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Offline Jediknight760071

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Part II Preview
« on: June 9, 2005, 03:20 AM »
Here's a preview of the second part of the ongoing Ardan Torik saga. I'm pleased so far with the story and its direction, so here is a small shot in the next photonovel. This is the scene where Ardan recalls his past to 88, on their way to Coruscant.



Hope this holds you over for another few weeks or so.

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Re: Part II Preview
« Reply #1 on: June 9, 2005, 01:23 PM »
Cool looking effect there, it looks almost like a painting!

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Re: Part II Preview
« Reply #2 on: June 9, 2005, 08:03 PM »
Looks really cool! That effect is really cool for flashback kind of shots, it really looks like he could be dreaming about it. I can't wait. :)
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Re: Part II Preview
« Reply #3 on: June 9, 2005, 09:29 PM »
Sweet! I'm starting to absolutely love Ardan Torik; so naturally I'm interested in learning some of his backstory. Could this chapter explain why he hates the republic so?

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Re: Part II Preview
« Reply #4 on: June 11, 2005, 05:02 PM »

Pretty neat effect, looks cool for memory and dream sequences.

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« Reply #5 on: June 12, 2005, 02:57 AM »

Pretty neat effect, looks cool for memory and dream sequences.

Kinda reminds me of those old dream sequence effects they used to use on "Saved By The Bell." I have no idea why.

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Re: Part II Preview
« Reply #6 on: June 14, 2005, 02:48 AM »
best saved by the bell dream sequence ever..

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Re: Part II Preview
« Reply #7 on: June 20, 2005, 10:48 PM »
got any more prevews? I'm hooked!

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Re: Part II Preview
« Reply #8 on: June 21, 2005, 09:34 PM »
Well...sorry, but no.

I've got about 45 finished shots w/ dialogue right now, but this preview is so close to this other part that's a big step in the story, so to preview after that would be really spoiling the photonovel.

On a side note, I'm actually doing process work on dialogue now, not just making it up after I downsize and crop a picture. I've been writing scenes out every night for the past few weeks now, which I've been revising as I put them into the photonovel. :) Yay for progress.

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Re: Part II Preview
« Reply #9 on: June 25, 2005, 12:33 PM »
Yay! Well, I cannot wait for the next chapter! It can't come ane sooner! :)

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Re: Part II Preview
« Reply #10 on: July 15, 2005, 01:07 AM »
It's been over a month, When can we expect the long-awaited second chapter to grace the threads of JediDefender's forums?

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Re: Part II Preview
« Reply #11 on: August 11, 2005, 06:54 AM »
It'll be awhile.

Here's another preview:


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Re: Part II Preview
« Reply #12 on: August 11, 2005, 11:38 AM »
That looks great!  First time I've seen a Zabrak in a bacta tank!  I love it!

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« Reply #13 on: August 11, 2005, 03:07 PM »
awesome! I love it!

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Re: Part II Preview
« Reply #14 on: August 11, 2005, 03:14 PM »
Awesome Preview Man! Can't wait for it! 8)
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