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Offline Swede

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Star Wars: Old Friends ... Part Seven (New 12-06)
« on: December 6, 2006, 09:07 PM »
Hey guys, here's another chapter. 

     This will be it till mid-February. I go back to my insane work rotation for 8 weeks which leaves me with just enough time to spend with my fam and not much else.  What little leasure time I do have, I'll spend working on my PN diorama sets for the upcoming chapters and of course checking out the sweet new PNs posted from others  :D
Also, I'm going to check out the free G.I.M.P. photo editing program!
(Man, that just sounds bad when ya read it  :o)
It looks somewhat promising.
As always, feedback is welcome!

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Re: Star Wars: Old Friends ... Part Seven (New 12-06)
« Reply #1 on: December 7, 2006, 02:18 PM »
loved the fight between boba and han cant wait for more swede
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Re: Star Wars: Old Friends ... Part Seven (New 12-06)
« Reply #2 on: December 7, 2006, 09:51 PM »
 ;DThat was COOL Swede! I like the part about the Royal pain.That would be Solo
alright.The action was great.Another great chapter.
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Re: Star Wars: Old Friends ... Part Seven (New 12-06)
« Reply #3 on: December 12, 2006, 01:20 PM »
For some reason, I have to scroll side to side to view all the dialogue and picture.  Difficult to read, so I'll read & post my comments over on RS, SWEDE.
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Re: Star Wars: Old Friends ... Part Seven (New 12-06)
« Reply #4 on: December 13, 2006, 09:01 AM »
i have to be honest when i started reading this i wasnt sure if i liked it or not...but now i am...this chapter has me hooked...good work!
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Re: Star Wars: Old Friends ... Part Seven (New 12-06)
« Reply #5 on: December 13, 2006, 09:02 PM »
Hey guys!


212:  Glad you enjoyed it.  I'd always wanted to do a fight scene where Boba and Han were clobbering each other  ... NO BLASTERS! NO BLASTERS!  ;D

DR: Really glad you enjoyed the dialogue, I always feel that I'm walking on eggshells when I come up with the speech for such well known characters ... always second guessing myself.

SA: Looks like you were able to catch it at the other sight, glad you did!

Brisk:  I respect your honesty; I always invite "constructive crit" ... if you feel that you could share something that would help improve the story, I'm all ears  :)
I am glad you are enjoying it now, a couple of the future chapters may not be as heavy in action, but they should still be fun.

Thanks again for the feedback guys!  It's VERY appreciated!!!

-Swede
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Re: Star Wars: Old Friends ... Part Seven (New 12-06)
« Reply #6 on: December 21, 2006, 10:23 PM »
Keep it coming!
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