Well, it took an act of Congress but I finally got the complete dialouge up. Hopefully everyone enjoys it. I have hopefully learned a but from my mistakes and it wont tkae as long to get the second part up. Ive snapped a few pics but due to incliment weather ( rain and a digital camera dont mix) I may have to retake them.
I am now in the process of fixing the typos. I thank everyone who has pointed these out, and I am in the process of fixing them now.
Blaster_e11: your right, the blue clones are in fact Lieutennants, the green ones are Seargents. I corrected that one, thanks for pionting that out.
Ratm: its not supposed to be a mullet, he has long bangs like myself, they are just pulled back.
In-Rem: I made wit da woids. Sorry it took so long.
BrentS: thanks for all your help. Punctuation and me never have gotten along. I was in a hurry to get the words up.