Thanx for all the feedback once again guys. These were my favorite 3 chapters to create b/c of the the action and plot sequences revealed.
Jedi_Assassin: Thanx for the props, Jedi. I still impress myself with some of my ideas for backgrounds, but I am running out of ideas...
212th Battalion: You're losing men, 212th!
The end of the battle will be exciting with more action.
Quazar: Always good to read your comments, Quazar. I'll have to wear your comments as a badge of honor, since you always give a great critique. At least your comments merit my constant delays in posting this update, b/c there was so much I wanted to get just right. YESTERDAY did a fantastic job!
CloneCommander1: Look forward to your future comments, Commander. Thanx for leaving some initial feedback. Enjoy the re-reads!
Roton7: Glad to read you liked chapter 38. That chapter had over 100 pics when I first shot it. I had to edit and organize the battle in order for it to make sense. I was really pleased with the flow of the battle and the various things happening on the battlefield.
Smartypants1635: Shade isn't dead! He just opened fire on his target. His story will continue in the next update, starting with chapter 40.
CloneCommander1: Shade is a tough SOB, and has more than enough confidence in his own abilities. Just wait until chapter 40...
Artoo: Thanx for breaking down the your feedback. I agree, the politcial chapters are slow, but they are essential in the overall story. I wanted to have a multiple plot story, which included some political intrigue. The dialogue is extremely difficult to write for these chapters. Glad you spotted the comments from BF2. Great game! Obi and Anakin have to get bored fighting droids all the time, so they need some distraction. Gree and company will get into havey duty action in the next update. I had multiple versions of the Taun We sequence, but I chose the simplest one in the end, and I thinked it worked perfectly. The Sidious holo has been featured before - it is from the Dooku Saga 2002 figure. And I am going to begin reading the RC book soon. Shade is an original idea and personality.
Shade is about to get into some major action. Look for him to lead off the next update. No date as of yet, but I will begin work on it within the next week.
Thanx again for all the feedback! JD is keeping this story going! Stay tuned......
