait just a minute…
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Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Let me give you fair warning about this young one, Cody.  He is as reckless as he is confident.  Be sure not to fire on him by mistake.  Wouldn’t want to tarnish that “Hero” reputation, now would we, Anakin?
Anakin Skywalker:   Oh very funny, Master.
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Commander Cody:   Don’t worry, General.  The 212th will never let you down.  Follow me on board and I’ll introduce you to the rest of the squad.
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Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (preview pic)
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on May 19, 2006, 03:53 PM
DARK ILLUSIONS

Chapter 33



With tension high & rumors running rampant about a Jedi being held hostage, Supreme Chancellor Palpatine addresses the Republic via the HoloNet.



Mas Amedda:   A special message from the Supreme Chancellor of the Republic.
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Chancellor Palpatine:   Thank you and good evening.  I come to you from my office on the capital world of Coruscant, the shining beacon for democracy in the galaxy.
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Chancellor Palpatine:   Recent events may have alarmed the masses about how the War is progressing.  In short, the War goes well.  We have regained control of the Inner and Mid Rims.  As every day passes, we make tremendous strides to defeating the Confederate of Independent Systems.  All the while, we still maintain the  security necessary to protect our most precious freedoms.
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Chancellor Palpatine:   Within the past few days, our intelligence has found the location of a secret Separatist base.  We can only hope that both Count Dooku and General Grievous are there, and will be defeated by the Clone Armies.
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Chancellor Palpatine:   However, several rumors are running rampant that a certain member of the Jedi Council has been captured by enemy forces. 
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Chancellor Palpatine:   I can personally assure everyone that these rumors are baseless and false.  It is merely another attempt by the Separatists to strike fear into the people of the Republic.
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Chancellor Palpatine:   If these rumors were true, the Jedi Council would have certainly informed the Senate or myself.
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Chancellor Palpatine:   There is also news to celebrate closer to home.  The newly formed Galactic Security is now fully functional, serving and protecting the people of Coruscant.
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Chancellor Palpatine:   Please allow me the opportunity to publicly thank the Senate for their never-ending work to pass this most important security measure.   The Capital of the Republic is now a safer and more secure place.
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Chancellor Palpatine:   The Galactic Security is separated into two, distinct divisions.  Each division has been trained  with skills that are far more advanced than the normal Clones.  The 501st Clone Division is assigned to protect Coruscant from any attack.  They will preserve the necessary peace required for the Republic’s capital to continue to function, no matter the situation. 
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Chancellor Palpatine:   A Jedi will be assigned to work with the 501st to coordinate the necessary security.  As of yet, no Jedi has been assigned, but I trust we should have an announcement soon.
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Chancellor Palpatine:   The 501st Legion will be led by Commander Appo.
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Chancellor Palpatine:   The 501st Legion is the most elite army in the Republic.  While being based here on Coruscant, I have been given the power to order them off-world if necessary.
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Chancellor Palpatine:   The other division, known as Homeworld Security Command, is assigned to protect me.  Certain members of the Senate believed that I have become a target for the Separatists.  While I do not feel more protection is necessary, I understand their concerns.  Allow me to introduce the leader of the Security Command, Commander Thire.
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Chancellor Palpatine:   Commander Thire will oversee all security for my office here on Coruscant and for my off-world trips.  However, I do have Commander Thire’s assurances that my “open door” policy for all members of the Senate will not be adversely affected.
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Chancellor Palpatine:  Homeworld Command troopers are easily distinguished from their Clone counterparts due to their unique crimson markings on their armor.   Their crimson color signifies their affiliation to the Royal Guards and to this office.
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Chancellor Palpatine:   Please help me in welcoming them to our home planet.  We should commend them for their bravery and never-ending dedication to the Republic.
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Chancellor Palpatine:   These new but important Clone divisions usher in a new era of peace and security for the Republic.
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Chancellor Palpatine:   Only together can we defeat the Confederacy.  However, these are difficult times.  I ask for your continued support as we strive to return peace to the Republic.  These dark days will soon come to an end. 
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Chancellor Palpatine:   Thank you for your time.  I bid you all good night from Coruscant.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2031-33/31-16.jpg)





End of Act II

To be continued in Act III

Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (preview pic)
Post by: jedistyle on May 19, 2006, 04:13 PM
wow, those where a couple really good chapters. a big mission about to start fot the jedi and new clones for courscant.

the dialog was very good. especially the briefing from gree and the holocastfrom palpatine, very well done.

i also really liked the fact that you gave the names and purposes of thew clone units, the details where great additions to the story.

again, a great couple chapters. thanks for sharing them.
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (update MAY 19th)
Post by: Roton7 on May 19, 2006, 06:46 PM
Wow! I really loved the one with Palps on the HoloNet, it was neat to see the "introduction" of the 501st and shockies! Nice work!
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (update MAY 19th)
Post by: Quazar on May 20, 2006, 12:38 AM
Awesome update!!!

I don't have time for an appropriately detailed review and for that, I'm sorry.

But I love this story and I loved the new chapter.  that briefing scene is just friggin' fantastic.

I'll try to write more soon.  But your stories never cease to amaze.  The dialogue is excellent, perfectly in character, and I can't wait to see us get back into the action (not that I don't like the character/plot driven chapters like this, too)

Awesome, awesome, awesome!
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (update MAY 19th)
Post by: BrentS on May 21, 2006, 12:52 PM
Great Update!!!!

I love your story but it is so intriguing.  It seems like the plot could just be an extended scene before ROTS.  You do such an amazing job changing up the character position during their dialog exchange.  However, as good as your characters and photos are, its your dialog writing that is top notch.  Well done!!

I love to see the introduction of Cody to the 212 and the initiation of the 501st and Shocktroopers.  Awesome foreshadowing.
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (update MAY 19th)
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on May 22, 2006, 11:14 AM
Thanx for all the feedback guys.  Very glad to read the dialogue worked.  That was the hardest part of this update, since the pics were simple.

JEDISTYLE:  Glad you liked the briefing chapter.  I wanted to give Gree one chapter to spotlight his knowledge for speicies and systems.  I really wanted to answer some questions people had about Oner, and the history.  the HoloCast by Palpatine was more simpler than i originally intended.  Some of the effects became too complicated for me to do.  So I decided to just showcase Palpatine speaking directly into the camera, with a couple shots of the Shockies and the 501st.

ROTON7:   I have been waiting a long time to get the Shocktroopers and 501st into the story.  To do it within the story, I needed to build up the story.  They both will have some fun chapters in Act III.

Quazar:   Thanx for checking in, QUAZAR!  It's been a while since I've read your comments.  Look forward to your full-length feedback.  Since these three chapters were all "talking head" chapters, I wanted to really include a lot details to keep everyone's interest.  I came up with the mission specifics during the breifing since they will be important later.  And a bit of forshadowing.  I really appreciate all the feedback regarding the dialogue too!

BRENTS:  I'm not sure exactly how I will fit the story into ROTS, but it is ramping up to it.  I think it is fun to explore some of the things seen or mentioned in ROTS.  The final Act will lead up to a certain part in the SW story.  Thanx for the comments on the dialog and character positions.  It is essential in these chapters, since it is so dialogue-heavy.  The battle is coming for Cody, the 212th, and the Jedi!

Thanx again for the comments guys.  Really appreciate all the great feedback regarding the dialogue.  The final Act should be filled with action with the plot boiling over.  Hopefully my updates can be more consistent from here on out.  Stay tuned!  8)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (update MAY 19th)
Post by: CHEWIE on May 23, 2006, 12:25 PM
SA, good additions to your storyline.  This Dark Illusions has really compiled a lot of chapters, I am wondering where the end point to it will be, if it will be right up to the the events starting at ROTS?

I have a couple of suggestions, and don't take these wrong, they're just ideas I would try. 


(1) I know you don't customize much, but if you were to swap out the knees on your Cody with a Utapua Clone, Cody would be a better height.  Hasbro made that figure way too short.  It really shows up in this picture with the angle you used -

(http://chewie34.250free.com/052306shortcody.jpg)

He just looks so out of place... damn Hasbro.  It's a pretty simple change if you want to try it though for future stories.


(2) I think the dialogue with Palpatine was excellent, but a bit repetive in the pictures.  Some side angles of him, or more views of his audience here would have been nice.  It's always hard though to try and do a lot of dialogue without it getting boring, but you always seem to pull it off.


(3) The leaning clone in the meeting... it was ok for a pic, but it seemed like every pic of him in the crowd he was always leaning like that, I think that maybe doing some very slight hand positioning in the crowd some more would have made them look a little less static and interacting with what Gree was saying.


(4) Loved the Rancor flashback pics, using the pet carrier is a good idea for a cage.


(5) Is that a Thire custom you did?  It looks great!

(http://chewie34.250free.com/052306thire.jpg)


Well done SA, and thanks for continuing to bring this series to us.

 :)

Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (update MAY 19th)
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on May 23, 2006, 12:58 PM
Hey, CHEWIE, always good to read your comments!

No offense taken, you actually made me smile & laugh while reading your comments.  You were dead-on about some things!

RE: (1)  You're right about Cody!  What a shrimp!  Perhaps if I find another Cody & Utapau Clone, I'll send them to you to do the "knee surgery", since I would just end up destroying both figs.  Need to sign up for your Figure Anatomy class.  :)

RE: (2)  My original vision of Palpatine's Republic address had various shots of Senators, clones, and Jedi watching him during key parts of his speech.  But those pics would have been complicated for me, since I would have to use some type of monitor for them to be looking at.  That would include some photoshopping of Palpatine himself.  In the end, I crapped out of trying and just used simple pics.  I also thought of using the BP Senate Pod in various shots, but thought against it.  However, I knew I had to breakup the Palpy pics, so I inserted shots of Thire, Appo, the Shockies, and the 501st.  Perhaps I'll go back and take some more time for the re-release!

RE: (3) Your comments are very true about moving the Clones around a bit more.  I tried posing them all different, but never went back for subtle changes.  And that one Clone was sleeping!

RE: (4)  You nailed the pet carrier!!!  My dog didn't mind - I paid him in Greenies.

RE: (5)  Thought that pic of Thire would get your attention.  Sorry to say, not a custom.  Just a simple cut & paste of the Evolutions III head to a beheaded Shocktrooper.  I knew I could do a simple photoshop edit with Paintbrush, so I took a pic of the Shocktrooper holding his head/helmet, and then posed the Evo III clone in the exact same spot so the lighting would match.  In the end, it came out perfect!

Thanx again for all the feedback tho.  Glad to be back in the swing of things with the photonovels.  8)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (update MAY 19th)
Post by: CHEWIE on May 23, 2006, 01:36 PM
I'm glad to see you update again too SA, it's always a pleasure to see your updates.  So that was an edited pic, wow - that looks like the real thing, I never would have thought it was edited.  Great work.

If you want me to do a knee surgery custom, I'll be more than happy to for free.

 :)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (update MAY 19th)
Post by: Artoo on May 28, 2006, 12:37 PM
I can't wait for the next chapters!
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (update MAY 19th)
Post by: Word_Weaver on May 28, 2006, 01:40 PM
I added this page to my favorites- check it every day! Bring on more chapters! ;D
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (update MAY 19th)
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on May 29, 2006, 03:43 AM
Thanx for the feedback guys.

CHEWIE:  I'll let you know about the Cody Leg Surgery.  Easy to find Utapau Clones in my area now, but Cody is still HTF.  Thanx for the offer tho!  I'll let you know.

Artoo:  Working on the detailed outline currently for the next 3 chapters, the beginning of Act III.

Word Weaver:  Welcome WEAVER.  Thanx for the your feedback.  Next update will be a couple of weeks away.  Still working on the details.  Can you mark a thread as a favorite on the JD forums??
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (update MAY 19th)
Post by: Smartypants1635 on May 29, 2006, 11:31 AM
SA, I love this latest installment, great Job, and If you want to Start in an "Anaomy Class" There are tons of great ones over at FFURG, and just so you know the ball joints pop the same way as peg arms so just follow thse tutorials, and im sure you could do it.

OK, Now on to the PN great Job, I love how you made that one clone falll asleep, would have been funny if the clone next to him woke him up. :D THe Rancor shot was great too, and the 501st garrison and the Shockies were awesome, that had to take a bunch of Photoshop skills to make thire.
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (update MAY 19th)
Post by: Word_Weaver on May 29, 2006, 01:35 PM
Thanx for the feedback guys.

CHEWIE:  I'll let you know about the Cody Leg Surgery.  Easy to find Utapau Clones in my area now, but Cody is still HTF.  Thanx for the offer tho!  I'll let you know.

Artoo:  Working on the detailed outline currently for the next 3 chapters, the beginning of Act III.

Word Weaver:  Welcome WEAVER.  Thanx for the your feedback.  Next update will be a couple of weeks away.  Still working on the details.  Can you mark a thread as a favorite on the JD forums??
Nah, I added it to my internet browser's favorite sites list. So I can go to it as if I was choosing Jedidefender, Runescape..etc.  ;)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (update MAY 19th)
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on May 30, 2006, 01:50 PM
SMARTYPANTS:  Thire was actually easy to photoshop.  I did in MS Paint.  Simply took a pic of the Shocktrooper holding his helmet, then took a pic of the Evo Clone in he same exact spot, to keep the lighting the same.  Cut and paste on top of the white knob of the Shocktrooper.  If I can do it, anybody can!  The sleeping Clone was by accident, and I should have done more with Gree's "captivated" audience.  :)  I'll look into the "Anatomy" tutorials.

Word Weaver:  Gotcha!  Thanx for bookmarking this thread!

Still working on the details for the next three chapters.  Some unexpected news has delayed me, but well worth it!  Details later...



Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (update MAY 19th)
Post by: Word_Weaver on June 3, 2006, 07:51 PM
Also, I think it's nice you have everything in one topic. Having to find old chapter topics for one series is really a pain. Chapter 3 could be on page 9, Chapter 2 on page 3, etc. It's nice to have them together and in order.  :)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (update MAY 19th)
Post by: BrentS on June 4, 2006, 08:30 AM
Also, I think it's nice you have everything in one topic. Having to find old chapter topics for one series is really a pain. Chapter 3 could be on page 9, Chapter 2 on page 3, etc. It's nice to have them together and in order.  :)

You can sort threads by author (by clikcing on the author name).  I've used that in the past to get all the various chapters together.
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (update MAY 19th)
Post by: Word_Weaver on June 4, 2006, 02:09 PM
Oh. Thanks. I knew you could sort by author, but never thought to use it like that.  ;) More summer reading! (That's not on that junky school issued list  :P)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (update MAY 19th)
Post by: Artoo on June 11, 2006, 10:50 PM
How far are you now?Also do you have TSC Obi-Wan & Greivous they'd probally look better than the 2 your using now (mainly becuase of the soft goods for Obi & the new paint job on  Greivous).
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (update MAY 19th)
Post by: Quazar on June 12, 2006, 01:34 AM
It's been a while since we've had an update, so I thought I'd chime in with a few more specific comments.

as always, Longhorn, this is a terrific, terrific series.

A few thoughts -

Chapter 31 - You do such a great job with the established SW characters that I can hear the actors' voices in my head.  Another great job.  Even your talky scenes are great fun.  And all of these moments dovetail very nicely into the established lore of the films. They really do feel part of the "canon". 

Tiny, tiny nitpick - I had trouble with Palpatine saying "Sure!" to Anakin in response to the discussion about leading the 501st.  seems like he'd say something like "Certainly" instead.  "Sure" sounds too informal for the chancellor.

Chapter 32 - Wow, I can't tell you how much I love this scene!  The briefing is just awesome in every way.  I love the rows of seats, seeing all those clones together, the Jedi off to the side.  Gree is fantastic!  I love the fact that we're seeing a high ranking clone plan and brief everyone about a mission.  Simply wonderful on all levels.  And the brief anakin/obi wan dialogue is great, too, showing the humor and banter that we got to see only too briefly in ROTS and, to a much lesser extent, AOTC.

The shot of the rancor in the cage is excellent.  Very frightening, it has a very creepy, monster-movie feel to it.

So many of the shots in this scene are extremely well-composed.  The shots of Gree briefing, Gree talking to Cody, over Gree's shoulder, etc.  You turn a simply talking scene into a visual triumph.  Subtle, but very, very effective.

The Cody business is similarly great.  You really have a wonderful gift for dialogue.  the scene crackles with humor and the characterizations are spot on.  I continue to be amazed with your writing.  "Try not to shoot him by accident."  Great!!  :)

That's all for now.....boy, after re-reading this, I am REALLY excited for the next few chapters.  Keep 'em coming!!
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (update MAY 19th)
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on June 13, 2006, 03:36 PM
Hey guys, thanx for leaving some more feedback.  I can't believe it has been a month since my last update.  I am really slowing down now... :(

Artoo:  Thanx for th suggestion.  I have not purcahsed the latest versions of Obi-Wan and Grievous b/c I already owned figures with those sculpts.  I do like the soft cloth robes on Obi, but didn't want to buy another Pilot Obi-Wan figure.  As for Grievous, I always thought his casing were in a "bone" color, versus a white coloring.  The Sneak preview offered the best version, IMO.  Either way, I have never seen the new Grievous figure on the pegs. He is the only one I have never seen from the Coruscant wave.

Quazar:   Always good to hear from you, buddy!  Thanx again for the compliments, always appreciated and they keep me motivated!

Thanx for noticing the character specific dialogue.  I try to write the dialogue while envisioning the character's voice.  Many people have noted that, and I am truly appreciative.  And I agree with your suggestion to change the dialogue with Palpatine and Anakin.    Change made!

I was very happy to read all the positive feedback regarding Chapter 32 (Gree's Briefing).  I wanted to use all of the Clone Commanders throughout the story, and this was the perfect opportunity to showcase Gree's intellectual side.  It was also an attempt to build suspense going into the final Act of the story.  And also to give a basic understanding of the mission at hand.  Glad the humor between Cody/Anakin/Obi-Wan worked.  Subtle humor can be very difficult to write in a serious photnovel, IMO.

Still working on the outline for Act III.  Just about finished with the next 3 chapters, and I hope to begin shooting this week, with an update next week or the following week.

I appreciate everyone's patience!  Stay tuned for the final Act!!!  8)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (update MAY 19th)
Post by: 212th Battalion on June 19, 2006, 01:08 PM
those are the best photo novels i've ever seen :o there so awsome i mean im gonna try to make a photo novel but its not gonna be anything near as good as yours ! keep up the work with these awsome novels cant wait to see the new chapters! ;D
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (update MAY 19th)
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on June 20, 2006, 05:16 PM
Thanx for the feedback, 212th.  I appreciate your kind words, and they do motivate me to continue working on this very long story.  I will try to keep the story interesting, both visually and literally.  Look forward to seeing your story.   

I just wanted to give you guys some preview pics of the upcoming chapters.  The next three chapters are in various stages of completion, with one being complete.  There will be an update very soon! 

Stay tuned!   8)


(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Preview%20pics/test1.jpg)

(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Preview%20pics/test2.jpg)



Here is an extra preview pic, exclusive to JD fans:

(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Preview%20pics/test3.jpg)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (update MAY 19th)
Post by: Diddly on June 20, 2006, 11:05 PM
Oh man, I hope those outdoor pics work out well. I've always wanted to try some, but I wasn't sure how they'd turn out. The pics look great so far!
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (update MAY 19th)
Post by: Quazar on June 21, 2006, 01:48 AM
This preview's got me really jazzed!  Bring on the updates, we love your stories!
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (update MAY 19th)
Post by: Artoo on June 23, 2006, 11:07 PM
Can you start using the ROTS Mace again this Mace looks much better than the TPM version. :-\
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (update MAY 19th)
Post by: PenDragon on June 24, 2006, 10:15 AM
Can you start using the ROTS Mace again this Mace looks much better than the TPM version. :-\

face? yes. body? i so totaly disagree.... SA, you should make a custom - it'd be like your second, right? ;)  ;D
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (update MAY 19th)
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on June 26, 2006, 12:51 PM
Can you start using the ROTS Mace again this Mace looks much better than the TPM version. :-\

I always thought TPM Mace looked more like Samuel Jackson.  The ROTS version looks sleepy to me!  :D

But I do interchange them as needed, since the ROTS version is a little better articulated......just a little better.  As for customs, I don't think I would chance it.  I still need to enroll in the Figure Anatomy class before I even attempt that.  ;)

The update is coming this week.  Just finishing up the dialogue and having some pics worked on by a special effects guy.  Stay tuned!!!  8)

Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (update MAY 19th)
Post by: Artoo on June 28, 2006, 12:52 AM
Let's hope RS's reports are true & that one of the Mace's next year is SA!For your next CW story.
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (update MAY 19th)
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on June 28, 2006, 10:06 AM
Let's hope RS's reports are true & that one of the Mace's next year is SA!For your next CW story.

As long as they don't use the head sculpt from ROTS!  A SA Mace is way overdue, although I will buy the Battlepack with the Purple Clones and another ROTS Mace.

Update is 95% complete.  Effects are complete and the dialogue is nearly complete.  The update will be up by Friday morning the latest. 

Stay tuned!!!  8)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (update MAY 19th)
Post by: Smartypants1635 on June 28, 2006, 11:08 AM
LOL every time I see the little subboard latest post thing when I'm in customs I get really excited when I see "Dark illusions SA longhorn" since you update in the same thread. LOL can't wait till friday.

Adam
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (update MAY 19th)
Post by: Artoo on June 28, 2006, 11:57 PM
Same here,how mant more chapters are there?
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (update MAY 19th)
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on June 30, 2006, 12:14 PM
Same here,how mant more chapters are there?

ARTOO:  Act III, which these 3 chapters begin, should be only 12 chapters total.  I will add an Epilogue to wrap up the story, though.


Well no more waiting.  Here are the Chapters 34, 35, and 36.  Special thanx to YESTERDAY808 on Rebelscum, who added the special effects to make the battle come to life.  I apologize in advance for some blurry pics.


Enjoy!!!  8)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (update MAY 19th)
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on June 30, 2006, 12:16 PM
DARK ILLUSIONS

ACT III

Chapter 34



Several weeks have passed since the creation of the 501st Legion and Shocktroopers.  While the Battle of Oner will be waged on a far away planet, tensions still run high on Coruscant, despite the high level of security.



Padme Amidala:   Thank you, R2.  That will be all.
R2D2:    (beep whistle beep)
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/34-1.jpg)




Bail Organa:   With the Galactic Security now in place, the Chancellor’s approval rating is the highest it has ever been during the War.  He will have no problem passing any of his new legislation.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/34-2.jpg)




Meena Tillis:   But even you must admit, Senator Organa, the Chancellor has brought back a feeling of peace and security to Coruscant.  The economy is flourishing with just the mere presence of the 501st. 
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/34-4.jpg)




Meena Tillis:   What do you think, Senator Amidala?  Has the Chancellor not succeeded in providing a new level of security for the Republic?
Padme Amidala:    He has done that, I have to admit. 
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/34-5.jpg)




Padme Amidala:   But at what expense?  The Separatists’ leaders will never agree to a peace summit if they feel threatened by the 501st.  I feel their existence will only prolong the War.  And as long as there is a War, the Jedi will never return home…
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/34-6.jpg)



Bail Organa:   Senator Amidala is right.  Just the other day I heard the 501st raided Dexter’s Diner.  They believed it was a secret meeting place for local terrorists.
Meena Tillis:    Those are just rumors.  The HoloNet reported the explosion was caused by a gas leak.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/34-7.jpg)



Bail Organa:   Oh, really?  Then let me tell you what I saw with my own eyes today, Senator……
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/34-8.jpg)



Bail Organa:   When I arrived today from Alderaan, I was “greeted” by the 501st.  At first, I was relieved to see the high-level of security around the spaceport.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/34-9.jpg)




Bail Organa:   I was asked to show my identification, including my Senate photocard.  In the past, customs agents were familiar with all Senators.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/34-11.jpg)



Bail Organa:   The Clone Trooper began asking me various questions, such as my reason for coming to Coruscant, and if I had a residence here.  There was no room for pleasantries with this trooper.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/34-12.jpg)




Bail Organa:    However, after an extended amount of time and several more questions, I was cleared and allowed entry.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/34-13.jpg)



Padme Amidala:   I don’t understand.  What is so strange about that?
Bail Organa:    Oh, nothing really.  It was what happened after I was cleared, as they questioned the next traveler……a Rodian supposedly from the Outer Rim.

