Fantstic updates Justin! Sorry i haven't commented sooner, I had a test on Monday and Hockey games Sunday, Monday, and tonight, and on top of that I have been feeling exceptionally lazy lately.
Trulos- It definitely reminds me of Tony's work. Throw those parts together and they'd look OK, but add your drybrushing and it becomes a fantastic figure. I love the skin coloring, it is something that has been missing on all of Hasbro's Neimodians. I like how it looks like he polishes his boots as well.
Republic Field Officer- Very nice, I agree it seems like something you'd see in the Art of ROTS book. I really like the Nazi/Empire parallels, so it is really neat to see it in figure form. I think I'd sand the buttons off, they just don't seem to fit.
Fan Fic Heavy Weapons Clone Trooper- Good to see someone is brave enough to us some Evo clones for customs.

The parts fit together nicely, and I really like how you highlighted that little groove on the top of the helmet. And the drybrushing looks excellent of course. I do have one minor gripe, though I'm not sure how exactly you could fix it. The helmet seems to sit a bit to high, as if he has a long neck. I'm not sure if you hollowed the helmet out so that you can still use the clone as a regular Evo clone, or if this guy is permanent, I think i'd try and find a way to lower it a bit if possible.
I hope you have another update soon, I'll actually try to update on time, which reminds me I still have to writte out my critique on Chapter 15....
