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Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (MAJOR PREVIEW 10/3/06)
« Reply #285 on: October 24, 2006, 06:18 PM »
Chapter 40! ;D
I can wait for 41 & 42! It may be posted on my b-day, a free gift! :)
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Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (MAJOR PREVIEW 10/3/06)
« Reply #286 on: October 29, 2006, 08:50 PM »
Hey man i read the story a while ago n i was hoping the update wud be up by now...:(...o well ill check back later
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Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (MAJOR PREVIEW 10/3/06)
« Reply #287 on: October 30, 2006, 09:58 AM »
I can wait for 41 & 42! It may be posted on my b-day, a free gift! :)

When is your birthday, ARTOO?

SCRUFFYNERFHERDER:  Apologies to all readers for the delay.  See below.

I may post this update without the effects.  Unfortunately, YESTERDAY is swamed at work and has not had the time to complete the effects.  His additions are really great, and important during the battle sequences. 

Let me see how the chapter looks without th effects.  Stay tuned...
« Last Edit: October 30, 2006, 01:19 PM by S_A_Longhorn »
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Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (MAJOR PREVIEW 10/3/06)
« Reply #288 on: October 30, 2006, 12:23 PM »
No man is all good; though i really want to see the next update i would much rather wait for YESTERDAY to finish the special effects! it just adds so much to the story :)
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Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel
« Reply #289 on: November 3, 2006, 04:42 PM »
Well, I am now awaiting YESTERDAY's effects.  I've told him to take his time, since he is extremely busy right now.

Either way, I will for sure post the next update by next Friday, November 10th.  The update is a long time coming, and I want to begin working on the next three chapters.

Stay tuned... 8)
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Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel
« Reply #290 on: November 4, 2006, 02:15 PM »
Start working now, that way, you can get it up sooner. ;)

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Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (MAJOR PREVIEW 10/3/06)
« Reply #291 on: November 8, 2006, 01:33 PM »
I can wait for 41 & 42! It may be posted on my b-day, a free gift! :)

When is your birthday, ARTOO?

SCRUFFYNERFHERDER:  Apologies to all readers for the delay.  See below.

I may post this update without the effects.  Unfortunately, YESTERDAY is swamed at work and has not had the time to complete the effects.  His additions are really great, and important during the battle sequences. 

Let me see how the chapter looks without th effects.  Stay tuned...
Oct. 28th. :)
I hope his work starts getting easy again.
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DARK ILLUSIONS - Chapters 40-41-42
« Reply #292 on: November 10, 2006, 05:34 PM »
OK, here is the update....FINALLY! Unfortunately, I have not heard from YESTERDAY in three weeks, so I don't know what happened to the rest of the special effects. When I do hear from him, I'll swap out the pics for the edited ones.

And now for chapters 40, 41, and 42 of DARK ILLUSIONS!

Enjoy... 8)
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DARK ILLUSIONS - Chapter 40
« Reply #293 on: November 10, 2006, 05:36 PM »
DARK ILLUSIONS

ACT III

Chapter 40



Continued from Chapter 39…




Shade:   (thinking)……time to end this War……once and for all……FOR THE REPUBLIC!!!
Laser blasts!





Laser blasts!
Darth Sidious:   …… 





Shade:   (thinking)   ……a lightsaber?……a Jedi?……
Laser blasts!





Laser blasts!
Darth Sidious:   ……




Shade:   (thinking)   It is a Jedi!……But how?…… 
Laser blasts!





Laser blasts!
Darth Sidious:   You disappoint me…… 





Darth Sidious:   You have a reputation for being an intelligent, skilled warrior……not just another mindless Clone…… Shadow Trooper Shade.




Shade:   (thinking)   How’s does he know my name?……got to keep moving……never tried to kill a Jedi before…… 





Darth Sidious:   But you attack me with pathetic, little toys.  Master Windu would be so disappointed…




Darth Sidious:   …especially after all those clues I left for you.
Shade:   (thinking)   Wha????





