Thanks for the tips, but let me make sure I understand them :
Top banner (with the art) :
Good type styles, but straighten the art (and the overall design), remove the photo, add in a trademark, remove the horizontal lines.
Bottom banner (eyes) :
Remove the horizontal lines.
Okay, if I misunderstood let me know! I actually felt the lines on the bottom banner were okay - but I did feel that the black space in the top banner felt a little blank... Anywho, let me know if I understood you and I'll get to work on doing them over.
PS. My teacher has me doing 5 illustrations for a mock-up NASA magazine article titled 'Space... Where no man has gone before.' One month for 5 illustrations, most of them fully colored - yuck!