(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/34-10.jpg)





Bail Organa::    I could not here their initial conversation, but it quickly become apparent that the Trooper did not like what the traveler had to say. 
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/34-16.jpg)




Bail Organa:   The 501st quickly ordered the traveler to place his hands behind his head and to get down on his knees.  The Rodian didn’t seem to understand what was going on.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/34-17.jpg)




Bail Organa:   That is when I saw Commander Appo approach the traveler…
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/34-18.jpg)



Bail Organa:   …and strike him. 
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/34-19.jpg)



Padme Amidala:   No!  But how could they just hit him without proper cause?
Bail Organa:    I soon found out…

(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/34-20.jpg)



Bail Organa:    Commander Appo then approached me.  He said the traveler was a dangerous terrorist with ties to the Separatist movement.  He asked me to leave, for my own safety, of course..
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/34-21.jpg)




Bail Organa:    What else could I do……
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/34-22.jpg)



Meena Tillis:   But what happened to the traveler?
Bail Organa:   They proceeded with their ‘interrogation’.

(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/34-23.jpg)




Bail Organa:   I fear that the 501st and the Chancellor have already begun to abuse their powers.  And now there are rumors of a secret cloning facility right here on Coruscant.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/34-23a.jpg)




Mena Tillis:    While I agree the treatment of the foreign traveler was a bit harsh, we must understand we live in dangerous times.  Change is never easy.  But those who have nothing to hide should not  fear the  501st, like us.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/34-25.jpg)



Bail Organa:   Nevertheless, if a Jedi were involved with Commander Appo, I seriously doubt this incident would have occured. 
Padme Amidala:    We must make it a priority that a Jedi be assigned to oversee the 501st.  Even if it means forcing the Chancellor to appoint one himself.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/34-26.jpg)




Meena Tillis:   Very well.  I will call for a vote at the next Senate session.
Bail Organa:    Let me speak to the Chancellor privately first.  Perhaps there is more to the situation than we know.  Until then, let’s call it a night.  It is getting late.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/34-27.jpg)



Bail Organa:   Good night, M’Lady……Senator Tillis.
Meena Tillis:   Until tomorrow, Senators.
Padme Amidala:    Good evening to you both.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/34-28.jpg)




Padme Amidala:    (deep sigh)
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/34-29.jpg)




R2D2:   (curious whistle)
Padme Amidala:    I’m fine, R2.  I’m just a little tired, that’s all.  Tell 3PO that I am retiring for the night.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/34-30.jpg)




R2D2:   (woooooooooo)
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Title: DARK ILLUSIONS - Chapters 34, 35, & 36
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on June 30, 2006, 12:17 PM
DARK ILLUSIONS

Chapter 35



Jedi Master Mace Windu & Kit Fisto are the first to arrive on Oner.  Accompanied by Commander Gree and the Elite Corps, they prepare for the upcoming battle and the rescue of Saesee Tiin.



Commander Oddball:   We are approaching the landing point, General..
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/35-1.jpg)



Mace Windu:   Continue to scan the area for any large creatures.
Commander Gree:   Commander Oddball, set the ship down near that flattened area.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/35-2.jpg)



Commander Oddball:   Yes, sir.  Our scanners indicate nothing in the area.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/35-3.jpg)


Commander Gree:   General, do you see how the vegetation in that area is flattened?  It’s a clear  indication that a rancor has been here recently.
Mace Windu:   When we land, verify the tracks.  We don’t want any unexpected visitors.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/35-4.jpg)




Sgt. Trooper Psi:   What a desolate place this is. 
Kit Fisto:   Don’t let your eyes deceive you, trooper.  Even in the ugliest places, beauty can be found.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/35-5.jpg)



Commander Gree:   Stay with ship, General.  My men and I will take a look around first.
Mace Windu:   Be sure to stay in contact.  I will contact my informant and have him meet us as soon as possible.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/35-6.jpg)




Commander Gree:   Sergeant Psi – take Trooper Chi with you and check the hillside.  Phi and I will cover the lower areas.
Trooper Phi:   It will be dark soon.  We better get moving.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/35-8.jpg)




A few hours later……



Trooper Phi:   No signs of any life anywhere, sir.  Including droids……
Mace Windu:   That’s not entirely accurate.  You’re just not looking in the right places, trooper.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/35-9.jpg)




Commander Gree:   I was right.  A rancor has been through here.  See the broken branches?  These tracks are fresh, perhaps no more than a couple of hours.  Difficult to tell if this was caused by more than one rancor, though.
Trooper Phi:   I don’t understand how something that big can hide so easily.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/35-10.jpg)






Commander Gree:   The rancor has adapted to this environment.  Its hunting skills have been sharpened.  We must be cautious----
Sgt. Trooper Psi over comlink:   Commander!  We found something!  You better take a look at this.  I’m sending you our coordinates!
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/35-11.jpg)




Commander Gree:   We’re on our way!  Whatever it is, do not engage the target until I arrive!
Sgt. Trooper Psi:   No need to worry about that, Commander.   
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/35-12.jpg)



Sgt. Trooper Psi:   We’re already outnumbered.
Trooper Chi:   I count a total of 8 droids.

(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/35-14.jpg)





Commander Gree:   Have they spotted us?
Sgt. Trooper Psi:   No, sir.  Looks like they are still setting up their defenses. 
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/35-13.jpg)




Commander Gree:   We’ve arrived sooner than they expected.  Those turrets will keep our gunships grounded……for now.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/35-15.jpg)




Commander Gree:   And there are some droidekas patrolling the outer perimeter.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/35-16.jpg)



Sgt. Trooper Psi:   Shall we take them down, sir?
Commander Gree:   No, Cody and his men have that responsibility.  We’re here to scout the enemy’s location and rescue Saesee Tiin.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/35-17.jpg)



Commander Gree:   I don’t see any……wait a minute……is that?………OOM-12 is down there.  The Separatist ARE serious about holding this planet.
Sgt. Trooper Psi:   Who or what is an OOM-12, sir?

(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/35-19.jpg)




Commander Gree:   OOM-12 is the Droid Commander down there.  He was programmed specifically for open-field warfare.  Reports are that he has never lost a battle.  This operation just got more difficult.  Come on……let’s get back to camp.
Sgt. Trooper Psi:   Yes, sir.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/35-20.jpg)




Some time later, aboard the gunship KIMCHARISE……



Commander Gree:   With OOM-12 directing the droid army, I suggest a new strategy.  We should concentrate our attack on the barracks first.  Once their defenses are weakened, we shouldn’t have a problem entering their base.
Mace Windu:   And hopefully find Saesee inside.  Good work, Commander.  We’ll go with your new plan.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/35-21.jpg)




Shade:   …and walk right into their trap.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/35-22.jpg)




Commander Gree:   Halt!  Identify yourself!!
Mace Windu:   You can relax, Commander.  This is my informant, Special Ops Trooper Shade.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/35-23.jpg)




Shade:   Took your time getting here, didn’t you, Jedi?
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/35-24.jpg)





Mace Windu:   We came as soon as we could, Shade. 
Commander Gree:   It takes time to research and assemble the right strike team.  We will not fail in our mission.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/35-25.jpg)




Shade:   And while you play “Commander”, I have to keep tabs on what the Droid Army is doing to prepare for your arrival.  Remind me not to get captured if it means waiting for you guys to rescue me.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/35-26.jpg)




Mace Windu:   That’s enough.  We’re wasting time arguing.    What is their attack plan, Shade?
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/35-27.jpg)




Shade:   The Separatist knew you were coming with an assault team.  Therefore, they have spread out their army.  They’ve relocated Master Saesee Tiin to an abandoned village on the far side of the ridge.  He is being held in one of the huts there, for “safe-keeping”.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/35-28.jpg)




Mace Windu:   Commander, begin reconnaissance on the village.
Commander Gree:   Yes, sir, right away.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/35-29.jpg)




Mace Windu:   What else have you discovered?
Shade:   I have been monitoring all transmissions sent from their base. 
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Shade:   Most of the transmissions were sent to Trade Federation starships, ordering them to land their droid armies.  But I intercepted one transmission unlike all the others.
Mace Windu:   Why?  What was different about it?
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/35-31.jpg)



Shade:   It was sent to a private transmitter on Coruscant.  I’ve just recently pinpointed the exact location of the receiver……in The Works area.
Mace Windu:   The old manufacturing section of Coruscant?  That is where you encountered the two Royal Guards before.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/35-32.jpg)




Mace Windu:   This may the clue we need to unravel the mystery of the Sith Lord.
Commander Gree:   But I checked that place from top to bottom.  There was no one there.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/35-33.jpg)



Mace Windu:   Go back and check it again.  The Sith Lord will show up again.  And when he does, I want you there to identify him.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/35-34.jpg)




Shade:   And then what? 
Mace Windu:   Contact Master Yoda immediately.  He will handle it from there.  DO NOT attempt to apprehend the Sith Lord by yourself.  Wait for help, Shade.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/35-35.jpg)



Shade:   As you wish……Jedi.
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Title: DARK ILLUSIONS - Chapters 34, 35, & 36
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on June 30, 2006, 12:22 PM
DARK ILLUSIONS

Chapter 36



Joined by Jedi Master Obi-Wan Kenobi and Jedi Knight Anakin Skywalker, the Clones of the 212th Battalion are prepared to defeat the Droid Army.  Following the coordinates given by Commander Gree, Commander Cody & the 212th begin their important mission on the plains of Oner.



Commander Cody:   The gunship cannot get any closer without taking fire from the turrets.  Check your ammo and supplies one last time, troopers.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/36-1.jpg)




Commander Cody:   Everybody out! 
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Commander Cody:   We’ll wait for General Kenobi’s gunship to land.  Keep a lookout for any droids or rancors.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/36-2a.jpg)



Trooper Dagda:   We’re approaching the rendezvous point, sir.
Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Very good, trooper.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/36-3.jpg)




Anakin Skywalker:   I thought Commander Gree was exaggerating about the conditions on Oner.  In reality, it’s worse than he described.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/36-4.jpg)




Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Do give it a chance, Anakin.  We’ve only just arrived.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/36-5a.jpg)



Anakin Skywalker:   There’s something not right……something…distant…hiding……
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/36-5b.jpg)




Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Don't center on your anxiety, Anakin. Keep your concentration here and now where it belongs.  Here comes Cody now.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/36-5d.jpg)






Commander Cody:   We’re ready to move out, General. 
Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Lead the way.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/36-5e.jpg)




Commander Cody:   Lock and load, troopers!  Let’s move out!
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/36-5f.jpg)




Anakin Skywalker:   ……hmph……
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/36-5g.jpg)




Rancor:   (distant low growl)
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Some time later……


Trooper Daiki:   Commander, possible targets up ahead.
Commander Cody:   Everybody down!  Switch to private comlink frequency 2-1-5.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/36-6.jpg)





Commander Cody:   Let us check it out first, sir.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/36-8.jpg)




Anakin Skywalker:   What?!  Come on, let’s take them out now!
Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Calm down, Anakin.  Let them do their job.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/36-9.jpg)



Commander Cody on private comlink:   Stay low.  Sa’dia & Hadi – circle around to the left.  The rest of us will go right.
Troopers Sa’dia & Hadi on private comlink:   Yes, sir.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/36-10.jpg)



Trooper Sa’dia on private comlink:   I have a visual, Commander --- two battle droids on patrol.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/36-11.jpg)



Trooper Hadi on private comlink:   They’re coming this way.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/36-12.jpg)




Commander Cody on private comlink:   We’ll distract them. 
(A rock hits the ground.)
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/36-13.jpg)






Battle Droid 3125:   What was that?
Battle Droid 2945:   Probably just a critter.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/36-14.jpg)




Battle Droid 3125:   Let’s check it out.
Battle Droid 2945:   Roger, roger!
(Laser blast! Laser blast!)
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/36-15x.jpg)




Trooper Sa’dia on private comlink:   They’re down.
Commander Cody on private comlink:   Good work, troopers.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/36-16.jpg)





Meanwhile, at the Droid Army Command Post……


Battle Droid 1750:   Two droid transmitters just went out.
OOM-12:   Send all nearby units to investigate.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/36-17.jpg)



OOM-12:   Activate the rest of the droids.
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Back on the plains of Oner……


Trooper Daiki on private comlink:   Several targets fast approaching from the south, sir.
Commander Cody on private comlink:   Prepare to fire.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/36-19.jpg)




Battle Droid 4152:   Clone troopers identified!  CHARGE!
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/36-20x.jpg)



Commander Cody:   OPEN FIRE!!!
LASER BLASTS!!!
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/36-21xx.jpg)



Battle Droid 4152:   …clone…troopers……identi----
PPFFZZZZZZZZTTT 
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/36-22.jpg)




Trooper Daiki on private comlink:   More droids approaching from the east.
Battle Droid 4325:   CHARGE!
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/36-23x.jpg)





Commander Cody on private comlink:   Sa’dia – Hadi - Ra’d – Dagda – try to flank the droids on the right side.
Troopers on private comlink:   Yes, sir!
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/36-26.jpg)



Troopers Daikia on private comlink:   We’ve got more droids incoming, Commander.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/36-24x.jpg)




Commander Cody on private comlink:   Take evasive action!
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/36-25.jpg)



Trooper Ra’d:   Magna guards!!!
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/36-27.jpg)



Electro-staffs ignite.
ZZZZZ-ZZZZZZZZZ

(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/36-28x.jpg)




Anakin Skywalker:   How about now?
Obi-Wan Kenobi:   OK, now they need our help.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/36-29.jpg)



Anakin Skywalker:   First one to 100 kills wins!
Obi-Wan Kenobi:   This is not a competition, Anakin.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/36-30x.jpg)




CLASH!
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/36-31x.jpg)




SLASH – CLASH! 
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/36-32x.jpg)



Anakin Skywalker:   Always doing things the hard way, Master……
Force crunch!
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/36-33x.jpg)



Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Always showing off, Anakin……
PPPFFFZZZTTT
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/36-34x.jpg)



Anakin Skywalker:   Tied 1-1.
Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Anakin……this is not a competition…
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/36-35x.jpg)



Trooper Dagda:   Droidekas!!! 
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/36-36.jpg)




Trooper Ba’al:   Where?!?!  I can’t see them!!!
Trooper Dagda:   Scamble!  Scramble!  Scramble!
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/36-37.jpg)




Droidekas disengage and open fire.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/36-38xx.jpg)



SLASH!  CRASH!
Anakin Skywalker:   2 TO 1!!
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/36-39x.jpg)




SLASH!  CRASH!
Anakin Skywalker:   3 TO 1!!!
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/36-40x.jpg)




OOM-12:   Continue the assault.  Begin Operation: Nightcrawler. 
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/36-41x.jpg)




Commander Cody:   They’ve splintered us.  Relay the emergency coordinates to everyone.  We need to regroup!
Trooper Daiki:   Yes, sir!  Code Orange:  Regroup at points 3-4-2-8!
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/36-42xx.jpg)



Laser blasts and explosions fill the air.
Trooper Daiki over private comlink:   Code Ora……group……points……2-8!
Trooper Dagda:   Didn’t copy!   Come in!   I’ve lost my visual.   Where is everybody??
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/36-43.jpg)





Trooper Daiki:   Dagda has been separated from the squad, sir.  But I have his coordinates.
Commander Cody:   Then let’s get to him before the droids do. 
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/36-44.jpg)



Trooper Dagda over private comlink:   Didn’t copy!!  Repeat!!!  Wha----who are you?!?!    No, wait ---- AAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!
Commander Cody:   DAGDA?!
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/36-46.jpg)




Comander Cody over private comlink:   Hold on, trooper!  We’re on our way!!!
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/36-45.jpg)







Trooper Daiki:   How is he, sir?
Commander Cody:   He’s……he’s gone.  We’re too late. 
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/36-47.jpg)




Commander Cody:   He was stabbed with some type of spear.
Trooper Daiki:   A spear?
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/36-48.jpg)




Trooper Ba’al:   It was my fault.  I knew this was his first real combat.  I should have never let him out of my sight.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/36-49a.jpg)



Commander Cody:   Don’t blame yourself, Ba’al.  Dagda knew the danger of this mission.  But we have to leave him behind.  Leave a marker, and we will return for him.
Trooper Ba’al:   But sir---
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/36-49b.jpg)





Commander Cody:   I don’t want to leave him anymore than you do, Ba’al.  But we are in a critical situation.  The entire mission depends on us reaching their base.  And his death tells us that we must contend with something more dangerous than droids.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/36-50.jpg)



OOM-12:   Continue the offensive.  The battle is ours to lose.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/36-51x.jpg)




OOM-12:   Advance the 3rd and 4th droid armies. 
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/36-52.jpg)




Sagev:   Notify Count Dooku that the battle will be over shortly.
OOM-12:   Yes, sir.
(http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a232/S_A_Longhorn/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2034-36/36-53.jpg)



To be continued……[/b]


Special thanx to YESTERDAY808 on Rebelscum.com for adding the excellent special effects to really bring the story to life.  Great working with ya, buddy!
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (Update June 30th)
Post by: Jedi_Assassin on June 30, 2006, 12:30 PM
Awesome special effects, S_A. I like how all of the jedi came out to save their friend. Very nicely done.
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (Update June 30th)
Post by: jedistyle on June 30, 2006, 12:51 PM
great update SALonghorn, definetley woth the wait!

- i really liked the pros & cons of the 501st. you really illustrated thier abuse of power well. the spaceport scene reminded me of how an american airport would be after a terroist attack, good job.

- i also really liked how you had each team of clones sticking to thier specific mission tasks, it shows dicipline from the clones.

- i have to say though that shade is my favorite parts of you story. that charecter adds so much to the plot and his attitude is sick. he's defiant to jedi generals, just calling them jedi, i'm not sure how much of that mace might put up with though, and he is defiant to clone commanders mocking thier rank and telling them thier tactics are flawed. he's a real rebel and i like him!

again great job, the plot is great and as always i enjoy how you make such good sets out of simple household objects! i'll look forward to the next update.
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (Update June 30th)
Post by: BrentS on June 30, 2006, 01:22 PM
GREAT update!  Your storytelling is so good.  I can easily vision all of the characters saying the dialog you put together.  I love the way you compose your shots.  All Photonovelers can really learn something from how you frame these images. Awesome! 

My only criticism, is I have a hard time imagining a clone trooper acting in that fashion.  I'm guessing you are going to explain it somehow in a future installment but it seems a bit harsh.  However, I love the postions you were able to put the 501st in.  Especially the Appo elbow in the chest.  Excellent postioning!

EDIT :  I've only read chapter 35 at the time of writing this.  I'll have to go back and catch up on the next two chapters too!!
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (Update June 30th)
Post by: CloneCommander1 on June 30, 2006, 01:32 PM
Fantastic!  I love the scenes with the 501st.  I actually find them very belivable, seeing as at least appo, and possibly all of the 501st, were bred diffrently.   The parts with shade are some of my favorite parts of the story, very mysterious.  I loved the battle scenes with the 212th, Yesterday did a nice job on the effects.  A testamant to your storytelling abbilities is how sad I felt for the clone that the utapaun killed, that takes skill at storytelling to do.  All in all, great job, can't wait for more! :)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (Update June 30th)
Post by: Jedi_Assassin on June 30, 2006, 01:36 PM
I did find one grammer error in Bail's flashback.
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (Update June 30th)
Post by: Roton7 on June 30, 2006, 01:51 PM
This is the best PN of all time! I absolutely loved the last chapter! You make the battle seem so realistic! Excellent job!!
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (Update June 30th)
Post by: Smartypants1635 on June 30, 2006, 05:31 PM
I did find one grammer error in Bail's flashback.

LOL you're the one to talk. LOL

Great Job SA, I really enjoyed these last 3 chapters.

I hate the 501st now even more,those slimey bastards.
That Rancor stalking them is very creepy, And why is it always the one guy that gets seperarted from the squad is killed by the Pau'an ???

All around good job, Hurry up with the next one.
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (Update June 30th)
Post by: 212th Battalion on June 30, 2006, 09:15 PM
Awsome! I LOVED IT!  ;D :o
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (Update June 30th)
Post by: Quazar on July 1, 2006, 02:48 PM
AMAZING chapter, Longhorn!  I loved the battle itself, the emphasis on the tactics.  It was extremely well done, you could feel the confusion and frustration of the troopers.

Awesome work, will try to post detailed comments.  but, as usual, I loved the friggin' thing!
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (Update June 30th)
Post by: CHEWIE on July 1, 2006, 02:55 PM
Nice update SA.  The Bail/Padem scene was pretty good, but I was looking forward to more action in your series and we got it further down.

Nice seeing more droids, and the battle was very well done, I loved how Anakin and Obi Wan joined in.  The orange clones look good, but seemed out of place - I think that their orange deco in ROTS was intended for the background on Utapua and to sort of "blend in" - out in grassy areas I don't think they'd wear their Utapua assault gear.

But what really did this for me was the special effects.  Did you do those?  Wow.  Without them the battle would have still been nice, but that really added life to it.

 :)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (Update June 30th)
Post by: Artoo on July 3, 2006, 12:52 AM
I agree & disagree with you Chewie I'd think that on this planet all troopers would wear the armor that was worn on Kashyyyk,but blame Hasbro on that one.The 212th probally wore the oarnge armor off of Utapua too.


Chapter 34-I liked how the 3 senators just came to talk,but what no Jar Jar? :P
Also the 501st were mean,but I think the Shocktroopers would of handled the situation,since the 501st would of been on fighting in the battle.

Chapter 35-I like the character Shade & how he could care less about the jedi & even his brothers.I also doubt Shade would betray Palpatine if he finds out that Sidious is Palpatine.(Obvioulsy... or no ROTS :P) I also like OOM-12 & his reputation.

Chapter 36I like how the clone who was killed was the newbie but I'd think the clone would be more upset,but oh well.Anakin's "game" was funny,since he's playing games in a serious situation. :P

I also thought when you said that R2 was going to be in the story,I  thought you meant in the battle with Anakin.
What happened to Ki & Bacara?I remember something about him coming in the battle or will that be revealed later?
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (Update June 30th)
Post by: CHEWIE on July 3, 2006, 05:44 PM
I see what you are saying Artoo.  What I mean is that I don't think that you'd see some troops in Green, while others are in Orange on a joint campaign.  I'd think Cody would suit up like Gree.  Sure it could happen where he'd lead some orange clones on a green lush planet, but I would think for whatever reason it would be the 501st joinng in a campaign.  I guess I'm being a little too serious though, lol.

 :)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (Update June 30th)
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on July 3, 2006, 10:52 PM
Thanx for all the feedback, guys.  I'm on vacation right now, so I don't have the time (or effort) to reply to each one, but I will as soon as I return.  Keep them coming tho! 

As for the Utapau Clones, I like to say that they stay withing their armor.  If only b/c each unit is specialized in a certain form of combat.  And the fact that I have never seen any clones out of their normal colors establised by ROTS.  But we'll discuss this further.  And the effects were done by YESTERDAY808 over on RS.
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (Update June 30th)
Post by: Artoo on July 9, 2006, 04:20 PM
Ok,any 3PO coming up in your story.
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (Update June 30th)
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on July 19, 2006, 05:32 PM
Well I'm back from my 2 vacations.  Time to get back to work on the next update. But first....

Dark Phoenix:  Thanx for stopping by and leaving some feedback.  The special effects are the work of YESTERDAY808, as he called himself on the RS boards.  Credit definetely goes to him for bringing the battle to life.  He will continue to work on the upcoming battle sequences.  Sorry about the grammer error, let me know where it is.

Jedistyle:Glad the 501st scene worked.  I wanted to get them invlove finally now that the Security measure passed. You will se more of them in future chapters.  I'd hope to make every Clone division in my story a little different each time.  The 212th Battalion is one of the best.  Shade has been a realy character to work with.  he is extremely loyal to the Republic, but he is also growing tired of the beaucracy.  He wants to finish the job, without having his hands tied.

