It's looking great! My only suggestion would be to maybe bullet point or table the text you're putting in. For non-story based communication, I find bullets more digestable than long paragraphs. If you put in a table, you could group the information into themes (first release, variations, case ratio, accessories, vintage comparison, etc.) You might also think about putting a corresponding picture of the blind box on each figure's page, so people can easily reference them. I always thought the blind box packing was cool by itself for each series.