You guys are KILLING me. You make me REALLY want to do a photonovel myself, but I just don't have the time, dammit!
This was an awesome opening. I love so many little details...Sedo's closed eyes, his little meditation area made out of those ROTS battle stands, The shot of Jango with his prisoner...all great stuff.
I;m also THRILLED someone is writing a story where a Jedi is questioning the origins of the clone army. It really bothered me no one in the PT ever asked, "Wait...Jango is the prime clone of the army of the Republic...but he works for the separatists! Could this whole thing be a set-up?"
Yeah, I know as a Bounty Hunter it could be assumed Jango was working both sides for his own interests...but c'mon.