5/25/97
Dear George Lucas,
I just read your script for the new Star Trek prequel movie, and I think it would be great ,with a few exceptions. First in the opening instead of taking place on a planet of primitive T'wilik girls, put it on a planet of bumbling amphibians instead, you can use Natalie a Kiera for other parts. Also you know how C-Span is such a big hit, throw in some long scenes of politicians debating, heck have the Jedi just sit and talk. Kill off the cool villain, Darth Maul, instead of keeping him around for the last movie, the fans will never see that coming. BTW my nephew, Jake wants a part in the film, remember you owe me.
I'll write to you soon about a new all CGI character that the fans are just gonna nuts for.
Can't wait for the Premier!
Jim Ward