Darth Sidious:   It was I that planted that transmission in the Chancellor’s computer……

   


Darth Sidious:   And I was the one that arranged for the Royal Guards to be at The Works when you arrived……




Darth Sidious:   ……knowing that you would kill them without hesitating.  It was no coincidence you found the transmission from Oner on their navicomputer.




Shade:   (thinking)   ……impossible…… 




Darth Sidious:   You took the bait…just as I knew you would.




Shade:   (thinking)   But that would mean……the Jedi were involved……or were they?





Darth Sidious:   Why don’t you come out of hiding……and I’ll answer all of your questions.






The roof of the old warehouse begins to crack.



Shade:   (thinking)   Surely General Windu would have --- what was that?
 



Shade:   (thinking)   The roof is collapsing!






Part of the ceiling collapses, forcing Shade to move quickly.


Shade:   (thinking)   Darn Jedi tricks……got to keep moving…… 






Darth Sidious:   I have you NOW!!! 






A sudden power picks up Shade and slams him against the wall.


Shade:   Uuugghhh!!! 




Darth Sidious:   At last we meet…face to face!
Shade:   …uugghh…




Darth Sidious:   Most disappointing, Trooper… 





Shade:   You’re no Jedi!






Darth Sidious:   YOU GOT THAT PART RIGHT!!! 





Shade:   AAAAAAAHHHH!!!





Darth Sidious:   It was almost ‘too’ easy.  You reported finding the transmission from Oner.





Darth Sidious:   And when you arrived on Oner and saw that Master Tiin had been captured…





Darth Sidious:   ……you quickly reported that to Master Windu…just like an obedient little Clone Trooper.





Darth Sidious:   And when Master Windu no longer had any use for you……so he sent you back here……to where it all began…




Darth Sidious:   …and ends for you, Shade. 





Shade:   AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!





Darth Sidious:   You have served me so well, little Trooper…





Darth Sidious:   You didn’t actually think you found anything on your own, did you?  HAHAHA…
Shade:  ……uuuuggghhh……….





Shade:   (thinking)   ……must……reach……my……





Darth Sidious:   You don’t know the power of the Dark Side!
Shade:   AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!






Darth Sidious:   That’s right……crawl like the pathetic life-form you are!  Is that all you can do to save your precious Republic?
Shade:   …………ugh………




Darth Sidious:   Don’t worry, Trooper……you will be long remembered……





Darth Sidious:   ……as the first Clone to betray the Republic! 
Shade:   ……no……I…would…never……




Shade:   AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!





Darth Sidious:   And now……you will die.
Shade:   ……………





Darth Sidious:   Hahahahaha……
Shade:   (thinking)   ……no……possible……escape………must………resign……





Shade:   (thinking)………to………self-termination.
Darth Sidious:   A thermal detonator?  Is that the best you can---






Shade:   ………FOR THE REPUBLIC!!!
CLICK!





KA-BOOOOOOM!!!!





Darth Sidious:   Arrgghh……impressive……for such a simple minion.





Darth Sidious:   I may have underestimated you, Clone Trooper Shade.  But no matter.  Your death will only be the beginning.  The Republic will fall……as will your Jedi friends!

"WE HAVE NOTHING TO HIDE.  TODD WILL COOPERATE."
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DARK ILLUSIONS - Chapter 41
« Reply #294 on: November 10, 2006, 05:40 PM »
DARK ILLUSIONS

ACT III

Chapter 41




The 212th Battalion continues the battle against the CIS Droid Army on the plains of Oner while advancing towards to the Barracks.



Battle Droid 458C:  Die, clones, die!
Laser blasts!






Trooper Nero over internal comlink:   We have reached the droid barracks, but the base is heavily defended.  We are taking fire!  Over!
Commander Cody:  Hold your position!  The 3rd squad should be flanking to the east by now.
Laser blasts!




Laser blasts!



Trooper Ce’Ti:   More droids incoming!
Trooper Nero over internal comlink:   No sign of the other squad, Commander.  We’ll hold out as long as we……
Laser blasts!




Trooper Dzrl:   UUGGHH!
Trooper Ce’Ti:   …
Trooper Nero:   Scatter!  Scatter!
Laser blasts!




