A fantastic start...I can already see you're dialogue blowing myself, Chewie, and Lance, out of the water. Clever with the VHS tapes too.
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Anyone could see the improvement over Nal Solio.
I would give this beginning chapter an A+, but since you interrupted my best scoring game of DOD in months, I've got to bump it down a bit and teach you a lesson.
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