Dude, you are a talented individual with an imagination that is in the gutter. I enjoy the pin-up quality of your work, but I feel the exagerated flotation devices take your talent and turn it into Playboy cartoon fodder. I would just suggest that you tone it down a notch and work within proportions that are voluptuous, but within the realm of reality. I think of Frazetta, Vargas, the 50's pulp stuff when I see your work in every way except the chest area. The hip area on the second drawing is astounding and well presented. You just need to stop looking at balloons or beachballs as reference and start studying the female human anatomy. It takes a drawing that is well done and enticing and alluring and turns it into bimbo, sleazy, adolescent cartoon work. I asume you are above that and while people may not agree with me, I am just giving an honest opinion from a fellow artist's point-of-view. No offense intended. I guess I'm a bit of a butt man and that may also play into it. Anyway, good stuff sans the dodge balls in Leia's bra...