Trooper Ce’Ti over comlink:   Man down!  I need a Medic!
Trooper Dzrl:  ………………




Trooper Ce’Ti:   Where is the other squad------
Laser blasts!




Trooper Nero:   Must run faster……must run faster……must run faster……



Trooper Dzrl:   ……must run fast----
Laser blasts!







While the main battle continues, Commander Cody and two members from the 212th have separated from the main group in an attempt to salvage the mission and defeat Droid Commander OOM-12.



Commander Cody over comlinkl  Ce’Ti?  Nero?  Come in! 
Trooper Kyde:   They’re down, sir.
Trooper Tybox:  Wreckage ahead.




Trooper Kyde:   The Gunship must have taken heavy fire from the anti-aircraft turrets.  It appears to be a supplies transport.




Commander Cody:  Check for survivors.
Trooper Kyde & Tybox:   Yes, sir.




Trooper Tybox:   The pilots apparently survived the crash, but were shot attempting to flee the wreckage.  They were ambushed, sir.




Trooper Kyde:   These troopers are dead, Commander.




Commander Cody:  We’ve lost too many……is there anything left of the supplies? 




Trooper Tybox:   No, sir.  Everything has been destroyed…or contaminated.  Wait……there is something……




Trooper Tybox:   The two speeder bikes appear to be functional, sir.




Commander Cody:   Unload the speeders.  We’re going to need them.  Remain with the supplies ship and contact Central Command, Tybox.  Kyde and I will continue the search for the target on the speeders.








A bit later…



Trooper Kyde:   Do you think this will work, sir?





Commander Cody:   Doesn’t matter what I think, trooper.  It has to work.





Trooper Kyde:   We’re approaching the last known coordinates of the target, sir.




Commander Cody:   Stay with the speeders. 




Commander Cody:   If I don’t return in five minutes, report back to General Kenobi. 




Trooper Kyde:   Yes, sir.  Good luck.








Commander Cody enters a dense forest looking for traces of their ‘target’.


Commander Cody:   (thinking)   Footprints……and they’re fresh.  Shouldn’t be too difficult to find it now…




Commander Cody:   (thinking)   Where are you?  I know…you’re…around…here…




Commander Cody:   ……somewhere.  Now to get your attention…




Commander Cody:   HEY!  DOWN HERE!





Commander Cody:   How about this?!
Laser blast!
RRRROOOOOOOAAAARRRRR!





Commander Cody:   That got his attention---uh-oh---
RRRROOOOAAARRRRR!




Commander Cody:   Time to go…




RRRROOOAAARRR!
THUD!  THUD! THUD!




Commander Cody:   That’s it……this way……
RRRROOOOOAAAARRRRRR!
THUD!  THUD! THUD! THUD!




Trooper Kyde:   Look at the size of that thing.
THUD!  THUD!  THUD!  THUD!




Commander Cody:   Move it, Trooper!!!
RRROOOAAAAARRRRR!
THUD!  THUD!  THUD!  THUD!




Commander Cody:   Get back to the battle.  Tell General Kenobi to charge the Droid Barracks with the full battalion.
Trooper Kyde:   Yes sir! 
THUD!  THUD!  THUD!  THUD!




Commander Cody:   I’ll meet you there momentarily.
THUD!  THUD!  THUD!  THUD!









Meanwhile, back on the battlefield…



Turret laser blasts!





THUD!
Battle Droid 2251:   Did you hear something? 




 Battle Droid 3373:   Roger roger!
THUD!  THUD!
Battle Droid 2251:   What that?




Commander Cody speeds by on the BARC bike.

Battle Droid 2251:   Clone trooper!
THUD!  THUD!  THUD!  THUD!




Battle Droid 2251   Uh-oh…
Battle Droid 3373:   ROGER ROGER!!!
RRRROOOOAAAARRR!!!





Battle Droid 2251:   RRRUUNNN!---[/i]
CRUNCH! 





THUD!  THUD!  THUD!  THUD!




Battle Droid 2251:   ……creature……incoming……battle……sta---bzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz……
THUD!  THUD!  THUD!









Back on the battlefield……



Battle Droid 237A:   Several squads have broken thru the perimeter defenses. 
Droid Commander OOM-12:   Order all available units to return to the barracks.




