Author Topic: K.O.E.: Chapter 1 - Necessary Trust  (Read 2079 times)

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Re: K.O.E.: Chapter 1 - Necessary Trust
« Reply #15 on: February 24, 2006, 04:20 AM »
Hey InRem!

You guys are KILLING me. You make me REALLY want to do a photonovel myself, but I just don't have the time, dammit!

This was an awesome opening. I love so many little details...Sedo's closed eyes, his little meditation area made out of those ROTS battle stands, The shot of Jango with his prisoner...all great stuff.

I;m also THRILLED someone is writing a story where a Jedi is questioning the origins of the clone army. It really bothered me no one in the PT ever asked, "Wait...Jango is the prime clone of the army of the Republic...but he works for the separatists! Could this whole thing be a set-up?"

Yeah, I know as a Bounty Hunter it could be assumed Jango was working both sides for his own interests...but c'mon.  :P

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Re: K.O.E.: Chapter 1 - Necessary Trust
« Reply #16 on: February 24, 2006, 01:30 PM »
More to come soon, DD.

I have often been troubled by the blind acceptance of the Clone Army, too. At the same time, right about the time the Jedi Council learns of the Army is when they need them most, so it's pretty much a matter of not looking a gift horse in the mouth. The Clones performed well on Geonosis, and thereafter, so I guess the Council chalked it all up to a belated thankyou owed to Sifo Dias. :)

For the record, Sedo Crus doesn't buy it for a second. :)

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Re: K.O.E.: Chapter 1 - Necessary Trust
« Reply #17 on: March 4, 2006, 11:27 AM »
NOw that Ive had a chance to read the first chapter Im even more interested in seeing more. Youve got a great storytelling style. I'm starting to really like the Sedo character. I think im going to enjoy seeing him in action. Comm. Koe is a great character too. I love the concept.

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Re: K.O.E.: Chapter 1 - Necessary Trust
« Reply #18 on: March 4, 2006, 10:45 PM »
Thanks, D_E. I really appreciate the kind words.

I'm glad you like Sedo and Koe. As you can imagine, we'll be seeing lots of them as we move forward.

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Re: K.O.E.: Chapter 1 - Necessary Trust
« Reply #19 on: November 21, 2006, 01:22 AM »
Images fixed 11/20/06...bump.

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Re: K.O.E.: Chapter 1 - Necessary Trust
« Reply #20 on: November 21, 2006, 11:57 PM »
awesome, more of a review to come.....

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Re: K.O.E.: Chapter 1 - Necessary Trust
« Reply #21 on: November 23, 2006, 11:31 PM »
 ;DThis looks promising!!can't wait too see more!!
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