CHEWIE: Thanks a lot for the suggestions! I edited the italics and stuff. I hope that clears things up a little bit.
I can see where you're coming from with your comments about the characters. Don't worry though, things will become more clearer as time goes on. Hey, the number of characters could be reduced! Who knows!

As for the closeups - I'd LOVE to add a lot more. However, the camera I'm using is old, I believe it came out in 1997 or 1998. Close up shots are wierd with it. The shots I got for this chapter are pretty clear, but I had to retake several of them about two or three times due to blurryness.
Heh, I REALLY wanted to do a shot with the troops crashing through the windows and repelling from the Destroyers ala real life troops, but that would require LOTS of picture editing skill, which I lack at the moment. I almost didn't get those two Star Destroyers over the capitol to work out! If I ever come back and do special editions, I would add a shot like that. I also wanted to add people outside the building, as well as artifacts/statues in the rotunda, and I'd change that as well in a future version.
I'm glad you liked the capitol, as I believe it's the greatest location shot I've made. It took me like 2 weeks to make. Same with the effects! That new program I downloaded does wonders for effects. At first I had to use MS Paint to add the effects, then transfer them to MS Photo Editor to blur them and make them look real. Lots of work!
And yes, Dralco is the Sith Lord. I love the way he came out with it, as well as how Quaas responds to it. Remember though, our heroes don't know he is the Sith Lord yet (well, Han and the droids do - they were there!). And he might have an apprentice as well...
Quazar: Thanks! Take your time, as I still have to reply to your latest Interactive update!