Trooper Faar:   Fire!
Laser blasts!




Droid Comander OOM-12:   Enemy targets!  Advance the line.  Activate all destroyer droids.
(Droid Transmission)   All available units report to the Barracks.  All available units report to the Barracks.
Laser blasts!





(Droid Transmission:)   All available units report to the Barracks.  All available units report to the Barracks.
[/i]CLANK!  CLANK!  CLANK![/i]




Sagev:   The droids……they’re leaving.  No matter…I’ll finish these troopers by myself.




Trooper Otar:   Ugghh!
Trooper Ryaar:   Hey---




Trooper Faar:   Keep firing!  We can’t lose this position! 
Laser blast!




Sagev:   You never had it.
Trooper Faar:   BLEH!! 





Obi-Wan Kenobi:   HALT!  Identify yourself, warrior.  This battle does not concern you.  Surrender, and you will not be harmed.
Anakin Skywalker:   What?!  He’s been killing our troops, Master!




Anakin Skywalker:   He didn’t give them the chance to ‘surrender’!
Obi-Wan Kenobi:   ANAKIN WAIT!! 




Sagev:   Jedi……just as Count Dooku predicted.




Sagev:   ARGH!




CLASH!
Sagev:   It is you, Jedi, that should surrender.





Anakin Skywalker:   I’ll remember that when I have your head!




Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Why are only those two Magna Guards returning?
CLANK!  CLANK! CLANK!




SLASH!
Obi-Wan Kenobi:   One down…




Anakin Skywalker:   What’s the matter, warrior?  Need help fighting your own fights?





Sagev:   Why do a job that a simple droid can do? 





CLASH!






Sagev:   AAAHHH!
CLASH!
Anakin Skywalker:   Hey……






SLASH!





Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Nice trick.  How about turning the odds in our favor?
Anakin Skywalker:   No! 





Anakin Skywalker:   He’s mine!  Besides…I had everything under control, Master.
Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Of course you did, Anakin. 







Sagev:   Do not think that you have the advantage just because there are two of you!
CLASH! 





Anakin Skywalker:   I said he’s mine!!!
SLASH!




Sagev:   You’re too slow, boy!




HEADBUTT!
Anakin Skywalker:   Uuughhfff… 




Sagev:   Perhaps the Jedi are not as powerful as Count Dooku thought.




Obi-Wan Kenobi:   Do not think you have won just because you defeated Anakin so easily.




CLASH!




Sagev:   You, Jedi, depend on your light sword too much.
WHACK! 





Anakin Skywalker:   NOOOO!!!  I said……HE’S MINE!!! 
FORCE PUSH!




Sagev:   Clever move, boy.  But your friend won’t save you this time.




Magna Guard receiver:    (Droid Transmission:)   bbbzzzzzzz……all available units report to the barracks……bbbzzzzzzzzz…….units report to the Barracks----bbzzzzzzzzzz.




Sagev:   Sorry, boy.  Can’t play anymore.  I’m needed elsewhere.
Anakin Skywalker:   I’m not done with you……




Sagev:   Not to worry, young one…...I’ll leave some friends behind.  Droidekas……ATTACK!




LASER BLASTS!



"WE HAVE NOTHING TO HIDE.  TODD WILL COOPERATE."
-Sarah Palin to Charlie Gibson, a week before her husband, Todd Palin, refused to cooperate

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DARK ILLUSIONS - Chapter 42
« Reply #295 on: November 10, 2006, 05:45 PM »
DARK ILLUSIONS

ACT III

Chapter 42



Despite the chaos of the battle, Count Dooku and General Grievous safely observe the action from their base in a village a good distance from the battlefront.




Count Dooku:   The battle is going as planned.  The Republic’s forces are overwhelmed.  My Master will be very pleased.
General Grievous:  What about the Jedi?




Count Dooku:   Master Tiin has served his purpose.  You may ------
Battle Droid 758B:  All available units report to the barracks……repeat……all available units report to the barracks.





Count Dooku:   Who issued that order?
Battle Droid 758B:  Commander OOM-12 has recalled all available units to the barracks, sir.





