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CTU: Attack on Geonosis [re-release!]
« on: July 17, 2009, 06:11 PM »
Here's yet another re-released photonovel from the CTU saga...this time, Jack find himself in trouble with the Geonosians. Well, I won't reveal more, you have to read through it yourself. ;-)

As always, all feedback is more than welcome and appreciated. I do read all the feedback, despite not replying to them too often. I'm terribly sorry about that, it's something I'm trying to improve...

And now...

Jack Phoenix is in Geonosis, searching for evidence that would link the Trade Federation and the Geonosians with each other.

Jack Phoenix (thinking): Well, well, what do my eyes see...a whole droid factory. This is all the evidence I really need.

While eyeing the huge droid factory, Jack doesn't seem to notice that he's actually standing on a slowly-moving platform...

Geonosian Guard: Work faster, the boss wants to be able to produce twice this amount per day!
Geonosian Worker: I am, sir! It's just that...the machines aren't exactly in the best possible shape, and thus they're rather slow.

Jack (thinking): Boss, huh? I wonder who is their boss...Nute Gunray of the Trade Federation?

Jack: Aaaaaah!

THUD! Jack falls down, right in the front of the Geonosians...
Geonosian Worker: We have an intruder!
Geonosian Guard: I'll deal with him, but call for backup in any case, worker.

Jack: Not another step or I'll shoot! You know well that I mean it!

Nevertheless, Jack decides to shoot the Geonosian Guard, but then the cowardly worker attacks him...
Jack: You're gonna have to pay for that, traitor!

Jack: Say hello to your buddies.
Geonosian Worker: Please, no!

Jack: So much for that, hah! A bunch of losers.

However, Jack forgets totally about the backup the Geonosians called for...

Jack: Gack! Argh, my throat...
Geonosian on the right: Strike him, quick!

Jack: Aaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh!

Geonosian on the left: Now what?
Geonosian on the right: We'll take him to the interrogation room and let the boss handle the rest.

Jack: head....where am I?

Jack: You! I remember everything!
Geonosian Guard: You are just about to enter the world of pain...

Jack: If you think that I'll break under torture, you have mistaken. You don't know me at all.

Jack: Dammit, it's getting hot in here!
Geonosian: Heh heh heh...enjoy your stay.

Count Dooku: Hello there, agent.
Jack: Aaarrrggh!

Jack: Ugh...Count Dooku? Are you by any chance behind this?
Dooku: All is possible, my friend.

Dooku: I can, however, free you. All you need to do is to join us in our quest.
Jack: Your quest for what, destroying the Republic? Never!

Dooku: You really leave me with only one option, my friend.
Jack: I'm not your friend! Now get lost!

Dooku: As you wish...

Jack: Hey, wait for a moment!

Jack: Dammit!

Count Dooku keeps walking along the hallway and doesn't notice another CTU agent who's hiding in the shadows.

Burt Reynolds: Phew, just in time!

Burt: Don't move, I'm gonna free you now.
Jack: Uh, thanks. Who are you, by the way?

Burt: Just Burt Reynolds, one of your friendly neighborhood CTU agents.
Jack: Oh, I see.


Jack: C r a p...

Burt: You okay? I mean, okay enough to walk?
Jack: Y-yeah...I think so.

Burt: Come on, we gotta get moving before those damn Geonosians notice that you've escaped.

Burt: We're gonna run to the speeder and grab it as soon as I've notified CTU of our location. And when the guards have gone to a break.
Jack: Mmhhh, okay.

Burt: This is agent Burt Reynolds. I'm on Geonosis with a former CTU agent named Jack Phoenix. We need backup, there's an entire droid army against us here.

Jack: This one?
Burt: Yeah, looks good enough for us.

Burt: Hold tight, it's gonna be one wild ride!

Jack: The h e l l is this...
Burt: Ow, my head!

Burt: Who leaves a rusty vechile of some sort in the middle of the Geonosian desert, honestly?
Jack: I'd like to know that too...

Geonosian Worker: Hold it right there, prisoners! You're coming with us!
Burt: I'd like to see that happen! Who's gonna force us, you?
Jack: Bring it on, we're not afraid of you.
Geonosian Guard: As you wish...

Meanwhile, CTU agent Celnah Qualus goes to check his new messages
Celnah: from Geonosis...they weren't supposed to contact me yet. I wonder who it might be?

Burt Reynolds' Hologram: This is agent Burt Reynolds. I'm on Geonosis with a former CTU agent named Jack Phoenix. We need backup, there's an entire droid army against us here.
Celnah: Holy...

Celnah takes out his gun and shoots the workstation in order to hide the message from other CTU agents.
Celnah: I really hope that I managed to save my neck...

Celnah: Uh, excuse me, sir?
Joseph Auda: Yes, what is it?

Celnah: My workstation suddenly blew up and now I'm unable to continue my work.
Joseph: Hmm, I see. Please take me to your workstation, agent, and I'll look into the issue.

Celnah: Well?
Joseph: You're right, nothing.

