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Collecting => Customs => Photonovels and Movies => Topic started by: Swede on December 6, 2006, 09:07 PM
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Hey guys, here's another chapter.
This will be it till mid-February. I go back to my insane work rotation for 8 weeks which leaves me with just enough time to spend with my fam and not much else. What little leasure time I do have, I'll spend working on my PN diorama sets for the upcoming chapters and of course checking out the sweet new PNs posted from others :D
Also, I'm going to check out the free G.I.M.P. photo editing program!
(Man, that just sounds bad when ya read it :o)
It looks somewhat promising.
As always, feedback is welcome!
-Swede
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loved the fight between boba and han cant wait for more swede
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;DThat was COOL Swede! I like the part about the Royal pain.That would be Solo
alright.The action was great.Another great chapter.
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For some reason, I have to scroll side to side to view all the dialogue and picture. Difficult to read, so I'll read & post my comments over on RS, SWEDE.
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i have to be honest when i started reading this i wasnt sure if i liked it or not...but now i am...this chapter has me hooked...good work!
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Hey guys!
212: Glad you enjoyed it. I'd always wanted to do a fight scene where Boba and Han were clobbering each other ... NO BLASTERS! NO BLASTERS! ;D
DR: Really glad you enjoyed the dialogue, I always feel that I'm walking on eggshells when I come up with the speech for such well known characters ... always second guessing myself.
SA: Looks like you were able to catch it at the other sight, glad you did!
Brisk: I respect your honesty; I always invite "constructive crit" ... if you feel that you could share something that would help improve the story, I'm all ears :)
I am glad you are enjoying it now, a couple of the future chapters may not be as heavy in action, but they should still be fun.
Thanks again for the feedback guys! It's VERY appreciated!!!
-Swede
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Keep it coming!