Count Dooku:   If the Clone Army has successfully reached the barracks, then it will accelerate our plans.  Remain here, General.  I will tend to the situation at the Barracks personally.
General Grievous:  Yes, Count Dooku.




General Grievous:   But……what about the Jedi?
Count Dooku:   They are no longer of use to us.  Eliminate them, beginning with Master Tiin.




General Grievous:  With pleasure……







Meanwhile, Commander Gree and the Elite Corps have reached the secret village.



Commander Gree:   Good work, men.  Reconnect the droid’s communication signal.  The abandoned  village is just up ahead.  We’ll soon find out if that Shadow Trooper’s information was correct.





Elite Trooper Chi:   Commander, I have a visual on the possible hut holding the target.





Commander Gree:   Where?
Elite Trooper Chi:  Straight ahead - the hut closest to our position.





Elite Trooper Chi:  There is an unusual amount of droids concentrated around that particular hut, sir.




Elite Trooper Chi:   It’s the ONLY hut in the village with that many droids standing guard.




Commander Gree:   Good work, trooper.  That has to be our target.





Commander Gree over comlink:   General Windu……we have a visual on the hut possibly holding General Tiin.  I’m sending you the coordinates.





Mace Windu:   Very well.  Proceed with the plan.  We’re on our way.




Kit Fisto:   Might I suggest an alternative plan for us?
Mace Windu:   I’m already ahead of you, Kit…





Commander Gree:   Dig in, men.  We’ll begin the assault from this position.





Commander Gree:   FIRE!
Laser blasts!





Battle Droid 637A:   Enemy fire!





Battle Droid 637A:   Return fi------zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz





Commander Gree:   Keep firing!
Laser blasts!




Battle Droid 384X:   Under attack……repeat…..under attack.  Requesting additional units. Must transport prisoner.
Laser blasts!





Mace Windu:   Perfect timing…… 
Laser blasts!





Mace Windu:   Let’s finish this!





Mace Windu:   This party’s over!




SLASH!




Commander Gree:   Hold your fire!  We may hit the Jedi!





Kit Fisto:   Perimeter secured!





Mace Windu:   Just about……




SLASH!!!





Mace Windu:   Check the hut.  We’ll cover you.




Mace Windu:   Good work, Commander.  Contact the KimCharise.  We are going to need to get out of here real fast if more droids show up.
Commander Gree:   Yes, General.





Kit Fisto:   Master Tiin!  Are you alright?!





Kit Fisto:   Come on, old friend.  You’re safe now.  Talk to me…





Kit Fisto:   Can you hear me, Master Tiin?
Saesee Tiin:  ………kit………





Commander Gree:   We have incoming droids, General!





Super Battle Droid X1A:   Charge!
Laser blasts!









Commander Gree:   Troopers, find cover!





General Grievous:   Surround the building.  Do not allow anyone to escape!
Laser blasts!





Commander Gree:   FIRE!!
Laser blasts!




Mace Windu:   Master Tiin!  How is he?
Kit Fisto:   Not good.  We got to get him out of here.




Mace Windu:   Stay down.  We’ll hold off the droids until the Gunship arrives!




Double laser blasts!





Elite Trooper Chi:   We’re pinned down!  Heavy fire!




Elite Trooper Psi:   We can’t allow those Magna Guards to advance on us.  Time for some heavy firepower!
Auto-fire laser blasts!





Double laser blasts!





Elite Trooper Psi:   Nevermind!  Stay down!!!
Double laser blasts!





Laser blasts!





Elite Captain Phi:   We’re surrounded!
Commander Gree:   Where is that Gunship?  Come in, Commander Oddball……





Commander Oddball:   Commander Gree – I’m in route now.  Just dropped off another squad near the Droid Barracks.  E.T.A. is less than 2 minutes.
Commander Gree:   We’ll be bantha fodder in two minutes!





Mace Windu:   Not yet!





Slash!





Slash!  Slash!





Elite Trooper Chi:   The destroyer droids have us pinned down!  They’re flanking us!