BrentS:   Thanx for the feedback regarding teh dialogue.  That part is always the toughest.  And with simple backgrounds and enviornments, I try to take various angles to give each pic a different viewpoint.  As mentioned above, each clone division is a little bit different, as the War progressed.  Mostly influenced by their Commander or Jedi, the 501st are a comlpetely different breed of Clones.  The future chapters will describe this in more detail.

CloneCommander1:   Good eye spotting the different breeds of Clone troopers.  This will remain important for the rest of the story.  Shade's story will start up again in the next couple of chapters.  Thanx for the compliment on the storytelling - much appreciated!

Roton7:   Great compliments!  There will be more battle scenes upcoming!

SmartyPants:   The 501st will be heavily seen in this final Act.  I've been wanting to do their chapters this whole time.  The rancor is stil there...somewhere.  And lesson of the chapter: don't get separated when visiting different worlds! 

212th Battalion:   Many thanx!  One of my fav updates.

Quazar:  Good to hear from you - it's been a long time.  Round 1 of the Battle of Oner goes to OOM-12 and the droids.  I tried to show some strategy on both sides to explain the action better.  More action yet to come...

CHEWIE:   All the storylines will continue in this last Act, but the action will become more prevalant.  Everything has been building to the last part of the story.  I commented on your comments on my previous post.

Artoo:   Jar Jar??  Sorry, can't say that I actually own a Jar Jar figure!  The 501st have a complicated story, but are just in the formation stages here.  I am taking some lee-way with this part of the story since the 501st seem to be everywhere at the end of Ep III and no where at the end of EP II.  Shade is getting frustrated at being told what to do and what not to do by the Jedi.  He wants to end this war.  And thanx for the feedback about OOM-12.  You were the only person to comment on him. He was necessary to explain the attack plan of the droids.  The Clones do care about one another, but they also know their roles.  Glad you lie Anakin's part.  Ki and Bacara are busy right now!  And yes, C3PO will be appearing very soon.  ;)

Thanx again for all the compliments.  I get a lot more feedback and views here at JD then I ever do at RS, even though this is a smaller community. 

Working on the outline for the next 3 chapters.  Stay tuned....
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (Update June 30th)
Post by: Swede on July 19, 2006, 08:36 PM
Man, this is what photonoveling was meant to be.  One huge, incredible story!  I love it!  I'm still somewhat new to your work, but I've been meening to write for quite some time.   Talk about detail, and your dialogue is top notch. 
What can I say ... I love clones (especially 501st) ...  many people put them in their  PNs, unfortunately most don't pull off the feel of the movie ... you don't seem to have that problem  ;)   I actually like your clone interactions better than some of the movie scenes.    Can't wait for more.

Oh yeah, loved the trooper beach skit.

You da man, Longhorn.
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (Update June 30th)
Post by: 212th Battalion on July 20, 2006, 05:16 PM
i cant wait for the next chapters! i mean i have been working on photo novels but my camera isnt good so i'm gonna take a break for a while until christmas when i get a new camera i forgot what it's called but it was the one you told me about. So just wanted to say thank you for the advice ;D Keep up the good work  ;D
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (Update June 30th)
Post by: Artoo on July 20, 2006, 10:14 PM
I'm thinking of doing a CW PN,once I get a camera & alot more figures from ROTS/AOTC era. :-\
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (Update June 30th)
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on July 21, 2006, 10:15 AM
Hey, more feedback!  Always appreciated!

Swede:  Thanx for leaving feedback, Swede, and welcome to the board.  I appreciate your comments on the dialogue.  I am surprised so many people like the dialogue, since I am hardly a writer.  But I do try to keep everyone in character when I write the dialogue for each chapter.  And I am glad you like the Clone personalities.  Some research and some imagination really helped to distinguish each Clone from each other.  It makes the story more interesting than all the Clones being the same.  Thanx again for your feedback.

212th Battalion:  Glad you are getting a new camera.  Something with an optical zoom and only 2.0 MP will produce great pics.  I thought I had broke my digital camera while on vacation.  I was already planning a "Donate to Longhorn's Camera Fund" in order to continue my story!  ;D  Fortunately, my camera was fine in the end.


Artoo:   This story is much bigger than I originally planned, but it has really been a lot of fun.  With the end in sight, I am already thinking of other stories to work on past this era.  :P

Thanx again for your guys feedback.  Best estimate for the next update is probably two weeks.  But stay tuned... 8)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (Update June 30th)
Post by: 212th Battalion on July 21, 2006, 01:46 PM
glad to see that the camera is good  ;) Can't wait for the new chapters  ;D Keep up the good work  ;D ;D
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (Update June 30th)
Post by: Artoo on July 22, 2006, 11:05 PM
A GCW or another ROTS-ANH era PN?
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (Update June 30th)
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on July 25, 2006, 09:48 AM
A GCW or another ROTS-ANH era PN?

I actually have ideas for both.  But time will tell.  My limitation with real backgrounds is the most difficult part in creating these stories.

Just finished shooting 2 of the next 3 chapters.  Working on the dialogue and outline for the 3rd chapter.

Stay tuned... 8)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (Update June 30th)
Post by: Artoo on July 27, 2006, 11:48 PM
Use BG pics from the movie, search the web your bound to find some. Print them out & put them behind the figures.
Title: DARK ILLUSIONS preview pics 8/3/2006
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on August 3, 2006, 05:06 PM
Thanx for the feedback guys.  Always happy to see feedback between the updates, especially since the update are taking longer to post everytime.

 Artoo:   I don't have a quality-enough printer to attempt that.  The backgrounds would look really bad with the basic printer I have.  Perhaps the next photonovel will just use basic backgrounds, without regard to what is in the background.


As for another update, I was hoping to post chapters 37, 38, and 39 this Friday , August 4th.  However, with my schedule being very hectic this week, the update may not come until Monday the 7th. 

Here are some preview pics for your viewing pleasure, until the update is posted:

(I am going to have a problem with some of the sizes of the pics in this next update.  I prefer to have all pics the size of the Cody/Dooku pics below, but some of the pics will be the size of the Shocktrooper's pic)

 PREVIEW PICS REMOVED & INSERTED BACK INTO THE STORY.
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel preview pics 8/3/2006
Post by: CloneCommander1 on August 3, 2006, 05:26 PM
WOW!   (http://voiceofthepublic.com/netwidow/Stuff/Emoticons/Lists/drool.gif)

That really looks good!  I love the dooku pic.  Is that a SSC anakin sidious holo?  I also like the others, the lighting on that shocktrooper one is great, and the cody one is at a great angle.  Can't wait for the full update!
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel preview pics 8/3/2006
Post by: Roton7 on August 3, 2006, 05:35 PM
I second that drool smiley that CC1 posted--those look awesome! I can't wait for the next update! :D
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel preview pics 8/3/2006
Post by: 212th Battalion on August 3, 2006, 11:26 PM
those pics are AWSOME!!!! i cant wait for the next chapter but now i cant wait even more for christmas when i get my new cam so that finally i can have clear pics like that!!!!!
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel preview pics 8/3/2006
Post by: Smartypants1635 on August 4, 2006, 09:59 AM
ahhhh Huryy UPPPPP, JK, take your time, but actually hurry aswell. ;)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel preview pics 8/3/2006
Post by: Artoo on August 5, 2006, 01:28 PM
Please hurry up! I probally won't be online Monday!
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel preview pics 8/3/2006
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on August 5, 2006, 02:45 PM
Sorry guys, but the update may be done on Sunday, if not Monday.  I still have to wait on a couple of things,including proof-reading the dialogue.  Trust me, this update is worth waiting for.  Some of the most fun chapters to create.

Stay tuned...8)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel preview pics 8/3/2006
Post by: Artoo on August 5, 2006, 03:00 PM
Please be Sunday! ;D
Have you decided which you want to do yet the ROTS-ANH or the GCW?
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel preview pics 8/3/2006
Post by: Smartypants1635 on August 8, 2006, 03:13 PM
Today is tuesday and no update, I smell texas longhorn steaks..... MMMMm YUM.

adam
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel preview pics 8/3/2006
Post by: Artoo on August 8, 2006, 08:42 PM
Yeesh... :-\
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel preview pics 8/3/2006
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on August 9, 2006, 01:30 AM
Sorry guys, but the update is taking longer than expected.  Best estimate: this Friday, August 11th. 

The wait will be worth it!  8)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel preview pics 8/3/2006
Post by: Smartypants1635 on August 9, 2006, 08:58 AM
Coolio. cant wait
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel preview pics 8/3/2006
Post by: Artoo on August 10, 2006, 05:07 PM
Ok.
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel preview pics 8/3/2006
Post by: 212th Battalion on August 12, 2006, 02:22 PM
where is it ! i cant live with out dark illusions !!! lol
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel preview pics 8/3/2006
Post by: CloneCommander1 on August 12, 2006, 02:24 PM
STOP TAUNTING US! ;)
J/K Can't wait to see the next chapters.
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel preview pics 8/3/2006
Post by: Smartypants1635 on August 12, 2006, 04:36 PM
(http://www.freewebby.com/angry-smilies/th_bitch.gif) yeah thats right. LOL
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel preview pics 8/3/2006
Post by: Artoo on August 12, 2006, 06:14 PM
Let's hope there's alot of stuff that looks like it can get delayed. :P
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel preview pics 8/3/2006
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on August 14, 2006, 11:32 AM
Wow, didn't think this update would take so long.  I am working on the final details.  For sure it will be posted this week, most likely on Wednesday - August 16th. 

Until then, 2 more previews since you guys are "patiently" waiting.   :)

PREVIEW PICS REMOVED & INSERTED BACK INTO THE STORY.
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (New preview pics 8/14)
Post by: CloneCommander1 on August 14, 2006, 04:00 PM
RIIIIIIGGGGGHHHHTTTT, wednesday, sure..... ;)

J/K, I'm really looking forward to this, nice preview pics too.
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (New preview pics 8/14)
Post by: Artoo on August 15, 2006, 04:41 PM
It looks great! :)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (New preview pics 8/14)
Post by: Roton7 on August 15, 2006, 11:58 PM
Indeed, it looks awesome! I can't wait 'til Wednesday when it comes out.  ;)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (New preview pics 8/14)
Post by: jedistyle on August 16, 2006, 01:12 AM
looks like it's gunna be great man. i reallylike that shot of the troopers dismounting the gunghip, can't wait to see more!
Title: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (Update - August 16th)
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on August 16, 2006, 04:51 PM
Well, after much delay and hard work, I have finally completed the next update (Chapters 37, 38 & 39).  Many thanx to YESTERDAY808[/i] over at RS for completing all the special effects in the following chapters.  I may have overloaded him with so many pics.  :P

I hope this update was worth the wait, as it was the hardest set of chapters to complete, with respect to  dialogue, photography, and special effects.  I have to apologize again about the smaller sized pics, as there is no way to expand those shots without losing clarity.

So without any more delay......Enjoy!   8)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (New preview pics 8/14)
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on August 16, 2006, 04:56 PM
DARK ILLUSIONS

ACT III

Chapter 37



Despite the ongoing War and recent developments on Oner, rumors of a secret cloning facility on Coruscant are running rampant not only among concerned Senators, but ordinary citizens fearful of the new brand of justice enforced by the 501st Legion.



Senator Meena Tills:    The 501st Clones were simply doing their job, Bail.  We should consider that before we suggest they be reprimanded to the Chancellor.
Senator Bail Organa:   I understand your concern, Meena. 
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/37-1.jpg)



Senator Bail Organa:   However, if the 501st is allowed to operate without any supervision, incidents like what happened to the Rodian at the Spaceport will continue unchallenged.  It will only be a matter of time until we find ourselves in an intergalactic scandal due their brand of “peace keeping.”
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/37-2.jpg)



Senator Meena Tills:   I agree limits to their power must be declared, but not at the expense of the Capital’s security.  We must protect the Senate and the Chancellor.
Senator Bail Organa:    I’ll be sure to voice your concerns to the Chancellor.  Now, if you’ll excuse me, I’m late for my appointment.  I bid you both a good day.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/37-3.jpg)



Senator Bail Organa:   (thinking)  Great…more security…
Shocktrooper Oir:   We have a visitor, Commander.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/37-5.jpg)



Commander Thire:   May I see your identification.
Senator Bail Organa:    I have an appointment with the Chancellor.  I’m Senator Bail Organa of Alderaan.  Surely you have my name on his itinerary.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/37-7.jpg)



Commander Thire:   The Chancellor’s schedule is confidential.  Let me see your identi---- is that a blaster underneath your cloak, sir???
Senator Bail Organa:    A blaster?  Oh, yes, it is.  I forgot to ---
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/37-8.jpg)



Commander Thire:   Don’t move!  Hands up!
Senator Bail Organa:    Whoa!!  Calm down…calm down…
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Commander Thire:   Hand over your blaster and identification.  NOW, SIR!!!
Senator Bail Organa:    N-N-No problem……here you go…nice and easy……
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Commander Thire:   Does he have a code clearance?
Shocktrooper Oir:    Yes, Commander.  Senator Organa is on today’s approved list of guests.  He is ten minutes late.
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Commander Thire:   You are free to proceed, Senator.  We are confiscating your blaster, however.
Senator Bail Organa:    Of course……
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Senator Bail Organa:    (thinking) Welcome to the new Republic……
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Shocktrooper Oir:   His blaster wasn’t charged, sir. 
Commander Thire:    No matter……keep an eye on him. 
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Mas Amedda:   Welcome, Senator Organa.  The Chancellor has been expecting you. 
Senator Bail Organa:    I was……delayed unexpectedly.
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Chancellor Palpatine:   Senator Organa…so good to see you again. 
Senator Bail Organa:    My apologies for my lateness, Chancellor. 
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Chancellor Palpatine:   Oh, think nothing of it.  I always look forward to our conversations.  I hope the Security Clones weren’t too bothersome. 
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Senator Bail Organa:   Well, the security has definitely tightened around here, Chancellor. 
Chancellor Palpatine:    Yes, an unfortunate sacrifice during these stressful times. 
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Chancellor Palpatine:    But don’ forget, it was your fellow Senators that decreed I be accompanied at all times by either the Homeland Security Clones or the Royal Guards.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/37-20.jpg)



Senator Bail Organa:   Actually, that was the reason I wanted to speak with you privately, Chancellor.  There is a growing concern among both Senators and our constituents regarding the limitless power of the Galactic Security.   
Chancellor Palpatine:    Oh?  Are you referring to the incidents at Dex’s Diner and at the Spaceport?
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Senator Bail Organa:    Well…yes, I am.  Both incidents have quickly earned the 501st a reputation of a “shoot first, ask questions later” security team.
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Chancellor Palpatine:   I was informed the explosion at Dex’s Diner was the result of a gas leak, which obviously had nothing to do with the 501st.  As for the Rodian at the Spaceport, that was a regrettable incident.  The Rodian matched the description of a suspected terrorist named Greedo.  However, we are taking corrective steps to prevent such an occurrence from happening again. 
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/37-23.jpg)



Senator Bail Organa:   Well, Chancellor, if I may be so bold……it will be difficult to judge whether or not the Clones have acted improperly if there are no written laws to judge them by.  We need someone to oversee their day-to-day operations…someone who is not a Clone.
Chancellor Palpatine:    Oh, I agree, Senator.  That was the reason I requested a Jedi be assigned to command the 501st.     
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/37-25.jpg)



Chancellor Palpatine:   Unfortunately, the Jedi Council has ignored my requests.  The War has the Council spread across the galaxy.  Until they reconvene, the Republic’s security will be in the hands of the 501st Legion.  They are more than capable of handling the responsibility, I assure you.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/37-27.jpg)




Chancellor Palpatine:   You have my word, as Chancellor, that the incidents in question will be investigated fully.  And the results will be made public.
Senator Bail Organa:    I’m sure that will go a long way in restoring trust in the 501st.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/37-26.jpg)



Senator Bail Organa:   However, there is another matter I wish to speak to you about…a matter of some delicacy.     
Chancellor Palpatine:    Go on, Senator.
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Senator Bail Organa:   There have been several reports on the HoloNet about a secret cloning facility right here on Coruscant.  According to these reports, Taun We herself is in charge of the facility and continues to operate it without prior approval from the Senate. 
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Chancellor Palpatine:   I have also seen these reports.  Trust me when I say that the reports are just speculation without any basis in fact.  The Kaminoans are under strict orders to contact the Senate regarding any matters with the Clone Army.
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Chancellor Palpatine:   If there were a cloning facility on Coruscant, my office would be aware of it.  But as you know……the Senate would first have to approve of such a facility. 
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Senate Bail Organa:   Yes, of course.  I believe that is the reason for the concern, if the reports were true.   There has been no mention of such a proposal to this point.
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Chancellor Palpatine:   I will recommend a commission be created to ascertain the truth.  We will discover the source of these reports immediately.
Senator Bail Organa:    Thank you, Chancellor.  I will pass that information along.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/37-33.jpg)



Senator Bail Organa:   My compliments to you for this fine piece of artwork.  Is it new?     
Chancellor Palpatine:    No, this crystal was a gift to the Republic from the people of Oner many years ago.  A token of appreciation for the rebuilding efforts of their homeland.  They were truly artists, don’t you think?
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/37-34.jpg)



Chancellor Palpatine:   I felt it was appropriate to display the sculpture during the current campaign.  This sculpture now stands as a memorial to the fallen people of Oner.
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Senator Bail Organa:   A very nice gesture, Chancellor.  I thank you for your time.
Chancellor Palpatine:    Always a pleasure to hear from you, Senator.  Only working together can we bring peace and security to the Republic.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/37-36.jpg)



Mas Amedda:    I trust your meeting was informative, Chancellor?
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Chancellor Palpatine:    Indeed……
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Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (New preview pics 8/14)
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on August 16, 2006, 05:04 PM
DARK ILLUSIONS

Chapter 38



As Commander Cody and the 212th Battalion attack the Separatist forces on the plains of Oner, Commander Gree and the Elite Corps begin their search & rescue mission for Jedi Master Saesee Tiin.



Commander Gree:   We’re approaching the village, General Windu.
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Commander Gree:   Allow us scout ahead, General.  We don’t want to lose the element of surprise.
Mace Windu:   Very well, Commander.
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Commander Gree:   The vegetation on this planet is exquisite.  It will provide excellent cover for us, and make identifying rancor tracks easy. 
Elite Trooper Phi:   Droids up ahead, sir.
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Commander Gree:   Everyone down!  Just two battle droids.  The main battle is far away from here, so these droids must be on patrol.  We must be close.
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Commander Gree:   Everyone spread out.  I want a triangular shot. 
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Commander Gree over private comlink:   We need to take them out quickly, men.  We only got one chance at this.  Ready……aim……
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Commander Gree:   ……fire!
Laser blast!
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Laser blast!
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Commander Gree:   Dead eye!
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Commander Gree:   Get to the droids ASAP!
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Commander Gree:   Re-activate the droids’ communication signal.  We don’t want their Command Center to know these droids are down. 
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Elite Trooper Phi:   The signal has been re-established, Commander. 
Commander Gree:   Good work.
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Commander Gree:   General Windu, you may now advance to my coordinates.
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Mace Windu:   Very good, Commander.  I sense a trap, Kit.  The dark side surrounds this place. 
Kit Fisto:   It’s Count Dooku.  He knows we are coming. 
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Kit Fisto:   It makes no sense for Dooku to kidnap Master Tiin and bring the War to an empty place like Oner……unless, of course, he is using him as bait.  But why keep him alive?
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Mace Windu:   I wish I knew.  There is something else at play here.  Either way, the Force will be our guide. 
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Meanwhile…


Commander Gree:   Fire!
Laser blast!
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Laser blast!
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Commander Gree:   Two more droids.  Re-establish their signals.  We are very close now…
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CONSTANT GUNFIRE AND EXPLOSIONS CAN BE HEARD IN THE DISTANCE.

Elite Trooper Phi:   The battle has been going on for hours.  How do you think the 212th are doing, sir?
Commander Gree:   The Droid Army was well prepared for this battle.  Commander Cody knew what they were up against.  I have no doubt they will be successful.  But there will be many casualties.
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Commander Gree:   We will honor our fallen brethren by successfully completing our mission.  Let’s keep moving...
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While Gree and the Elite corps continues their covert operation, the battle on the rolling plains of Oner rages on……




OOM-12:   Execute formation 45.  CHARGE!
Laser blasts!
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Laser blasts!
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/38-23a.jpg)




Clone Trooper Diffe:   Arghhhh…
Clone Trooper Cyef:   Uuugghhhh…
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/38-24a.jpg)



Clone Trooper Verd:   Returning fire!
Laser blasts!
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/38-25a.jpg)




Clone Trooper Verd:   Got’em!
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Battle Droid 214B:   Charge!
Laser blasts!
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Clone Trooper Zub:   More droids incoming! 
Laser blasts!
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/38-28a.jpg)




PPPFFFFZZZTTTTT!
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/38-29a.jpg)




Super Battle Droid 341A:   Clone troopers straight ahead.
Laser blasts!
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/38-30a.jpg)




Clone Trooper Klou:   Look out!!!
Clone Trooper Zub:   …uuugghh!
Clone Trooper Uhvl:   I’m hit…
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/38-31a.jpg)





Clone Trooper Klou:   More droids behind us!
Laser blasts!
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/38-33a.jpg)




Commander Cody:   Cover fire!!!
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/38-34a.jpg)




Commander Cody:   They’re trying to out-flank us.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/38-35.jpg)




Commander Cody:   Call in the reinforcements.  We need more men!
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Elsewhere on the battlefield…



Clone Trooper Tobey:   Don’t let them get away.  Shoot them down!!!
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Clone Trooper Tobey:   Just like the simulation!
Laser blasts!
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/38-38a.jpg)




Clone Trooper Tobey:   Nobody messes with the 212th!
Clone Troopers Polu & Xabl:   Yea!
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/38-39.jpg)





Suddenly, a spear stabs a clone trooper in the back of the neck.
Clone Trooper Polu:   BLEH---
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Clone Trooper Xabl:   Who?!  Let go of my blaster!   Tobey!!!
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/38-41.jpg)




Laser blast!
Clone Trooper Tobey:   What is it --- uuuggghhh….
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/38-42a.jpg)




Punch!
Clone Trooper Xabl:   Ooof!
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/38-43.jpg)




Clone Trooper Xabl:   Get off of me, freak!
THUD!
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/38-44.jpg)





Clone Trooper Xabl:   …got to get my blaster……where is it???  Where is it?!?!
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/38-45.jpg)




Clone Trooper Xabl:   Got it!  Now you’re…
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/38-46.jpg)




Clone Trooper Xabl:   …dead!  Huh?
SLASH!!  SLASH!!
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Sagev:   No……now you’re dead…freak.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/38-48.jpg)






On another part of the battlefield…



Slash!  Slash!
Anakin Skywalker:   67!  68!
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Slash!
Anakin Skywalker:   69!
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Laser blasts!
Anakin Skywalker:   70!!!
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Anakin Skywalker:   I’m at 70 droids.  How many do you have, Master?
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Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Anakin……we are not in competition!
FORCE PUSH!  CRASH!
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Super Battle Droid 913X:   Die Jedi!
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/38-54a.jpg)





SLASH!  PPFFZZTTT!
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/38-55a.jpg)




Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Our objective is to defeat the Droid Army.
SLASH!  CRASH!
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/38-57a.jpg)




Obi-Wan Kenobi:   But I think that last one puts me at 75.
Anakin Skywalker:   What??   75?!?
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/38-58b.jpg)



Clone Trooper Rtho:   No!  Get away!  Ughhhhh…
Anakin Skywalker:   What was that?
Obi-Wan Kenobi:   I don’t know…
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/38-59a.jpg)




Anakin Skywalker:   That was no droid.  They’re not programmed to fight at close range.  Something’s not right……
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/38-60a.jpg)



Obi-Wan Kenobi:   I sense it also.  Something or somebody is attacking our troopers. 
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/38-61.jpg)




Clone Trooper Oyre:   Help! AAAHHH----
Anakin Skywalker:   Over there!!!
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/38-62a.jpg)



Obi-Wan Kenobi:   No, Anakin!  Wait!!!
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The Republic Gunships begin arriving, bringing more troops to the battlefield…



Commander Oddball:   The drop point is coming up.  Get ready, troopers!
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Commander Oddball:   Go!  Go!  Go!
Clone Troopers:   YEEAAAAA!!!
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/38-66.jpg)





Laser blasts!
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Battle Droid 867A:   Republic Gunships are incoming.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/38-68.jpg)



OOM-12:   Fire all anti-aircraft turrets!
Battle Droid 867A:   Roger roger!
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Turret laser blasts!
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/38-70a.jpg)




Clone Trooper Edui:   We got incoming fire!  Look out!
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/38-71.jpg)




Clone Pilot Aryn:   Too late!!!
KA-BOOM!
Clone Trooper Edui:   AAAAHHHHH!!!!
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/38-72c.jpg)





The explosion is heard across the plains.
Commander Cody:   They got one of our ships…fully loaded.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/38-73.jpg)




Battle Droid 537X:   Die clones die!
Laser blasts!
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/38-73b.jpg)




Clone Trooper Cabz:   Uugghh!
Commander Cody:   More droids……
Laser blasts!
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/38-74b.jpg)



PPPPFFFFZZZZTTTT
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/38-74c.jpg)





Turret laser blast!
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/38-75a.jpg)



Commander Oddball:   We’re taking heavy fire!  Everybody hold on!!!
Turret laser blasts!
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/38-76B.jpg)






Commander Cody:   We are playing right into their hands.   
Laser blasts!
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/38-77a.jpg)



Commander Cody:   And losing too many men.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/38-78.jpg)



Commander Cody:   Tell the Gunships to make their drops further back until we clear the battlefield of those turrets.   
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/38-79.jpg)




Commander Cody:   We need to do something OOM-12 wouldn’t expect us to do……something he’s never prepared for……
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/38-80.jpg)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS - Photonovel (New preview pics 8/14)
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on August 16, 2006, 05:07 PM
DARK ILLUSIONS

Chapter 39



Unknown to Senator Bail Organa and the rest of the Senate, the rumored Cloning Facility on Coruscant, codename Perfidy, continues to operate deep under the planet’s surface, in a secret bunker whose location is only known to a select few.



