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Offline Darth Depressis

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StarWars A DARK FACADE issue 1
« on: September 13, 2007, 02:10 PM »

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Re: StarWars A DARK FACADE issue 1
« Reply #1 on: September 13, 2007, 05:08 PM »
I like the comic book layout, and the story is interesting.  I also like the custom figures of Mara, Katarn, Jacen and Corran Horn you use.

One minor critique is that with the format you use, sometimes the text is a bit difficult to read...also there are a few minor gramatical errors which detract from the plot.

One thing you might want to change is the picture of Leia and Vader...kinda looks like she's blowing him!   :o

Still, great work!
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