CLANK!  CLANK!  CLANK!
Elite Trooper Psi:   Magna Guards!





Elite Trooper Psi:   Stand ‘em up and knock ‘em!!!
Auto-fire laser blasts!





BBBBBZZZZZTTTT!!





Elite Trooper Chi:   DROIDEKA!!
Double laser blasts!





Elite Trooper Chi:  Over the fence!
Elite Trooper Psi:   Did I mention I hate droids?!
Double laser blasts!





Slash!





Elite Trooper Psi:   He’s down.  Find new cover.
Elite Trooper Chi:   Right behind you!





CLANK!  CLANK!  CLANK!
BUZZZZ!
Elite Trooper Chi:   What was that noise---





BUZZZZZ!!!
Elite Trooper Chi:   UUGGGHHH!





Elite Trooper Psi:   Wrong move, buckethead!
Auto-fire laser blasts!





Elite Trooper Psi:   Anything broken?
Elite Trooper Chi:   Uugghh……I’m alright……let’s keep moving……





General Grievous:   It’s too late.  You are both DOOMED!





FORCE PUSH!





General Grievous holds his ground by locking his mechanical feet into the ground

General Grievous:   Jedi scum! 





Mace Windu:   Regroup with the others.  Have the Gunship take off ASAP!  I’ll handle this.
Elite Trooper Psi:   Yes, General.





General Grievous:   Your saber will make a fine addition to my collection, General Windu





Mace Windu:   Then come and take it.





Commander Gree:   We can’t hold out much longer without General Windu.
Laser blasts!





Commander Oddball:   Sorry for the delay, Commander Gree.  Didn’t know someone had taken down all of the anti-aircraft turrets! 




Commander Gree:   Wasn’t us.  You need to clear an area to land.




Commander Oddball:   Consider it done.





Commander Oddball:   I was born to do this! 
Heavy laser blasts!






Crunch!
Commander Oddball:   We’re on the ground!  Move it!





Commander Gree:   GO! GO! GO!
Laser blasts!





Kit Fisto:   We’re almost there, old friend.





Elite Trooper Psi:   General Windu ordered us to take off ASAP!!
Commander Gree:   Then hurry up, trooper!





Elite Captain Phi:   Let’s go!!!  We got more droids!
Double laser blasts!





Commander Gree:   Cover fire!  Get us out of here, Oddball!!!
Commander Oddball:   Commencing liftoff sequence…
Laser blasts!





Auto-fire laser blasts!
Elite Trooper Psi:   Get this hunk of junk off the ground already! 
Commander Gree:   Get inside, Trooper Psi!   





Commander Gree:   Give me your hand!
Elite Trooper Psi:   No!  Get out of here!  I’ll draw their fire!
Heavy droid laser fire!





Elite Trooper Psi:   ……ugghh……





Elite Trooper Psi:   ……i……hate……droids……
Ammo clip clicks empty





Double laser blast




To be continued………
"WE HAVE NOTHING TO HIDE.  TODD WILL COOPERATE."
-Sarah Palin to Charlie Gibson, a week before her husband, Todd Palin, refused to cooperate

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Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (UPDATE: Nov 10, 2006)
« Reply #296 on: November 10, 2006, 09:45 PM »
just one word AMAZING!!!!!
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Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (UPDATE: Nov 10, 2006)
« Reply #297 on: November 11, 2006, 02:55 AM »
WOW!
You've outdone yourself this time!  ;D
I loved shades attempt to kill sidious, he died in a manner suitable for an elite clone, kind of like a redemption...well...still its too bad, he was a good clone.

I loved the rescue of Tinn, you keep on showing acts of heroism in the clones, it makes it look like they are alot more honorable fighters.
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Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (UPDATE: Nov 10, 2006)
« Reply #298 on: November 11, 2006, 02:31 PM »
Finally!Grievous vs.Windu was cool! Can't wait for the next part!
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Re: DARK ILLUSIONS Photonovel (UPDATE: Nov 10, 2006)
« Reply #299 on: November 12, 2006, 06:45 PM »
Amazing
Awe inspiring
great
wonderful
superb
:o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o
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FOR THE REPUBLIC!
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