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RE #8 - TRAITOR WITHIN
« on: March 23, 2005, 04:24 PM »
Here is part 8 in the series -


TRAITOR WITHIN

War has engulfed the galaxy.  Following the Battle of
Geonosis, the Jedi Order desperately struggles to assist the
Clone Army in holding off the advance of the droid armies
of the Confederacy of Independent Systems.

As the Separatists rage war on the Core Worlds,
Republic Ambassador Tame Heem has become stranded
on the battleground planet of Spahl VII, which
has come under attack by Count Dooku himself.

As the Republic plans a desperate rescue attempt,
little do the Jedi suspect the traitor within…

















































That's it... next one should be up next week!

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« Last Edit: May 22, 2005, 05:41 PM by CHEWIE »

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Re: TRAITOR WITHIN
« Reply #1 on: March 26, 2005, 03:16 AM »
Argh. Finally we get it, and I just want more. I really like the direction this is going in.
I feel like it's a seperate chapter of the republic comics that dark horse has put out.
It flows like they do.

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Re: TRAITOR WITHIN
« Reply #2 on: March 30, 2005, 04:02 PM »
Thanks buddy.  I hope you will like the next one, "Aggressive Negotiations."

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Re: TRAITOR WITHIN
« Reply #3 on: March 30, 2005, 05:18 PM »
Thanks buddy.  I hope you will like the next one, "Aggressive Negotiations."

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Yeah, I should have it up sometime before midnight if my boss doesn't call me in for work.

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Re: TRAITOR WITHIN
« Reply #4 on: March 30, 2005, 07:04 PM »
Cool - thanks Famine!  I know how it is though being busy with work, so no need to rush it!   :)

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« Reply #5 on: March 30, 2005, 07:06 PM »
Cool - thanks Famine!  I know how it is though being busy with work, so no need to rush it!   :)

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No work today or tommorow, so it looks like I have no excuses. :P :D


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Re: TRAITOR WITHIN
« Reply #6 on: April 1, 2005, 04:07 PM »
Cool - thanks Famine!  I know how it is though being busy with work, so no need to rush it!   :)

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No work today or tommorow, so it looks like I have no excuses. :P :D


Kevin

Let me know when you want me to send you "Depths of Cholganna" - I am going to make a change or two on it this weekend, but it should be ready to send by Monday night.   :)

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Re: RE #8 - TRAITOR WITHIN
« Reply #7 on: May 22, 2005, 05:42 PM »
#8 back up.

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Re: RE #8 - TRAITOR WITHIN
« Reply #8 on: October 3, 2005, 12:58 AM »
And now it's online again, after a 10 week absence.   :)

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Re: RE #8 - TRAITOR WITHIN
« Reply #9 on: February 14, 2006, 10:10 PM »
Great stuff CHEWIE, I know I'm pretty late in catching up, but I have to do it a bit at a time  :-[
I really like how you nail the dialogue, especially Dooku's, great job on that!  The probe droid viewscreen was a neat touch, I think it would have been cool if you added some static-y/white noise type distortion to the pic.

Some of the pics seem a bit out-of-focus, is that intentional?  I kinda like the way some of the pictures, especially the close-ups in battle are not as crisp as the other, larger images.  It reminds me of the combat situations in Saving Private Ryan where everything gets grainy and hectic. 
The scariest thing that I've ever seen,
Is the terrible AT-AT walking machine.
It's as big as a house on walking legs,
and whatever it steps on it crushes like eggs.

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Re: RE #8 - TRAITOR WITHIN
« Reply #10 on: February 14, 2006, 10:49 PM »
Thanks Greg for going back and looking at these... hee hee looking back, my pictures were really pathetic back then.  I had a much crappier camera, and didn't spend as much time on them as I do now.  Plus then, my picture editing program was just awful... I'm surprised as many people read these back then.  The pics weren't taken out of focus on purpose, it was my inexperience with them that was the problem.  Something I'm still working on.

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Re: RE #8 - TRAITOR WITHIN
« Reply #11 on: February 14, 2006, 11:07 PM »
I think you're being too hard on yourself, whether it was intentional or not, I really liked the effect that the pictures gave to the overall feel of the story.  The action seemed much more intense that way.   ;D
The scariest thing that I've ever seen,
Is the terrible AT-AT walking machine.
It's as big as a house on walking legs,
and whatever it steps on it crushes like eggs.

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Re: RE #8 - TRAITOR WITHIN
« Reply #12 on: November 25, 2006, 08:01 PM »
I like the way this is going. and the pics keep getting better!
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