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Title: Clone 5X chapter 1: PART TWO!!!
Post by: nheimbigner on July 8, 2008, 04:18 PM
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The squadron lands in a small new docking bay on Kashyyyk.

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Clone: "I don't know 5X but i used to think Kashyyyk was a forest."

"5X"?

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Clone 5X: "These wires lead to a factory. A droid factory. I can see the electric markings in this."

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A vehicle being driven by a clone officer approaches the group of clones.

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Clone Officer: "I was beginning to wonder where you were."

The officer motions for the squad to come into the vehicle.

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5X: "Sorry we took so long captain, I had to drop off some troopers at Nal Hutta."

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5X: "I discovered some wires that must lead to a machine. I have a feeling its a droid factory. Follow that wire."

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A moment later the squadron approaches a generator.
Clone in back: "Let's blow it!"

5X: "No, not yet Alpha. We need to make sure it's a droid base first."
 
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Alpha 23: "I wonder why they would make a base inside a docking bay."
 
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"Well, it’s a droid base." Remarked Clone 5X, "It looks abandoned."

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The squad comes out of the vehicle. "Wait..., take cover. I think I heard something!" 5X whispers.
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Captain: "You see anything?"

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"Yep." The clone says grabbing a sniper from the vehicle.

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Clone 5X zooms in trying to get a clear picture of the droid....

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...and shoots.

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Meanwhile on Coruscant, a holograph transmition of Count Dooku appears.

Dooku: "Sora, I have reason to believe there is a clone on Kashyyyk

that isn't even a clone. I need you to go there, capture him, and bring

him to me. I will upload the area on your datapad."

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Sora Bulq: "It will be done, Master."

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Later, the squad investigates the area checking for more battle droids.

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Suddenly they hear footsteps approach.

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"Blast!" 5X says, realizing he has misplaced his weapon.

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Officer: "Get back behind the corner! We'll cover you."

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The rest of the squad gets ready to fire upon the oncoming droids.

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The droids prepare to turn and attack the enemy.

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The battle begins.

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Suddenly an Assassin droid opens fire on the clone officer.

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The Officer is hit!

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5X realizes the officer is still in danger.

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He pulls him back away from the battle and tells R4 to take him back to Coruscant for Bacta treatment.


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The clone picks up the officer's blaster and starts firing at the droids.


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The clones begin to gain the upper hand.

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Alpha 23: "Now we're even!"

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Unexpectedly a large Tri-Droid comes on to the scene.

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"I guess I spoke to soon." remarked Alpha 23.


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The clones begin to be outnumbered with several wounded.

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Suddenly, all droids cease fire.

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All of the sudden a Sith appears.

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The squad hears the hum of a lightsaber and turns around.

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Sora Bulq: "Take off your helmet!"

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The clone takes off his helmet revealing a face of no resemblance to Jango Fett.


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"What on Dagobah?!" Alpha 23 says in amazement.

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Unexpectedly a Clone V-Wing fighter flies in blasting at the remaining droids.

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5X puts his helmet on quickly fearing his secret will be noticed by the V-Wing's pilot.

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Captain Fordo comes out of the vehicle carrying 5X's blaster.

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"Drop your weapon!" says a squad member to the Dark Jedi.

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Sora escapes the clones.

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"Not so fast" A Jedi says confronting the escaping sith.

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Sora: "You should not have come here, Master Sev."

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The clones get ready to help out the Jedi.

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"Your lucky I'm here. You forgot your blaster at Kamino, 5X."Fordo says as he pushes the blaster towards him.

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5X: "Thanks, but you can keep it, you deserve it. Besides I'll need something to remember the Officer by if he doesnt make it to Coruscant.

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The squadron makes their way over watching the duel.

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Master Sev "What are you doing clones!? Run!"




Title: Re: Clone 5X chapter 1: PART TWO!!!
Post by: Matt_Fury on July 8, 2008, 06:30 PM
Interesting.  Big improvement over your first episode.  I'm curious to see what will happen.  Might want to check grammar on some of your captions, but otherwise a good effort.
Title: Re: Clone 5X chapter 1: PART TWO!!!
Post by: nheimbigner on July 9, 2008, 09:32 AM
thanks matt_fury! :) ;)