Thank you for the good honest feedback SA, it's much appreciated.
I totally agree with you about Dooku... I might have rushed it a bit with him trying to manipulate Shundi. I was wanting to show a sigh of strength in Shundi in this chapter, where he turns his back on Dooku. I probably should have played it out more, but I had a fear or dragging it.
As for the duplicate shots, I only did that as time saving manner. When I edit pics, it's crazy how my computer freezes up. For example, that pic with tanks and the droids took almost 3 hours to make... if my computer didn't go haywire, I could have gotten it done in 30 minutes or less. Seeing that it would have taken another 2-3 hours to make a new shot, I just used a portion of the pic for a later shot of the Battle Droids. Because of how my computer is acting up, that's why I've been making more of the modular foamcore sets lately. Those take a while to make, but it saves a lot of time.
As for Freelo, ha ha! I think it's actually cool that a few people hate him, yet a few say he's their favorite character. I personally like the character, but I'll try to not make him too goofy. What is it you really dislike about him, the look of the Mon Cal species, or is it the way he acts?
Anyways, thanks for the feedback... the next chapter, I guess it will be 3-4 weeks before it's up. I'll probably start on it sometime soon, but need to work on a new foamcore set for the main scenes. I think the next one runs the chance of being boring as hell, but it's probably essential to the story.