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K.O.E. Teaser
« on: November 22, 2005, 01:40 AM »






















Sorry about relying on soe production shots for the intro there. I'm sort of learning as I go... :)

Comments are very much appreciated.
« Last Edit: November 22, 2005, 01:42 AM by In Rem »

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Re: K.O.E. Teaser
« Reply #1 on: November 22, 2005, 01:50 AM »
Wow, I can tell we're in for a visual treat, and some great storytelling.

I personally wouldn't rely on so many production shots, but however you want to do it should be great!

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Re: K.O.E. Teaser
« Reply #2 on: November 22, 2005, 01:53 AM »
Yeah, I only used that many for the intro. I wanted to focus just for right now on clone birth, just as prologue. I don't plan to spend any time on Kamino once this gets started...

Desolate outer rim systems and junk seek and destroy missions, here we come! :)

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Re: K.O.E. Teaser
« Reply #3 on: November 22, 2005, 02:55 AM »
Alright!  The first "wide screen" photonovel!  Fantastic!

I wouldn't worry about the "production shots" for an intro like this.  This feels like a great "trailer" for the story, so, in that context, I think it works just fine.

And, from your "sneak peak" pics, I know you've got the mad visual skillz to make a great story.  And it's clear now that the writing is similarly superb! 

You've got me very psyched to see your story!  Great words and great visuals!  Bring it on, I say!!!

(the title screen is freakin' awesome, BTW!)
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Re: K.O.E. Teaser
« Reply #4 on: November 22, 2005, 03:59 AM »
nice teaser !

the shot with jango is a nice touch

i like the visual effects and the trooper point of view

can't wait for the rest of the story.

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Re: K.O.E. Teaser
« Reply #5 on: November 22, 2005, 07:09 AM »
Great Teaser I'm really going to look forward to seeing this.

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Re: K.O.E. Teaser
« Reply #6 on: November 22, 2005, 10:44 AM »
Thanks for the comments, guys. I'm not 100% sure when I'll be able to get elbows-deep into this, but I hope to have something more to share sooner rather than later.

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Re: K.O.E. Teaser
« Reply #7 on: November 22, 2005, 07:58 PM »
nice teaser. the title poster at the end was awsome. i thought all the movie shots where pretty cool, it let you know it is from the clones point of view and thier take on thier creation. your off to a great start and i can't wait to see where you go from here!
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Re: K.O.E. Teaser
« Reply #8 on: November 22, 2005, 08:13 PM »
 :o

Wow, not only did the awesomeness jump at me from the screen, it slapped me in the face and knocked me out of my computer chair!

I LOVE it! That title screen is absolutely brilliant. I'm looking very forward to this!

Can you estimate when the first novel will be ready?

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Re: K.O.E. Teaser
« Reply #9 on: November 22, 2005, 08:23 PM »
I wish I could better estimate when I'll have something ready... most of the figures I want to include in the first story are done... I just need to sit down and take care of business. :)

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Re: K.O.E. Teaser
« Reply #10 on: November 23, 2005, 04:51 PM »
can't wait.  Awesome pics in combination with original pics.  Looking forward to it.  Keep us updated.
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Re: K.O.E. Teaser
« Reply #11 on: November 25, 2006, 12:49 PM »
 >:(Darn again!I couldn't see'em :P
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