I did some reworking of the plot line and I decided that Omri Vaono(main character) was a Jedi during the Star Forge debacle. He was approached by the Jedi Council and given the choice to become, for lack of better terms, an essence of the light side of the force. The Council  gave him this option because the Jedi were facing extinction at the hands of the Sith. His new powers made him immortal. That's how he lived for almost 3,500 years before my photonovel. I also renamed the series it will furthermore be known as Eternal Jedi. Make sense? Anyway, back to the real reason I wanted to post. Another chapter one preview pic:


I have spent nearly 3,000, waiting, watching the world go by. Letting all my dreams slip away. Letting the one I love die. Watching my only family die away. I still remember that day at the Jedi Enclave on Dantooine...

Since Jabba had female slaves because he thought they were pretty to look at, wouldn't Gardulla have male slaves? Just a thought.

It is kind of a rip on Phoenix from X-Men. It's still in the developmental stages. Things are very likely to change, but the name is going to stay the same. The bird has always been godly in my eyes, and that's the type of feeling I want people to get from this character. I was very moved(lack of a better word) by Brian Singer's take on Phoenix. That's why I chose this to be the main part of the story, and the baisis of my username.

I love the effects in this one. Nice job!

Sweet. I've never heard of her, but she's sweet.

no, how do they all fit in it? lol 

I did find one grammer error in Bail's flashback.

lol, i live near detroit, the most i have to worry about is haveing my family's yacht being flooded during a storm.