Nice Brad! But...
It's too damn soft!!!
Get rid of the blender for a whil and play with some clean, graphic and hard edges. A balance is important! Aayla's nose seems flat and blurred. A clone is in a suit that demands some very hard lines. Save the blending for the shadows after you have penciled in the hard lines and details. I really think it will make an incredible difference in how well-rendered your drawings are.