I like the comic book layout, and the story is interesting. I also like the custom figures of Mara, Katarn, Jacen and Corran Horn you use.
One minor critique is that with the format you use, sometimes the text is a bit difficult to read...also there are a few minor gramatical errors which detract from the plot.
One thing you might want to change is the picture of Leia and Vader...kinda looks like she's blowing him!
Still, great work!