Joseph: However, that shouldn't stop your work. Come on, we'll need to talk to the Director.

Dakar Dolan: Hold on, I gotta finish this call first.

Dakar: So, what can I do to you guys today?
Joseph: Well, his workstation suddenly blew up. I double-checked and it's totally busted, so he needs a replacement workstation for the time being.
Dakar: Hmmmh...I don't think we have any free workstations at the moment, do we? Then again, I might just have a perfect solution...

Dakar: This field workstation might not be exactly the quality of an office one, but hey, it works. And it's relatively fast, too. Please take it.
Celnah: Yes, sir. And thank you, sir.

S-3PO: Sir, are you aware that moments before agent Celnah Qualus' workstation blew up, an incoming message arrived to the laptop?
Joseph: Really? That's...odd.
S-3PO: I traced the signal back, sir. It came from the planet Geonosis.

Meanwhile in the Director's office:

Burt Reynolds' Hologram: This is agent Burt Reynolds. I'm on Geonosis with a former CTU agent named Jack Phoenix. We need backup, there's an entire droid army against us here.
Dakar: Oh my! One of our own is in trouble! And a droid army? I think we've found what we've been looking for...

Dakar: Okay, so we're going to Geonosis to save one of our own, agent Reynolds. This is a top-secret mission and giving out any information might jeopardize the safety of agent Reynolds and the other guy, Jack Phoenix. Got it?
Celnah: Uhh...
Joseph: I understand, sir. So exactly where in Geonosis are we going to?

Harrison Ford: Hello guys. What Dakar told before sounds like real fun - so me and my Division buddies are gonna join this party. You okay with that, Dakar?
Dakar: Gah! How did you...nevermind. Feel free to join...just don't jeopardize the mission, Harrison.
Harrison: Hey, when have I let you down?

Accompanied by the Clone troopers and the Jedi, the Division/CTU team finds their way to the Geonosis Droid Factory. While the agents are exploring the huge factory, Mace Windu has come to arrest Count Dooku.
Mace Windu: This party's over.
Count Dooku: Master Windu...

And soon enough:

Dakar: Hold it, Dooku!
Dooku: I'm afraid I cannot do so, my friend.

Dooku: You see, I'm a rather busy man. And I'd rather not do the army's job.
Dakar: Wait...what do you mean by that?

Dooku: But my friend here is willing to do so, however.
Dakar: Celnah, you dirty traitor!
Celnah: Haha, you totally fell into the trap, Dolan!

Dakar: You don't deserve to call yourself a CTU agent, you scumbag!
Celnah: Owww!
Rodian agent: Should we go help them, sir?
Joseph: I...I have no idea, sorry.

The traitor shoots Dakar Dolan fatally in his chest, killing him instantly.
Celnah: Bugger off, old man, will you?

Dooku: Please excuse us, agents.
Rodian agent: Sir!
Joseph: I...I...


Dooku: Here is your reward!

Dooku: Fool.

Rodian agent: Well?
Joseph: Sorry, pal...the Director's dead as a stone.

Jake: Hey man, you okay?
Jack: Suppose so.

Jake: Good. Now, hands up, Jack.
Jack: What is this? Another traitor in CTU?
Jake: No. I still remember what you must face justice for that.

Harrison: Jake, drop the blaster! NOW!
Burt: Whoa...
Jake: Harrison, don't be a fool. You know the protocols the way I do.

Harrison: How dare you to defy me, you punk?!
Jack: Thanks, buddy.
Jake: Ow, my chin...

Harrison: Trust me, that was just the beginning!
Burt: Uh, Jack...if that was the beginning...I mean, do something! Anything!
Jack: Yes...

Jack: Enough, Harrison.
Harrison: NO! I must have my revenge on this traitor!
Jack: He's suffered enough. Besides, we have more important things to do, such as the battle outside.
Harrison: ...right.

Jack: Open the doors, Joseph, will you? Thanks.
Joseph: Yes sir, right away!

Harrison: The h e l l is that thing? It's huge!
Rodian agent: I'm speechless...

Despite their initial fears, the agents enter the battle and fight against various Geonosians and droids, helping the underpowered Jedi and their clone troopers.

Later on in CTU Coruscant:
Jerjerrod: You sure about this now, ma'am?
Mary-Kate: Admiral, which one of us leads CTU, you or me?
Jerjerrod: I think that would be you.
Mary-Kate: Exactly.

Mary-Kate: My my, what is this?
Harrison: Easy now, boys.

Mary-Kate: Harrison, what is going on here?
Harrison:'s best that you don't know.
Mary-Kate: I must know!

Mary-Kate: Oh no! Dakar!
Harrison: I'm so sorry...

Harrison: Mary-Kate, wait!
Mary-Kate: I...I don't want to!

Harrison: Hey, I'm here. It's all right, nothing will happen to you.
Mary-Kate: *crying*

The Republic lost a skilled agent and another was revealed to be a traitor, but in return they got Jack Phoenix back. And he isn't going to give up on the hunt for Dooku.
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