awesome Chewie!!! so psyched when I saw it was up, good read and visuals. moving the words didn't take away from it at all, and if it means you get to finish them that much faster then I'm all for it. more specific comments the first picture with Alyssa I was like who's the bald dude, the hair color on her kind of blends in to the wall a little too much, but not a big deal it just through me off a little till I read below. love love the gen grev holo, nice touch. i also like how you can see in the background in the first shot with dooku and sora the battle droid foot on the stair, it kind of makes it look i don't know i guess "lived in" but not overdoing it by putting people/droids all in the scene when there is no need for them to be there. the witch now that's my favorite shot very creepy, i remember that custom and have been waiting to see what you'd do with her, I thought Sid's mom or something, ha ha ha!!! i'd remove the burned skeleton in the shot with the droids chasing after the clone, it almost looks like he was on fire and somebody came along in a AT-TE and tried to stomp him out. this is an awesome story and the visuals are getting better and better, keep up the good work.