Taun We:   That concludes today’s session.  We will continue tomorrow.  Please resume your security patrols.
Trooper Hades:   Thank you, Taun We. 
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Taun We:   And now back to work…
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Door slides open
Taun We:   Hades, is that you?  We will continue the training tomorrow--- 
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/39-20g.jpg)




Commander Appo:   Taun We -- your services are no longer necessary.  Consider this job terminated.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/39-20h.jpg)




Taun We:   I’m in charge of this cloning facility, not the Republic.
Commander Appo:   Not anymore… 
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/39-20j.jpg)




Tuan We:   Noooo!!!
Commander Appo:   Blast her!!!
Laser blasts!!!
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/39-20ma.jpg)




Commander Appo:   Target has been eliminated.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/39-20n.jpg)



Trooper Hades:   Did you hear something?
Trooper Crimson:   Negative.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/39-20o.jpg)







At the same time, a secret transmission is being sent from The Works on Coruscant…





Darth Sidious:   How goes the War, Lord Tyranus?
Count Dooku:   Very good, My Lord.  We have acquired several new systems during the Outer Rim sieges, including some without firing a single shot.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/39-1.jpg)



Darth Sidious:  Excellent.  Where are the Separatist leaders now?
Count Dooku:   They have been moved to Cato Nemodia for the time being.  Viceroy Gunray preferred to be a safe distance away from the action, of course.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/39-5.jpg)




Darth Sidious:   And the battle on Oner?
Count Dooku:   The battle is on schedule.  The young Utapaun warrior is proving to be very……useful.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/39-3.jpg)




Count Dooku:   Commander OOM-12 has the Clone Army on the run.  It will not be long until we secure a victory.
 (http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/39-4.jpg)




Count Dooku:   We are also tracking several Jedi that arrived with the Clone Army, no doubt to reclaim Master Tiin. 
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/39-6.jpg)



Darth Sidious:   You have done well, Lord Tyrannus.  But be mindful.  The Jedi are not to be underestimated. 
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/39-7.jpg)



Count Dooku:   Then, do I have your approval to proceed with the final part of our plan, Master?
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/39-8.jpg)



Darth Sidious:   Yes…the time has come.
Shade:   (thinking)……he’s here……finally……
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/39-16.jpg)



Darth Sidious:   Inform General Grievous that he may begin eliminating the Jedi……beginning with Master Tiin.
Count Dooku:   Yes, my Master.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/39-9.jpg)



Darth Sidious:   Except for Kenobi and Skywalker.  You must deal with them personally.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/39-10.jpg)



Count Dooku:   Finally the time has come for young Skywalker.   His destiny lies with me.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/39-11.jpg)



Darth Sidious:   We will deal with Skywalker in due time.
Count Dooku:   Forgive me, Lord Sidious.  Your orders then?
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/39-12.jpg)




Shade:   (thinking)……it IS him……THE Darth Sidious……
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/39-17.jpg)




Darth Sidious:   Eliminate Obi-Wan Kenobi.  His death will be the first step towards securing Skywalker’s fate.
Count Dooku:   It will be done, my Lord.
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/39-13.jpg)



Darth Sidious:   All loose ends on Coruscant have been……taken care of.  Everything is going as I have foreseen.   
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/39-2.jpg)



Darth Sidious:   The time for illusions is over.
Count Dooku:   As is the reign of the Jedi Order. 
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/39-15.jpg)




Shade:   (thinking)…no time to wait for slow-footed Jedi……have to act now……
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/39-18.jpg)




Shade:   (thinking)……time to end this War……once and for all……FOR THE REPUBLIC!!!
Laser blasts!
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/39-19ba.jpg)







To be continued……[/b]


Many thanx to YESTERDAY808 over at RS for adding the excellent special effects to chapters 38 and 39.  The battles scenes would be very boring without him and his special effects, which bring the story to life.  Great working with you again, YESTERDAY.


Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (Update Aug 16th)
Post by: Jedi_Assassin on August 16, 2006, 06:11 PM
That was fan-frieakin'-tastic, S_A! Amazing. You have continued to impress me.
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (Update Aug 16th)
Post by: 212th Battalion on August 16, 2006, 07:46 PM
 :o :o :o :o :o :o :o That was awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Cant wai't to see who wins the battle keep up the great work!!!!!
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (Update Aug 16th)
Post by: Quazar on August 17, 2006, 04:09 AM
Longhorn, this is just AWESOME!

Even though I am a major, major fan of your stories, usually I have a few constructive comments to offer.  Nothing today, though, this is flawless, as far as I can tell.

I will try to post more detailed comments, as usual, but off the bat, this is just wonderful, wonderful stuff.

Thanks again for your amazing stories. 

And thanks to YESTERDAY from RS for his amazing special effects.  It makes an already extraordinary effort even cooler.

Wow!!!
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (Update Aug 16th)
Post by: CloneCommander1 on August 17, 2006, 01:39 PM
This is so good!  WOW!  I'll have to read it a few more times before I can write about it in detail.  Just incredible work.
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (Update Aug 16th)
Post by: Roton7 on August 17, 2006, 01:52 PM
HOLY COW!!! That was fantastic! I'm on the edge of my seat after reading Chapter 38! The dialogue is just fantastic, and the action scenes are great! Fabulous job!!
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (Update Aug 16th)
Post by: Smartypants1635 on August 17, 2006, 02:32 PM
NOOOOOO SHADE NOOOO,  :'( Such a good trooper, why'd he have to die.

The battle is looking really good too keep it up.
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (Update Aug 16th)
Post by: CloneCommander1 on August 17, 2006, 02:37 PM
I really hope shade stays alive somehow, I like him.
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (Update Aug 16th)
Post by: Artoo on August 17, 2006, 05:59 PM
Chapter 37- It was OK, senator scenes are always boring no matter what it is. IMO. ;)

Chapter 38- It was SUPER! I love that you used clone lines from BF II (Just like the simulation!) & the clones! Obi & Anakin were also great, I guess they're the comic releif. :P
I also like the mission Gree,the 41st & the jedi are having. Great battle scenes!

Chapter 39- Great use of the 501st! Poor Tuan We. Is that the SSC Anakin exclusive Sidious? There is a use for those holos! :D Have you read any of the RC books becuase Shade sort of reminds me of a null ARC trooper.
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (Update Aug 16th)
Post by: Roton7 on August 17, 2006, 06:37 PM
NOOOOOO SHADE NOOOO,  :'( Such a good trooper, why'd he have to die.

Shade didn't die, at least not yet...
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (Update Aug 16th)
Post by: Artoo on August 17, 2006, 06:48 PM
It looks like he might... :'(
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (Update Aug 16th)
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on August 22, 2006, 12:11 PM
Thanx for all the feedback once again guys.  These were my favorite 3 chapters to create b/c of the the action and plot sequences revealed.

Jedi_Assassin:   Thanx for the props, Jedi.  I still impress myself with some of my ideas for backgrounds, but I am running out of ideas... :-\

212th Battalion:   You're losing men, 212th!   ;)  The end of the battle will be exciting with more action.

Quazar:   Always good to read your comments, Quazar.  I'll have to wear your comments as a badge of honor, since you always give a great critique.  At least your comments merit my constant delays in posting this update, b/c there was so much I wanted to get just right.  YESTERDAY did a fantastic job!

CloneCommander1:   Look forward to your future comments, Commander.  Thanx for leaving some initial feedback.  Enjoy the re-reads!

Roton7:   Glad to read you liked chapter 38.  That chapter had over 100 pics when I first shot it.  I had to edit and organize the battle in order for it to make sense.  I was really pleased with the flow of the battle and the various things happening on the battlefield.

Smartypants1635:   Shade isn't dead!  He just opened fire on his target.  His story will continue in the next update, starting with chapter 40.

CloneCommander1:   Shade is a tough SOB, and has more than enough confidence in his own abilities.  Just wait until chapter 40...

Artoo:   Thanx for breaking down the your feedback.  I agree, the politcial chapters are slow, but they are essential in the overall story.  I wanted to have a multiple plot story, which included some political intrigue.  The dialogue is extremely difficult to write for these chapters.  Glad you spotted the comments from BF2.  Great game!  Obi and Anakin have to get bored fighting droids all the time, so they need some distraction.  Gree and company will get into havey duty action in the next update.  I had multiple versions of the Taun We sequence, but I chose the simplest one in the end, and I thinked it worked perfectly.  The Sidious holo has been featured before - it is from the Dooku Saga 2002 figure.  And I am going to begin reading the RC book soon.  Shade is an original idea and personality.

Shade is about to get into some major action.  Look for him to lead off the next update.  No date as of yet, but I will begin work on it within the next week.

Thanx again for all the feedback!  JD is keeping this story going!  Stay tuned...... 8)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (Update Aug 16th)
Post by: Artoo on August 22, 2006, 06:02 PM
Well, Shade seems like a null ARC.
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (Preview pic)
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on September 10, 2006, 04:07 PM
Thanx for the feedback guys.  Always much appreciated.

Artoo:   Shade is a great character to write for,  but the whole story has influences from the CW novels, since I am reading them non-stop!  Shade will have a big impact in the next update! 

I am still working on the next update, but it is slow to come as the next chapters will be action-packed.  Until then, here is a preview pic in the meantime:


(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Sample%20pics/Sample-chap40.jpg)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (Preview pic)
Post by: Artoo on September 12, 2006, 05:51 PM
Cool! That mean the update is soon?
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (Preview pic)
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on September 13, 2006, 10:11 AM
Cool! That mean the update is soon?

I hope.  The action scenes take a lot longer than the 'talking' scenes.  Plus, more time for the effects to be added.

But I am working on it, so be patient!  8)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (Preview pic)
Post by: Swede on September 14, 2006, 04:53 PM
Man, I just love that shot of Palps! That's freakin' awesome! 
I've got to tell ya SA, your camera shots / angles really bring your figures to life; your definately one of the best out there.  I know it's just a frontal shot, but with the hand thrust forward and just the right amount of shade over his eyes ... it's just freaky ... makes me feel like I'm about to get roasted with some force lightning. :'(

Kudos ... as always  ;D

Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (Preview pic)
Post by: ATL on September 15, 2006, 08:33 PM
I finally got caught up!Phew!Really Great!I hope we see the rancor again he's my favorite character.well besides the clones!
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (Preview pic)
Post by: Artoo on September 16, 2006, 11:40 AM
Oh yeah, nice reference to Greedo! I forgot that.

Edit- You have any more plans for future Sandie comedy novel? That was funny.
I'm thinking of doing a Cantina comedy novel sort of like cantina creature's comic series. I may start as soon as I get the bar set.
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (Preview pic)
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on September 23, 2006, 03:56 AM
Oh yeah, nice reference to Greedo! I forgot that.

Edit- You have any more plans for future Sandie comedy novel? That was funny.
I'm thinking of doing a Cantina comedy novel sort of like cantina creature's comic series. I may start as soon as I get the bar set.

Thanx for the feedback guys on the Preview pic.  I shot the second chapter this week, but may break it into two seperate chapters, since it has parts. 

Artoo - I have thought about another one or two STORMTROOPER TALES, but I have been too busy to really brainstorm them.  I will make another one eventually, but right now I am just trying to post another update ASAP.

Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (Preview pic)
Post by: Artoo on September 23, 2006, 02:34 PM
Can't wait!
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (MAJOR PREVIEW 10/3/06)
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on October 3, 2006, 06:08 PM
Hey guys...

GOOD NEWS!  I am working on the next update as we speak.  I have been swamped at work, which has made me lazy when I get home.  But my schedule is getting lighter now, and I have begun working on the next 3 chapters.

I just finshed shooting the last chapter Sunday night, so I am now in the process of organizing and writing the dialogue for the 3 chapters.  YESTERDAY808 is doing the effects once again (many thanx!) for the battle scenes in the next three chapters.  Hopefully, and I do mean 'hopefully', the update will be complete by next Friday, October 13th.

Until then, here is a "mini-trailer" preview of the next upcoming chapter.  The whole story has been building up to these final chapters.......enjoy!   :cool:




 (http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-4.jpg)


 (http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-27.jpg)


 (http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-55.jpg)


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 (http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-82.jpg)


 (http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-73.jpg)


 (http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/40-20.jpg)


 (http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-36.jpg)


 (http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-69b.jpg)


 (http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-47.jpg)


 (http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-67.jpg)


 (http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-7.jpg)


 (http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-72.jpg)


 (http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/40-1a.jpg)


(Hope I didn't give too much away!)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (MAJOR PREVIEW 10/3/06)
Post by: ATL on October 3, 2006, 07:35 PM
Do you mean tuesday the 10th or friday the 13th(yeah,yeah i know)?
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (MAJOR PREVIEW 10/3/06)
Post by: ATL on October 3, 2006, 07:40 PM
Oh I forgot to add ...Yeah the RANCOR!!!!!!!
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (MAJOR PREVIEW 10/3/06)
Post by: Artoo on October 3, 2006, 08:07 PM
Ah hah! You used my Grievous idea! WOO! I'm right *does a lil' dance*
Also do you have a script made or do you right as you go?
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (MAJOR PREVIEW 10/3/06)
Post by: Roton7 on October 3, 2006, 08:40 PM
So...Shade is gonna die?
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (MAJOR PREVIEW 10/3/06)
Post by: 212th Battalion on October 3, 2006, 09:38 PM
no shade!
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (MAJOR PREVIEW 10/3/06)
Post by: Reid on October 3, 2006, 09:57 PM
So...Shade is gonna die?

Maybe Shade will kill Sidious. Ever think of that? Then Chewbacca's perverted father, Itchy, will clone the dead Sidious, deeming him Siidious.
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (MAJOR PREVIEW 10/3/06)
Post by: Quazar on October 4, 2006, 01:53 AM
Awesome, Longhorn!  Can't wait to see the new material!
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (MAJOR PREVIEW 10/3/06)
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on October 4, 2006, 10:23 AM
Thanx for feedback guys!

ATL:  Date corrected!  Sorry about that...and the Rancor will return with the next update.

Artoo:  I forgot you mentioned the new Grievous figure.  I saw the Coruscant wave GG figure for the first time this weekend, and I was impressed with the paint scheme, especially the cape.  So pI picked him and quickly began using him in the story.  And I do have the entire story written in outline form, but I write the details before shooting the pics. 

Roton7, 212th Battalion, HunterOfThePegs:  No comment on what will happen to Shade, but he will be in the update as well.  I trust you will all be happy with his update.

Quazar:  Thanx Quazar!  I hope the dialogue and effects are complete by next Friday, b/c this update is going to be a lot of fun. 

Keep your fingers crossed!  8)

Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (MAJOR PREVIEW 10/3/06)
Post by: Artoo on October 12, 2006, 09:23 PM
So...Shade is gonna die?

Maybe Shade will kill Sidious. Ever think of that? Then Chewbacca's perverted father, Itchy, will clone the dead Sidious, deeming him Siidious.
LOL, Sidious wasn't where Shade was it was Dooku. :P
Still the thing you said was funny.
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (MAJOR PREVIEW 10/3/06)
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on October 13, 2006, 10:02 AM
LOL, Sidious wasn't where Shade was it was Dooku. :P

If you're talking about the last chapter, 39, then Shade was back at The Works.  Count Dooku and Sidious were communicating via hologram, but Shade was ordered to return to the Works by Mace Windu when Mace first arrived on Oner.  Therefore, Shade was observing Sidious speaking to Holo Dooku.  GO back and check it out......it will be important for the next update. 

Still working on the next update.  The effects are now being added, and the dialogue is nearly complete.  If I don't post it today (most likely not), then it will be posted for sure by next week.  Stay tuned... 8)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (MAJOR PREVIEW 10/3/06)
Post by: Artoo on October 16, 2006, 09:41 PM
Ok, so I was wrong. I can live. *sobs*  ;)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (MAJOR PREVIEW 10/3/06)
Post by: Swede on October 18, 2006, 08:43 AM
Man, I've got some serious catching up to do ... looks like this is going to be a great chapter coming up SA ... love the last shot of Palps deflecting a blaster bolt, your effects are top notch!!!
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (MAJOR PREVIEW 10/3/06)
Post by: Artoo on October 21, 2006, 05:24 PM
Where's the update? ???
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (MAJOR PREVIEW 10/3/06)
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on October 23, 2006, 11:23 AM
Where's the update? ???

Sorry for the delay guys.  I really wanted to post this update by now, but Mother Earth has disrupted that.  Continue reading...

To reply to SWEDE's comments, I do not create the effects in the my photos.  I don't have the skill or software to create them.  YESTERDAY808 over at RS volunteered to create the special effects for me.  His effects and his stories have always looked sharp, so I took him up on the offer.  He may regret the decision  now since there are so many pics!  Well, as I mentioned earlier, Mother Earth has interfered.  YESTERDAY lives in Hawaii, and last week the islands were hit with a 6.0+ magnitude earthquake.  Fortunately, YESTERDAY and his family are fine, but like most of the island, he had problems with his power.  He lost the work he had done up to that point.  He is now starting over on all the effects. 

Hopefully, by the end of this week the update will be complete.  But I will Poll the readers here at JD, since you guys are great bunch.  I could post 1 of 3 things, so let me know what you guys think:

1.  I can post Chapter 40 (picks up where chapter 39 ends) by itself now, ahead of the other 2 chapters, since the effects & dialogue are complete for that chapter.  The other 2 I'll post when they are complete,

2.  I can post all three chapters without YESTERDAY's effects.  I'll go back and insert the photos with effects later when they are complete,

3.  Or wait until YESTERDAY has completed the effects (my preference!).

JD readers are the best so let me know what you guys think!



Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (MAJOR PREVIEW 10/3/06)
Post by: ATL on October 23, 2006, 03:13 PM
i would prefer the first,but whatever you want to do is fine with me
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (MAJOR PREVIEW 10/3/06)
Post by: Artoo on October 24, 2006, 06:18 PM
Chapter 40! ;D
I can wait for 41 & 42! It may be posted on my b-day, a free gift! :)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (MAJOR PREVIEW 10/3/06)
Post by: scruffynerfherder on October 29, 2006, 08:50 PM
Hey man i read the story a while ago n i was hoping the update wud be up by now...:(...o well ill check back later
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (MAJOR PREVIEW 10/3/06)
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on October 30, 2006, 09:58 AM
I can wait for 41 & 42! It may be posted on my b-day, a free gift! :)

When is your birthday, ARTOO?

SCRUFFYNERFHERDER:  Apologies to all readers for the delay.  See below.

I may post this update without the effects.  Unfortunately, YESTERDAY is swamed at work and has not had the time to complete the effects.  His additions are really great, and important during the battle sequences. 

Let me see how the chapter looks without th effects.  Stay tuned...
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (MAJOR PREVIEW 10/3/06)
Post by: scruffynerfherder on October 30, 2006, 12:23 PM
No man is all good; though i really want to see the next update i would much rather wait for YESTERDAY to finish the special effects! it just adds so much to the story :)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on November 3, 2006, 04:42 PM
Well, I am now awaiting YESTERDAY's effects.  I've told him to take his time, since he is extremely busy right now.

Either way, I will for sure post the next update by next Friday, November 10th.  The update is a long time coming, and I want to begin working on the next three chapters.

Stay tuned... 8)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel
Post by: Smartypants1635 on November 4, 2006, 02:15 PM
Start working now, that way, you can get it up sooner. ;)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (MAJOR PREVIEW 10/3/06)
Post by: Artoo on November 8, 2006, 01:33 PM
I can wait for 41 & 42! It may be posted on my b-day, a free gift! :)

When is your birthday, ARTOO?

SCRUFFYNERFHERDER:  Apologies to all readers for the delay.  See below.

I may post this update without the effects.  Unfortunately, YESTERDAY is swamed at work and has not had the time to complete the effects.  His additions are really great, and important during the battle sequences. 

Let me see how the chapter looks without th effects.  Stay tuned...
Oct. 28th. :)
I hope his work starts getting easy again.
Title: DARK ILLUSIONS - Chapters 40-41-42
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on November 10, 2006, 05:34 PM
OK, here is the update....FINALLY! Unfortunately, I have not heard from YESTERDAY in three weeks, so I don't know what happened to the rest of the special effects. When I do hear from him, I'll swap out the pics for the edited ones.

And now for chapters 40, 41, and 42 of DARK ILLUSIONS!

Enjoy... 8)
Title: DARK ILLUSIONS - Chapter 40
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on November 10, 2006, 05:36 PM
DARK ILLUSIONS

ACT III

Chapter 40



Continued from Chapter 39…




Shade:   (thinking)……time to end this War……once and for all……FOR THE REPUBLIC!!!
Laser blasts!
(http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a132/S_V_Bane/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2037-39/39-19ba.jpg)




Laser blasts!
Darth Sidious:   …… 
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/40-1a.jpg)




Shade:   (thinking)   ……a lightsaber?……a Jedi?……
Laser blasts!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/40-3a.jpg)




Laser blasts!
Darth Sidious:   ……
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/40-4a.jpg)



Shade:   (thinking)   It is a Jedi!……But how?…… 
Laser blasts!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/40-5a.jpg)




Laser blasts!
Darth Sidious:   You disappoint me…… 
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/40-6a.jpg)




Darth Sidious:   You have a reputation for being an intelligent, skilled warrior……not just another mindless Clone…… Shadow Trooper Shade.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/40-9.jpg)



Shade:   (thinking)   How’s does he know my name?……got to keep moving……never tried to kill a Jedi before…… 
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/40-7.jpg)




Darth Sidious:   But you attack me with pathetic, little toys.  Master Windu would be so disappointed…
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/40-10.jpg)



Darth Sidious:   …especially after all those clues I left for you.
Shade:   (thinking)   Wha????
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/40-11.jpg)




Darth Sidious:   It was I that planted that transmission in the Chancellor’s computer……
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/40-17-7.jpg)
   


Darth Sidious:   And I was the one that arranged for the Royal Guards to be at The Works when you arrived……
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/40-21-8.jpg)



Darth Sidious:   ……knowing that you would kill them without hesitating.  It was no coincidence you found the transmission from Oner on their navicomputer.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/40-21-39.jpg)



Shade:   (thinking)   ……impossible…… 
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/40-12.jpg)



Darth Sidious:   You took the bait…just as I knew you would.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/40-13.jpg)



Shade:   (thinking)   But that would mean……the Jedi were involved……or were they?
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/40-14.jpg)




Darth Sidious:   Why don’t you come out of hiding……and I’ll answer all of your questions.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/40-15.jpg)





The roof of the old warehouse begins to crack.



