I dig it! And I think I like the comic style better - gives me a chance to take in the images & story at the same time. Leaves me feeling less disjointed than the widescreen format....
And I like the story so far (as my avatar here attests to). But I'm fairly certain that no one that I know "masks
in the glow of his recent victory" ("basks" might work better here)
Other than that one
thing, he story is quite nicely intriguing, and I love
the sets, customs & images! Keep up the awesome work Brent!