Part1: Disaster

[Jediknight760071]

Hope you enjoyed it! Please post any and all reviews, critiques, comments, etc. I can handle the criticism and without it, I'll never get better at this, so please...be liberal with your words. Hold nothing back.

[CHEWIE]

Jediknight760071 - I am so glad that you finally updated this here.  I really like the start to this series, it has a lot of potential.

I realize your sets are a bit confined (mine are too) - and considering that - these are a true work of art.  Totally amazing.  I love how you are using the carton boxes for buildings/terrain.  It works perfectly and is very believable as a Star Wars set.

Also, this story is looking very ambitious - very, very much so!  I love the different subplots - you definitely are good at coming up with a creative story.

I like seeing some customs in here too - very nice and I especially like the Zutton guy.  As for the Mandalorian, I would like to know more about who he his, how Aayla knows about him, and why she is tracking him.

The holo Yoda looks good too - who needs the TRU exclusive when you show how well the Cinema Scene spirit version looks?   

I see you also updated two more stories - I'll read and reply as soon as I have a chance.

 

[Ryan]

I second that! Good to see the story continue here! I'll get to the others and read/reply there as soon as I can.

[Jediknight760071]

and I especially like the Zutton guy.

I'm glad you mentioned that....


The Zutton custom is actually not mine..it is the work of Hansloroll. This summer, we arranged a fairly large trade and included was that surprise...a custom figure. It's very very nice....He painted it wonderfully.

[Matt_Fury]

I like the story so far, interesting set-up.

One question.  Why not have the wookies enter the shuttle via the ramp...are they too big?

[Deanna Rash]

Interesting