Shade:   (thinking)   Surely General Windu would have --- what was that?
 (http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/40-16.jpg)



Shade:   (thinking)   The roof is collapsing!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/40-17.jpg)





Part of the ceiling collapses, forcing Shade to move quickly.


Shade:   (thinking)   Darn Jedi tricks……got to keep moving…… 
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/40-18.jpg)





Darth Sidious:   I have you NOW!!! 
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/40-19.jpg)





A sudden power picks up Shade and slams him against the wall.


Shade:   Uuugghhh!!! 
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/40-20.jpg)



Darth Sidious:   At last we meet…face to face!
Shade:   …uugghh…
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/40-21.jpg)



Darth Sidious:   Most disappointing, Trooper… 
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/40-22.jpg)




Shade:   You’re no Jedi!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/40-23.jpg)





Darth Sidious:   YOU GOT THAT PART RIGHT!!! 
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/40-24.jpg)




Shade:   AAAAAAAHHHH!!!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/40-25.jpg)




Darth Sidious:   It was almost ‘too’ easy.  You reported finding the transmission from Oner.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/40-23-13.jpg)




Darth Sidious:   And when you arrived on Oner and saw that Master Tiin had been captured…
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/40-29-35.jpg)




Darth Sidious:   ……you quickly reported that to Master Windu…just like an obedient little Clone Trooper.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/40-29-50.jpg)




Darth Sidious:   And when Master Windu no longer had any use for you……so he sent you back here……to where it all began…
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/40-35-32.jpg)



Darth Sidious:   …and ends for you, Shade. 
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/40-26.jpg)




Shade:   AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/40-29.jpg)




Darth Sidious:   You have served me so well, little Trooper…
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/40-31.jpg)




Darth Sidious:   You didn’t actually think you found anything on your own, did you?  HAHAHA…
Shade:  ……uuuuggghhh……….
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/40-32.jpg)




Shade:   (thinking)   ……must……reach……my……
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/40-33.jpg)




Darth Sidious:   You don’t know the power of the Dark Side!
Shade:   AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/40-34.jpg)





Darth Sidious:   That’s right……crawl like the pathetic life-form you are!  Is that all you can do to save your precious Republic?
Shade:   …………ugh………
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/40-39.jpg)



Darth Sidious:   Don’t worry, Trooper……you will be long remembered……
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/40-40.jpg)




Darth Sidious:   ……as the first Clone to betray the Republic! 
Shade:   ……no……I…would…never……
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/40-41.jpg)



Shade:   AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/40-43.jpg)




Darth Sidious:   And now……you will die.
Shade:   ……………
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/40-44.jpg)




Darth Sidious:   Hahahahaha……
Shade:   (thinking)   ……no……possible……escape………must………resign……
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/40-47.jpg)




Shade:   (thinking)………to………self-termination.
Darth Sidious:   A thermal detonator?  Is that the best you can---
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/40-48.jpg)





Shade:   ………FOR THE REPUBLIC!!!
CLICK!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/40-49.jpg)




KA-BOOOOOOM!!!!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/40-50ba.jpg)




Darth Sidious:   Arrgghh……impressive……for such a simple minion.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/40-51.jpg)




Darth Sidious:   I may have underestimated you, Clone Trooper Shade.  But no matter.  Your death will only be the beginning.  The Republic will fall……as will your Jedi friends!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/40-52.jpg)
Title: DARK ILLUSIONS - Chapter 41
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on November 10, 2006, 05:40 PM
DARK ILLUSIONS

ACT III

Chapter 41




The 212th Battalion continues the battle against the CIS Droid Army on the plains of Oner while advancing towards to the Barracks.



Battle Droid 458C:  Die, clones, die!
Laser blasts!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-10a.jpg)





Trooper Nero over internal comlink:   We have reached the droid barracks, but the base is heavily defended.  We are taking fire!  Over!
Commander Cody:  Hold your position!  The 3rd squad should be flanking to the east by now.
Laser blasts!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-11a.jpg)



Laser blasts!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-12a.jpg)


Trooper Ce’Ti:   More droids incoming!
Trooper Nero over internal comlink:   No sign of the other squad, Commander.  We’ll hold out as long as we……
Laser blasts!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-13a.jpg)



Trooper Dzrl:   UUGGHH!
Trooper Ce’Ti:   …
Trooper Nero:   Scatter!  Scatter!
Laser blasts!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-14a.jpg)



Trooper Ce’Ti over comlink:   Man down!  I need a Medic!
Trooper Dzrl:  ………………
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-15.jpg)



Trooper Ce’Ti:   Where is the other squad------
Laser blasts!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-16a.jpg)



Trooper Nero:   Must run faster……must run faster……must run faster……
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-17.jpg)


Trooper Dzrl:   ……must run fast----
Laser blasts!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-18a.jpg)






While the main battle continues, Commander Cody and two members from the 212th have separated from the main group in an attempt to salvage the mission and defeat Droid Commander OOM-12.



Commander Cody over comlinkl  Ce’Ti?  Nero?  Come in! 
Trooper Kyde:   They’re down, sir.
Trooper Tybox:  Wreckage ahead.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-1.jpg)



Trooper Kyde:   The Gunship must have taken heavy fire from the anti-aircraft turrets.  It appears to be a supplies transport.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-2.jpg)



Commander Cody:  Check for survivors.
Trooper Kyde & Tybox:   Yes, sir.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-3.jpg)



Trooper Tybox:   The pilots apparently survived the crash, but were shot attempting to flee the wreckage.  They were ambushed, sir.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-4.jpg)



Trooper Kyde:   These troopers are dead, Commander.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-5.jpg)



Commander Cody:  We’ve lost too many……is there anything left of the supplies? 
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-6.jpg)



Trooper Tybox:   No, sir.  Everything has been destroyed…or contaminated.  Wait……there is something……
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-7.jpg)



Trooper Tybox:   The two speeder bikes appear to be functional, sir.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-8.jpg)



Commander Cody:   Unload the speeders.  We’re going to need them.  Remain with the supplies ship and contact Central Command, Tybox.  Kyde and I will continue the search for the target on the speeders.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-9.jpg)







A bit later…



Trooper Kyde:   Do you think this will work, sir?
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-19.jpg)




Commander Cody:   Doesn’t matter what I think, trooper.  It has to work.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-20.jpg)




Trooper Kyde:   We’re approaching the last known coordinates of the target, sir.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-21.jpg)



Commander Cody:   Stay with the speeders. 
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-22.jpg)



Commander Cody:   If I don’t return in five minutes, report back to General Kenobi. 
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-23.jpg)



Trooper Kyde:   Yes, sir.  Good luck.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-24.jpg)







Commander Cody enters a dense forest looking for traces of their ‘target’.


Commander Cody:   (thinking)   Footprints……and they’re fresh.  Shouldn’t be too difficult to find it now…
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-25.jpg)



Commander Cody:   (thinking)   Where are you?  I know…you’re…around…here…
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-26.jpg)



Commander Cody:   ……somewhere.  Now to get your attention…
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-27.jpg)



Commander Cody:   HEY!  DOWN HERE!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-28.jpg)




Commander Cody:   How about this?!
Laser blast!
RRRROOOOOOOAAAARRRRR!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-30.jpg)




Commander Cody:   That got his attention---uh-oh---
RRRROOOOAAARRRRR!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-31.jpg)



Commander Cody:   Time to go…
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-32a.jpg)



RRRROOOAAARRR!
THUD!  THUD! THUD!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-33.jpg)



Commander Cody:   That’s it……this way……
RRRROOOOOAAAARRRRRR!
THUD!  THUD! THUD! THUD!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-34.jpg)



Trooper Kyde:   Look at the size of that thing.
THUD!  THUD!  THUD!  THUD!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-35.jpg)



Commander Cody:   Move it, Trooper!!!
RRROOOAAAAARRRRR!
THUD!  THUD!  THUD!  THUD!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-36.jpg)



Commander Cody:   Get back to the battle.  Tell General Kenobi to charge the Droid Barracks with the full battalion.
Trooper Kyde:   Yes sir! 
THUD!  THUD!  THUD!  THUD!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-38.jpg)



Commander Cody:   I’ll meet you there momentarily.
THUD!  THUD!  THUD!  THUD!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-39.jpg)








Meanwhile, back on the battlefield…



Turret laser blasts!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-40.jpg)




THUD!
Battle Droid 2251:   Did you hear something? 
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-41.jpg)



 Battle Droid 3373:   Roger roger!
THUD!  THUD!
Battle Droid 2251:   What that?
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-42.jpg)



Commander Cody speeds by on the BARC bike.

Battle Droid 2251:   Clone trooper!
THUD!  THUD!  THUD!  THUD!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-43.jpg)



Battle Droid 2251   Uh-oh…
Battle Droid 3373:   ROGER ROGER!!!
RRRROOOOAAAARRR!!!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-44.jpg)




Battle Droid 2251:   RRRUUNNN!---[/i]
CRUNCH! 
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-45.jpg)




THUD!  THUD!  THUD!  THUD!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-46.jpg)



Battle Droid 2251:   ……creature……incoming……battle……sta---bzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz……
THUD!  THUD!  THUD!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-47.jpg)








Back on the battlefield……



Battle Droid 237A:   Several squads have broken thru the perimeter defenses. 
Droid Commander OOM-12:   Order all available units to return to the barracks.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-48.jpg)



Trooper Faar:   Fire!
Laser blasts!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-49.jpg)



Droid Comander OOM-12:   Enemy targets!  Advance the line.  Activate all destroyer droids.
(Droid Transmission)   All available units report to the Barracks.  All available units report to the Barracks.
Laser blasts!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-51.jpg)




(Droid Transmission:)   All available units report to the Barracks.  All available units report to the Barracks.
[/i]CLANK!  CLANK!  CLANK![/i]
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-52.jpg)



Sagev:   The droids……they’re leaving.  No matter…I’ll finish these troopers by myself.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-53.jpg)



Trooper Otar:   Ugghh!
Trooper Ryaar:   Hey---
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-54.jpg)



Trooper Faar:   Keep firing!  We can’t lose this position! 
Laser blast!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-55.jpg)



Sagev:   You never had it.
Trooper Faar:   BLEH!! 
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-56.jpg)




Obi-Wan Kenobi:   HALT!  Identify yourself, warrior.  This battle does not concern you.  Surrender, and you will not be harmed.
Anakin Skywalker:   What?!  He’s been killing our troops, Master!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-59.jpg)



Anakin Skywalker:   He didn’t give them the chance to ‘surrender’!
Obi-Wan Kenobi:   ANAKIN WAIT!! 
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-57.jpg)



Sagev:   Jedi……just as Count Dooku predicted.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-58.jpg)



Sagev:   ARGH!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-60.jpg)



CLASH!
Sagev:   It is you, Jedi, that should surrender.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-61.jpg)




Anakin Skywalker:   I’ll remember that when I have your head!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-62.jpg)



Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Why are only those two Magna Guards returning?
CLANK!  CLANK! CLANK!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-63.jpg)



SLASH!
Obi-Wan Kenobi:   One down…
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-64.jpg)



Anakin Skywalker:   What’s the matter, warrior?  Need help fighting your own fights?
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-65.jpg)




Sagev:   Why do a job that a simple droid can do? 
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-66.jpg)




CLASH!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-67.jpg)





Sagev:   AAAHHH!
CLASH!
Anakin Skywalker:   Hey……
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-68.jpg)





SLASH!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-70.jpg)




Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Nice trick.  How about turning the odds in our favor?
Anakin Skywalker:   No! 
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Anakin Skywalker:   He’s mine!  Besides…I had everything under control, Master.
Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Of course you did, Anakin. 
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-72.jpg)






Sagev:   Do not think that you have the advantage just because there are two of you!
CLASH! 
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-73.jpg)




Anakin Skywalker:   I said he’s mine!!!
SLASH!
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Sagev:   You’re too slow, boy!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-75.jpg)



HEADBUTT!
Anakin Skywalker:   Uuughhfff… 
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-76.jpg)



Sagev:   Perhaps the Jedi are not as powerful as Count Dooku thought.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-77.jpg)



Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Do not think you have won just because you defeated Anakin so easily.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-78.jpg)



CLASH!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-79.jpg)



Sagev:   You, Jedi, depend on your light sword too much.
WHACK! 
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-80.jpg)




Anakin Skywalker:   NOOOO!!!  I said……HE’S MINE!!! 
FORCE PUSH!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-81.jpg)



Sagev:   Clever move, boy.  But your friend won’t save you this time.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-82.jpg)



Magna Guard receiver:    (Droid Transmission:)   bbbzzzzzzz……all available units report to the barracks……bbbzzzzzzzzz…….units report to the Barracks----bbzzzzzzzzzz.
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Sagev:   Sorry, boy.  Can’t play anymore.  I’m needed elsewhere.
Anakin Skywalker:   I’m not done with you……
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-84.jpg)



Sagev:   Not to worry, young one…...I’ll leave some friends behind.  Droidekas……ATTACK!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/41-85.jpg)



LASER BLASTS!
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Title: DARK ILLUSIONS - Chapter 42
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on November 10, 2006, 05:45 PM
DARK ILLUSIONS

ACT III

Chapter 42



Despite the chaos of the battle, Count Dooku and General Grievous safely observe the action from their base in a village a good distance from the battlefront.




Count Dooku:   The battle is going as planned.  The Republic’s forces are overwhelmed.  My Master will be very pleased.
General Grievous:  What about the Jedi?
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Count Dooku:   Master Tiin has served his purpose.  You may ------
Battle Droid 758B:  All available units report to the barracks……repeat……all available units report to the barracks.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-2.jpg)




Count Dooku:   Who issued that order?
Battle Droid 758B:  Commander OOM-12 has recalled all available units to the barracks, sir.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-3.jpg)




Count Dooku:   If the Clone Army has successfully reached the barracks, then it will accelerate our plans.  Remain here, General.  I will tend to the situation at the Barracks personally.
General Grievous:  Yes, Count Dooku.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-4.jpg)



General Grievous:   But……what about the Jedi?
Count Dooku:   They are no longer of use to us.  Eliminate them, beginning with Master Tiin.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-5.jpg)



General Grievous:  With pleasure……
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Meanwhile, Commander Gree and the Elite Corps have reached the secret village.



Commander Gree:   Good work, men.  Reconnect the droid’s communication signal.  The abandoned  village is just up ahead.  We’ll soon find out if that Shadow Trooper’s information was correct.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-7.jpg)




Elite Trooper Chi:   Commander, I have a visual on the possible hut holding the target.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-8.jpg)




Commander Gree:   Where?
Elite Trooper Chi:  Straight ahead - the hut closest to our position.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-9.jpg)




Elite Trooper Chi:  There is an unusual amount of droids concentrated around that particular hut, sir.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-10.jpg)



Elite Trooper Chi:   It’s the ONLY hut in the village with that many droids standing guard.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-12.jpg)



Commander Gree:   Good work, trooper.  That has to be our target.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-11.jpg)




Commander Gree over comlink:   General Windu……we have a visual on the hut possibly holding General Tiin.  I’m sending you the coordinates.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-13.jpg)




Mace Windu:   Very well.  Proceed with the plan.  We’re on our way.
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Kit Fisto:   Might I suggest an alternative plan for us?
Mace Windu:   I’m already ahead of you, Kit…
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-15.jpg)




Commander Gree:   Dig in, men.  We’ll begin the assault from this position.
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Commander Gree:   FIRE!
Laser blasts!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-17.jpg)




Battle Droid 637A:   Enemy fire!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-18.jpg)




Battle Droid 637A:   Return fi------zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-19.jpg)




Commander Gree:   Keep firing!
Laser blasts!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-20.jpg)



Battle Droid 384X:   Under attack……repeat…..under attack.  Requesting additional units. Must transport prisoner.
Laser blasts!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-21.jpg)




Mace Windu:   Perfect timing…… 
Laser blasts!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-22.jpg)




Mace Windu:   Let’s finish this!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-23.jpg)




Mace Windu:   This party’s over!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-24.jpg)



SLASH!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-25.jpg)



Commander Gree:   Hold your fire!  We may hit the Jedi!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-26.jpg)




Kit Fisto:   Perimeter secured!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-27.jpg)




Mace Windu:   Just about……
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-28.jpg)



SLASH!!!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-29.jpg)




Mace Windu:   Check the hut.  We’ll cover you.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-30.jpg)



Mace Windu:   Good work, Commander.  Contact the KimCharise.  We are going to need to get out of here real fast if more droids show up.
Commander Gree:   Yes, General.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-31.jpg)




Kit Fisto:   Master Tiin!  Are you alright?!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-32.jpg)




Kit Fisto:   Come on, old friend.  You’re safe now.  Talk to me…
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-33.jpg)




Kit Fisto:   Can you hear me, Master Tiin?
Saesee Tiin:  ………kit………
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-34.jpg)




Commander Gree:   We have incoming droids, General!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-35.jpg)




Super Battle Droid X1A:   Charge!
Laser blasts!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-36.jpg)








Commander Gree:   Troopers, find cover!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-39.jpg)




General Grievous:   Surround the building.  Do not allow anyone to escape!
Laser blasts!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-38.jpg)




Commander Gree:   FIRE!!
Laser blasts!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-40.jpg)



Mace Windu:   Master Tiin!  How is he?
Kit Fisto:   Not good.  We got to get him out of here.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-41.jpg)



Mace Windu:   Stay down.  We’ll hold off the droids until the Gunship arrives!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-42.jpg)



Double laser blasts!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-37.jpg)




Elite Trooper Chi:   We’re pinned down!  Heavy fire!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-43.jpg)



Elite Trooper Psi:   We can’t allow those Magna Guards to advance on us.  Time for some heavy firepower!
Auto-fire laser blasts!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-44.jpg)




Double laser blasts!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-45.jpg)




Elite Trooper Psi:   Nevermind!  Stay down!!!
Double laser blasts!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-46.jpg)




Laser blasts!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-47.jpg)




Elite Captain Phi:   We’re surrounded!
Commander Gree:   Where is that Gunship?  Come in, Commander Oddball……
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-48.jpg)




Commander Oddball:   Commander Gree – I’m in route now.  Just dropped off another squad near the Droid Barracks.  E.T.A. is less than 2 minutes.
Commander Gree:   We’ll be bantha fodder in two minutes!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-49.jpg)




Mace Windu:   Not yet!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-50.jpg)




Slash!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-51.jpg)




Slash!  Slash!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-52.jpg)




Elite Trooper Chi:   The destroyer droids have us pinned down!  They’re flanking us!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-53.jpg)



CLANK!  CLANK!  CLANK!
Elite Trooper Psi:   Magna Guards!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-54.jpg)




Elite Trooper Psi:   Stand ‘em up and knock ‘em!!!
Auto-fire laser blasts!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-55.jpg)




BBBBBZZZZZTTTT!!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-56.jpg)




Elite Trooper Chi:   DROIDEKA!!
Double laser blasts!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-57.jpg)




Elite Trooper Chi:  Over the fence!
Elite Trooper Psi:   Did I mention I hate droids?!
Double laser blasts!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-58.jpg)




Slash!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-59.jpg)




Elite Trooper Psi:   He’s down.  Find new cover.
Elite Trooper Chi:   Right behind you!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-60.jpg)




CLANK!  CLANK!  CLANK!
BUZZZZ!
Elite Trooper Chi:   What was that noise---
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-61.jpg)




BUZZZZZ!!!
Elite Trooper Chi:   UUGGGHHH!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-62.jpg)




Elite Trooper Psi:   Wrong move, buckethead!
Auto-fire laser blasts!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-63.jpg)




Elite Trooper Psi:   Anything broken?
Elite Trooper Chi:   Uugghh……I’m alright……let’s keep moving……
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-64.jpg)




General Grievous:   It’s too late.  You are both DOOMED!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-65.jpg)




FORCE PUSH!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-66.jpg)




General Grievous holds his ground by locking his mechanical feet into the ground

General Grievous:   Jedi scum! 
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-67.jpg)




Mace Windu:   Regroup with the others.  Have the Gunship take off ASAP!  I’ll handle this.
Elite Trooper Psi:   Yes, General.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-68.jpg)




General Grievous:   Your saber will make a fine addition to my collection, General Windu
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-68a.jpg)




Mace Windu:   Then come and take it.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-69b.jpg)




Commander Gree:   We can’t hold out much longer without General Windu.
Laser blasts!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-69.jpg)




Commander Oddball:   Sorry for the delay, Commander Gree.  Didn’t know someone had taken down all of the anti-aircraft turrets! 
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-70.jpg)



Commander Gree:   Wasn’t us.  You need to clear an area to land.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-71.jpg)



Commander Oddball:   Consider it done.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-72.jpg)




Commander Oddball:   I was born to do this! 
Heavy laser blasts!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-73.jpg)





Crunch!
Commander Oddball:   We’re on the ground!  Move it!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-74.jpg)




Commander Gree:   GO! GO! GO!
Laser blasts!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-75.jpg)




Kit Fisto:   We’re almost there, old friend.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-76.jpg)




Elite Trooper Psi:   General Windu ordered us to take off ASAP!!
Commander Gree:   Then hurry up, trooper!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-77.jpg)




Elite Captain Phi:   Let’s go!!!  We got more droids!
Double laser blasts!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-78.jpg)




Commander Gree:   Cover fire!  Get us out of here, Oddball!!!
Commander Oddball:   Commencing liftoff sequence…
Laser blasts!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-79.jpg)




Auto-fire laser blasts!
Elite Trooper Psi:   Get this hunk of junk off the ground already! 
Commander Gree:   Get inside, Trooper Psi!   
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-80.jpg)




Commander Gree:   Give me your hand!
Elite Trooper Psi:   No!  Get out of here!  I’ll draw their fire!
Heavy droid laser fire!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-81.jpg)




Elite Trooper Psi:   ……ugghh……
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-82.jpg)




Elite Trooper Psi:   ……i……hate……droids……
Ammo clip clicks empty
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-83.jpg)




Double laser blast
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2040-41/42-84.jpg)



To be continued………
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (UPDATE: Nov 10, 2006)
Post by: 212th Battalion on November 10, 2006, 09:45 PM
just one word AMAZING!!!!!
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (UPDATE: Nov 10, 2006)
Post by: Clone Commander on November 11, 2006, 02:55 AM
WOW!
You've outdone yourself this time!  ;D
I loved shades attempt to kill sidious, he died in a manner suitable for an elite clone, kind of like a redemption...well...still its too bad, he was a good clone.

I loved the rescue of Tinn, you keep on showing acts of heroism in the clones, it makes it look like they are alot more honorable fighters.
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (UPDATE: Nov 10, 2006)
Post by: Artoo on November 11, 2006, 02:31 PM
Finally!Grievous vs.Windu was cool! Can't wait for the next part!
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (UPDATE: Nov 10, 2006)
Post by: ATL on November 12, 2006, 06:45 PM
Amazing
Awe inspiring
great
wonderful
superb
:o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (UPDATE: Nov 10, 2006)
Post by: BrentS on November 13, 2006, 02:16 PM
Amazing work.  Simply amazing.  I haven't gone back to read all the old stories (Shame on me!).  However, these action sequences are just great.  My favorite shots were the Rancor running wild on the droids and the sequence between Obi-Wan, Anakin, and the Utapau Warrior.  Those obi-wan and anakin figures are just so great.  Also the way you positioned Tinn as he was leaning on Kit Fisto was just great.  It couldn't have looked more realistic.



