GGPike, I'm thrilled that you updated. I was hoping you would be able to do so.
First off, great storyline. I love seeing original stuff like this, with a main character thrown in the mix, but all kinds of new ones too. That's the way I think to take advantage of the endless Star Wars universe.
Usually I don't like the dialogue bubbles, but the style you used really works well. It's shaping up like a nice comic book story in my opinion. And you have an intriguing storyline, combined with beautiful pics that kept me interested, without even one laser blast being fired. Now that's awesome. I can't wait to see how exciting it gets once you have a blaster or lightsaber fight.
The main character, Captain Dyne seems like a cool character. I'm looking forward to learning more about him, maybe some sort of backstory, etc. Can't wait to see your next update, and thanks for sharing this with us.