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5X legacy
« on: May 26, 2008, 10:40 AM »

CHAPTER 1: PART 1: Arrival on Kashyyyk



On a training station on Kamino a clone is fighting a crab droid.



The clone blasts the machine in several places, trying to destroy it.







The clone throws his thermal detonator destroying the droid



(Sound in background): “Training sequence over."



The clone makes his way over to a table where Taun We greets him.

Taun We: "Your skills in battle are skyrocketing!"

Clone 5x: "Thankyou Taun We."





Taun We: "We have been monitoring your skills and are impressed how fast you are learning."



Taun: "Jedi Master Yoda has requested a battalion of clones for a mission to Kashyyyk to investigate some matters."



Taun: "I am sure he would need someone like you on the battle field. It would also help you experience a real battle. Are you in ?"



Clone 5X: “I’m in.”



5X walks into a docking bay where he gets ready to depart to Kashyyyk.

 



Fordo : "5X, can you fix my landing gear up?"



5X: "Right away sir." 5X says, putting down his blaster.





Fordo: "Thank you trooper."



Pilot: "R4, we need to be at Kashyyyk as soon as possible."



Quickly, the vehicle takes off from the docking bay.



Fordo: "Hmm..." Fordo wonders, spotting the blaster that 5X left.







On Kashyyyk, several distressed Wookiees hide from a Separatist invasion force while planning a counterstrike...



While others bravely fight...

LMK
« Last Edit: June 12, 2008, 09:57 AM by nheimbigner »
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Re: 5X legacy
« Reply #1 on: May 27, 2008, 07:13 PM »
lmk :)
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Re: 5X legacy
« Reply #2 on: May 27, 2008, 11:09 PM »
Hard to say.  As far as the story goes, we have no real frame of reference on what's going on other than the clone wars.  There's no character development yet, so it will take a few more episodes to get invested in what we're reading/seeing.

The effects on the crab droid are pretty cool, but there are no custom figures which most photonovels have.

It will just take a few episodes to see where the story's going.
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Re: 5X legacy
« Reply #3 on: May 28, 2008, 03:48 PM »
ok :-\
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Re: 5X legacy
« Reply #4 on: May 29, 2008, 08:04 PM »
Don't get upset or anything....storytelling is hard work.  Just make sure the ideas in your head get translated well to something we can see/read.
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Re: 5X legacy
« Reply #5 on: May 29, 2008, 10:37 PM »
I think this is a great start so far. You have the right attitude for this 5X.  You've also obviously put a lot of time into the images with how crisp they are.

Also, if you ever want to discuss script/dialogue, please feel free to PM me here or at Yakface.

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Re: 5X legacy
« Reply #6 on: June 12, 2008, 10:04 AM »
ok thanks

part 2 of chap. 1 is coming soon heres a preview.....

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