ATL - can you remove some of the exclamation marks.  It messes up all the scrolling.  Thanks.
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (UPDATE: Nov 10, 2006)
Post by: Swede on November 15, 2006, 09:56 AM
Already chimed in on the other site, but when I came across this here ... well, I just had to read it again.  And just like the movies, everytime I read this, I find something new I hadn't noticed before!  Absolutely wonderful, SA !!!
Your outdoor shots are great, the grass really looks like a field; and you nailed Sidious's dialogue perfectly ... I could just feel that gravely voice flow along with your words ... NICE!

-Swede
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (UPDATE: Nov 10, 2006)
Post by: CloneCommander1 on November 15, 2006, 08:28 PM
Great work!  While all the action sequences were great, my favorite was the one with the Elite Corps clones, the posing was fantastic.  As always, great photos, and great writing.  Awsome work!
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (UPDATE: Nov 10, 2006)
Post by: Brisk Arper on November 20, 2006, 12:36 PM
wow i just went back to the begining and read the whole thing....this is a really great story...they get better every post...keep it up!
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (UPDATE: Nov 10, 2006)
Post by: Quazar on November 22, 2006, 02:17 AM
LONGHORN,

I have no excuse for not commenting before now.  I read this last week, but just haven't had the time to read it again and give you some real comments.

I know in the past i've always said I'll try to post some in-depth stuff, but seldom actually do and so I'm sorry.

As always, AWESOME work...I love it and I really WILL try to post some detailed comments soon...Thanks for your boundless creativity and hard work!
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (UPDATE: Nov 10, 2006)
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on November 22, 2006, 04:01 PM
Thanx for all the feedback guys.  It was great to see everyone leave some feedback after going so long in between updates.  I hope to have the next update sooner than later, especially since I am re-energerized to finish this story.  I just saw the other day the first chapters were posted on Halloween of 2005!   A year later, and still going...

212th Battalion:  One word: THANX!  Seriously tho, always good to see the regulars.

Clone Commander:  Glad you liked the final scenes with Shade.  I had a lot of different ideas, but this one really seemed to fit.  The Clones will do whatever is necessary to accomplish the mission, including sacrifices themselves, and I wanted to show that in different aspects.

Artoo:  If you liked the Grievous and Windu scenes, you'll like the next update.  I'll try to post the next update soon...

ATL:  Sometimes simple feedback is all you need to keep working on the story.  Thanx for that!  Try creating your own short story.

BrentS:  Good to hear from ya.  I really liked these action sequences as well, but I wish YESTERDAY had the time to finish the effects.  If he ever does, I'll quickly swap them in.  A lot of people have mentioned they like the Rancor running wild!  Glad you noticed the positioning of Saesee Tiin.  I really wanted to show him as being injured.

Swede:  Thanx for leaving some more feedback.  The photography is a lot more fun when working in an open area like the 'field'.  I tried to take some pics from various angles.  And thanx for mentioning the Sidious dialogue, which was the hardest dialogue I have written thus far.  Had to word it just right...

CloneCommander1:  Thanx for the feedback.  The way the figs and pic turned out in Chapter 42, it has become one of my favorites chapters.  The pics would look a lot better with effects added in.  Working with several SA figs always makes these stories easier to create.  Thanx for noticing.

master brisk arpor:  Just curious, how long did it take you to read the whole story to this point?  Glad to know the old pics are still appearing.  And I assume the story flowed well thru all the chapters.  Great feedback, I really appreciate it! 

Quazar:  The "Dean" of Photonovels!  Always good to hear from you, even if your comments are short.  Look forward to your detailed comments, but just glad to know you are keeping up with the story. 

I just 'shot' another chapter last night outside.  I wish I could go faster, but now the weather is working against me.  Last night, the temp got down in the 40s.  Not bitterly cold, but cold enough when you're outside playing with your SW action figures!  But the pics came out great!

We're almost to the end, guys!   8)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (thru Chapter 42)
Post by: Deanna Rash on November 23, 2006, 11:29 PM
 :o :o :o :oAmazing!!!simply Amazing ;D ;D ;D Can't wait too see more!!! Do you have any more stories! This is just too cool!!
Title: DARK ILLUSIONS - Preview Chaps 43-45
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on November 29, 2006, 12:26 PM
Thanx for the feedback.

Deanna Rash:  Welcome to the JD boards!  Always good to see a new member leaving feedback.  Glad you liked the story.  Hope you had a chance to read it from the beginning.  I do have two other stories posted, but only one is posted here on JD, which is STORMTROOPER TALES: SPI.  You can view it by clicking here.  The other full-length PN I have is over on RS's photonovel forum, called VADER'S QUEST.  I look forward to reading more of your comments.

TO EVERYBODY:  Thanx for all the feedback and continued encouragement.  Good news!  I have completed the photography for the next update.  I am currently working on some small effects and the dialogue for the next update, Chapters 43 – 45.  The next update will be action-packed.

EDIT - Update will be coming very soon...
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (11-29-06 Preview)
Post by: 212th Battalion on December 1, 2006, 04:22 PM
AS always longhorn cant wait for the new chapters to be up and to see you out do yourself once again  ;) ;D
Title: DARK ILLUSIONS - Chapters 43, 44, & 45
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on December 15, 2006, 05:21 PM
MAJOR UPDATE:  Chapters 43, 44, and 45 in Act III

OK, guys here is the latest update!  I've been working on the dialogue and the limited effects for the past week, thus the delay from the promised date.  Many thanx to LJ for some great ideas to spruce up the dialogue and narrative.  And also many thanx to SWEDE who gave me some simple ideas for the effects I addded-in myself!  So be kind....

These three chapters set up the final three chapters of Act III!  Enjoy!!!    8)
Title: DARK ILLUSIONS - Chapter 43
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on December 15, 2006, 05:23 PM
DARK ILLUSIONS

ACT III

Chapter 43




As the Battle of Oner continues to rage, the 212th Battalion begins to focus their attack on the Droid Barracks, hoping a victory awaits them.



Anakin Skywalker:   How many battle droids have we destroyed so far, Master?
Obi-Wan Kenobi:   I’ve lost count.  It doesn’t make sense - why would the Separatists amass such a large army on an empty planet?
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/43-16.jpg)



Clone Trooper Kyde:   General Kenobi!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/43-17.jpg)



Clone Trooper Kyde:   Commander Cody has successfully engaged the target.  He has requested permission to begin the full assault on the Barracks.
Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Very good, Kyde.  Have Cody issue the order and we will meet you there.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/43-18.jpg)



Anakin Skywalker:   The tide of the battle has now shifted to our side.
Obi-Wan Kenobi:   I hope your right, Anakin.  But don’t get too confident.  One can never underestimate Count Dooku.  I’m sure he has something in store for us.  (http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/43-19.jpg)






Meanwhile, back on the battlefield…



Battle Droid 781C:   Republic forces have surrounded the Barracks.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/43-1.jpg)



Clone Trooper Agal:   We got new orders from Commander Cody!  All squads…CHARGE!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/43-3b.jpg)



Clone Troopers:   Storm the Barracks!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/43-2a.jpg)



Battle Droid 781C:   Open fire!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/43-4.jpg)




Droid Commander OOM-12:   Primary units……defend the Barracks.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/43-6.jpg)



Droid Commander OOM-12:   Secondary units……encircle the Clone Army……commence the second-tier assault.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/43-7.jpg)



Count Dooku:   Status report, Commander.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/43-8.jpg)



Droid Commander OOM-12:   The Clone Army is concentrated around the Barracks, sir.  Our secondary units are now in place to begin a second assault from behind the Clone Army.  Victory is inevitable.   
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/43-9.jpg)



Count Dooku:   Excellent.  Keep the Clone Army focused on the Barracks.  Leave the rest to me.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/43-10.jpg)





Clone Trooper Yerl:   We got them pinned down!  Move in!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/43-12a.jpg)



The 212th Battalion presses forward the attack in a final attempt to overrun the barracks. 
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/43-13a.jpg)



Meanwhile, two droidekas disengage behind the Clones…
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/43-14a.jpg)



…and fire their weapons, catching the unsuspecting Clones off guard.
Clone Trooper Qurl:   AAHHHH!!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/43-15a.jpg)



Clone Trooper Qurl over internal comlink:   Droid…reinforcements……came from……behind------
Clone Trooper Agal:   Repeat……from behind?……repeat last transmission…
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/43-21.jpg)



Another squad of battle droids appears behind Agal’s squad.
Battle Droid 943X:   Open fire!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/43-20.jpg)



Clone Trooper Agal:   Repeat last transmiss-----battle droids!  Cover fire to the rear!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/43-22a.jpg)



(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/43-23a.jpg)



Clone Trooper Nicklin:   Need a defensive position---UUGGHHH!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/43-25a.jpg)



Super Battle Droid X18A:  Take no prisioners.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/43-26a.jpg)






Elsewhere…


Clone Trooper Kyde over comlink:   I have a visual on an unknown subject……approaching a generator of some sort……
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/43-27.jpg)



Clone Trooper Kyde over comlink:   ……matches the description of the mystery warrior encountered by General Kenobi & Skywalker.
Anakin Skywalker:   Do not engage the target, trooper!  Repeat, do not engage!  He is considered armed and dangerous!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/43-28.jpg)



Count Dooku:   What is that sound……a speeder bike?
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/43-29.jpg)



Sagev:   Why was the call made to return to the Barracks?  Our primary concern should be the power-----
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/43-30.jpg)



Count Dooku:   YOU FOOL!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/43-31.jpg)



Suddenly, an invisible force knocks Sagev to the ground while toppling the speeder bike.
Sagev:   Ugh…
Clone Trooper Kyde:   Heeeeyy---
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/43-32.jpg)



Count Dooku:   What do we have here……
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/43-33.jpg)



Count Dooku:   …a member of the famed 212th Battalion?   
Clone Trooper Kyde:   Count…Dooku?!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/43-34.jpg)



Clone Trooper Kyde:   …but…this isn’t the barracks…
Count Dooku:   Very observant.  Unfortunately, you will not be sharing that information with your Battalion.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/43-35.jpg)



Count Dooku raises his saber and ends the life of the Clone trooper with a single stroke.

Count Dooku:   You were ordered to return to the Barracks……not here.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/43-36.jpg)



Sagev:   I do not take orders from a droid.  The power generator must be protected.  The droids cannot ---
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/43-37.jpg)



Count Dooku:   ---function without it.  Yes, I know.  But your incompetence will now lead the Republic’s forces here, instead of the Barracks.  We must now prepare for their arrival.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/43-38.jpg)



Count Dooku:   I do not look kindly upon mistakes, Sagev.  You would be wise to remember that.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/43-39.jpg)






Meanwhile, near the Barracks…



Clone Trooper Ezar:   Can you make out any of those reports from the other squads?
Clone Trooper Werth:   Negative.  Too much interference! 
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/43-41a.jpg)



Clone Trooper Ezar:   There were several reports of the droids attacking from behind the other squads.
Clone Trooper Werth:   Impossible!  We have them surrounded at the Barracks!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/43-43a.jpg)



Suddenly and without warning, the secondary ring of battle droids appears and quickly begin firing into the squad.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/43-40.jpg)



Clone Trooper Ezar:   ---aaahhhhh!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/43-44a.jpg)



Clone Trooper Gertz:   We are taking heavy fire from a secondary ring of droids!  They’re attacking from behind our line!   
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/43-45a.jpg)



Clone Trooper Gertz over comlink:   ……repeat……behind our line!……we’re surrounded!
Commander Cody:   (thinking)   Have to hurry…
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/43-46.jpg)
Title: DARK ILLUSIONS - Chapter 44
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on December 15, 2006, 05:25 PM
DARK ILLUSIONS

ACT III

Chapter 44



While the battle intensifies between the Droid Army and the 212th Battalion, another epic battle was about to begin…



Mace Windu:   Your reign of terror ends here, Grievous.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/45-2.jpg)



General Grievous:   You’re a brave one, Windu.  Foolish…but brave.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/45-3.jpg)



General Grievous:   Only a Jedi would be so arrogant to fight alone.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/45-5.jpg)



Mace Windu:   Those sabers belong to the Jedi Order……belong to my friends……and I’m taking them with me.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/45-4.jpg)



General Grievous:   Perhaps you’ll recognize this one……once owned by Jedi Council member Adi Gallia.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/45-6.jpg)



General Grievous:   I enjoyed watching her die……she was a screamer.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b289/dealianres/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Chap%2010-12/10-51.jpg)



Mace Windu:   NOOO!!!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/45-7.jpg)



SLASH!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/45-8.jpg)



General Grievous:   Ha ha ha!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/45-9.jpg)



SLASH!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/45-10.jpg)



General Grievous:   Ha ha ha!!
SLASH!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/45-13.jpg)



SLASH!  SLASH!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/45-14.jpg)



SLASH!
General Grievous:    Will you beg for your life the way Gallia did?
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/45-11.jpg)



Mace Windu:   NOOO!!!
FORCE PUSH!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/45-15.jpg)



CRASH!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/45-16.jpg)



General Grievous:   Ha ha ha!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/45-17.jpg)



General Grievous:   Your Jedi powers can’t save you, Windu.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/45-18.jpg)



Mace Windu:   Who said I needed to be saved…
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/45-19.jpg)



General Grievous:   ATTACK!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/45-20.jpg)



Clank!  Clank!  Clank!
Mace Windu:   Magna Guards…
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/45-21.jpg)



FORCE CRUNCH!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/45-22.jpg)



Clank! Clank! Clank!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/45-23.jpg)



SLASH!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/45-24.jpg)



General Grievous:   ARGH!!
Mace Windu:   Ugh…
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/45-25.jpg)



Mace Windu:   Ugh!  Ugh!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/45-26.jpg)



General Grievous:   All you Jedi are the same…….
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/45-28.jpg)



General Grievous:   …weak and arrogant!
Mace Windu:   (choking)  [/i]…GASP!…[/i]
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/45-29.jpg)



Mace Windu:   (choking)……
General Grievous:   Count Dooku gave you too much credit…
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/45-30.jpg)



Mace Windu:   (choking)……
General Grievous:   …I’ve killed Padawans that fought harder than you!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/45-31.jpg)



Mace Windu:   (choking)…………
General Grievous:   You don’t know how long I’ve waited for this moment, Jedi!

(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/45-32.jpg)




Suddenly, lifted by an invisible power, a damaged battle droid is hurled at Grievous and…

CRASH!
Mace Windu:   (choking)……GASP!
General Grievous:   AARGGH!!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/45-33.jpg)



Mace Windu:   ……(cough cough)……
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/45-34.jpg)



SLASH!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/45-35.jpg)



Mace Windu:   Now……where were we?
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/45-36.jpg)



General Grievous:   JEDI SCUM!!!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/45-37.jpg)



SLASH!  SLASH!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/45-38.jpg)



SLASH!  SLASH!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/45-39.jpg)



SLASH!  SLASH!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/45-40.jpg)



SLASH!  SLASH!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/45-41.jpg)



SLASH!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/45-42.jpg)



SLASH!
General Grievous:   AARRGGHHH!!!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/45-43.jpg)



General Grievous:   Ha ha ha ha!
Mace Windu:   UGH!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/45-44.jpg)



Mace Windu:   …ugghhhh…
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/45-45.jpg)



General Grievous:   You lose, Windu! 
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/45-46.jpg)



General Grievous:   Your efforts are futile!
Mace Windu:   …get off……of me…
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/45-47.jpg)



General Grievous:   There is no escape for you now, Jedi!  Your saber is mine!!!
Mace Windu:   (choking)……never! (bleh!)
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/45-48.jpg)




Commander Oddball:   We’re approaching the village now.  Gree, are you sure about this?  There was no order to return---
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/45-50.jpg)



Commander Gree:   Doesn’t matter.  I won’t leave the General behind with the village about to be wiped out!  Get a lock on him ASAP!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/45-51.jpg)



The sound of an approaching Republic Gunship can be heard in the distance.

General Grievous:   What?! 
Mace Windu:   (choking) ………
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/45-52.jpg)



Commander Oddball:   I have a lock on his beacon.  I’m getting a visual……Grievous has him!
Commander Gree:    Take him out! 
Clone Pilot Ouri:   Yes, sir!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/45-53.jpg)




General Grievous:   Ha ha ha ha ha…
Commander Gree:   Keep him on the run until we can get Windu!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/45-55a.jpg)



Mace Windu:   …ugh……
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/45-56.jpg)



Commander Oddball:   You’re clear, Gree!
Commander Gree:   Already on my way…
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/45-57.jpg)



Mace Windu:   ………must……stop……Grievous……(cough cough)
Commander Gree:   No time, sir!  General Fisto has ordered this whole village be burned to the ground!  We have to go…NOW!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/45-58.jpg)



Commander Gree:   Get us out of here, Oddball!
Mace Windu:   …must……stop……Grie….vous……(cough)
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/45-59.jpg)



Commander Oddball:   We’re gone…and just in time.  Here comes the aerial assault!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/45-60.jpg)



KA-BOOM!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/45-61a.jpg)



(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/45-61b.jpg)


General Grievous:   We will meet again, Windu……very soon……and next time your saber will be MINE!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/45-62.jpg)
 
Title: DARK ILLUSIONS - Chapter 45
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on December 15, 2006, 05:27 PM
DARK ILLUSIONS

ACT III

Chapter 45




As Jedi Knights Obi-Wan Kenobi and Anakin Skywalker race to the Barracks, their path is continually disrupted by Battle Droids.



Anakin Skywalker:   Have you heard back from that trooper on the bike, Master?
Slash!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-2.jpg)



Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Not since his last report about sighting the mysterious warrior.
Slash!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-3.jpg)



Anakin Skywalker:   He mentioned something about a generator.  Why would an abandoned planet need a generator?
Slash!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-4.jpg)



Obi-Wan Kenobi:   It wouldn’t……but a Droid Army would.  There has to be a local generator that powers all these battle droids.
Slash!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-5.jpg)



Anakin Skywalker:   And that power generator wouldn’t be defended by just any battle droid.  I’d bet the Droid Commander is there along with… 
Slash!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-6.jpg)



Obi-Wan Kenobi:  DOOKU!
Slash!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-7.jpg)







As a secondary line of battle droids surrounds the Clones, Commander Cody makes one final stop before heading towards the Barracks.



Commander Cody:  Last one…
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-8a.jpg)



Battle Droid 281Z:  Clone trooper!  HALT!
The Rancor:   ROOOAARRR!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-9.jpg)



The Rancor tramples the battle droids and turrets while continuing the pursuit of Commander Cody.
CRASH!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-10.jpg)



Obi-Wan Kenobi over private comlink:   Commander Cody – redirect your target to Kyde’s last known coordinates.  That is the more critical attack point!
Commander Cody on internal comlink:   As you wish, General.   Come in, Agal --- get everyone into defensive positions!  Now!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-11.jpg)



Commander Cody on comlink:  …repeat……take cover……NOW!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-12.jpg)



Clone Trooper Agal:  Everyone down!  Commander’s orders!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-13.jpg)



Clone Trooper Agal:   Stay alert, men……we may need to get out of here real fast.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-14.jpg)



Commander Cody:   This is my stop.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-15a.jpg)



The abandoned BARC crashes into several battle droids.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-16.jpg)



Angered by the long pursuit of Commander Cody, the Rancor then redirects its anger towards the countless battle droids.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-17a.jpg)



CRASH!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-18.jpg)



Battle Droid Z145:   Open fire!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-19.jpg)



The Rancor:   RRRROOOOOAAAAARRRRR!
CRUNCH!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-20.jpg)



Battle Droid Z145:   Unknown creat---PPPPFFZZZZTTTTT…
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-21.jpg)



Clone Troopers:   YEEAAHHH!  Smash ‘em all!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-22.jpg)



Battle Droid S789:   RUN!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-23.jpg)



The Rancor:   RRROOOOAAARRRR!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-24a.jpg)



CRUNCH!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-25.jpg)



Angered by the droids constant laser fire, the Rancor increases the ferocity of its attack.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-26.jpg)



Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Looks like your plan is working, Anakin.
Anakin Skywalker:   I knew it would, Master. 
Commander Cody:   Pardon me for asking, General, but……what target is more important than the Barracks?
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-26a.jpg)



Obi-Wan Kenobi:   The Droid Power Generator.  We’re outnumbered, but if we can neutralize all the battle droids at once, then that becomes the critical attack point.
Battle Droid R431A:   RUN!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-27.jpg)



The Rancor’s attacks take it away from the Barracks……and towards the Power Generator.

Battle Droid V537:   Unknown creature approaching.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-28.jpg)



Droid Commander OOM-12:   Unknown creature?  Unknown creature……that does not compute.
Count Dooku:   It’s the Jedi.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-29.jpg)



Count Dooku:   Defend the generator at all costs, Commander.  I’ll handle the Jedi.
Droid Commander OOM-12   Yes, sir.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-30.jpg)



The Rancor:   RRROOOAAARR!!!
Clone Trooper Fraz:   YEA!!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-31.jpg)



Commander Cody over internal comlink:   Pry, Fraz --- get out of there now!  The Rancor is going to see you ---
Anakin Skywalker:   Too late!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-33.jpg)



The Rancor:   RRROOOOARRRRRR!!!
Clone Trooper Pry:   Let’s go!  Double-time!!!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-32.jpg)



Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Look!  Over there!  Count Dooku!  He’s escaping!   
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-34.jpg)



Obi-Wan Kenobi:   I’m going to need to borrow your bike, Cody.  Anakin, follow me to---
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-37.jpg)



Anakin Skywalker:   I’ll handle the Rancor.  Get to the generator as fast as you can!
Commander Cody:   Yes, sir!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-36.jpg)



Clone Trooper Pry:   Aaahhh!
Clone Trooper Fraz:   It’s got my leg!!!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-38.jpg)



Anakin Skywalker:   I’ll get them back.  Just be ready at the generator.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-40.jpg)



Commander Cody:   Consider it done.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-39.jpg)



The Rancor:   RRRROOOOOAARRRRR!
Anakin Skywalker:   This is where the fun begins.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-43.jpg)



Clone Trooper Pry:   Aaahhhh!!!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-44.jpg)



Anakin Skywalker:   You’re lucky we have bigger plans for you…otherwise……
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-45.jpg)



Anakin Skywalker:   ……I’d take more than your toenail!
SLASH!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-46.jpg)



The Rancor:   RRRROOOOOOOAAAAARRRR!!!!!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-47.jpg)



Anakin Skywalker:   Run for it! 
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-48.jpg)



Anakin Skywalker:   Probably not one of my best ideas…
The Rancor:   RRRROOOAAAARRRR!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-49.jpg)



Droid Commander OOM-12:   Unknown creature approaching!  Unknown creature approaching!!!    Open fire!!!  Open fire!!!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-50a.jpg)



The Rancor:   RRRROOOOAAAARRRRRR!!!
SLASH!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-51.jpg)



Droid Commander OOM-12:   Jedi?! 
Anakin Skywalker:   Droid Commander, I presume?
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-52.jpg)



Droid Commander OOM-12:   ERROR!   ERROR!  Too many variables to compute---
SLASH!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-53.jpg)



Commander Cody:   Good work, General.  I’ll take it from here…
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-54.jpg)



The Rancor:   RRRROOOOAAAARRRR!!!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-55a.jpg)



Commander Cody:   You want me?  Come and get me!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-56.jpg)



The Rancor:   RRROOOOAARRR!
Commmander Cody:   That’s it……just a little more……
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-57.jpg)




After a continuous onslaught, the power generator begins to topple under the weight of the Rancor.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-59.jpg)



Commander Cody:   Time to go!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-58a.jpg)




As the power generator collapses, an explosion erupts from the base of the tower.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-60a-1.jpg)



Then suddenly……………silence.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-61.jpg)



(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-62.jpg)



Clone Trooper Fraz:   Is it……dead?
Clone Trooper Pry:   I’ll make sure.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-63.jpg)



Anakin Skywalker:   STOP!  There has been enough death today.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-64.jpg)



Commander Cody:   The General is right.  Verify the droids have been deactivated.
Clone Trooper Pry:   Yes, sir!
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-65.jpg)



Anakin Skywalker:   And I want to see the corpse of that mystery warrior.
Commander Cody:   Yes, General.
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-66.jpg)



Anakin Skywalker:   Has anyone seen Obi-Wan?
(http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b260/S_A_Longhorn2/Dark%20Illusions%20Chapters%2043-45/44-67.jpg)



To be continued………

Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (UPDATE - Fri, Dec 15, 06)
Post by: Deanna Rash on December 16, 2006, 12:47 PM
 :o ;D Alright! this was cool!Alot of action and a lot of jedi!Sweet
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (UPDATE - Fri, Dec 15, 06)
Post by: 212th Battalion on December 16, 2006, 08:06 PM
LOVED IT!
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (UPDATE - Fri, Dec 15, 06)
Post by: Artoo on December 17, 2006, 03:07 AM
My guess would be one last saber fight? You have anyplans for a new PN yet or will you take a break?
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (thru Chapter 45)
Post by: JangoTat on January 30, 2007, 12:24 PM
This is my favourite PN. really hoping you get to finish it. to tell you the truth this PN is what made me sign up to this site, and how i found it ( randomly searching stuff on google and came across one of your pictures) Its really good dude.  ;D that last chapter was brilliant.
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (thru Chapter 45)
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on January 30, 2007, 01:28 PM
Jango Fett 89:  Thanx for the reply.  I have been really lazy in the last month or distracted by other things (organizing my collection & the PS3).  I do have the outline ready for the next three chapters, I just haven't gotten around to the actual photography.  I'm hoping to begin work in the next week or so.  The photography should go fast if I follow my outline.  Then it is just a matter of writing the dialogue.  There will be a lot of action, and and Epiloge to tie up all loose ends.  I would be interested in knowing how you came across the pics in your websearch.  That sounds interesting!

