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Title: Star Wars: Old Friends ... Part Seven (New 12-06)
Post by: Swede on December 6, 2006, 09:07 PM
Hey guys, here's another chapter. 

     This will be it till mid-February. I go back to my insane work rotation for 8 weeks which leaves me with just enough time to spend with my fam and not much else.  What little leasure time I do have, I'll spend working on my PN diorama sets for the upcoming chapters and of course checking out the sweet new PNs posted from others  :D
Also, I'm going to check out the free G.I.M.P. photo editing program!
(Man, that just sounds bad when ya read it  :o)
It looks somewhat promising.
As always, feedback is welcome!

-Swede

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Title: Re: Star Wars: Old Friends ... Part Seven (New 12-06)
Post by: 212th Battalion on December 7, 2006, 02:18 PM
loved the fight between boba and han cant wait for more swede
Title: Re: Star Wars: Old Friends ... Part Seven (New 12-06)
Post by: Deanna Rash on December 7, 2006, 09:51 PM
 ;DThat was COOL Swede! I like the part about the Royal pain.That would be Solo
alright.The action was great.Another great chapter.
Title: Re: Star Wars: Old Friends ... Part Seven (New 12-06)
Post by: S_A_Longhorn on December 12, 2006, 01:20 PM
For some reason, I have to scroll side to side to view all the dialogue and picture.  Difficult to read, so I'll read & post my comments over on RS, SWEDE.
Title: Re: Star Wars: Old Friends ... Part Seven (New 12-06)
Post by: Brisk Arper on December 13, 2006, 09:01 AM
i have to be honest when i started reading this i wasnt sure if i liked it or not...but now i am...this chapter has me hooked...good work!
Title: Re: Star Wars: Old Friends ... Part Seven (New 12-06)
Post by: Swede on December 13, 2006, 09:02 PM
Hey guys!


212:  Glad you enjoyed it.  I'd always wanted to do a fight scene where Boba and Han were clobbering each other  ... NO BLASTERS! NO BLASTERS!  ;D

DR: Really glad you enjoyed the dialogue, I always feel that I'm walking on eggshells when I come up with the speech for such well known characters ... always second guessing myself.

SA: Looks like you were able to catch it at the other sight, glad you did!

Brisk:  I respect your honesty; I always invite "constructive crit" ... if you feel that you could share something that would help improve the story, I'm all ears  :)
I am glad you are enjoying it now, a couple of the future chapters may not be as heavy in action, but they should still be fun.

Thanks again for the feedback guys!  It's VERY appreciated!!!

-Swede
Title: Re: Star Wars: Old Friends ... Part Seven (New 12-06)
Post by: Artoo on December 21, 2006, 10:23 PM
Keep it coming!