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Title: Sidious Sketch
Post by: Angry Ewok on June 17, 2005, 07:40 PM
(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v298/CorvusTortus/BIGSidious.jpg)

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Title: Re: Sidious Sketch
Post by: Thomas Grey on June 28, 2005, 10:47 PM
Pretty good Brad. Not going to pull punchs though...

Sidious needs to be more grotesque. A wart here or there, some more dramatic wrinkles and anger lines in the eye and mouth area and maybe even a trace of spit or saliva at the mouth or reflective circle or 2. The strongest part of this is you gradation from the dark hood and out to the borders. Your lightning needs to look less jagged and more fuzzy (blend your edges and use a really sharp and light pencil for some fizzle. And the finger should be fragmented shadows of his boney hands. They don't show in the scan well.

Your composition sense is amazing and it's powerful, but needs some spit and polish. Good to see whatever you have though Brad. I miss being in contact with you more and hope we can connect again soon!