Stay tuned guys!  I hope to post some preview pics in the near future.  8)

Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (thru Chapter 45)
Post by: Artoo on February 2, 2007, 10:03 PM
I really need to get started on my PN scripts. *Simpsons gnaaaarl & pulls collar*
Title: New DARK ILLUSIONS Preview (Chapters 46-48)
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on February 7, 2007, 05:41 PM
Well, after a looooong delay, I am in the final stages of completing the next three chapters, 46-48.

Here is a small preview!  Enjoy!


EDIT - Preview pics inserted back into story.

Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (New Preview 2/7/07)
Post by: Smartypants1635 on February 7, 2007, 07:10 PM
HOW SOON!!!! ;) Can't wait SA
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (New Preview 2/7/07)
Post by: Deanna Rash on February 7, 2007, 08:19 PM
 :o :o :o Oh!Yeah! ;D 8)I will be looking for that ;)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (New Preview 2/7/07)
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on February 8, 2007, 10:03 AM
Thanx for the comments guys!

The update should be posted within the next week, with this Friday being the earliest.  I'm in the final stages of completion (primarily writing the dialogue), so the update should be very soon.

Glad you guys liked the pics, b/c there will be a lot of pics like the ones above.   8)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (New Preview 2/7/07)
Post by: jedipurge on February 8, 2007, 11:38 AM
 ;D Come on Friday.
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (New Preview 2/7/07)
Post by: 212th Battalion on February 13, 2007, 07:53 PM
can't wait ;D
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (New Preview 2/7/07)
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on February 16, 2007, 02:58 PM
Chapters 46-48 are finally complete!  I took some extra time with this update since I tweaked the dialogue countless times.  Hopefully it works in unison to the action pics.

Enjoy!  8)
Title: DARK ILLUSIONS - Chapter 46
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on February 16, 2007, 03:04 PM
DARK ILLUSIONS

ACT III

Chapter 46




During the Battle of Oner, Jedi Master Obi-Wan Kenobi sees Count Dooku fleeing the battlefield on a speeder bike.  Hoping to end the war with the capture of Dooku, Obi-Wan pursues him to a remote part of Oner.



Obi-Wan Kenobi:   (thinking)   That’s Kyde’s speeder alright.  I only need one guess to know how Dooku ended up with it…
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/46-1.jpg)




Obi-Wan Kenobi:   (thinking)   The homing beacon should help Cody find this location.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/46-2.jpg)



Obi-Wan Kenobi:   (thinking)   Let’s hope he doesn’t take TOO long.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/46-3.jpg)



Obi-Wan Kenobi:   (thinking)   So……these are the Crystal Mines.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/46-4.jpg)


Obi-Wan Kenobi:   (thinking)   ……incredible……
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/46-5.jpg)



Obi-Wan Kenobi:   (thinking)   It’s no wonder so many have died in attempts to control these mines…
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/46-6.jpg)



Count Dooku:   I would have to agree, Master Kenobi.  These crystals are……exquisite.
Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Count Dooku.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/46-7.jpg)



Obi-Wan Kenobi:(thinking)   But where………
Count Dooku:   May I be the first to welcome you to the Oner Caverns.  Those less educated still call them the Crystal Mines.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/46-8.jpg)



Count Dooku:   “The Crystal Mines” no longer exist due to smugglers and vandals.  The people of Oner sculpted each crystal in this cavern in dedication to their homeland.  What you see before you is the result of their labor, including the floor you stand on……100% Oneran Crystal.  Not even the Force could move these masterpieces.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/46-9a.jpg)



Obi-Wan Kenobi:   So this is the reason you want control of Oner…to take possession of these mines for yourself, Dooku?
Count Dooku:   On no, my friend.  I value this shrine for what it still is: a place of peace and purity.  One of the few things in this galaxy that the Republic has not yet corrupted.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/46-10.jpg)



Obi-Wan Kenobi:   If you truly believe that, then why bring the War here?
Count Dooku:   Mind you that I did not bring the War here……the Republic did.  My interest was only to assure the preservation of this magnificent place.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/46-9.jpg)



Count Dooku:   Nonetheless, please allow me to congratulate you on your recent appointment to the Jedi Council, Master Kenobi.  You are one of the few shining lights left in the Order.  Qui-Gon would be very proud of the Jedi you have become. 
 (http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/46-9b.jpg)



Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Qui-Gon believed in the will of the Force…and in the Republic.  He would never have turned his back on the Order.
Count Dooku:   What about the Jedi Council?  It was Qui-Gon that defied the Council by accepting your apprentice.  If he hadn’t, the ‘Great Hero’ of the Republic would not be a Jedi now.  This War has only further clouded their vision, my friend.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/46-11.jpg)



Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Perhaps, but the Council is fully aware of your defection to the Dark Side.
 (http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/46-12.jpg)



Count Dooku:   The “dark side” is a point of view, Master Kenobi.  Many of the truths we hold dear are based on a certain point of view.  Surely Master Yoda has told you this by now.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/46-13.jpg)




Count Dooku:   Take as an example how the Council approved the use of human clones.  The manipulation of life is strictly forbidden in the Code.  Yet, to wage an uncivilized War, the Council willfully leads these engineered humans into battle…sacrificing them as quickly as they can replace them.  I ask you, is that the will of the Force?
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/46-14.jpg)



Obi-Wan Kenobi:   These are troubled times.  All of it could come to an end……if you surrender, Dooku. 
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/46-16.jpg)



Count Dooku:   Ah…ever the negotiator, Master Kenobi.  I do not think I could willfully surrender to an Order that allows indiscreet, romantic relationships between Jedi and Senators.  During my time, such a relationship would result in immediate expulsion from the Order.
Obi-Wan Kenobi:   …………
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/46-15.jpg)



Count Dooku:   You know of whom I speak of……don’t you, Master Kenobi? 
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/46-17.jpg)



Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Enough!  Show yourself, Dooku!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/46-18.jpg)



Count Dooku:   Seems that I touched a nerve…
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/46-19.jpg)



Obi-Wan Kenobi:   It ends now, Dooku.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/46-21.jpg)



Count Dooku:   Master Kenobi, once again you disappoint me.  I have been nothing but cordial, yet you raise your saber towards me?  We are simply discussing our……differences.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/46-22.jpg)



Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Your actions speak louder than any words, Dooku.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/46-23.jpg)



Count Dooku:   Perhaps, but you would be wise to say the same about the Council.  I cannot help but wonder if you were chosen for this assignment because you are the newest member of the Council. 
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/46-24.jpg)



Count Dooku:   Why not send Master Windu or Master Yoda?  Perhaps even Master Mundi?  Surely my apprehension is more important than rescuing an old friend.  The Council is fortunate to have your wisdom.  Someone to show them the true power of the Force……the will of the Force.
Obi-Wan Kenobi:   You won’t convert me to the Dark Side, Dooku. 
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/46-25.jpg)



Count Dooku:   Oh no?  Then perhaps your apprentice……Skywalker!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/46-26.jpg)



Obi-Wan Kenobi:   NNNOOOO!!!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/46-27.jpg)



Obi-Wan strikes with his lightsaber...but Dooku blocks his attack.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/46-28.jpg)



Count Dooku:   So be it…Jedi.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/47-38.jpg)

Title: DARK ILLUSIONS - Chapter 47
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on February 16, 2007, 03:07 PM
DARK ILLUSIONS

ACT III

Chapter 47



As the 212th Battalion begin post-battle operations, Commander Cody and Anakin Skywalker await contact from Obi-Wan Kenobi.



Clone Trooper Pry:   I don’t remember ‘Battle Cleanup 101’ in basic training, do you?
Clone Trooper Fraz:   General Skywalker issued the order to salvage whatever is left of the Droid Army for intelligence.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/47-1.jpg)




Clone Trooper Wark:   I say we melt them down…make dinnerware out of them.  It would serve the entire Grand Army!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/47-2.jpg)




Clone Pilot Ratchet:   So that is the “great” Droid Commander OOM-12, huh?
Clone Trooper Zank:   Nothing more than scrap now.  But if he is carrying any recent transmissions in his database, he may yet be of use to us
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/47-3.jpg)




Clone Trooper Pry:   Or maybe we should prop them up for target practice!
Anakin Skywalker:   ……….
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/47-4.jpg)




Never good with patience, Anakin’s mind begins to wander…

Watto:   It don’t matter how long it takes!  Wait here until the customer arrives.  And make sure they pay in advance!  No funny business……Wha?  Wheres everyone goin’?
Anakin Skywalker:   Something is coming this way.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/47-5s.jpg)




Jawa:   Eeeecccchhhheeeeee!!!
Yakface:   Raiders!!!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/47-6s.jpg)




Watto:   Raiders??  Quick!  Take cover!  You’re no good to me if you can’t race!
Anakin Skywalker:   Tusken Raiders?
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/47-7s.jpg)



Tusken Raider:   Rrrooaarrr – rrrroooaaarrrr!
Graga:   (in Huttese)   Nooo!!!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/47-8s.jpg)





Graga:   Uugghh…
Tusken Raider:  Rrrroooaaarrr – roooaar!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/47-9s.jpg)




Tusken Raider:    Rrroooooaaaaaarr!!!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/47-10bs.jpg)




(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/47-11xs.jpg)




Jawa:   EEE-CHEE-YYYIIII!!!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/47-12xs.jpg)




Anakin Skywalker:   ……sandpeople……
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/47-13.jpg)




Anakin Skywalker:   Stay with me, mom…
Shmi Skywalker:   ……I…love……………..
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/47-14s.jpg)



 Tusken Raider:   Rrrroooaaaarrr!!!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/47-15s.jpg)




Anakin Skywalker:   NNNOOOOOO!!!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/47-16s.jpg)



Anakin Skywalker:   ANIMALS!!!
Tusken Raider:   Rrrroooaaaarrr!!!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/47-17as.jpg)



Anakin Skywalker:   I HATE YOU!!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/47-18s.jpg)




Anakin Skywalker:   I wasn't strong enough to save you, Mom.  But I promise……I won't fail again.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/47-19s.jpg)




Padme Amidala:   Annie, are you just going to sit here and let him die?? He's your friend... your mentor...
Anakin Skywalker:   He’s like my father……

(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/47-20.jpg)




Commander Cody:   General?  General Skywalker? 
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/47-21.jpg)




Anakin Skwalker:   What is it, Commander?
Commander Cody:   Still no word from General Kenobi. 
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/47-24.jpg)




Anakin Skywalker:   He’s alive……I can feel his presence.
Commander Cody:   We do have several reports of a speeder leaving the field of battle.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/47-23.jpg)




Anakin Skywalker:   Dooku…
Commander Cody:   And we’ve scoured the area, but can find no signs of the mysterious warrior.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/47-25.jpg)




Central Command transmission on comlink:   <bing bing>  We have found the homing beacon of General Kenobi’s BARC speeder.  It is coming from an area known as the Crystal Mines.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/47-26.jpg)




Anakin Skywalker:   Set course for the Crystal Mines!
Commander Cody:   Yes, sir!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/47-27.jpg)






Meanwhile, back at the Crystal Mines…



Count Dooku:   I hope your saber skills have improved since our last meeting, Master Kenobi.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/47-28.jpg)



Obi-Wan Kenobi:   You’ll soon find out!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/47-29.jpg)



(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/47-33.jpg)



(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/47-32.jpg)



(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/47-31.jpg)



Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Ugh……
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/47-34.jpg)



Count Dooku:   It’s a pity that the previous battle has weakened you.  Otherwise, this contest might actually be challenging.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/47-35.jpg)



Count Dooku:   Perhaps now you understand the true power of the Force!  The power that even Master Yoda fears!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/47-36.jpg)



Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Yoda doesn’t fear you, Dooku……and neither do I! 
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/47-37.jpg)



Count Dooku:   You can say that……you may even believe that…
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/47-39.jpg)



Count Dooku:   But I can feel you tiring……doubt entering your mind……fear of failing to end this War……
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/47-40.jpg)



Obi-Wan Kenobi:   You won’t break me the way you did Master Bulq.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/47-41.jpg)



 
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/47-42.jpg)



(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/47-44.jpg)



Count Dooku:   Who said anything about “breaking” you…
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/47-45.jpg)



Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Ugghh…
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/47-46.jpg)



Count Dooku:   Your attack lacks imagination, Master Kenobi.  Your stance……off balance.  No style at all.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/47-43.jpg)


Count Dooku:   Yet another sign of the continuing decay of the Jedi Order.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/47-47.jpg)



Obi-Wan Kenobi:   …….ugghhh……
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/47-48a.jpg)



Count Dooku:   Perhaps I was mistaken……a true Jedi would not be so easily defeated.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/47-49.jpg)



Count Dooku:   Disappointing to be sure……but not unexpected.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/47-52.jpg)



Obi-Wan Kenobi:   You won’t kill Anakin so easily, Dooku.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/47-51.jpg)



Count Dooku:   Hmph……indeed……
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/47-50.jpg)



Count Dooku:   However, I don’t plan to kill you, Master Kenobi.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/47-53.jpg)



Count Dooku:   You serve another purpose.  You may proceed, Utapaun.
Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Wha???
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/47-54.jpg)



Obi-Wan Kenobi:   UUGGGHHHH……
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/47-55.jpg)



Sagev:   Die Je-edi!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/47-56.jpg)



Count Dooku:   STOP!  You will soon get your revenge, Utapaun.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/47-57.jpg)



Count Dooku:   Prepare for Skywalker’s arrival. 
Sagev:   Yes, Count Dooku.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/47-58.jpg)







Title: DARK ILLUSIONS - Chapter 48
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on February 16, 2007, 03:14 PM
DARK ILLUSIONS

ACT III

Chapter 48




With hopes of finding Obi-Wan Kenobi, the 212th Battalion race towards the Crystal Mines, led by Anakin Skywalker.



Anakin Skywalker:   There it is!  Pilot, land here!!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-1.jpg)



Commander Cody:   Troopers……secure the area!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-2.jpg)



Anakin Skywalker:   Obi-Wan is here…and he is still alive.  (http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-3.jpg)



Anakin Skywalker:   Commander, have the troopers stationed at every entrance to the Mine.  I’m going in alone.    If I do not return within the hour, destroy it.
Commander Cody:   Yes, General.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-4.jpg)



Anakin Skywalker:   (thinking)   I promise……I won't fail again……
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-5.jpg)


Anakin Skywalker:   (thinking)   I sense……Obi-Wan……
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-6.jpg)



Anakin Skywalker:   (thinking)   ……and something else…
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-7.jpg)



(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-9.jpg)




Sagev:   DIE, JE-EDI!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-11.jpg)



Anakin Skywalker:   You…
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-12.jpg)



Sagev:   No excuses this time, Je-edi!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-13.jpg)



Sagev:   No place to run……no place to hide!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-14.jpg)



Sagev:   Argh…
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-15.jpg)



Anakin Skywalker:   Who wants to hide?
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-16.jpg)



Buzzzzzzz
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-17.jpg)



Sagev:   I’ll make you suffer, Je-edi!  The way my people have suffered!!!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-18.jpg)



(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-19.jpg)



(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-20.jpg)



(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-21.jpg)



Buzzzzzzz
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-22.jpg)



(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-23.jpg)



Force push!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-24.jpg)




Sagev:   Uggghhhh…
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-25.jpg)



(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-26.jpg)



Sagev:   Aargghh!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-27.jpg)



(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-28.jpg)


Punch!
Sagev:   Ooof!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-29.jpg)



Sagev:   ……ugh……
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-30.jpg)



Anakin Skywalker:   Ahhhh!!!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-32.jpg)



(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-33.jpg)



Buzzzzzzz
Count Dooku:   Excellent…
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-31.jpg)



Anakin Skywalker:   No place to run……no place to hide……
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-34.jpg)



Sagev:   I’m unarmed……you wouldn’t attack an unarmed---
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-35.jpg)




Sagev:   AAAAHHHHHH!!!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-36.jpg)



Anakin Skywalker:   Where is Obi-Wan?!  TELL ME!!!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-37.jpg)



Sagev:   Je-edi scum……
Anakin Skywalker:   TELL ME NOW!!!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-38.jpg)



Buzzzzzzzz
Count Dooku:   I warned you, Utapaun…
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-39.jpg)



Count Dooku:   I do not look kindly on mistakes.  You’ve served your purpose.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-40.jpg)



Sagev:   Je-edi……scum----BLEH!
FORCE CHOKE!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-41.jpg)



Anakin Skywalker:   Dooku!! 
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-43.jpg)



Sagev:   Bleeeeeehhhhhhhhh……bleh………………………………………………
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-42.jpg)



Buzzzzzzz
Anakin Skywalker:   What is that……noise?
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-44.jpg)



Anakin Skywalker:   A probe droid!
SMASH!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-45.jpg)



Anakin Skywalker:   Dooku!!  Come out and fight!!! 
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-46.jpg)



Anakin Skywalker:   Stop hiding and fight me---
Obi-Wan Kenobi:   ……uugghhhh……
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-47.jpg)



Anakin Skywalker:   Master?!  Are you alright??
Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Oh, I’ve been better…can you free my hands?
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-48.jpg)



Anakin Skywalker:   Where’s Dooku?
Obi-Wan Kenobi:   I don’t know.  The last thing I remember was that mysterious warrior attacking and ---
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-49.jpg)



Anakin Skywalker:   ---he’s dead.  Come on, I got to get you out of here.  Commander……come in, Commander……this is Skywalker…
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-50.jpg)



Commander Cody:   General Skywalker……we’re under attack!……General!………GRIEVOUS!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-51.jpg)






Meanwhile, in one of the Crystal Mines tunnels……


Commander Cody:   All units…OPEN FIRE!!!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-52.jpg)




Clone Trooper Zank:   Ugh!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-53.jpg)



Clone Trooper Wark:   I got him!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-54.jpg)



Clone Trooper Wark:   Aaaahhhhhh…
General Grievous:   Ha ha ha ha!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-55.jpg)



Clone Trooper Pry:   Target locked in.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-56.jpg)



Clone Trooper Pry:   Bleh!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-57.jpg)



General Grievous:   Clone Commander……
Commander Cody:   He’s over here!!!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-58.jpg)



Commander Cody:   Take him down!  NOW!  Take him---UGH!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-59.jpg)



General Grievous:   Call for help, Commander!  Call the Jedi scum!!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-60.jpg)



Clone Trooper Fraz:   Hold your fire!  We don’t want to hit the Commander!!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-61.jpg)



Commander Cody:   Forget about me!  FIRE!  FIRE! 
General Grievous:   Rrrrrrrrrrrr……
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-62.jpg)



Commander Cody:   TAKE HIM DOWN-------
CRUNCH!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-63.jpg)



Clone Trooper Fraz:   OPEN FIRE!!!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-64.jpg)




Grievous shakes off his cape, and activates four lightsabers while running towards the Clones.

Clone Trooper Fraz:   Wha?!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-65.jpg)



Clone Trooper Fraz:   Look out!
Clone Trooper Baz:   Aaaahhhhh!
Clone Trooper Drex:   He’s too fast---
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-66.jpg)



General Grievous:   Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha!!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-67.jpg)



Count Dooku:   Time to go, General.  Our work is done here.  My Master will be most pleased.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-68.jpg)



General Grievous:   As you wish……
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-69.jpg)



A few minutes later……


Commander Cody:   ……stay with me, solider……help is…on the way……
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-70.jpg)



Commander Cody on comlink:   ………anyone there?……this is…Commander Cody……we need……medivacs……ASAP!!!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-71.jpg)




Obi-Wan Kenobi:   By the Force……we’re too late.
Commander Cody:   ……General Kenobi?
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-72.jpg)



Commander Cody:   ……we……couldn’t……hold them……Grievous……and Dooku……
Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Save your strength, Cody.  We’re getting you out of here.
Anakin Skywalker:   Dooku was here?!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-73.jpg)



Anakin Skywalker:   We can’t let them escape, Master!  We can use the speeders to pursue them-----
Commander Cody:  Central command reports……Federation Starships……coming out of hyper space……attacking our ships……
Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Dooku’s escape plans, no doubt.  He was fully prepared for this.  This was never about Oner or the Crystal Mines.

 (http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-74.jpg)





Obi-Wan Kenobi:   We’re can’t do anything about Dooku now, Anakin.  There’ll be another time.  All we can do is treat the wounded until help arrives.  These troopers don’t have much time.
Anakin Skywalker:  (thinking)   But…………I can’t fail……again……I won’t…….
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/48-75.jpg)




The conclusion of Act III

To be continued………in Act IV: The Epilogue

Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (Update 2/16/07)
Post by: Deanna Rash on February 16, 2007, 04:14 PM
 :o :o :o :o OMGosh!! this is Awesome the best chapter yet!!! ;D
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (Update 2/16/07)
Post by: Artoo on February 18, 2007, 01:20 PM
These were the best chapters yet! Grievous vs. Cody, never expected that.
Ch. 46- I liked it. As I guessed 1 last duel.
Ch.47- So when does the Tatooine memory take placeduring TPM? If not what happens to Graga?
Ch. 48- This is one of my favorite chapters in this PN. Good action, good use of figures, good poses, & Grievous kicking clone ass... what can be better!?

So after the epilouge will there be another PN or will you take a break?
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (Update 2/16/07)
Post by: Dressel Rebel on February 18, 2007, 03:03 PM
Very entertaining!  Nice job with the camera too.  My favorite part, hands down:

(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20Chap%2046-48/47-9s.jpg)

Keep up the good work  :)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (Update 2/16/07)
Post by: 212th Battalion on February 24, 2007, 11:11 PM
Amazing longhorn keep up the good work ;D ;)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (Update 2/16/07)
Post by: CHEWIE on March 3, 2007, 06:35 AM
Really good stuff Longhorn.  I'd probably not have the confidence to make a photonovel not using custom sets but you really do such a great job as always with things that somehow just work out perfectly.  Good dialogue too as always and I also enjoyed the flashback shots.  I was a little disapointed to see the warrior die, it's fun seeing fan fic characters that we don't know the real fate of.  I enjoy seeing where people take those characters and hope you create another original character sometime.

