I'm sorry I never commented, but I have yet to finish this MASSIVE story.
I'll say this, though, it is visually stunning! I'm amazed at how complicated your shots are, it must've taken you forever to edit them together.
I love the little touches, like the DVD jacket, menu screen, crawl, etc.
I am working my way through, it sure is exciting, I will hopefully have more detailed comments when I'm done.
but so far, so good!