Wow!!! That was really wonderful. I thought it was very cool, in almost all aspects.
First off, great story! You had me hooked right from the first few pages, the set up up was just so cool. Wonderful build up, and you really threw a curveball when Ms. Skywalker showed up on the scene at the end. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Great job with your photos, the sets and backgrounds were very believable and natural for the scenes that were taking place. Real nice job with camera angles and lighting, your pics were nice and clear ... I liked the subtle effects also.
Cool custom characters, if I'm not mistaking; you put some extra washes on the droids and tricked out the Gonk? Also, really like the Hamma character ... nice hair
My only suggestion would be, if you could make the pics on your next one maybe 15 to 20% larger. I found myself squinting a few times, trying to read your text. That's really about it, other than that your comicbook layout looked very proffesional.
Kudos man, looking forward to more from you