 :P

Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (thru Chapter 48)
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on March 5, 2007, 03:29 PM
Thanx to everyone for their feedback.  Always welcomed, both positive and negative, and appreciated.  8)

Deanna Rash:  It's funny that someone will always vote for the latest chapter as the "best chapter yet!"  But I'm really glad that everyone finds their own favorite chapter in this long story.  Thanx for your feedback!

Artoo:  Thanx for the breakdown, ARTOO.  I always look forward to your comments.  You called it right in regards to the final saber duel.  More will be revealed in ACT IV - The Epilogue.  The flashback scene with young Anakin is set before TPM, as Anakin witnesses the violence of the Sand People.  Graga gets roughed-up, but is not killed or kidnapped.  I was going to show more, but felt it wasn't necesary for the main story.  These last three chapters were difficult b/c they all take place in the same place, so that's why I wanted the flashback scene.  The great articulation in these figures (Obi-Wan, Anakin, Dooku) allowed for some great poses.  I wanted to use the lighting to really add another aspect to the pics.  And I needed to address what happened to Grievous after the Windu fight.  The Clones getting killed was a fun scene to shoot!  I do have a lot of other ideas for a new PN, but I want to finish this story first.

Dressel Rebel:  Glad you liked the flashback scene - always fun to write & shoot.  And I appreciate your comments on the photos.  They are very important in a simple story like this.

212th Battalion:  Thanx and I will hopefully end on a high note!  Stay tuned...

CHEWIE:  Always appreciate your comments, CHEWIE.  I simply don't have the room for a custom set, so I do try different things to take away from the fact my sets are lacking.  It's probably why I bust my brains when writing the dialogue and shooting the pics.  This PN has been drastically different from my other PNs if only b/c of characters like SHADE and SAGEV.  The fan fic characters really allow for more freedom in the story, and do add another level of depth to the story.  And as soon as I complete & post ACT IV, I'll contact you about finally bringing this story over to Yakface.

Thanx again for all the comments, guys!  8)

Title: DARK ILLUSIONS - ACT IV: The Epilogue
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on April 27, 2007, 05:26 PM
Well, it's finally here!  The conclusion of DARK ILLUSIONS!

I hope you guys have enjoyed reading this story that took over 18 months to tell.  I know I have enjoyed creating a story that so many people enjoyed.  I also learned so much during this process, it’s amazing!

For this final & lengthy update, I tried something different.  None of the previous updates are written with a narration, but for The Epilogue, I gave the narration part to a specific character, Padme Amidala.  As you read/view this final part of the story, read Padme's parts as if she is thinking to herself not realizing all of the things going on around her.  I hope this approach works for the reader, and brings a fresh way to read the conclusion of DARK ILLUSIONS.

Enjoy!   8)

(Look for a cameo role from a custom figure by the one & only, CHEWIE!)

Title: DARK ILLUSIONS - ACT IV: THE EPILOGUE
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on April 27, 2007, 05:27 PM
DARK ILLUSIONS

ACT IV

The Epilogue




Part I


Padme Amidala:  Many things have changed during the course of this War.  The once proud Republic has begun to resemble the very evil it fights, with armies that occupy other worlds and a leadership determined to win at all costs.  All the while, enemies are killed, civilians frightened, and friends lost.  The fear only grows worse with every passing day with power being the ultimate equalizer…
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/1-1.jpg)




Lak Sivrak:   …no way the Armies come here.  The vermin in this place wouldn’t stand for it!  It’ll never happen!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/2-8.jpg)



Commander Appo:   Nobody move!
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Commander Appo:   We are searching for a suspect in connection with the recent bombings on Coruscant. 
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/2-11.jpg)



Senator Meena Tillis:   My word……the 501st Legion?  Here?
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Fiak D’Jser:   Die, tyrants!!!
Senator Meena Tillis:   What?!  NO!!!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/2-14A.jpg)



Commander Appo:   Open fire!!!
Ellors Madek:   LOOK OUT!!!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/2-15.jpg)



Fraggletooth:   Nooo!!
Fiak D’Jser:   Ughhhh……
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/2-16A.jpg)



Commander Appo:   That was an unwise move.  Lock the doors!  No one gets out unless I say so! 
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/2-17.jpg)



Clone Trooper Gion:   Weapons on the table!
Lak Sivrak:   ………
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/2-19.jpg)



Clone Trooper Gion:   Commander, these are similar to the blasters we found on the terrorists.
Commander Appo:   Search everyone!  Use whatever means necessary!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/2-18.jpg)



Clone Trooper Kytr:   Up against the wall!
Hem Dazon:   But I didn’t do anything…
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/2-22.jpg)


Clone Trooper Fierk:   Hand it over, scum!
Zutton:   No!  Help!  Clone brutality!  Clone brutality!!!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/2-20.jpg)



Senator Meena Tillis:   I am a Senator in the Galactic Republic!  This is an outrage!  The Republic has no jurisdiction here!  I’m reporting your actions directly to the Senate!
Commander Appo:   We are conducting an official investigation.  I suggest you not interfere, Senator.  You’re free to go.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/2-23.jpg)



Commander Appo:   Stay on the ground, Rodian!
Queedo:   Ohhhh…….
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/2-21.jpg)






Title: DARK ILLUSIONS - ACT IV: THE EPILOGUE
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on April 27, 2007, 05:28 PM
DARK ILLUSIONS

ACT IV

The Epilogue




Part II

Padme Amidala:  Yet, despite the shift in balance, faith is still alive.  Faith that good will prevail over evil, and faith that those protectors of peace remain strong……
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/3-1.jpg)




Obi-Wan Kenobi:   We have secured the Oner System.  There is no sign of a permanent base, and all battle droids remain deactivated.  The Crystal Mines remain intact, less the small ‘redecorating’ done by Anakin.  I’ll report back when we make final departure, Master.[/i]
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/4-1.jpg)



Ki-Adi Mundi:   Strange that Dooku would wage a battle in such a sacred place as the Crystal Mines.  Even he would not disturb one of the galaxies most valued treasures.  The battle must have been a diversion from something.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/4-2.jpg)



Yoda:   Deception is Dooku’s way now.  Wanted to test the Jedi, he did.  Nonetheless…thankful for the rescue of Master Tiin, we are.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/4-3.jpg)



Saesee Tiin:   I agree with Ki-Adi.  I was never interrogated by Dooku.  My only use to him was bait – a way to lure our forces to Oner.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/4-4.jpg)



Kit Fisto:   Either way, we missed the opportunity to capture both Dooku and Grievous.  That would have certainly ended this War. 
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/4-5.jpg)


Agen Kolar:   And we are also no closer to discovering the identity of the Master Sith Lord, if he does exist.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/4-6.jpg)



Agen Kolar:   Even Master Windu has begun to run out of patience. 
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/4-7.jpg)



Agen Kolar:   His endeavor to find the Sith Lord has reached a dead end.  He is currently at The Works trying to find out what happened to his informant.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/4-8.jpg)



Clone Commander Pax:   General, we have confirmed that an explosive was detonated here.  This was the only thing we’ve recovered so far.  I don’t recognize it.  Have you seen a helmet like this before? 
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/4-9.jpg)



Mace Windu:   No……I have not.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/4-10.jpg)


Yoda:   An endeavor unknown to the Senate or the Chancellor.  Cautious we must be to continue this operation. 
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/4-11.jpg)



Ki-Adi Mundi:   But an operation we must continue if we are to discover the identity of the Sith Lord.
Saesee Tiin:   …while continuing to pursue Dooku & Grievous.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/4-12.jpg)



Shaak Ti:   We are already stretched to the breaking point.  Every week the number of Padawans without Masters grows.  The more Jedi lost in battle, the more Jedi leave the Temple to join the front, leaving the security of Coruscant very vulnerable.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/4-13.jpg)



Ki-Adi Mundi:   As Oner has taught us, more freelance fighters will join Dooku if they feel the Republic cannot protect them during this War.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/4-14.jpg)



Kit Fisto:   I volunteer to join the front again.  I would also like to recommend young Skywalker take command of his own battalion, something the Chancellor has requested for some time now.    He has proven himself many times during this War.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/4-15.jpg)



Yoda:   With Obi-Wan, young Skywalker should remain.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/4-16.jpg)



Yoda:   A confusing time this is for him.  Decide his fate at another time, we will.   
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/4-17.jpg)








Title: DARK ILLUSIONS - ACT IV: THE EPILOGUE
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on April 27, 2007, 05:29 PM
DARK ILLUSIONS

ACT IV

The Epilogue




Part III

Padme Amidala:  But I must confess, even my faith has been shaken in our public officials.  Corruption has always been a problem in the political process, but the War creates new opportunities for greed and bribery…
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/5-1.jpg)





Senator Bail Organa:   Another  meeting to celebrate another victory.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/2-2.jpg)



Senator Meena Tills:   It seems like they have become as common as motions in the Senate to amend the powers of the Chancellor.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/2-1.jpg)



Senator Bail Organa:   What’s this?  Do I finally sense a bit of concern in the Senator’s comments?
Senator Meena Tills:   Perhaps.  Recent events have changed my viewpoint of the new powers-that-be.   
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/2-4.jpg)



Senator Meena Tills:   Starting with my recent visit to the Outer Rim…
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/2-6a.jpg)



Senator Meena Tills:   One of my contacts, who no longer feels it is safe to travel to Coruscant, said he had some valuable information regarding a secret operation being conducted by the Jedi Order.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/2-7a.jpg)


Senator Bail Organa:   Really?  What did he have to say?
Senator Meena Tills:   Unfortunately, I never found out.  As we began our conversation, the 501st Legion stormed the cantina…as part of some ‘investigation’ they were doing.

(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/2-10a.jpg)



Senator Bail Organa:   The 501st?  The battalion based on Coruscant?
Senator Meena Tills:   The very exact one.  Notwithstanding the fact that the 501st were well outside of the Republic’s jurisdiction, a patron got a little jumpy and pulled a blaster on the 501st.   A mistake everyone would soon regret.

(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/2-16a.jpg)



Senator Bail Organa:   How did you escape the situation?
Senator Meena Tills:   I used my Senator status, of course.  That might have been the only reason I was allowed to leave. 

(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/2-23a.jpg)



Senator Meena Tills:   I regret leaving now, as I can only imagine what happened to rest of the patrons inside, including my contact.  I abandoned him.  I have not heard from him since.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/2-25.jpg)



Senator Bail Organa:   You must be very careful, Meena.  With the latest anti-terror laws passed, you could be labeled a collaborator in such investigations.
Senator Meena Tills:   Trust me when I say that has not escaped my mind since I returned.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/2-26.jpg)



Senator Bail Organa:   I wonder if your sighting off-world has gotten back to the Chancellor?  By the way that Shocktrooper is watching you, I would assume so.
Senator Meena Tills:   Indeed.  We’ll talk about this later.  By the way, where is Senator Amidala this evening?

(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/2-27.jpg)



Senator Bail Organa:   She was felling ill, unfortunately.  I’m sure she won’t regret missing out on this celebration.  Here comes the Chancellor now…
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/2-28.jpg)



(Applause)
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Senator Orn Free Taa:   Congratulations on another impressive victory, Chancellor!  Another resounding defeat for Dooku and the Separatists!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/2-30.jpg)



Governor Tarkin:   Absolutely!  A strong showing of force is the only way to defeat these Separatists.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/2-31.jpg)



Chancellor Palpatine:   The credit belongs to 212th Battalion, but especially to the heroism of young Anakin Skywalker.  The Republic owes a tremendous amount of gratitude to Skywalker for saving the Crystal Mines, which would have surely been destroyed by Count Dooku.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/2-32.jpg)



Chancellor Palpatine:   Unfortunately, without additional support, Dooku and General Grievous escaped yet again. 
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/2-33.jpg)



Chancellor Palpatine:   As a result, I would like to propose we extend the powers of the 501st Legion to assist in matters like these in the future.  As merely an extended level of support to the Jedi Order, of course.  Our Republic cannot and should not solely depend on the Jedi to defeat the Separatists forces.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/2-34.jpg)



Chancellor Palpatine:   I hope to have your support.   Only together can we win this War.  But we still have much more work to do.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/2-38.jpg)



Senator Orn Fee Taa:   A moment of your time, Chancellor, if I may.  I would be honored to bring your measure to the floor of the Senate.  However, I would like to discuss the possibility of excavating the Crystal Mines as soon as possible.  The lesson of this battle will be soon forgotten if we, as public officials, do not move to protect our galaxy’s most precious treasures.
Chancellor Palpatine:   Indeed…
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/2-40.jpg)



Senator Meena Tills:   You were right, Bail.  Another celebration, another opportunity to increase the Chancellor’s powers.
Senator Bail Organa:   I wish I were wrong.  Remind me to use Senator Amidala’s sickness excuse next time.
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Title: DARK ILLUSIONS - ACT IV: THE EPILOGUE
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on April 27, 2007, 05:30 PM
DARK ILLUSIONS

ACT IV

The Epilogue




Part IV

Padme Amidala:  This war represents a failure to listen.  Escalating the War only diminishes the possibility of a diplomatic ending.  Across the stars, more and more worlds are being ravaged by the War and the hatred only spreads.  We must find a way to stop the fighting and let diplomacy resume.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/7-1.jpg)



Padme Amidala:   Secrecy is now the standard.  We must have open and honest communication if we are to end this conflict.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/8-1.jpg)


Padme Amidala:   As old relationships die, new ones are born, soon to be torn apart by the War.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/8-2.jpg)



Padme Amidala:   Noble warriors depart for exotic planets with those they trust with their lives.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/8-3.jpg)



Padme Amidala:   The enemy has an unlimited amount of funds to continue this War forever...
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/8-4c.jpg)



Padme Amidala:   …while our forces continue to upgrade their equipment…equipment designed to kill and destroy…feeding egos and appetites for more warfare.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/8-5c.jpg)









Part V

Padme Amidala:  The scariest part is the unknown power that pulls all the strings of this conflict.  Without remorse or regret, the shadow controls the fates of so many, including those that have no idea they are being manipulated.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/9-1.jpg)




(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/10-1.jpg)



Count Dooku:   Remain here.
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Darth Sidious:[/i]   Welcome back, Lord Tyrannus.
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Count Dooku:   The War progresses as planned, My Lord. 
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/10-4.jpg)



Count Dooku:   Our success on Oner has proven to be more beneficial than we could have possibly imagined.
Darth Sidious:   Excellent…
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/10-5.jpg)



Count Dooku:   The young Utapaun proved useful in the end.  His home planet is ideal for the ‘leadership’.  Once I confirmed his information, he was properly disposed of, My Lord.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/10-6.jpg)



Darth Sidious:   Well done, my apprentice. 
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/10-7.jpg)



Count Dooku:   However, the General grows uneasy, and losing patience with Gunray.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/10-8.jpg)



Darth Sidious:   No matter.  Grievous will soon be occupied with other matters.
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Darth Sidious:   What of our other objective on Oner?
Count Dooku:   A flawless demonstration, My Master.  Skywalker displayed all the necessary skills we will require.  His actions were recorded, as you requested.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/10-9.jpg)



Darth Sidious:   You have done well, Lord Tyrannus.  Continue your monitoring of young Skywalker.  His faith in the Jedi Order must be broken, and then will he be ready.
Count Dooku:   Yes, My Master.  He will make for a very powerful ally.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/10-10.jpg)



Darth Sidious:   Everything is going as I have foreseen…
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Title: DARK ILLUSIONS - ACT IV: THE EPILOGUE
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on April 27, 2007, 05:32 PM
DARK ILLUSIONS

ACT IV

The Epilogue





Part VI


Padme Amidala:   But most important of all……this conflict has taken away the one thing I truly care about.  None of these things can ever come between me and that which I care about……not this War, not the Jedi Order, not my career in the Senate, not even the Republic.  This…I promise you, Anakin.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/11-1.jpg)





Clone Trooper Zaff:   There isn’t anything left on this dreaded planet but bugs and useless droid parts.
Clone Sergeant Airre:   Pipe down, trooper.  Our orders are to verify the CIS presence has been completely extinguished.  I don’t care if it takes the rest of your shortened lifetime, but we will complete our mission.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/12-1.jpg)


Clone Trooper Wertz:   Just a little bit further……almost there.
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Clone Lt. Bevo:   Patrols are nearly complete and the supplies are now being loaded, Commander.  We just received our new orders and destination.
Commander Cody:   Good.  Be sure to get an Intel report from Commander Gree before we depart.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/12-3.jpg)



Anakin Skywalker:   (sigh)
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Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Beautiful night, isn’t it?
Anakin Skywalker:   Yes, very peaceful considering the history of this place. 
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/12-5.jpg)



Anakin Skywalker:   Any word from the Council?
Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Not yet.  Come…take a walk with me, Anakin. 
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/12-6.jpg)



Obi-Wan Kenobi:   I wanted to discuss something with you, but didn’t want to do it in front of the troops, considering the casualties we’ve suffered.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/12-7.jpg)



Anakin Skywalker:   I understand.  What is it, Master?
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Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Why do you think Dooku let that mystery warrior fight you instead of fighting you himself?
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/12-9.jpg)



Anakin Skywalker:   Who understands anything Dooku does.  It doesn’t matter.  He escaped.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/12-10.jpg)


Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Perhaps that was his intention all along.  What if this whole battle was just an exercise…just a way to for him to test us?
Anakin Skywalker:     Are you trying to say that Dooku never wanted possession of the Mines?  That our troops died for nothing?
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/12-11.jpg)



Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Dooku said some things that made me think about this War in a whole new light……about our role in it……and the will of the Force.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/12-13.jpg)



Anakin Skywalker:   Will of the Force?  Nonsense…the galaxy needs us.  We have to restore peace and eliminate Dooku and his followers.  Sounds pretty simple to me.
Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Hmph…I wish I had your confidence.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/12-12.jpg)



Anakin Skywalker:   Come on, Master, don’t get philosophical on me now.  Let the Council worry about that stuff.  I don’t want to have to rescue you again for the eighth time.
Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Eighth?!  I thought it was the sixth……no wait…seventh…no…you’re right.  This would be number eight, wouldn’t it?
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/12-14.jpg)



Commander Cody:   General Kenobi!  Sorry to interrupt, but we just received our orders.  We’re to set course for Cato Nemodia. 
Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Very well, lets head back to camp. 
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/12-15.jpg)



Commander Cody:   Intel reports part of the Separatist  leadership is there, specifically Viceroy Gunray.
Anakin Skywalker:   Gunray?  What about Dooku or Grievous? 
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/12-16.jpg)



Commander Cody:   No info on them as of yet.  But your new ship did arrive with last supply convoy, General Skywalker.
Anakin Skywalker & Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Ship?
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/12-17.jpg)



Commander Cody:   Yes, sir.  According to the transmission, the ship is a token of appreciation from the Chancellor.
Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Palpatine?
Anakin Skywalker:   I guess news travels fast…
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/12-18.jpg)



Commander Cody:   Your ship is docked on the far side of platform, General.
Anakin Skywalker:   Thanks, Cody.  Let’s get going then.  The sooner we end this War, the sooner we all go home.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/12-20.jpg)



Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Well, Cody……where’s my ship?
Commander Cody:   Ship, sir?  We only received one ship.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/12-22.jpg)



Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Of course.  In that case, I’ll need to ride with you.  Ready for another adventure, Cody?
Commander Cody:   Yes, sir!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/12-23.jpg)



Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Little rest for the weary.
Commander Cody:   We wouldn’t want it any other way, sir.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/12-24.jpg)



Anakin Skywalker:   R2?  Is that really you?
R2-D2:   woooooooo
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/12-25.jpg)



Anakin Skywalker:   Nice to see a familiar face.  You wouldn’t happen to still have that holoprojection, would you?
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/12-26.jpg)



Anakin Skywalker:   That’s the one…
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/12-27.jpg)



Anakin Skywalker:   …
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/12-28.jpg)



Anakin Skywalker:   Thanks, R2.  Now, let’s get out of here.
R2-D2:   WOOOOOOO!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/12-29.jpg)



(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/12-31.jpg)



(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/12-32.jpg)


Anakin Skywalker:   This is where the fun begins!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/12-33.jpg)


Obi-Wan Kenobi:   ………….
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/12-34.jpg)







Part VII


Padme Amidala:   I feel you, Anakin.  No matter where you are, I still feel connected to you somehow.  And I remember things…
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/13-1.jpg)



Padme Amidala:   …that seem like such a long time ago.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/13-2.jpg)



Padme Amidala:   Ooooohh…
C3-PO:   Oh, Ms. Padme!  Are you alright?
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/13-4.jpg)



Padme Amidala:   Yes, 3PO……I’m fine, thank you.  I’m just feeling a bit tired.  Could you prepare my room?  I’d like to get some rest.
C3-PO:   Oh yes, of course I would, Ms. Padme.  It would be my pleasure!
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/13-5.jpg)



Padme Amidala:   Despite all of my misgiving about this conflict, it is important we bring peace back to the galaxy.  To reunite the Republic as one entity.  To restore the principles of democracy.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/13-6b.jpg)



Padme Amidala:   We must…if we are to bring a new hope for the future.
(http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c241/S_A_Longhorn3/Dark%20Illusions%20-%20Epilogue/13-6c.jpg)




The End of DARK ILLUSIONS
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (Final Update! The Epilogue)
Post by: Deanna Rash on April 27, 2007, 10:47 PM
 ;D ;D Awesome! You've been busy! Great job by the way! Your lighting and technique is really good.It brings out the proper mood.And good storytelling! 8) ;D ;D
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (Final Update! The Epilogue)
Post by: Diddly on April 27, 2007, 10:55 PM
I haven't read any of your chapters in a while but I caught up with everything and your PN is still just as good as it was when you started it. I LOVE the lighting you use, and you're able to mix in the real life environments extremely well. Your use of flashback scenes is fantastic!

I thought the ending was sudden, but perhaps that's because I was so into the story? Nevertheless, DI was a fantastic read and I'm looking forward to seeing what new projects you come up with (if you decide to do any).
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (Final Update! The Epilogue)
Post by: Artoo on April 29, 2007, 01:17 PM
Great job ending this PN! I had the Luke theme in my head on the last shot. 8)
If you do another PN I really want to see take on the OT characters, mainly because there aren't many PNs based on the OT.
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (Complete)
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on May 19, 2007, 11:42 AM
Hey guys...

Haven't had the time post my individual comments to all the feedback because...

Good news is we are the proud parents of baby girl! She came 8 weeks premature last night, but is doing well and healthy. She weighted in a 3 lbs and 10 ounces. We've named her Lorelai Virginia. Mom is also doing well but in need of some valuable rest.

That last shot in the Epilogue was not only a nod to ANH, but also a final tribute to my wife and daughter.  I 'll post my comments about the PN in the next couple days since I'll have some free time.  Thanx again for all those that supported, inspired, and helped me with this fun photonovel.
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (Complete)
Post by: Deanna Rash on May 19, 2007, 02:32 PM
 ;D Congrats Longhorn!!
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (Complete)
Post by: David on May 20, 2007, 06:17 PM
Congratulations, best wishes to you and your family. BTW, that was an awesome photonovel, it was simple but very very effective. I liked the dialogue and story, too. Great job!!!  8)
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (Complete)
Post by: Satria Libra on March 13, 2009, 06:55 AM
Greetings SA Longhorn...

Im a fan of your work here on this photonovel thread...

I really, I mean really, enjoy your photonovel... especially on clone "guys" scene with Commander Bacara and Commander Bly made a quarrel.

Great works I must say... thank you.

I have a request for you. Could you make the lightsaber sparks its beam? maybe with the help of photoshop.

I think it could magnify your already great works...
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (Complete)
Post by: roundrockhorn on April 23, 2009, 12:32 PM
From one Horn to another, I'd like to add my compliments on this work.  Excellent!!


Hook 'Em

& May The Force Be With You!
Title: Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (Complete)
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on July 29, 2009, 01:12 PM
Hey guys

Hadn't checked this thread in a loooonnnng time, but saw your comments.  Appreciate your words and thank you for taking the time to read the story.  I had a lot of fun working on the PN, even tho it took me over a year to complete.  Seems like a lifetime ago!  But it is always cool to see my work live on for others to enjoy.

Been thinking about making another PN in a different era recently.