Wow, those are some really nice photos, Brent! The lighting looks very convincing (as does the shadow, of which a place like this will have quite a bit!). I'm looking forward to seeing the photonovel -- it's super cool when a well-made dio like this can become part of an original story.
Incidentally, does the hot-pink-haired lady who seems to be the same race as Rystáll or Diva Shaliqua have a name and/or role in the story, or is she just a background character? She's one of my favorite figures currently posing in those photos (though those twin Twi'Lek's are quite nice too -- based on Agent Annika, no doubt?).
Looking forward to seeing more!
... the Findswoman