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Title: Vaders Fist!
Post by: 212th Battalion on July 7, 2006, 12:31 AM

This will be my second novel. My first novel coruscant fighters wasn't the greatest. But now that i know what to do thanks to chewie and everyone else who helped me out i am going to make a better novel :).  This novel is going to be about the 501st before and after the execution of order 66. Be on the look out next week to see the first chapter. ;D

Title: Re: Vaders Fist!
Post by: Brisk Arper on July 7, 2006, 09:49 AM

sounds great...i love anything to do the 501st cant wait for chapter 1!

Title: Re: Vaders Fist!
Post by: 212th Battalion on July 7, 2006, 02:28 PM

thanks master brisk heres a preveiw pic that will start off the chapter i am still writing the script and shooting but keep an eye out for chapter 1.
(http://i6.tinypic.com/1zb6gra.jpg) sry the pic isnt the greatest but dont worry the lighting will be better  ;D

Title: Re: Vaders Fist!
Post by: CHEWIE on July 7, 2006, 02:37 PM

It's just a bit blurry unfortunately... looks interesting though!

 :)

Title: Re: Vaders Fist!
Post by: Reid on July 7, 2006, 03:18 PM

Garindan and Boba... That's an odd pair.

Title: Re: Vaders Fist!
Post by: BrentS on July 7, 2006, 04:28 PM

I think the focus will the biggest thing that challenges you.  I'm not sure what kind of camera you are using but you should try to get it set up to "Macro" mode.  It often looks like the flower icon in the settings.  That will allow you to get very close to figures and stay in focus. 

Good luck and keep up the good work!
Brent

Title: Re: Vaders Fist!
Post by: Brisk Arper on July 7, 2006, 06:09 PM

i agree...a very odd pair...im intriuged as to how these two fit in with the 501st...cant wait for chapter 1...im really looking forward to it!

Title: Re: Vaders Fist!
Post by: Artoo on July 9, 2006, 04:22 PM

Quote from: HunterofThePegs on July  7, 2006, 03:18 PM

Garindan and Boba... That's an odd pair.

Make sure NBC,ABC or Fox dosen't see that post or they'll make a TV show out of that. :P
What happened to Coruscant Fighters you neverfinished that.

Title: Re: Vaders Fist!
Post by: Reid on July 9, 2006, 05:48 PM

Quote from: Artoo on July  9, 2006, 04:22 PM

Quote from: HunterofThePegs on July  7, 2006, 03:18 PM

Garindan and Boba... That's an odd pair.

Make sure NBC,ABC or Fox dosen't see that post or they'll make a TV show out of that. :P

"Tonight on Boba & Garindan! Boba meets Garindan's girlfriend... And hilarity ensues! Tonight on FOX!"

Title: Re: Vaders Fist!
Post by: CloneCommander1 on July 9, 2006, 05:57 PM

And tomorow on Vader and Han,
Han catches Vader making out with Leia,
tune in tomorow for all the drama, right here on FOX!
All jokes aside,
Looks interesting, kinda blurry though.

Title: Re: Vaders Fist!
Post by: 212th Battalion on July 9, 2006, 06:11 PM

thanks for the advice the pics shouldnt be as blurry be on the look out for chp.1 friday ;D

Title: Re: Vaders Fist!
Post by: 212th Battalion on July 9, 2006, 09:07 PM

Vaders Fist Chp.1

As Commander Appo meets with his captain he tells his men to watch the docking bay.

Sergent: Freeze you have the right to remain silent!

Killer: May i ask why?

Sergent: No! Now drop your weapon!

(http://i6.tinypic.com/1zg3xcg.jpg)

Killer: How about i kill you? Sounds fair enough am i right?

Sergent: No it is not all right!

Killer: To bad i think it is.

(http://i6.tinypic.com/1zg43zn.jpg)

Commander Appo: Freeze! If you even raise a finger we'll shoot!

Anakin: Dont worry commander he does'nt have any arms. Well at least now he does'nt. I'll continue with the interogation commander.

Commander Appo: Yes Sir!

(http://i6.tinypic.com/1zg46t2.jpg)

Commander Appo: Captain make sure no one leaves or enters the docking bay without my permission.

Captain: Yes sir!

(http://i6.tinypic.com/1zg4wi0.jpg)

Anakin: Now where were we killer? Oh yes i was about to kill you! Give me one good reason why i should'nt kill you!

Killer: I will tell you who hired me! Please dont kill me!

Anakin: I'm listening.

Killer: Garindan! He hired me!

Anakin: Do you know where he is?

(http://i6.tinypic.com/1zg527k.jpg)

Killer: No unfortunatley no.

Ankain: Then i don't need you any more!

Killer: Please don't! Ahhhhhhhh!!!!!!......

(http://i6.tinypic.com/1zg54co.jpg)

Boba Fett: Did your killer actually get the job done?

Garindan: No he was killed.

Boba Fett: Then you have failed me.

(http://i6.tinypic.com/1zg55bb.jpg)

Garindan: Give me another chance please !

Boba Fett: Of course.

Garindan: Realy!

Boba Fett: No! Now you die!

(http://i6.tinypic.com/1zg585e.jpg)

To Be Continued...

Title: Re: Vaders Fist!
Post by: blaster_e11 on July 10, 2006, 07:06 AM

that was interesting,

nice use of the Jedi temple package as a background pic, i'm not sure about the use of the senate one though  :-\

i'm still not sure about the choice of characters, it's kinda weird to  mix OT and PT characters but that's why fan-fiction is for ;)

maybe you should work a bit more on dialogues too

Title: Re: Vaders Fist!
Post by: Artoo on July 12, 2006, 11:23 PM

What's up with Anakin being human instead of Vader suit?
I like it,poor Garindan!

Title: Re: Vaders Fist!
Post by: 212th Battalion on July 12, 2006, 11:57 PM

anakin is not in his vader suit yet bc this is before the jedi were killed and wiped out but dont worry soon hes gonna become darth vader

Title: Re: Vaders Fist!
Post by: Diddly on July 13, 2006, 01:09 AM

 My criticisms still remain the same, they're in the other thread. I think the focus is the only thing that's improved since your last photonovel...

:-\

Title: Re: Vaders Fist!
Post by: Artoo on July 13, 2006, 01:13 AM

OK,I thought it took place during the Empire.

Title: Re: Vaders Fist!
Post by: 212th Battalion on July 16, 2006, 12:52 PM

heres a preveiw pic for chapter 2 i'm still working on the script and pics but it should be up by next week ;)

(http://i1.tinypic.com/206bxb5.jpg)